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A Rough Start by itzmegan73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 877]
Summary:

Overnight, irresponsible Edward goes from bachelor to father of a 5 yr old boy. Meanwhile responsible, prepared Bella begins her first job as Kindergarten teacher at Forks Elementary. When irresponsible meets the epitome of responsible, sparks will fly!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 250550
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2010 Updated: August 31, 2011


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Our House

Anthony is the sweetest kid.  Such a great story...

 
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Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Master of Puppets

Great chapter!  How will Edward and Bella break the relationship to Anthony?  Will Edward ask Anthony's caseworker for the info?  So much to look forward too. 

 
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Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 9 to 5

I am quickly rereading this fun story.  I just love Anthony. :)

 
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Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Under Pressure

Poor Edward and Anthony...they just don't know how to care for each other. Damn crazy lady asking for money for being late. ;)

 
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Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - She Works Hard for the Money

Silly Bella...Look under the surface. Edward needs help. I love this story!

 
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Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Highway to Hell

I just love this chapter...and so they meet.  Bella has the balls of steel.

 
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Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Little Fighter

I just love Bella and Edward's chemistry. 

 
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Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - If You Leave

Edward and Anthony's relationship is really touching.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Electric Youth

Bella is really gonna stick her foot in it.  She really should have involved Edward.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Hungary Eyes

Dun dun dun.  Alice know what Bella did for Edward.  the ship will hittith the fanith.  I love B & E's chemistry.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - With or Without You

Darn Jasper for suggesting Vickie.  Darn Rosalie for hooking Bella up with a date.  I love Anthony

 
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Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Should I Stay or Should I Go

Darn them and their miscommunication.  I love B&E.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Nightshift

I love Edward and Anthony.  Vickie not so much. 

 
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Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Side of the Road

God, I want them to get together now.  But I will wait...I know what it going to happen. :)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - In Your Eyes

Gosh darn it really didn't like rereading this chapter.  But it is needed to further your story.

 
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Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Maneater

God I love Bella and Anthony together!

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Things Can Only Get Better

Thank goodness B&E are talking again.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - So Emotional

Emmett doesn't deserve to be left for Derek.  Derek is a phony dirtbag.  The Esme and Bella meeting kind of scared me.  I loved the kiss!!

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Man in the Mirror

Just rereading your story on twilighted...It is still fun to read a second time.  Great job!  I am so excited for Edward and Bella to start a relationship.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Epilogue

Killer Epi!  I love Anthony so much.  Thank you for sharing each word.  Your writing is refreshing.  Be well. 

Much Luv!

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

Love your story and this chapter.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Tonight, I Celebrate My Love

Great chapter.  I was worried along with Bella.  I am so happy for Edward and Bella.  They deserve to be happy.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - We Belong

I saw several thousand reviews on fanfic and thought I should leave you a note here. 

Thank you for writing this story.  It is so different.  I fell in love from the first chapter. 

Be well.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Life During Wartime

I just love this story.  Thanks for writing a story with a life of its own.  So what does Edward want for Christmas?

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Caravan of Love

Good lord Bella and Edward need to talk.  Thanks for Emmett and Rosalie to put relationships into perspective.  :)

 




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