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Penname: JasonCulhane [Contact]
Real name: James Geary
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Member Since: July 28, 2010
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My name is James, I am 23 and from Ireland. I love reading and writing and the twilight saga and am writing my second story for this site. I prefer to stay true to the world of twilight so mine is more of a spinoff novel in the same world, just not involving any of the familiar characters. Hope to be finished soon and hope ye all enjoy it.


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Jasper Hale and Robert Whitlock are blood brothers. They had a deep bond. But now that there's no blood, only venom pumping through their bodies, what does that mean for the born siblings?

Out of the blue, Robert reappears in Jasper's life, revealing his brother's sins from the human life he thought he'd left behind.

Will you love him, or will you loathe him?

Are you Team Robert, or are you Team Jasper?

Thanks to roroduff for the banner!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, Other Characters: Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 21716
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2009 Updated: December 24, 2009


Reviewer: JasonCulhane Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: VISITOR

This is brilliant, I love that you've created a new character instead of sticking to canon and that you've made it work, which is what I'm doing with my fanfic. It draws me in just as much as Stephanie Meyer's works, and is an excellent first chapter.

 
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When Alice's visions reveal the Volturi's horrfying plans to descend upon the Cullen family, armed with Irina's testimony of an immortal child sighted in their care, she enlists Jasper's aid in seeking out the one hope that may spare all of their lives... if they return alive.

This story serves to fill in Alice and Jasper's adventures away from the Cullen family during Breaking Dawn, and is second in an intended series based strongly in existing canon. That said, it is highly recommended that the first story in the series, Down The Rabbit Hole, be read, as parts of the created canon/backstory for Alice Cullen will become relevant down the road in this story as well. As with DTRH, this story draws on allusions to Alice's Adventures In Wonderland and Through The Looking-Glass, And What Alice Found There by Lewis Carroll.

Rated NC-17 for violence, language and a dash of lemons. This story will occassionally contain dialogue and text from Breaking Dawn by Stephenie Meyer for clarity and continuity; no infringement is intended and all chapters will be noted accordingly in that instance.

Note (May 13/09): The White Rabbit series now has its own blip.fm account, complete with ever-growing playlist of songs that influence the stories for you to stream.   Check it out here:  blip.fm/aliceswhiterabbit

July 2009:  
Indie TwiFic Awards Finalist:  Best Canon (WIP)
Indie TwiFic Awards Nominee:  Best Characterizations (non Edward/Bella) (WIP) 

Eternal Hope Contributor


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Alistair, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlotte, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kachiri, Marcus, Nessie, Peter, Renesmee, Rosalie, Senna, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: The White Rabbit series, Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 81239
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2009 Updated: October 01, 2010


Reviewer: JasonCulhane Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Opening Move...

I reallly liked this chapter and if Stephanie Meyer herself had decided to write a novel about Alice and Jasper's point of view after they leave in breaking dawn, then i'd be hard-pressed to see what she could do better.

 
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Date: October 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Rauzer Formation

I love the point of view approach where you give us an idea of what each character is thinking. I really enjoy this story.

 
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Date: November 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Gambit

I like this chapter, the thing between Alice and Alistair is very sad. I hope he gets to meet her.

 
daybreak by SirenSongx Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1100]
Summary:

It's basically a retelling of Twilight, with a few twists. Edward isn't the only one who can hear thoughts. Bella can also, but like Edward there is that one exception...him. What happens when she learns their secret? And what happens when the Cullen's find out that she already knows? Written from Bellla's point of view.

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Set during early 2006.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Daybreak Saga
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 89577
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: October 15, 2009


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Date: September 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: 1: Gifted

I like this chapter, it is very much like twilight but that one little change of Bella's ability makes it all the more interesting.

 
Summary:

In Vanity and Patience, Rosalie's patience and pride are tested, as she is forced to endure Emmett's struggle for control as a blood-thirsty newborn and wait for him to notice her. Emmett enjoys his newborn strength and abilities, but is faced with the first-time feeling of remorse for his uncontrollable acts of violence and cold indifference while blinded by bloodlust. Can he control his thirst enough to recognize his soulmate in his beautiful angel before it's too late? 

This is a collection of V&P's side-shots, from Emmett's point of view.

Updates will be slow, as V&P is my priority to complete. They will not be posted in sequential order at all times, as my writing will be based on how I feel.

Warning: Lemons in future chapters. Rated NC-17 for a reason. Violence, adult language, drugs, assault, and sexual content.

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Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles, The Vanity and Patience Series
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 28410
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2011


Reviewer: JasonCulhane Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Bad boy? Yep, that's me.

Very good description of Emmett's human life in the thirties, very well researched and written.

 
Failure by KrysCullen Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 197]
Summary:

What would have happened if Edward had lost control on Bella's first day of school? How would the Cullens have adjusted to this new addition to their life? When Edward fails to keep his self-control, he begins a journey like nothing he could ever have imagined...

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Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 56628
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2009 Updated: March 31, 2013


Reviewer: JasonCulhane Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Laws

Tanya's a bitch. Sorry but you did a good job at making her hateful. I suppose she can't be blamed, though!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Making her hateful was really fun, so I'm glad you dislike her so much. There should be an update tomorrow, so watch out for it. Things get a little steamy ;)

 
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Date: January 26, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Conversations

Another great chapter, it really makes me hope that this works out.

 
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Date: January 26, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three: Shining

I really like how you portrayed Kate, she's funny, and Edward and Bella's conversations. They seem very true to what I think they'd be in this circumstance.



Author's Response:

I really love Kate, she is so much fun to write. Also, she has such a brilliant personality. I'm actually sad I couldn't manage to get more of her in. Maybe after I'm done with my other chaptered fanfic (Our New Life) I'll write a Kate/Garrett story. I do really love me some Kate/Garrett.

 
Reviewer: JasonCulhane Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two: Awakenings

Another great chapter, Bella's change and first experiences as a vampire are very well described. Very well done.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I've been working hard on getting everything just right. It isn't quite as easy as I thought it would be.

 
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Date: December 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Guilt

Ilike your writing and how you describe Edward's guilt, and Jasper's curiosity, too. It's very true to their characters. I also thought Tanya's reaction was very realistic.

 
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Date: December 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Lapse

I really like this story, can't wait to read more. It's a very interesting perspective.

 
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Excerpt: Aro laughed again and his smile returned although it was more menacing than inviting. "That is where you are wrong, dear child. I'm quite sure that you could be persuaded. Are there not more members of the Cullen family? Do you want to be the reason that they all perish?"

This story explores another direction that New Moon could have taken. One that might have happened if Aro hadn't been so forgiving.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Demetri, Edward, Felix, Jane
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 20244
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2009 Updated: March 30, 2010


Reviewer: JasonCulhane Signed
Date: September 22, 2010 Title: Eternal Nightmare

Oh crap, just realised this was the last chapter, PLEASE write more.



Author's Response:

I am working on chapter 7. I entered a novel in the contest over at the Writer's Coffe Shop in the hopes that I can win a publishing contract. It has taken up all of my free time. The voting has begun so I can pay more attention to the other stories I have in progress. If you are interested, the name of my story is Haunted Memories. Go check it out and let me know what you think.

 
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Date: September 22, 2010 Title: Eternal Nightmare

Very good job capturing their grief, I felt like I could feel it too and this chapter would very nearly make you cry.

 
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Date: September 22, 2010 Title: Eternal Nightmare

Well, the sadness of Edward and Alice's loss definitely comes through in your writing, or that just might be me!

 
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Date: September 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like your writing and I think it's very plausible (though I wish you hadn't killed off my two favourite cullens but I understand the story couldn't have worked without it) Can't wait to read more.

 
Summary:

Jane has been the Volturi's loyal servant for centuries. She is feared by vampires throughout the world for her ability to inflict unbearable pain with a thought.  Jane was only ever concerned with maintaining her position as Aro's favorite among the Guard--until she saw a human who stole her heart at first sight. David Cain is a hardened soldier who knows the horrors of war.  He copes by never looking back and never planning ahead.

Jane and David meet under extraordinary circumstances, and their souls are irrevocably intertwined.  Can two lost souls find redemption, or will their collective pasts destroy them both?

Rated NC-17 for language, graphic violence, references to torture and some sexual content.

by *Beautiful Liar*

Big thanks to *Beautiful Liar* for my awsome new banner!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Volturi Series
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 107454
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2009 Updated: July 28, 2012


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Date: September 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - The Fast and the Furious

Good chapter, the street racing was funny and the argument between Jane and David seemed genuine.

 
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Date: November 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Thinkin' the Same Thing

That was a brilliant chapter. Alice is very funny. I can't wait to see how the Denalis respond.



Author's Response:

Alice is a lot of fun. I hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint.

 
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Date: October 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Bats are Nocturnal

I like the conciliation between Jacob and Renesmee, very sweet, and the one-to-one between Jasper and David. I wonder how this sister-thing will turn out?

 
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Date: October 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - New Blood

Oh, wow, I wonder what this Salem guy can do, and you did a real good job of making him sound creepy and sinister.

 
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Date: October 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - One Tenth of One Percent

Brilliant chapter and nice twist at the end.

 
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Date: October 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Red in Morning

Can't be good! ONWARD...!

 
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Date: October 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Debriefing

That was brilliant. I especially liked the humour, alice's meltdown over the uniforms and Emmett and Jane's comparing sexcapades were both very funny. I kinda hope this works out in the coming chapters, this isn't a side of Jane I would've imagined but I like it and, like Bella and Edward in the original Twilight, this story makes you want the best for Jane and David.



Author's Response:

Isn't it wonderful what love can do?

Glad you liked the chapter, and more is on the way!

 
Reviewer: JasonCulhane Signed
Date: September 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Getting a Little Crowded

An excellent chapter and Tanya's rage was very believable as was Jane's. P.S. I really liked the author's POV!!!

 
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Date: October 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Off The Reservation (Part 3)

Really liked your new chapter, seems like how these two characters would behave in this situation.



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you liked it, more is on the way.

 




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