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Penname: Wallace [ Contact]
Real name: holly
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Member Since: February 28, 2009
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Summary:  Seven years have passed since Edward and Bella last saw each other. They grew up as children and even became good friends. Once they entered high school, Edward became distant and eventually severed all ties with her. Confused and hurt, Bella moved on with her life in Seattle.Through it all, Bella had her older brother Emmett to get past the estrangement. Now, with Edward's imminent return to Seattle to help out with his sister Alice's wedding, Bella can't help wondering what drove away her brother's best friend all those years ago.
Nominated for Best Novel-Incomplete at the Eddie and Bellie Awards.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes
Word count: 247400
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: February 28, 2010
Reviewer: Wallace Signed  
Date: January 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2
Damn Emmitt the cockblocker. The bonfire scene was super sweet.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Great Job with this chapter and the lemon.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 2
I love Emmetts breakdown in the kid store.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 1
I like how you gave Bella a wakeup call with Alice's perspective.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
Great girls night chapter.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 1
Good go Bella
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 18: Pink tulips
Super cute chapter...the kid's showing off their new significant others.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 21 Part 2 A Long Time
Thank you for this lovely story. It was well written. The love story was very natural. This was a great read and left me feeling light hearted.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue: Every Time
Great ending. the one thing i can't get past is Washington's waiting period for mariage licences. :)
Summary: It was said of early vampire books and movies that vampirism was simply a poorly disguised substitute for sex. Back in the day, the entire genre was considered extremely risque'. With that in mind, this is a parody of Midnight Sun replacing all the vampirism with sexuality - no blood lust - just extreme human lust. AH/AU and consequently, OOC. Thank you to Debussy_This for the fabulous (and hysterical) banner!!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 85040
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: April 24, 2009
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: June 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Just starting the story. I can't stop reading.
Summary:
Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more. As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow. Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted. Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse. J/B at first, but eventually E/B.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No
Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: August 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Shakespeare
You nailed his chapter. Yes, It was fluffy. You did deal with Bella's insecurity in the best way. Her lack of confidence to apply to University's and to leave Forks/Jacob. It revealed a lot to Edward.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: August 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen
You wrote a great Bella and Jasper kiss.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: August 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: First Day
Great job with the first day of school. I like your version of Bella.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: August 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Bonfire
I think it's great the adults in this story are aware of what is going on with the Cullen's moving into town. Of course, fanfiction readers know Harry and Billy's reaction is a result of the Cullen's presence.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: August 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Break
Darn it if you didn't use Bella's clumsiness against her. I can't wait to see how this works out.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: August 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Terminal
I am enjoying your writing. I like your timeline with this story. Showing us Bella would have survived the van and other things without Edward. Well done.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: August 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Missing
Great job stepping up the timeline. I loved Bella and Charlie's conversation. I am enjoying your writing style. I already know that you have stopped writing this story. I really appreciate that you didn't pull it. It is well written.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: August 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: College
I loved this chapter. You may have noticed that I commented about Bella's insecurity about going to a big University a couple of chapters ago. I am trying to catch up on reviews. I read the story at work and couldn't leave reviews. I feel this story deserves more reviews and attention. Be Well. This chapter hit too close to home for me. :)
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: August 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Interview
I love this ramp up to Bella's rebellion.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: August 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Birthday Girl
Great job working through Bella's birthday. I love the way to took the details and made them work with this story. Nicely done. I am in Bella's camp. I don't like the celebrate my birthday in a big way.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: August 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: The Lodge
Jacob made a huge mistake. I see this as the beginning of the end for Bella and Jacob. Jacob's description of Bella is going to bite him in the booty very soon.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: August 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Irresponsible
Thank you for not playing up the party and focusing on Bella. You could have written Bella so differently. Thanks for the Edward save.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: August 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Giddy
Great drunk Bella. Love your stalking Edward. The banter was fun to read. It is time for Jacob to meet the competition.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: August 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Half Truths
I loved drunk Bella finding her voice and telling Jacob what she needs. We see how young Jacob is in this chapter. Poor kid...he can't hold on the Bella much longer.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: August 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Acquaintances
Thanks for bringing Emmett and Jasper to the store. I know that they were just checking out Bella. I was so happy when Edward invited Bella to eat at his table. Yes!!!
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