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Penname: Wallace [Contact]
Real name: holly
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Member Since: February 28, 2009
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Reviews by Wallace
 
Summary:

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With medical bills, school bills, not to mention rent, piling up, Bella looks for a way to dig herself out of debt.  Rose tells her about a new business she’s gotten into.  Bella tries her hand at the business, and ends up paired with Dr. Edward Cullen.  But can she separate business and pleasure?

 

Here's a link to the thread.  We'd love to hear your thoughts! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=5822


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 43549
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Setting up shop

I am a little worried about how much Rosalie know about escorting...background checks, checking in, spa day, working out.  It almost sounds like Rosalie had a mentor.  What is Bella getting into? :)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Please help me love Bella.  I would for Bella to get back at Mike. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 : Emmett, the Philosopher

Much Love.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Dr. Cullen?

So much fun...and with Jacob trouble in the mix.

 
A Priori by mopstyle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary:

Banner by Annamorphos

Alice, Jasper and Bella are pushing their boundaries physically and emotionally. What happens when the rest of the Cullens move back to Forks? Will Bella be the catalyst of another family feud, or will she be the salvation of one? AxJxB ExB OOC AU

 

WARNING: EXTREMELY GRAPHIC VIOLENCE

No rape/cutting.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 101648
[Report This] Published: July 30, 2009 Updated: June 26, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Stop Staring

Totally unexpected.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Show Them Strength

This is pretty interesting.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Silence and Slaughter

Great chapter

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Screaming

Great job writing this chapter.  I find it interesting that you used Alice and Jasper to introduce Bella to the Cullen Family.  I really liked J's POV. 

 
Taking a Ride by AndYouLoveHer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Bella works at an amusement park, and Edward haunts her every fantasy. Upon meeting, they are forever attached. Ink, tats, and hot daddysexed out Carlisle.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5475
[Report This] Published: July 31, 2009 Updated: August 20, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was an interesting little fic.  I enjoyed it



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

 
Summary:


Banner Credit: Touchstone

*-~I--------o|W.T.F|o--------I~-*

Isabella Swan, infamous rich girl from SoCal, meets Edward Cullen, the dark, mysterious guy from the wrong side of the tracks after an unfortunate accident. Lost in the dense forest surrounding Forks together, they must survive complete isolation while gradually unearthing--and sometimes running from--one another's secrets.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 47619
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I read this story on the exchange.  I loved it.  I am so glad you are posting it here. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Charlie should have known that Bella would have been drawn to Bad boy  Edward Cullen.  Charlie added fuel talking about him.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Do give up. Please continue posting this story from the gift exhange.  Other people NEED to read it. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I read this story on LJ.  I am so glad you posted it on Twilighted.   More fan need access to this fun story.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I really love how you work this story together. 

 
The TA by wuogkat Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 322]
Summary:

The three black and white photographs that hang on Bell's apartment wall.  The lights from a police cruiser, a flower, and a man cliff diving.  These represent the three men she loves.

Bella Swan has spent the past four years excelling at school as a way to insulate herself from her past.  She finished her bachelor's degree early and is about to start her first semmester as a TA in the literature department of a small heavily wooded school in the northeast when her past finds her.  Bella finds herself thrust back into the world of vampires and werewolves and she has to decide which path her life will take, if she can survive that long.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Brady, Carlisle, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Quil, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 65421
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: February 21, 2011


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The TA

I am totally hooked.  Heart-fail and laughter in the same chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'm glad that you like it.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Meetings

I really like the "cleaned up" version.  Of course, I haven't read the other version.



Author's Response:

Stick with this one - the grammar is so much better AND there are some minor changes between the two.  This is my final draft.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Lunch

still loving the story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
With Teeth by TalulaBlue Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5901]
Summary: Feature

Edward is a 27-year-old alcoholic/addict struggling with his recovery. Bella is a 23-year-old who's moved back home after college. This fic chronicles how they meet, fall in love, and struggle with the complexities of their relationship. Not nearly as maudlin as it sounds (I hope).

Rated NC-17 for graphic (and sometimes non-romantic) sex, drug and alcohol use and abuse, profane language, and brief (very brief) suicidal ideation (although NO suicide attempts). No sexual assault, no cutting.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 183053
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Not sure I agree with what Edward shared at the meeting but I understand how you would want to show Edwards past and progress.  I really appreciate your story.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Those awkward moments for people in the program.  Trying hard to keep each other anonimity.  Great job moving the story along.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am enjoying your Bella.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward's daily routine and intellectual struggles with addiction are well written. I don't know where you got the insight but I must say it is dead on.  Really...great job.  I know now why each chapter to this story was highly anticipated.  Thank you for writing.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

just love your Bella. I like the red haired stranger too.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow that was avivid first chapter

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great story!  I had stopped reading it for almost a week because I saw the sadness coming.  So I cried all morning pushing through this story.  Thank you for Edward's eight step.  I really needed it as much as Bella.  Thanks for writing.

BTW-I love your ending.

 
Summary:

 

Haunted by her past, Bella is broken and alone. Starting over in a new city, can she let go of the guilt that consumes her when she meets a beautiful tattoo artist, or will his own personal demons destroy them first?  AH/OOC


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 20367
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2009 Updated: February 16, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

I love this story.  I am so glad that you posted your story on twilighted. 

 




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