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Penname: Wallace [Contact]
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Member Since: February 28, 2009
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Deep Dish by starfish422 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 114]
Summary:

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Slash: Sexy, brooding Jack Charles left Seattle to escape the specter of a love he could never have. A fresh start in Chicago and a new relationship hold promise and hope for him. Spinoff from Over The Top. AU/AH. M for lemons & language. Original & canon characters.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Mike, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 201893
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2011


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

darn you!

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Emotional. This chapter make me feel emotional.  So many feelings for Jack and Jacey.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I really don't want to hate Jacey. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Thanks for recharging Jack.  He needed his friends.  :)    Much luv.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Tgank you for M & N.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

This was a great chapter.  Love the talk with Jack's mother.  My heart really hurts for Jack.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Good Lord you are killing me.  In a good way.  This is areally a great story.  I look forward to future chapters.  much luv.

 
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Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Yes, love this chapter!  Much Luv for Jacey and Jack.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Thank you for writing Jacey and Jack love.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Epic last chapter.  I loved reading your stories.  Thank you for sharing every word.  The fandom has changed so much since I started reading.  It's not better...your story is a pearl among the shells.  Be well.

 
Summary:

Edward and Bella Playing Chess

 

Best friends, a freak snowstorm, and a blackout.  Throw in some board games and nice sheets, and who knows what will happen?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 106661
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thank you for writing Esme leaving after the second hit.  The Cullens story was nicely done

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I stayed at pan pacific during my honey moon.  We could aford an expensive hotel like four seasons everynight.  I was a fun place to stay.  I cannot wait to go back and visit Vancouver.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great little diddy of a story

 
Summary:

 

Banner by RachelxMichelle!

A winner in the Sort of Beautiful Challenge, this is a story about unconditional love.

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Jacob and Bella have been married for forty years when the Cullens ask to visit for what is possibly the last time.

A warning:  I've been told that this one-shot should come with a "bring your own Kleenex (tm) tissues" note. 

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Official Disclaimer: All trademarked characters and situations, familiar quotes and lamentations are the intellectual property of Stephenie Meyer. I have just enjoyed obsessing...


Categories: AU Characters: Jacob
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Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5102
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2009 Updated: November 03, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Do you remember?

That was really sad and lovely.



Author's Response:

Greetings, Wallace ~

Thank you.  I do appreciate your seeing that it is both sad AND lovely. I meant it to be so.  :)

Thanks for reading, reviewing and for leaving such a stellar rating!

~LJ

 
Snapshots by ThePhoenixRiddle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Outtakes from The Photographer's Series. Chapter titles will signify exactly where each chapter of this collection of outtakes takes place in the continuum of the 4 stories in our series. All pairings possible. All POVs possible.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 7593
[Report This] Published: November 14, 2009 Updated: December 17, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Exposure Chapter 1: EPOV

Luv this POV

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Exposure, Chapter 4: EPOV

Good Lord.  This is drama.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Exposure Chapter 5, RPOV

Not good enough...they just left Bella alone.  You kill me.

 
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Imprinting.  It's a mystical bonding for a werewolf and his mate.  More than just identifying a soul-mate, the imprint is meant to promote a strengthening of the shapeshifting bloodlines for each imprinted male. 

It is, according to Sam and Emily Uley, a mating imperative.  The sanity of the male is tied to the proximity of his mate.  This is not always convenient...

But it can be interesting!  Just ask Embry Call and Bella Swan.

New Banner by my dear friend MEGSD!

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Excerpt from chapter two:

I moistened my lips – nervous, but knowing he would kind of need me to get the ball rolling, so to speak, because he would never want to rush me.  Especially not this weekend.  “Were they good dreams?”

Very.”

“Would you tell me about them?”

He almost choked.  “Isabella!”  A tremor passed through his body, but I knew it had nothing to do with that inner wolf and everything to do with the man that he was.  “No,” he murmured.  “But I can show you...”

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: Imprinting: The Mating Imperative
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 12814
[Report This] Published: November 25, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Stargazing. Scheduling.

I really like this first  chapter. It was so unexpected.  I am so glad that I chose to read more about Bella and Embry.



Author's Response:

Good morning, Wallace!

LOL Unexpected? Well, I tried to start it with some...heat.  Just for a change. :)

Thank you for reading more about my Bella and Embry. I grew rather attached to them.

Thanks, too, for the shiny rating!

LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Confirmation. Communication.

Great chapter and use of patrols.  :)



Author's Response:

Hello!

Heh. One must use a patrol wisely and well. *laughing*  Glad you liked it!

Thanks again for the rating and review!

LJ

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Fulfillment.

Wow, great ending.  It was light and the world was open the Embry and Bella. No expectations.  Be well and thank you for writing these stories.



Author's Response:

Good morning, Wallace!

Thank you. :) Glad you liked it. I know, perhaps unusual that I didn't go into the deep end with these guys, but my goal in writing their story to this point was simply to study the mating imperative and its effect on two relative strangers.  Simple, maybe?  :)

Thank you for reading and rating! :) I appreciate it!

LJ

 
Summary:

The EPOV of Art School Confidential.  Edward loses a bet and has to model nude for an art class, but one of the art students is more interesting than he expects.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 8856
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: December 11, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: 1 Difficulties

Thank you thank you thank you for writing this POV!  Great job!  This chapter really helped me get into Edward's mind.  Much luv

 
Into Strangers by mopstyle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

AH, AU, OOC. "...tears oozing from my eyes. I was certain that this was the last I would be seeing of him for a long time." Angry and devastated, Jasper and Bella make decisions that will change their lives forever.

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Banner by the amazing AngstGoddess003, who used Jasper art from the French artist Nami (with Nami's permission).

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 13784
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Amoureux

I had forgotten how great this one-shot was...I hope you are successful in creating a story from it. :)

 
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Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Etrangers

I am really interested in this story.  I look forward to the next chapters.

 
Summary:

 

 

Au-human.

 

Alice watches her brother’s girlfriend Bella sleep.

 

 

 

A pervy but poetic one shot, with a low self esteem Alice who picks up the pieces after her brother Edward continuously wrecks his relationship with Bella.

An ExB story, which just makes it more painful for Alice.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1367
[Report This] Published: December 11, 2009 Updated: December 18, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This seems like a poetic rant. 



Author's Response:

It is :)

 
Summary: Feature

The Wolfpack is growing and the phenomenon of imprinting is spreading more broadly than anticipated! 

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To help out the new imprints, Emily Uley – newly wed First Imprint – is putting together a little guidebook.  Written for introductory and reference purposes, Wolf Girls 101 is intended to provide insight, perspective and humor to the view a new imprint might have of her position and of her werewolf.

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An imprint is the person upon whom the werewolf fixes, biologically.  It is a mystical connection as well as a biological one, but we believe it is mostly for the purpose of procreation.

Yes, having children.  Scary as it may be to even consider letting these guys with their games and strange sense of humor reproduce... It is the underlying purpose of the imprint.


Categories: AU Characters: Emily
Challenges:
Series: Imprinting: The Mating Imperative
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 9532
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Preface: Wolf Girls 101 or.... TBD

I love this tease. 



Author's Response:

Good morning, Wallace!

Heh. I do like a good tease. ;-)  Glad you do, too!

LJ

 




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