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Penname: Wallace [Contact]
Real name: holly
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Member Since: February 28, 2009
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Just a Fan.


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Reviews by Wallace
 
Summary:

 Isolated and unable to open up to people, Dr Jasper Whitlock finds himself in Forks, WA, taking on yet another temporary teaching position at a boarding school.  He meets the enigmatic yet troubled music teacher Edward Cullen and his group of friends and family. Will they be enough to teach Jasper to live again? To love?

Pairings to eventually include: JxE, JxExB, EmxR, CxEsme, Ax?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 60 Completed: Yes Word count: 421921
[Report This] Published: May 23, 2009 Updated: April 16, 2011


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Settling In

This story has potential



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so! Thanks for leaving a comment!

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57: Prom

Such a lovely story.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58: End of the Year

Just getting around to reading the last few chapters...so sad that the trio were a caught.  I enjoyed the chapters...

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Settling In

Just rereading your story. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46: Aftermath

excellent chapter.  I loved the notes.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Faculty Orientation

Taking  a moment to catch up with your story.  Rereading.  I had forgotted how much you had written in the first few chapters.  Great job.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: First Week: Part 1

Another great chapter building on the characters.  Thanks for writing this story.  I feel that I should be more than three chapter in.   Thanks for breaking up your "long" chapters. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Family

Just rereading.  I had forgotten the pregnancy scare.  I noticed that Rose is pretty quiet in this story. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Story Time

That is what love is...

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Boys will be Boys

Great chapter.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Miniature Disasters

well done

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45: Writer's Conference

Extra Special Well done!

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48: Happy Birthday, Jasper

Great job bringing them back to bliss

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51: Easter

Time fot Cali.  Nice Easter celebration.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52: Spring Break

Lots of stuff packed into this chapter.  Great job.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59: Graduation

Thank you for writing and finishing this story.  I enjoyed the ride.  Much luv.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60: Epilogue

Thank you for writing this story! 

 
Naked Ben by jajo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

Latest one-shot from the Others' Series.  Follow up to "Naked Angela"


Categories: AU, Crackfic Characters: Ben
Challenges:
Series: The Others...
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3117
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2009 Updated: May 26, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Invisible Strings

Love Ben and Leah together!

 
Summary:

A Murmur of Fire in the Vein

One stormy Seattle night, the last person Bella expects to see appears without warning at her door. How will history - hers and his - impact their unexpected and growing friendship?

FitV art by Touchstone.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 97977
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2009 Updated: August 27, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: In Which Jasper Shows Up at the Door

I heard you on the Temptation Podcast.   I had to finally read your story since it was finished.  I love love love this first chapter.  I just want to know what happened to the Exs.  I look forward to reading the entries for the "for the love of Jasper contest."



Author's Response:

Oh god. Thank you for suffering through the mess I was on the podcast and deciding to read the story anyway :)  Haha.  I hope you enjoy it!

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: In Which Jasper Did Laundry

I am sucked in by your vague description of Bella & Edward's relationship ending.  So good.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: In Which a Cowboy Is Nervous

I wasn't expecting Jasper's reason for the breakup.  Great job with this chapt.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: In Which Emmett Comes Out to Play

I love Emmett. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: In Which Jasper Shows Up at the Door

And the best use of Chicken Fingers and Tatertots goes to ?  Your the best.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: In Which What We've Got Here is a Failure to Communicate

I was sure that Jasper was going to breakup with Bella.  Great chapter.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: In Which Love Is a Battlefield

Tears bitter Tears. 

 




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