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Penname: Wallace [Contact]
Real name: holly
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Member Since: February 28, 2009
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Reviews by Wallace
 
Summary: Feature


He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?

OOC, canon at heart.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Angles

no bulb joke.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Call Time

I love this chapter. You amaze me with your wonderfull twist that I don't see coming. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Party Favors

I really felt bad for Tanya.  Great job.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Truths

Don't know.  I know its bad.

Bella rocks.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Short Ended Stick

Green

I am really enjoying the ride.

 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Imps

The Boss

You kill me with your plot twists.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: The Goods

Kill Loren Fuck Jessica  and marry Angela

I really enjoyed the banter in this chapter.

 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue in Review

I love that you didn't give Breaking Dawn the competion.  I love your creativity.  I love so much about this story.    Keep writing what you love!

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Curtain

Music

I am so happy you wrote Bella with the "gift." and that Edward would be nothing without her. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Nocturnal Prelude

I love your opening chapter.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: First Listen

I wish I could hear Bella's voice.  I love the lines back and forth through the blog. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Opening Lines

Oh my!  That was hot.  My eyes are big and green.  I usually try to hide them.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Phenomena

My university letter are on my Keychain.  Poor Edward and Alice...she has stage fright.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Visuals

Misto-coffee and steamed non-fat milk.

Did Edward see what she was doing on her Iphone? 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Dazed and Invited

I would love a manhattan.  What song did she sing?

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: House Cullen

Pink thing XTC

 
Summary: Feature

 

Bella begins working for the elusive and distant Edward Cullen who she discovers is hiding behind an elaborate charade to maintain his secret lifestyle. Bella is determined to find out the mysteries of Edward Cullen but with what results? AU. Mystery/Humor/Angst


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 173201
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I keep hearing about this story. I am so happy that I could start reading it.  Great start.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Edward needs are feelings poster.  Love it.  He didn't know what Lust is...

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

My hair stood on end when Victoria introduced herself.  Help!

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Alice saves the day.  Edward is lurking.  Bella is clueless too.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Much joy reading Edward squirm and Bella getting some ovaries.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Is Edward Gay or European?

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I appreciate your slow development of their relationship.  No rush. enjoying the UST.

 
Summary:

Edward is adopted by the Cullens after living a nightmare.  He meets Bella, and she tries to fight his inner monster.  AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 104014
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: April 06, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I have been waiting a long time to read this story.  I am enjoying it so far.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am enjoying Edwards character development. 

 




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