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Penname: Wallace [ Contact]
Real name: holly
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Member Since: February 28, 2009
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Summary: Slash: Edward is an unabashed pleasure-seeker, one of the club kings of the Seattle gay community. One night at his favorite club, he meets an enigmatic man who rocks the world he has created.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 168349
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: May 11, 2010
Reviewer: Wallace Signed  
Date: May 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Unpleasant Memories
Love the picture you suggested. I am hooked to this story.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: May 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Awry
Ouch. This chapter hurts.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: May 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - In Retrospect
I think you wrote Edward appropriately...He is a cold SOB. I am hooked to this story. So I will wait patiently for the next update.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: May 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Outrunning the Waves
I can't stand Emo Edward. Why is Jasper so lucky? Oh please write more soon!
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Trojan Horse
nice follow up to chapt 19. I am still a little emotional from that chapter. Thanks for putting this up quickly to balance out the couple's feelings. I don't hate Edward as much...
Nice use of the phone call to breakdown his walls!
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: June 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - According to Carlisle
I was not expecting Dr C's POV. Thanks for writing in his voice.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: July 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Visitors Expected and Unexpected
I forgot about Jack and Jasper on Friday. I don't think Jasper will do anything more that kiss Jack. He doesn't do things to hurt himself unlike Edward... Edward closes himself off and uses power to feel better. Jasper will talk to his family about how he feels. Thanks for the great chapter.
Congrats on the Bellie nomination. I am a big fan of this story.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: July 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Visitors Expected and Unexpected
I forgot about Jack and Jasper on Friday. I don't think Jasper will do anything more that kiss Jack. He doesn't do things to hurt himself unlike Edward... Edward closes himself off and uses power to feel better. Jasper will talk to his family about how he feels. Thanks for the great chapter.
Congrats on the Bellie nomination. I am a big fan of this story.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: July 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Dilemma and Dream
Oh my hand was raised until the bottoming started then I knew it had to be a dream. I still love this story. I am so hooked. I like how you used Jack & Cody in this story.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: July 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Advice and Affirmation
I like this chapter. They are going to work things out. It is a fluffy chapter. Aww.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: July 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Reconciliation
Nice chapter. You could end it here and it would be happy and perfect!
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: August 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The Knot
Oh boy! This chapter had it all! I loved the Velvetine Rabit quote...Halo...and their wedding night. It was because of your story that I created a profile on Twilighted. I just had to comment on the story during the beginning chapters. I didn't say much but appreciated the story.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: September 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Epilogue
Thank you thank you for this story. I look forward to the Jack outtake. Keep writing.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: October 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 33: Jack Charles Smuttake
Love how you wrote Jack and Jacey.
Summary:  
Bella is devastated by the loss of her mother and is forced to go live with Charlie, her Mom's best friend, when there is no one else to take her in. She gives up on living, too lost in her own anger to let anyone close to her. Enter Edward, the handsome teenage vampire, and the beginning of a complicated love-hate relationship. Neither can deny the connection between them, but can their love survive the fear that rules her and the secret he hides from her? AU and OOC, Rated NC-17 for language and sexual content.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes
Word count: 292396
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: December 25, 2009
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Metamorphosis
Your use of the truck to get Bella & Edward to talk was lovely. I am enjoying your story. Author's Response: Thank you. I thought it made sense given the age of the truck. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 44: Endings
Wow that was very well written. Author's Response: Thank you. I enjoyed imagining what the whole transformation process would feel like for Edward. Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 41: Juxtaposition
Killer chapter! Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 40: Jeopardy
Great chapter! I have been on a cell phone call when a friend of mine was hit from behind. The car caught on fire. I heard the commotion and the fire. From this day on I stay off my phone in the car and won't talk to anyone driving. Much luv for your writing. Author's Response: Oh my goodness, how horrible! I stay off my phone in the car too - no talking or texting while driving. I wish more people would do the same as us. Thank you for sharing your story and for the review.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 47: Choices
Great story & Great Ending....Thanks for sharing your imagination. Much luv. Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed the ending and the story. It meant a lot to me to follow your journey through the story. I know reviewing is not for everyone but I truly appreciate it when someone takes the time. Thank you for all of the support.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 36: Misdirection
Again another unexpected twist Author's Response: I like to keep you guesssing ;) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Conflicted
Wow, That was so unexpected. I really didn't think it would happen so fast. You wrote two beautiful POVs Author's Response: Thank you, for the compliment and the review. :)
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: December 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Discernment
This was a well developed chapter. It was full of useful information Edwards self evaluation brought insight to his issues with Bella. I am looking forward to the next chapters. Author's Response: Thank you. I really tried to show how deeply Bella is affecting Edward in this chapter, more deeply than even he realizes. He still believes it is within his power to control her because he doesn't understand the gravity of the emotional shift she's causing in him. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: December 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Attachments
I like Bella's logical thinking. "lines", people always leave and such...I look forward to her POV's Author's Response: Bella is very regimented and compartmentalized, her way of dealing with her mother's death. It's all very logical to her. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: December 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Overreaction
What did alice? Author's Response: Alice finally put together the connection between Edward's murderous thoughts and her new friend. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: December 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Falling
I dig this Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thanks for the review!
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