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Penname: Wallace [Contact]
Real name: holly
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Member Since: February 28, 2009
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Reviews by Wallace
 
Summary:

 

Haunted by her past, Bella is broken and alone. Starting over in a new city, can she let go of the guilt that consumes her when she meets a beautiful tattoo artist, or will his own personal demons destroy them first?  AH/OOC


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 20367
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2009 Updated: February 16, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

I love this story.  I am so glad that you posted your story on twilighted. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

Great job with this EPOV.  James scares the crap out of me.  I am not looking forward to Party.  :)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06, 2009 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

Just rereading this chapter.  I am remembering so many great things you pulled together in it.  This great stuff.

 
Summary:

A heartless Edward is cursed and chooses to live his life confined in his home. When given the chance to see his love again, he takes it. A modern take on Beauty and the Beast.

OOC/AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 11309
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2009 Updated: September 18, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beasty Edward was great and I like this Pixie.

 
Summary:

Workaholic and Vegas strip club owner, Isabella Swan gets hot and bothered after interviewing a new stripper. How can she release the strain on her libido?

One shot written for TwiSlash Unveiled Femslash Contest

TwiSlash Unveiled Femslash Winner


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8960
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2009 Updated: September 03, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Bunny Ranch

I enjoyed you fem slash fic.  Since you are writing about my hometown.  I love reading about Bella running the best strip club in town.!



Author's Response:

Not only the best strip club, but one of the best places to work period in Vegas.  Thanks for reviewing.

 
I Dreamed of You by Charmie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Wallflower Bella Swan and best friend Jasper Whitlock are happy with the way things are. But what happens when tragedy strikes and lines are blurred? Can friends become lovers without repercussions ?

 

Submission for 'The Love of Jasper Contest"


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7118
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2009 Updated: September 06, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: I Dreamed of You - One-Shot

I cried sweet tears.



Author's Response:

Awww wow well thank you - that is the ultimate compliment!

 
Empty Sex by Megi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

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Esme was drowning. Being underwater only made it less obvious. She blocked out the glow of the pool's lights. Submerged, where her cool skin and the water merged, she couldn't put out the flames Charlie lit within her. Summer of Smut Judges Choice Pick!


Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU Characters: Charlie, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9940
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2009 Updated: September 30, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

So not what I expected.  Wow.  I did get a little lost in the conversation but I enjoyed Esme's quilt. 



Author's Response:

thanks so much!

 
Summary:

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

 

Outtakes Now posting on Twilighted.  This banner by yours truly :)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 71 Completed: Yes Word count: 482203
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Bonding and Plotting

Oh Good lord, I am so glad that Edward, Jaspar and Emmett thought about Bella's and Alice's safety.  My heart is beating and I am a little afraid of what is to come.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 46: The World Spins Madly On

Great Chapter...yes, I had tears.  Much luv

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: The Unexpected

The lime was nice.  I am wondering how Trager will breach the crack security team.  I didn't mention before...I like how you put Jacob in the mix.  Much luv

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Missing and Misunderstandings

I hope Bella is okay.  I enjoyed the training days for Edward and the boys.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Decoys and Deprecation

Great Chapter!

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Getting Reacquainted

Great job! 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Truth Revealed

Thanks for the author's notes.  Bella is a great girl in this story so far...  I am enjoying all of your characters.  Much luv.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears

Go Esme!!!!  Great job

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Underneath It All

Wow! That really changed the story quickly.  Great job.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: The Angel's Kiss

Super chapter. much luv

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Focus Fluctuations

Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: For The Love Of Esme

Great Job with Esme POV and backstory.  It was a fun distraction from Edwards situation.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Warmth In The Darkness

Great job writing unconscious Edward.  Loved the Michelle fight.  I hope Bella doesn't get in trouble

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Reaching Into The Darkness

Please don't let this ruin Bella.  I like her.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Disturbed

Great job with Bella this Chapter!  I didn't even think of working out aggression. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Concerning Charlotte

Much fun reading your story

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Declarations

A viper? really?  not my top 10 but to each...

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Happy New Year

yes, an intense chapter...heidi and the residents...will Bella be good enough for their respect.  I like how Bella handled the skanks.  I really appreciate your Bella.  She understands why Edward loves her.  She works through her insecurities and such.  Much luv

 




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