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Penname: Wallace [ Contact]
Real name: holly
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Member Since: February 28, 2009
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Summary: Jasper, Rosalie, Bella, Alice, Emmett & Edward become interwoven, making their mark at Seattle's Fremont Park Preparatory boarding school. Wealth and war, friendship and love ensue.
AU/AH. Rated M for language and sexual themes. Slightly OOC.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Word count: 146911
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2008 Updated: September 12, 2010
Reviewer: Wallace Signed  
Date: October 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: One For Sorrow
Great job tying it all together. What will happen with Rose and Emmett? Will you make her work for him? Look forward to future chapters.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: March 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Roses Are Red
I reread a few chapters before reading Chapt 22. Without rereading, I would have forgotten the passion. Also, the danger of Bella giving herself to Edward. I can stop reading the story now...I don't want loose the fantasy. T Author's Response: That you reread chapters of G&B is surreal to me. Maybe you'll be able to see the edits I've made (spelling, grammar, random mayhem) but hopefully they aren't that noticeable. Anyway (weird tangent over) this next update - in the cue as I type - does a lot of flashing back so you probably won't have to reread much to grasp everything ... just so you know. Though, I'll never discourage reading this story. :) Thank you so very much for your dedication and delight in G&B, RAE
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: October 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: For Want of a Nail
The sorry mistakes we make trying to grow up.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: October 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Humpty Dumpty
so sad to read desperate Edward and Alice
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: October 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: This is the House That Jack Built
This chapter killed me. So many mistake made by the kids.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: October 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Five Little Speckled Frogs
Great job with Coma Alice.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: October 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Roses Are Red
The love scenes for all of them are lovely. I think Alice and Jasper are my fave. Edward and Bella are next.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: October 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: It's Raining, It's Pouring: Part One
I keep thinking "Oh No!" Stupid boys. The girls had it under control.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: October 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: London Bridge is Falling Down
Thanks for the great glossary. Great job writing King Dickward. It all coming back to me.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: October 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: The North Wind doth Blow
I love Emmett. Thanks for writing his POV
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: October 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: One, Two, Three, Four, Five
Go Alice. That chapter felt fast paced and make me wonder where Edward is...and what is wrong with Alice. :) It's all coming back to me.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: October 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: How Many Miles to Babylon?
Well, I caught that Bella is not poor. She doesn't care how much money she has... She pissed of her friend Jacob (Jake). He is persona non grada in her/jasper's life. That's pretty harsh. I didn't understand what happened between Mike and Bella. No familiar with the term 'run you over'
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Jack and Jill
I read this story so long ago. When I recieved your update, I couldn't remember where I had left off. So here we go again.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: October 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Sticks and Stones
Thanks for not jumping into the lusty teen sex. It would have been too easy. My fav is Emmett. Alice is a close second.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: The Queen of Hearts
I forgot what a bitch Rosalie was to everyone. Stupid girl. :)
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: October 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Here We Go Round the Mulberry Bush
Party tease! Loved the kiss POVs
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: October 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Ring a Ring o' Roses
Conflicted Rosalie is well written. Great job setting up the party.
Summary: Bella and Edward were secret best friends during one of the best periods of Bella's life. Their friendship has waned. When they are forced back together, untold secrets are revealed. When the truth is out there, will anyone feel lucky?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jessica, Lauren, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 78205
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2009
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: April 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue
Thanks for the story.
Summary: Bella Swan moves cross country to take a teaching job, trying to escape the man who broke her heart. Edward Cullen is the school's music teacher with secrets of his own. Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together trying to work through their issues and unexpected feelings for each other.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes
Word count: 272412
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2009 Updated: June 26, 2009
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: July 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
Wow. This was a sad chapter. Don't think I didn't see it coming. I just didn't want it to happen. Great job.
Summary: “No trumpets sound when the important decisions of our life are made. Destiny is made known silently.” –Agnes De Mille
After walking away from Bella in September 2005, even in his numbed stupor Edward goes to great lengths to ensure Bella’s safety and happiness as a human. A gracious Romeo, he is prepared to remain backstage until Paris’ scene is over—and Bella keeps reluctantly carrying out the lines she has been given. But they must both learn that they cannot control destiny... and each silent, calculated decision brings them closer to an unrealized, unexpected fate.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 29015
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2009 Updated: October 10, 2010
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: May 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: September 2008
Go Bella! I love what Rosalie is doing for employment.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: May 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: May 2008
Much luv to you for continuing your story. No worries about Bella being pregnant. It is very normal for a small town. Even the smartest girls get pregnant. :)
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: May 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: March 2008
Thank you for addressing the frustration with the slow moving plot. It is interesting that you have moved the Cullens to Spokane. A very dry and sunny place surrounded by forest. I say this because Eastern Washinton is my home. I look forward to future chapters. Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I know the slow moving plot is a bit frustrating. This story is nearing its end, and it hasn't quite turned out the way I intended, but I've learned some good lessons about writing over such a long period of time.
I didn't know that Spokane was so dry and sunny! My friend is from Washington, and he gave me the impression that all of Wash. is damp and rainy like Seattle. I guess he was wrong ;)
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: May 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: September 2005
Rereading your story...trying to catch up with current chapters. :)
Summary: The much anticipated sequel to A Lesson in Release. Jasper has won the girl of his dreams and they are beginning a new life together at college. But what happens when fate intercedes? Will he be able to hold onto her or will fate return her to Edward?
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges: Series: The Lessons Saga
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes
Word count: 171842
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: March 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Moirai
Ugg! That was tough to read. Why Kelly?
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Pieces
An adult conversation between Bella and Edward is impressive. Bella needed to be called out on her sins. Hopefully, she will se how shallow her relationship is with Jasper. He can manipulate to get what he wants. Please continue developing the relationships.
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