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Penname: Wallace [Contact]
Real name: holly
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Reviews by Wallace
 
Summary:

Jasper, Rosalie, Bella, Alice, Emmett & Edward become interwoven, making their mark at Seattle's Fremont Park Preparatory boarding school. Wealth and war, friendship and love ensue.

 

 

AU/AH. Rated M for language and sexual themes. Slightly OOC.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 146911
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2008 Updated: September 12, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Jack and Jill

I read this story so long ago.  When I recieved your update, I couldn't remember where I had left off.  So here we go again. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Sticks and Stones

Thanks for not jumping into the lusty teen sex.  It would have been too easy.  My fav is Emmett.  Alice is a close second.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The Queen of Hearts

I forgot what a bitch Rosalie was to everyone.  Stupid girl. :)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Here We Go Round the Mulberry Bush

Party tease!  Loved the kiss POVs

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Ring a Ring o' Roses

Conflicted Rosalie is well written.  Great job setting up the party.

 
Lucky Charm by profmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 509]
Summary:

Bella and Edward were secret best friends during one of the best periods of Bella's life.  Their friendship has waned.  When they are forced back together, untold secrets are revealed.  When the truth is out there, will anyone feel lucky?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jessica, Lauren, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 78205
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: April 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue

Thanks for the story.

 
Out of Her Head by Blue25 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2757]
Summary:

Bella Swan moves cross country to take a teaching job, trying to escape the man who broke her heart. Edward Cullen is the school's music teacher with secrets of his own. Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together trying to work through their issues and unexpected feelings for each other.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 272412
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2009 Updated: June 26, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Wow. This was a sad chapter. Don't think I didn't see it coming. I just didn't want it to happen.  Great job.

 
Summary:

“No trumpets sound when the important decisions of our life are made.  Destiny is made known silently.” –Agnes De Mille

After walking away from Bella in September 2005, even in his numbed stupor Edward goes to great lengths to ensure Bella’s safety and happiness as a human.  A gracious Romeo, he is prepared to remain backstage until Paris’ scene is over—and Bella keeps reluctantly carrying out the lines she has been given.  But they must both learn that they cannot control destiny... and each silent, calculated decision brings them closer to an unrealized, unexpected fate.

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 29015
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2009 Updated: October 10, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: September 2008

Go Bella!  I love what Rosalie is doing for employment. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: May 2008

Much luv to you for continuing your story.  No worries about Bella being pregnant.  It is very normal for a small town.  Even the smartest girls get pregnant. :) 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: March 2008

Thank you for addressing the frustration with the slow moving plot.  It is interesting that you have moved the Cullens to Spokane.  A very dry and sunny place surrounded by forest.  I say this because Eastern Washinton is my home.   I look forward to future chapters.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I know the slow moving plot is a bit frustrating.  This story is nearing its end, and it hasn't quite turned out the way I intended, but I've learned some good lessons about writing over such a long period of time.

I didn't know that Spokane was so dry and sunny!  My friend is from Washington, and he gave me the impression that all of Wash. is damp and rainy like Seattle.  I guess he was wrong ;)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: September 2005

Rereading your story...trying to catch up with current chapters. :)

 
Summary:

The much anticipated sequel to A Lesson in Release.  Jasper has won the girl of his dreams and they are beginning a new life together at college.  But what happens when fate intercedes?  Will he be able to hold onto her or will fate return her to Edward?

A Lesson in Fate


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: The Lessons Saga
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 171842
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Moirai

Ugg!  That was tough to read.  Why Kelly? 

 
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Date: April 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Pieces

An adult conversation between Bella and Edward is impressive.  Bella needed to be called out on her sins.  Hopefully, she will se how shallow her relationship is with Jasper.  He can manipulate to get what he wants.  Please continue developing the relationships. 

 
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Date: April 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

I was wondering about the italians.  This is a great twist.  I am still hooked to your story. 

 
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Date: April 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: The Worst Kind of Torture

Wow.  Are you writing bella's POV?  She would be in serious conflict. Did she know the proposal was coming?  Did she start healing and having feelings for Edward?  Does she really think she has a future with the Cullens?



Author's Response:

No, I don't plan on writing Bella's POV in this story.  I think it is far more interesting NOT knowing what she's thinking.  No, she didn't know the proposal was coming.  ~Lillie

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: How am I doing so far?

I feel so conflicted.  Bella should be punished for her disloyalty. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Bella's Dream

Very sexy. 

I was wondering how Alice and Jasper are handling the new living arrangements.

 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

Would Bella really be so honest with Edward without the threat of the Volturi?  Talk amongst yourselves...

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II

jasper is losing his best qualities...edward is find the best

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: When I Think About You

A different kind of Bella & Edward connection

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

What about the Volturi...I see a conflict with the trip and the trip.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Welcome to Manhood

Pretty powerful stuff...Edward and Bella together again? 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Welcome to Manhood

Pretty powerful stuff...Edward and Bella together again? 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36: Ohio State vs. Michigan

Theres gonna be a wedding!!!

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37: At Last

Oh my that's so not fair.   I thought you hinted about this...The clue was Charlie. 

 




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