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Summary: Feature

The Wolfpack is growing and the phenomenon of imprinting is spreading more broadly than anticipated! 

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To help out the new imprints, Emily Uley – newly wed First Imprint – is putting together a little guidebook.  Written for introductory and reference purposes, Wolf Girls 101 is intended to provide insight, perspective and humor to the view a new imprint might have of her position and of her werewolf.

Excerpt from Chapter 1:

An imprint is the person upon whom the werewolf fixes, biologically.  It is a mystical connection as well as a biological one, but we believe it is mostly for the purpose of procreation.

Yes, having children.  Scary as it may be to even consider letting these guys with their games and strange sense of humor reproduce... It is the underlying purpose of the imprint.


Categories: AU Characters: Emily
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Series: Imprinting: The Mating Imperative
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 9532
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: What's an Imprint?

I just love this little guidebook.



Author's Response:

*waves* I'm tracking you, Wallace!

Thanks! :) I was surprised that it was nominated for an Indie TwiFic Award, to be honest. Last thing I expected!

Still trailing you...

 

OH, and thanks for the shiny rating!

~LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Wait! I Can't Handle a Wolf in My Life!

I can't think about a wolf imprinting and not getting the girl.  That would be so sad.   Your Bella and Embry story cinched it for me.  Still loving the book.



Author's Response:

Hi!

I know! There are fics out there where the wolf doesn't get his imprint, though. Or where they are separated for, like, years (Quil and Claire coming to mind) and I think that is awful, myself.  (Heh, yeah I get all caught up in fictional, supernatural compelled relationships.)

I'm so glad you enjoyed my Bella and Embry stories! People have been so kind regarding them. :)

Thank you again for the rating!

Still following...

LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Is He Going to Shed Fur?

Emily seems to be treading lightly on an imprints role and a young werewolf's lack of control.  I love that Sam think's she is playing Word Challenge.  I was so addicted months ago.



Author's Response:

Ah, caught up with you! :)

Yes, Emily at this chapter is treading lightly.  Remember, she's writing for young women entering a really new way of life and handing off some heavy new ideas.  She'll get more indepth further into the guidebook. 

Heh, keeping this from Sam is kind of a thing for her...  But you KNOW that can't last, right?

Thank you for reading and for your reviews and shiny ratings!

LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Q & A

Loved this little notebook.  :)



Author's Response:

Hello again!

Thank you! I know it was an entirely unconventional fanfic, but I really had fun with it!

Thanks for reading and the shiny rating!

LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: All of this is fine, but what if my werewolf's a girl?

Wow, Charlie for Leah.  Thats pretty crazy.  Love this little guidebook.



Author's Response:

You finished! Yay! :)

Yep! Leah imprints on Charlie. Her story is called "Never Saw That Coming" and I'm working on it right now at FFn, if you're interested. 

I referred to Wolf Girls 101 often in my Imprinting series, and it seemed only right to have Emily make a little guidebook after all those talks. Of course, SAM didn't necessarily think so...

Thank you again for reading it and for your reviews and ratings!

LJ

 
Summary:

Shy researcher Bella Swan is coerced by her best friend Jacob Black to spend a night in a gay bar checking out the new piano player, Edward Cullen. Can Bella find the way to Edward's heart by bringing him a tasty apple pie?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Athenodora, Didyme, Jackson Rathbone
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10965
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PIANO MAN

I REALLY enjoyed your story! 



Author's Response:

W00t! Thanks, I appreciate your comments.

 
Summary:

Difficult patients are not the only challenge facing nurse Bella Swan in the Forks Hospital ER--and Dr. Edward Cullen is the biggest challenge of all. He's determined to win her over, she's determined to keep him at arm's length. Who will win?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4382
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2010 Updated: January 03, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Paging Dr. Cullen

Great little one shot!



Author's Response:

Thank you, so glad you enjoyed it!!

 
From the Wings by LJ Summers Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 529]
Summary: Feature

 

Edward is content enough to see Bella a few times a year after she has chosen Jacob. Then, something not altogether unexpected happens and Edward is able to help Bella cope with her new circumstances...and perhaps able to win her heart again.

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Excerpt from Chapter Four:

She looked up at me from behind the steering wheel, her expression poised between tenderness and curiosity.  “I keep thinking I’ll wake up, Edward.  I hope I’m not dreaming. I don’t think I could bear waking up again.”

In an instant, I was kneeling beside her, her face cupped in my palm.  The heat from her skin was a delicious sensation, the burning in my throat its inevitable price, but one I was more than willing to pay.  “You’re awake, love,” I murmured fervently, willing her to trust me though I didn’t really deserve it. I would try to earn that trust back. I had to.  “You are.  I’ll never be far from you again, if you’ll let me stay.”

 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
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Series: Impromptu Trilogy
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 44772
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2010 Updated: March 08, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Coming and Going

Thank you for  writing this side of an imprinting story. :)



Author's Response:

Good morning, Wallace!

Imprinting DOES have its downsides, to be sure.  I have rec'd comments and PM's about how foolish Jacob and Bella were to even consider marriage without his imprinting upon her; it could only end up like this, and so on. 

Thank you for your review and generous rating!

LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Reunion

Great chapter.  I cannot believe you are writing this...



Author's Response:

Hello again! :)

Can't believe I'm writing what...? ;-)  An Edward/Bella story?  Or...?

Thanks for reading and rating! :)

LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Plots and Confirmation

I love the plan for Bella...Will Bella disapear in the jungle.?



Author's Response:

Hello! :)

I'm following you as long as I am able. lol 

Bella, you'll find, has a plan of her own!  I hope you enjoy finding out how Edward sees it all.  ;-)

Thank you again for reading and your generous rating!

LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Sex and the Single Girl

Love Bella's tantrum.



Author's Response:

Good afternoon, Wallace!

 

Heh, so did I.  Sad the things I do to get Bella have a fit, eh? I orchestrated that entire chapter to achieve that moment.  It's pathetic, yeah, but I am not all that deep and meaningful at all times...

 

Thanks for continuing to read, review and rate! :) It's SO appreciated!

LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Important Numbers

Love this little story.:)  Thanks for working on the communication.  I think I like the older Bella.



Author's Response:

Good afternoon!

I am a firm believer in communication. I hope that continues to be evident. :)

Thank you for reading! :)

LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Change of Venue

The Joham lurker is kiling me.



Author's Response:

*waves*  Still following!

I love Joham as a villain. His gift is so insidiously deleterious. I had to use him.  :)

Hope you appreciate how he works out!

Thank you for the review and rating!

LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Building. Kissing. Pushing.

I am so scared for Bella to be alone.  What is Bella really asking for?  I look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hello!

Bella totally just needs alone time.  I need it, myself. I guess I shifted my preferences on to her. lol

Thank you for the review and generous rating!

LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Bella's Plan, Part One

Great to see the family in South America.



Author's Response:

Hi!

Yeah, everyone seems to have been pleased that I brought them into the story here. :)  

Glad you're enjoying. 

Thanks for the review and rating!

LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Twister and Towels

Great family bonding time!



Author's Response:

*waves*

Towelpires has been a universal favorite. lol  I am not generally fond of pure fluff, but this was a gift, of sorts, to the girls at Twilighters Anonymous. :)

Glad you liked it!

LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Senses and Scents

Love your Cullen Family and Bella...Edward is a kinky bitch.



Author's Response:

LOL

Edward is a gentleman, but he really does have to work at it on occasion!

He will loosen up. Someday. :)

Thank you again for your review and rating!

LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Of Nomads and Nightwear

OMG!  You are killing me.



Author's Response:

*waves* Hi!

Tension is fun, isn't it? :D

 

LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Bella's Plan, Part Two

I love this chapter...even the fade to black.  Much luv



Author's Response:

And again!

Thank you! I know it took a while to get around to Bella's brain, but I think it's good that it did. lol  Her plan was well-executed, eh?

Glad you liked the fade to black. :)  I had fun with that...

Thanks again for the reviews and rating!

LJ

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is a quiet, reserved writer whose Saturday routine includes her favorite coffee, reading in the bookstore, and watching Edward Cullen. Over the tops of their books, they trade furtive glances, until Bella decides to risk it all and introduce herself. FGB O/S for Marijee.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7294
[Report This] Published: January 15, 2010 Updated: January 15, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: BOOKWORMS (ONE-SHOT)

Nice job with this fic. 

 
Just One Night by Calikisses Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

What starts out as a birthday celebration with friends, turns into something completely unexpected when a good girl meets a fraternity president - who makes good girls go bad. Originally written as an example entry for the Back2Sool UNFMETT Contest. Now continued for FGB winners BBSapphire24 and iciripiciri. AH. AU.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 29889
[Report This] Published: January 16, 2010 Updated: May 01, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice.  I like Bella and Emmett stories...

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A Good Deed

They have great chemistry.  This is fun to read.  I love that Fratmett is having a hard time taking no for an answer. That little scene in the hallway would have scared me away.  I don't think I would have climbed the stairs.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Should I Stay or Should I Go?

I am enjoying this little story.

 
Summary:

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Jasper is a privileged high school senior. A fight between his friend and a "blue collar" student leads to a surprising discovery about someone he's lusted after for a long time. Slash; AH.  Lemons and language.  Written for the Support Stacie Auction (Sept 2009 cycle).


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6281
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2010 Updated: February 14, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

Fun slashy story.

 
A Rough Start by itzmegan73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 877]
Summary:

Overnight, irresponsible Edward goes from bachelor to father of a 5 yr old boy. Meanwhile responsible, prepared Bella begins her first job as Kindergarten teacher at Forks Elementary. When irresponsible meets the epitome of responsible, sparks will fly!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 250550
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2010 Updated: August 31, 2011


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Crazy Love

Great job getting them there.

 




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