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Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2406]
Summary:

We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

Fractured Hearts

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 225614
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Reality Check

Great job with peeping Edward.  The panties are a nice touch.  I must admit Edward working through Bella's words was well done.



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks. I tried very hard to make it as close to Edward's character in canon as possible (at least so far) and we know he overanalyzes everything. It's awesome that you enjoyed it and I have to admit that Edward falling out of the tree is a fan favorite. I get more comments on that moment than any other. I appreciate the read and review. =)

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Too Much Testosterone

Great job with Quill and Jacob.  I thought "oh-no" when Jacob started getting sick.  Know that Bella was loosing her best friend. 

I appreciate the relationship development between Bella and Edward. 



Author's Response:

Hello again: I'm glad you enjoyed the interaction between Bella and the "boys" - but yes, Jacob feeling ill is not a good sign of things to come. I actually had people tell me Bella was just a bitch that needed to get over herself when they reviewed this chapter. Only a few and they made me laugh. I'm thrilled that you're enjoying it. I continue to appreciate the read and review.

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap

Well done



Author's Response:

Hi there! I'm thrilled you found my story and that you're enjoying it. Thank you for the read and review. I appreciate it so much and hope to hear more from you in the future. =)

~Lisa

 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: A Trek, A Tree, and Titty Hard Ons

I think this is my favorite chapter.  I love seeing the family really bond.  I loved Rosalie's participation.  Great job writing this chapter.



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm so glad you liked it. It was fun to get a glimpse into what the Cullens do at Christmas and how they make their own traditions. And Rose starting to understand Bella a little more makes things a little easier to write when it comes to the two of them. Thank you for the continued read and review. I truly appreciate it. =)

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Confessions

Another gripping chapter...thanks for writing and sharing this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much reading and letting me know you enjoy it. I appreciate it so much. :)

~Lisa

 
The Tutor by itzmegan73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1657]
Summary:

School is in session and there are lots of lessons to be learned. Bella Swan, the newest student at Forks High School, needs to amend her shy and introverted ways and her guidance counselor has just the thing: tutoring! Besides, newbie Bella is probably the only student naïve enough to tackle Edward Cullen, a juvenile delinquent in training. Edward’s main pastimes include avoiding school and hanging out with his lovelorn, best friend Jasper Hale. In Edward’s opinion, Jasper needs a tutoring session of own in order to get over his ex- Alice. However Alice is too busy trying to console her friend Rosalie –who is only interested in one lesson: how to win the affections of Edward Cullen.  


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 162183
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: December 28, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Eight Years Later

Thanks for the glimpse of Bella & Edwards future.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory

Nice Kiss!

 
Summary:

 

Find out a little more about the Others' "meat market" that Emmett and Rosalie run.

You probably can read this one-shot f you haven't read The Good Looking Loony Tunes Stalker Guy yet.  It's understandable (and funny I hope) but it will even funnier if you've read at least read a couple of GLLTSG's chapters.

 

 


Categories: AU, Crackfic Characters: Edward, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Others...
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1802
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2009 Updated: April 26, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Fall Rush

desanguinate= $100 word

Had to read to the hubbie.

 

 
Wendy's by KatieBelle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary:

Bella can't stop thinking about the silent yet intense boy who watches her at school. What happens when they meet, late at night, at Wendy's? Rated M for my usual. . .language and smut. AU/AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 24637
[Report This] Published: April 23, 2009 Updated: October 08, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Wendy's

Hot! A little fantastic but hot. 



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

<3 Katie

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Lounge

I really dug this short story!



Author's Response:

Thank you, sweets! I'm glad!

<3 Katie

 
Summary:

Alice is a nanny for Carlisle Cullen’s three boys. Seventeen year old Jasper keeps vying for Alice’s attention. But who really owns her heart? Au-Human. Warning: A/C lemon!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2673
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

cute and sexy



Author's Response:

thanks!

 

 
Summary:

It only took death for him to realize how much he loved her.

For anyone who ever wondered "what-if" for Leah and Jacob. "What-if" Jacob had never broken away? "What-if" he hadn't imprinted? "What-if" life was completely different? NC-17 for extremely crude language.

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-Thanks to JaneJoke for the banner. I had to play around forever to get this up!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Jacob, Leah
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 206365
[Report This] Published: May 08, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 45: Outtake one: Alternate Ending

Wow, lots of tears.  Glad you didn't make that your official ending.  Now I need to go read a fluffy teen rate fic.  Great job with this chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. And I don't think I could have gone with any other ending other than the one that I went with. I'm a sucker for happy endings.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: If she doesn't die, she'll kill us

I am not sure I get your Jacob, but I will keep reading.



Author's Response:

I tried to have a little bit of fun with the characters. Some people like it and some don't. I completely understand if you get bored. If you want to stick with it, that's fantastic. But if not, that's okay, too. I know that not everyone is going to like what I do. I'll understand if it's not your cup of tea (God, now I sound like my mother...)

;-)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Pain loves me

I really didn't know what to expect with this fiction.  I am enjoying Leah's story.



Author's Response:

The storyline in this fiction is quite unique. I wanted to do something really different with Leah and Jacob. I'm glad to have you as a reader. It's always nice to get varied perspectives from people reading the story.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: The Alpha Has Gone Crazy

I really liked this chapter.



Author's Response:

It was fun to write. Don't usually like to write fight scenes, so it was interesting to step out of my comfort zone there.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: How did I end up here?

This chapter made me laugh out loud.  Thanks



Author's Response:

You are quite welcome. I enjoy making people laugh. I am all for more laughter in today's society.

 
Summary: Feature

Edward Cullen: telepath, vampire, and psychologist. When a new patient ignites unfamiliar feelings in his soul, can he reconcile his past with his future?

A la Midnight Sun. Dark noir.

Statue of Venus and Psyche, red candle, side view of Edward's face with eye changing from red to black to gold and back

*Thanks and more to the might AngstyGoddess003 for her graphical prowess.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 100584
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2009 Updated: September 25, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Wax Drips

I read this story because I heard about it on the temptation podcast.  i am listening to old casts and the lightning sounded cool,

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Songs of Past

Every chapter you get to me.  great writing.  I want to kick Alice for breing short sighted. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: If Trees Could Walk. If Stones Could Fly

OMG How many people yelled at you for this chapter. Great job.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Differences Twixt Monsters & Men

such a great story

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: T'would Be Better to Dance Alone

I just love this story!  The author notes don't suck, too. :)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Silent Heart's Demise

Oh good lord this is a fun ride.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue: A Light with No Flame

Yes, I really enjoyed this story.  It was very original and intelligent.  I forgot how well written stories make me feel.  You challenged me mentally and too me to new places in my imagination.  Keep at it.  Thanks. Much Luv.                 

 
Naked Angela by jajo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 42]
Summary:

Where did Angela poof off to in Chapter 11 of the Good Looking Loony Tunes Stalker Guy?  Who's her mate?  And, wait, she gets naked?

Angsty, followed by lemony goodness.

 


Categories: AU, Crackfic Characters: Angela, Ben, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Others...
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3642
[Report This] Published: May 13, 2009 Updated: May 16, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: How Angela bit the big one... oh, wait, or did it bite her?

Jake and Angela mated is funny!

 
Summary:

A smutty one shot that turned into a two shot that Tochunadu and I wrote just for the heck of it... And hey, maybe we'll add more... Who knows!
Since I have a major thing for Rosalie, sometimes my imagination runs away with me and she ends up naked with Bella... Ah, if only... ;)

Hope ya'll enjoy it!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 8596
[Report This] Published: May 16, 2009 Updated: June 06, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Girl's Night - Bella's POV

super fun

 




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