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Penname: Wallace [ Contact]
Real name: holly
Status: Member
Member Since: February 28, 2009
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Summary: Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012
Reviewer: Wallace Signed 
Date: June 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I missed this story! I really missed your writing Limona. I am so glad that you did not give up on this story. It is so exciting to read.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: July 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Limona, you have been missed. Thanks for updating your story. You did a great job sucking me back in. I want to know more about Marie Job. I like how you resolved Bella's feelings for Jacob. This story is so good. It get's my blood pumping. Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: June 20 - June 24, 2008
This is such a great story! Still...I am so glad that you wait and post when you are ready. Thank you Much luv Author's Response: thank you ;)
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: August 1 - September 4, 2008
I just love your writing and this darn story.
Summary: Geeky Edward thinks he has absolutely no shot with the popular, beautiful Bella. Is he right, or will she be one of the many girls who thinks geeks make for better lovers? M for language, sexuality and some underage drinking. A little OOC… okay, a lot OOC.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Geekward and Nerdella
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 71582
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: December 08, 2009
Reviewer: Wallace Signed 
Date: January 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Thanks for DnDward.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I love the kissing. You can SM me anytime
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I enjoy your writing. It is fun. I feel light hearted.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I love the kissing. You can SM me anytime
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I love boy Edward. He is so cute. I look forward to Emmetts reaction.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I have been listening to your podcast. Now i am finally reading your fic
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I just luv geekward. I luv Dr Pepper too. The best DP is the stuff with real sugar made in Preston, tx.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Go duckie! Thanks for the defs,
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Cute cheese chapter witha Demetri Martin Bonus. Well played.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
You go Lazer tag girl. I only like to play with lots of people. It is super fun. :)
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Oh good lord. Edward in a pink shirt. Jacob gets kneed in the balls and Bella is drunk. The morning could be bad.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I liked how the conversation turned out. I think many of us girls have been fooled by a "Paul." I think he got off easy. I feel strongly that one never forgets their first even if they would like to...
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Oh yes, Bella & Edward heavy petting is super cute.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
You go with Bella & Edward.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Go Bella! I am such a fan of Geeky Virginal Edward.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Yeah! I love the bookstore scene. I would rather go to a bookstore or record store than a movie or dinner.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I am not sure I them having their first time in a frat dorm. I keep thinking there is a hidden camera or web cam that will hurt them in the future.
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 (SA)
You go girl with the black out. The kids are so cute.
Summary: "Doing what rich people do is easy."
Same old story, Twilight twist. St. Olaf's is a prestigious boarding school, dripping with money, sex, and social hierarchy. But there's really only one question you have to ask yourself: are you one of Them or one of The Elite?
Thanks to Patsy for the banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes
Word count: 149923
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2008 Updated: May 24, 2009
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: March 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Fallout
Yes, I will add my thoughts regarding to the short visit from Jasper. I enjoy reading about him. Loud chears echo through my home when I see his name. I am unsure of the reasoning. I guess I love to hate him. He must a fun and difficult character to write with all of the other dark characters. Is Alice really the 'light'? Author's Response: Lol, don't be confused, but Jackson is NOT Jasper.
Jasper has yet to make an appearance in the story.
But I'm glad you're enjoying Jax. He's a fun character to write, because he has no verbal filter. And I see Alice as a light character, who is trying to wade through all the crazy things that happen in high school. She's never down for long.
Thanks!
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: March 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Existing in Silence
Oh that was a great twist! What about Jasper? Author's Response: Jasper is coming. He's from Texas, he's moves at his own pace.
Thanks!
Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: March 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: The Asshole on the White Horse
Wow. I don't know how to respond to this chapter. I see a little disconnect from Alice's reaction to Carlisle last chapters and the current chapter. I love the twist with Jasper. I don't think I got enough of his character please share more. I still love the thought of Jackson W. Keep writing. Author's Response: That's an interesting point, and I'll admit that there is a little disconnect, but also be aware that Alice isn't neccessarily supporting Rose/Carlisle, but more or less making sarcastic comments and trying to understand...besides. Rose is Alice's only real friend (that wasn't sleeping with her) and Rosalie is blissfully happy. Alice likes seeing Rosalie like this and thus their friendly banter took on a giddy-type tone, whereas originally when I wrote it, it was very terse and sarcastic with a bite, hence the disconnect.
I love that you were paying attention enough to care that such a small glitch showed up :)
Jasper/Jax will be coming your way in just a couple of weeks, so hold on tight!
Thanks for the feedback, I appreicate it!
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