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Penname: Wallace [Contact]
Real name: holly
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Member Since: February 28, 2009
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Reviews by Wallace
 
Summary:

It only took death for him to realize how much he loved her.

For anyone who ever wondered "what-if" for Leah and Jacob. "What-if" Jacob had never broken away? "What-if" he hadn't imprinted? "What-if" life was completely different? NC-17 for extremely crude language.

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-Thanks to JaneJoke for the banner. I had to play around forever to get this up!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Jacob, Leah
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 206365
[Report This] Published: May 08, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: If she doesn't die, she'll kill us

I am not sure I get your Jacob, but I will keep reading.



Author's Response:

I tried to have a little bit of fun with the characters. Some people like it and some don't. I completely understand if you get bored. If you want to stick with it, that's fantastic. But if not, that's okay, too. I know that not everyone is going to like what I do. I'll understand if it's not your cup of tea (God, now I sound like my mother...)

;-)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Pain loves me

I really didn't know what to expect with this fiction.  I am enjoying Leah's story.



Author's Response:

The storyline in this fiction is quite unique. I wanted to do something really different with Leah and Jacob. I'm glad to have you as a reader. It's always nice to get varied perspectives from people reading the story.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: The Alpha Has Gone Crazy

I really liked this chapter.



Author's Response:

It was fun to write. Don't usually like to write fight scenes, so it was interesting to step out of my comfort zone there.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: How did I end up here?

This chapter made me laugh out loud.  Thanks



Author's Response:

You are quite welcome. I enjoy making people laugh. I am all for more laughter in today's society.

 
Summary: Feature

Edward Cullen: telepath, vampire, and psychologist. When a new patient ignites unfamiliar feelings in his soul, can he reconcile his past with his future?

A la Midnight Sun. Dark noir.

Statue of Venus and Psyche, red candle, side view of Edward's face with eye changing from red to black to gold and back

*Thanks and more to the might AngstyGoddess003 for her graphical prowess.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 100584
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2009 Updated: September 25, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Wax Drips

I read this story because I heard about it on the temptation podcast.  i am listening to old casts and the lightning sounded cool,

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Songs of Past

Every chapter you get to me.  great writing.  I want to kick Alice for breing short sighted. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: If Trees Could Walk. If Stones Could Fly

OMG How many people yelled at you for this chapter. Great job.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Differences Twixt Monsters & Men

such a great story

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: T'would Be Better to Dance Alone

I just love this story!  The author notes don't suck, too. :)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Silent Heart's Demise

Oh good lord this is a fun ride.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue: A Light with No Flame

Yes, I really enjoyed this story.  It was very original and intelligent.  I forgot how well written stories make me feel.  You challenged me mentally and too me to new places in my imagination.  Keep at it.  Thanks. Much Luv.                 

 
Naked Angela by jajo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 42]
Summary:

Where did Angela poof off to in Chapter 11 of the Good Looking Loony Tunes Stalker Guy?  Who's her mate?  And, wait, she gets naked?

Angsty, followed by lemony goodness.

 


Categories: AU, Crackfic Characters: Angela, Ben, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Others...
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3642
[Report This] Published: May 13, 2009 Updated: May 16, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: How Angela bit the big one... oh, wait, or did it bite her?

Jake and Angela mated is funny!

 
Summary:

A smutty one shot that turned into a two shot that Tochunadu and I wrote just for the heck of it... And hey, maybe we'll add more... Who knows!
Since I have a major thing for Rosalie, sometimes my imagination runs away with me and she ends up naked with Bella... Ah, if only... ;)

Hope ya'll enjoy it!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 8596
[Report This] Published: May 16, 2009 Updated: June 06, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Girl's Night - Bella's POV

super fun

 
Summary:

 Isolated and unable to open up to people, Dr Jasper Whitlock finds himself in Forks, WA, taking on yet another temporary teaching position at a boarding school.  He meets the enigmatic yet troubled music teacher Edward Cullen and his group of friends and family. Will they be enough to teach Jasper to live again? To love?

Pairings to eventually include: JxE, JxExB, EmxR, CxEsme, Ax?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 60 Completed: Yes Word count: 421921
[Report This] Published: May 23, 2009 Updated: April 16, 2011


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Settling In

This story has potential



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so! Thanks for leaving a comment!

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57: Prom

Such a lovely story.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58: End of the Year

Just getting around to reading the last few chapters...so sad that the trio were a caught.  I enjoyed the chapters...

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Settling In

Just rereading your story. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46: Aftermath

excellent chapter.  I loved the notes.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Faculty Orientation

Taking  a moment to catch up with your story.  Rereading.  I had forgotted how much you had written in the first few chapters.  Great job.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: First Week: Part 1

Another great chapter building on the characters.  Thanks for writing this story.  I feel that I should be more than three chapter in.   Thanks for breaking up your "long" chapters. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Family

Just rereading.  I had forgotten the pregnancy scare.  I noticed that Rose is pretty quiet in this story. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Story Time

That is what love is...

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Boys will be Boys

Great chapter.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Miniature Disasters

well done

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45: Writer's Conference

Extra Special Well done!

 




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