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Penname: Wallace [Contact]
Real name: holly
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Member Since: February 28, 2009
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Just a Fan.


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Reviews by Wallace
 
Summary:

Bella Swan was leading a pretty normal life. A couple months shy of her eighteenth birthday, she learns her parents made a deal with the king of England. Now she's forced to move there and to meet the prince, Edward Cullen. What's his secret?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 96157
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: December 31, 2011


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Dark Pools of Wonder

Thanks for a great chapter.  I am so glad you are wrapping up this story.  I bet it will feel wonderful when you change the status to complete. :)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: White Tulle and Lace

Thank you for writing this sweet chapter.  It was lovely.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue: Long Live the King

Thank you for the epi...i may reread the first few chapters.  

 
Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5321]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Sweat

I missed this story. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Finally

Thank you for this story...for finishing it and being a fan too.  I think that you are ending it in a perfect spot. I dont need to know how everything turns out.  I am just happy that they found each other.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Homecoming

now time for reality. great story

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Reunion

Yeah!  Bella and Edward are together.  I hope Bella kind find a life and purpose with Edward. 

 
Summary:

Bella and Charlie move to Chicago and into a very old house.  But there's something very different about this place.  What if Edward had died in 1918 and what if he never really left his former home?  Will he finally have a shot at romance after all these years?  And will Bella fall for him?  Rated NC-17 for language and future lemons.  Usual pairings.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, James, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 61919
[Report This] Published: December 10, 2008 Updated: March 27, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: The Reason

Wow. You almost lost me.  This is an interesting hook.

 
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Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: New Start

Interesting start...I will keep reading

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Set Up

Still reading and don't know what to expect.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: New Start

I am intrigued.  How with this story work itself out?

 
Summary:

AU. Based off the events in the beginning of New Moon. Edward did not tell the truth when he left Bella in the woods five years ago. Struggling to make a life without him, Bella finds herself still alone in an entirely different forest. But what happens if they are accidentally reunited? What was the lie that Edward told?  What will Bella do when she finds out?  Rated NC-17 for language and sexual situations


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 119106
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2008 Updated: December 28, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Down on the Killing Floor

I just love this story.  I can't remember why Alice can't see Bella.  :)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Showdown at the Cullen Corral

I like the violence directed toward Edward.  You really showed how loosing Bella affected the "whole family."   

 
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Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Moonlight Sonata

I miss Jake dog.  Thanks for the Bella and Edward lovin.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: KumbayBLAH

Just rereading this great story. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Waiting for the Night to Fall

I just love this and the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: In Your Eyes

I really like how you describe Bella twice through Edward's eyes.  First as a beautiful creature and then as what she has become.  The first time I read this chapter is was confusing and a little frustrating.  I think I understand this time. :)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Marmion

I love the Bella's Dr...

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: As I Burn for You

That was the best sex dream. The bottle cap was a nice touch too.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Intermission: Policy of Truth

Much luv for this story

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: La Belle Dame Sans Merci

Thanks for more Edward torcher

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Showdown at the Cullen Corral

Very nice...Edward needed to feel real pain for his lies. :)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Showdown at the Cullen Corral

Very nice...Edward needed to feel real pain for his lies. :)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Acteon and Diana

I laughed so hard at Emmetts hair drawings and comments.  I enjoyed this chapter.  I  needed a good belly laugh.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Never Cry Wolf

Go Bella.  Thanks for letting Emmett explain his side of things.  I really like how you wrote Jake into this story.  He sounds like a crazy cool dog.

 




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