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Penname: Wallace [Contact]
Real name: holly
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Member Since: February 28, 2009
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The Elite by Fate_of_Gabriel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 509]
Summary:

"Doing what rich people do is easy."

Same old story, Twilight twist. St. Olaf's is a prestigious boarding school, dripping with money, sex, and social hierarchy. But there's really only one question you have to ask yourself: are you one of Them or one of The Elite?

Thanks to Patsy for the banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 149923
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2008 Updated: May 24, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Save your Goodbye Kiss

Wow, Pretty moving.  Kid growing up and realizing that what they want isn't what they need or what is best.  Thanks for the great chapter not too dramatic...just honest.

 
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Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Incomparable Them

wow what can you write in just a few chapters to develope this.

 
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Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Redemption

Didn't think emmit would give her a chance.  I thought she would take what Jax gave her.

 
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Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Epilogue

Thanks for the fun story.  It didn't turn out like I had expected, but high school is unpredictable.  It was tough to remember that the characters were underage.   Good luck on the next story. 

 
Summary:

 

When Charlie catches Bella and Edward in a compromising position how will he react?

What tactics will Edward and Bella have to resort to in order to get time alone together again?

 

Thanks Mandi for the banner!


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 134267
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2008 Updated: December 07, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Um...we were just having sex.

my face hurts. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Mad hunting skills

What is really going to happen?  Is Edward deluded? :)



Author's Response:

Ha...I think Edward is a bit clouded at the moment.  He has other things on his mind.  Thanks for taking the time to review.

 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Monkey Man

Emmett the Sex Ed teacher was funny.

 
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Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Read Any Good Books Lately?

I love this Emmett. I wish he would have gotten something out of Bella in the car.

 
Summary:

Ten years later five happy couples live in the Cullen household. What if Bella finds out a little family secret that has kept those couples happy for so long?

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Rated NC-17 for very graphic lemons with non-canon pairings including BXE, BXJ, BXEM, BXC, BXRXA, and BXJacob. OOC just in case.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 30441
[Report This] Published: November 25, 2008 Updated: March 20, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Can Hybrids Get Splinters?

I will miss these smutty stories.



Author's Response:

Me too! =] But there wiil be more too cum in the sequel!

 
Summary:

Bella Swan was leading a pretty normal life. A couple months shy of her eighteenth birthday, she learns her parents made a deal with the king of England. Now she's forced to move there and to meet the prince, Edward Cullen. What's his secret?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 96157
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: December 31, 2011


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Welcome to a world of Darkness

Blind Edward...not expecting that.  Thanks for writing

 
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Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: An arrangement years in the Making

Just started reading this story. It has been in my Favorites for  a long time.

 
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Date: March 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Humpty Dumpty Together Again

Thank you for continuing to write this story.  Such a fan.  The audiobook sounds interesting. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Dark Pools of Wonder

Thanks for a great chapter.  I am so glad you are wrapping up this story.  I bet it will feel wonderful when you change the status to complete. :)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: White Tulle and Lace

Thank you for writing this sweet chapter.  It was lovely.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue: Long Live the King

Thank you for the epi...i may reread the first few chapters.  

 
Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5321]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Sweat

I missed this story. 

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Finally

Thank you for this story...for finishing it and being a fan too.  I think that you are ending it in a perfect spot. I dont need to know how everything turns out.  I am just happy that they found each other.

 
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Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Homecoming

now time for reality. great story

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Reunion

Yeah!  Bella and Edward are together.  I hope Bella kind find a life and purpose with Edward. 

 
Summary:

Bella and Charlie move to Chicago and into a very old house.  But there's something very different about this place.  What if Edward had died in 1918 and what if he never really left his former home?  Will he finally have a shot at romance after all these years?  And will Bella fall for him?  Rated NC-17 for language and future lemons.  Usual pairings.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, James, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 61919
[Report This] Published: December 10, 2008 Updated: March 27, 2009


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: The Reason

Wow. You almost lost me.  This is an interesting hook.

 
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Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: New Start

Interesting start...I will keep reading

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Set Up

Still reading and don't know what to expect.

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: New Start

I am intrigued.  How with this story work itself out?

 
Summary:

AU. Based off the events in the beginning of New Moon. Edward did not tell the truth when he left Bella in the woods five years ago. Struggling to make a life without him, Bella finds herself still alone in an entirely different forest. But what happens if they are accidentally reunited? What was the lie that Edward told?  What will Bella do when she finds out?  Rated NC-17 for language and sexual situations


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 119106
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2008 Updated: December 28, 2010


Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Down on the Killing Floor

I just love this story.  I can't remember why Alice can't see Bella.  :)

 
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Showdown at the Cullen Corral

I like the violence directed toward Edward.  You really showed how loosing Bella affected the "whole family."   

 




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