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Reviews by Wallace
 
Summary:

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 71 Completed: Yes Word count: 482203
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Bonding and Plotting

Oh Good lord, I am so glad that Edward, Jaspar and Emmett thought about Bella's and Alice's safety.  My heart is beating and I am a little afraid of what is to come.

 
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Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 46: The World Spins Madly On

Great Chapter...yes, I had tears.  Much luv

 
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Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: The Unexpected

The lime was nice.  I am wondering how Trager will breach the crack security team.  I didn't mention before...I like how you put Jacob in the mix.  Much luv

 
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Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Missing and Misunderstandings

I hope Bella is okay.  I enjoyed the training days for Edward and the boys.

 
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Date: December 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Decoys and Deprecation

Great Chapter!

 
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Date: December 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Getting Reacquainted

Great job! 

 
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Date: December 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Truth Revealed

Thanks for the author's notes.  Bella is a great girl in this story so far...  I am enjoying all of your characters.  Much luv.

 
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Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears

Go Esme!!!!  Great job

 
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Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Underneath It All

Wow! That really changed the story quickly.  Great job.

 
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Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: The Angel's Kiss

Super chapter. much luv

 
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Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Focus Fluctuations

Great chapter!

 
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Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: For The Love Of Esme

Great Job with Esme POV and backstory.  It was a fun distraction from Edwards situation.

 
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Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Warmth In The Darkness

Great job writing unconscious Edward.  Loved the Michelle fight.  I hope Bella doesn't get in trouble

 
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Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Reaching Into The Darkness

Please don't let this ruin Bella.  I like her.

 
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Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Disturbed

Great job with Bella this Chapter!  I didn't even think of working out aggression. 

 
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Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Concerning Charlotte

Much fun reading your story

 
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Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Declarations

A viper? really?  not my top 10 but to each...

 
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Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Happy New Year

yes, an intense chapter...heidi and the residents...will Bella be good enough for their respect.  I like how Bella handled the skanks.  I really appreciate your Bella.  She understands why Edward loves her.  She works through her insecurities and such.  Much luv

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Outside the Bubble

Wow, thanks for the insight and not putting this in an outtake.  It would be expected that there are consenquences for Trager's and the boy's actions. 

 
Summary:

In the world of the Others, Alice and Jasper have been cruelly separated by vicious in-laws with god complexes, lovely Bella's baby has an unknown father, and the only one who can save the day is Vampward (with the help of an odd assortment of vampires, werewolves, demons, witches and an odd fairy or two).

So, will Edward be able to keep Alice safe from the General's enemies? 

So, will Edward be able to help Jasper and Alice get back together? 

Will Edward be able to get past third base with Bella?

 


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Leah, Mike, Robert Pattinson, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Others...
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 23609
[Report This] Published: September 18, 2009 Updated: July 13, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:Prologue

Wow, that is an interesting prologue.  I am still hurting from Alice's story.  I look forward to more others. ;)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I was thinking the Others stories remind me of Xanadu meets Shrek. :)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So I am thinking the banshee is Tanya.  Just a guess.  :)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well played.  I like Bella's confession of her love for Alice and her qualities to Jasper's mother. 

 
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Date: July 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

You totally crack me up.  I am finally laughing again.  Great chapter.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That was seriously good.

 




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