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Penname: Wallace [Contact]
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Reviews by Wallace
 
Summary:

The much anticipated sequel to A Lesson in Release.  Jasper has won the girl of his dreams and they are beginning a new life together at college.  But what happens when fate intercedes?  Will he be able to hold onto her or will fate return her to Edward?

A Lesson in Fate


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: The Lessons Saga
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 171842
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

I was wondering about the italians.  This is a great twist.  I am still hooked to your story. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: The Worst Kind of Torture

Wow.  Are you writing bella's POV?  She would be in serious conflict. Did she know the proposal was coming?  Did she start healing and having feelings for Edward?  Does she really think she has a future with the Cullens?



Author's Response:

No, I don't plan on writing Bella's POV in this story.  I think it is far more interesting NOT knowing what she's thinking.  No, she didn't know the proposal was coming.  ~Lillie

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: How am I doing so far?

I feel so conflicted.  Bella should be punished for her disloyalty. 

 
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Date: April 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Bella's Dream

Very sexy. 

I was wondering how Alice and Jasper are handling the new living arrangements.

 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

Would Bella really be so honest with Edward without the threat of the Volturi?  Talk amongst yourselves...

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II

jasper is losing his best qualities...edward is find the best

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: When I Think About You

A different kind of Bella & Edward connection

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

What about the Volturi...I see a conflict with the trip and the trip.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Welcome to Manhood

Pretty powerful stuff...Edward and Bella together again? 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Welcome to Manhood

Pretty powerful stuff...Edward and Bella together again? 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36: Ohio State vs. Michigan

Theres gonna be a wedding!!!

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37: At Last

Oh my that's so not fair.   I thought you hinted about this...The clue was Charlie. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37: At Last

Oh my that's so not fair.   I thought you hinted about this...The clue was Charlie. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41: Honesty and Understanding

Gosh...How can you wrap this up so quickly?  I love this story.  I never expected this...

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42: Nona

Great job pulling the story together.  I did not expect this ending. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue: Guys' POV

I love this.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue: Girls' POV

Thanks for the fun story.  I really enjoyed the new characters Adrian and Kelly.  I look forward to your outtakes.  

 
Summary:

Ever since she can remember, Bella Swan has spent Christmas with the Cullens. Ever since she can remember, Christmas has been full of strange Edward-related complications that remain unresolved year after year. Last Christmas, it seemed like their strange affair had finally ended. Bella is keen to resolve her "relationship" and move on with life. But will her feelings remain the same, especially after she finds out that Edward has a new introduction to make?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 60805
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: March 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I didn't know what to expect from the chapter. It can't be easy for Bella.  No say "I love you" and everything is perfecy.



Author's Response:

You're right. No neat bow-ties, but I kind of like that...

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Thanks for wrapping this up and the laughs.  Good luck.

 
Summary:

*Comedy* Charlie insists Bella go camping with the Cullens, in order to acclimate herself with the great outdoors. After all, the Cullens are practically revered in town for their family camping trips, so they must know what they're doing, right? *Post Eclipse

Banner by Anne Cullen


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 32070
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2009 Updated: March 25, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Roll on the floor funny chapter.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thanks for the belly laughs. 

 
Summary:

It's been three long years since Edward left Bella, and things within The Cullen family have changed epically. After Edward's final stand off with Victoria, Emmett is left heartbroken and alone. A chance vision sends him back to Forks, and into the healing arms of the one person he never expected. Why fight with fate?

 

 New Moon AU - Bella/Emmett.

 


Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 64433
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2011


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Gotta Be Somebody

I loved that Bella could be "somebody without him."  Strong Bella is refreshing to read.  Processing Bella is even better.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: March 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Cry

I love Ilene!

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - You and Me

So much fun to read this again.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Gotta Be Somebody

Just wanted to leave a note.  I am rereading your story for the third time. After I read your last post,  I started a few chapters before the last post.  Then decided to reread.  Thanks for continuing the story. 

 




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