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Penname: Purple Passion [Contact]
Real name: Joyce Brown
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Member Since: July 09, 2010
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Summary: Feature

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Bella is devastated by the loss of her mother and is forced to go live with Charlie, her Mom's best friend, when there is no one else to take her in. She gives up on living, too lost in her own anger to let anyone close to her. Enter Edward, the handsome teenage vampire, and the beginning of a complicated love-hate relationship. Neither can deny the connection between them, but can their love survive the fear that rules her and the secret he hides from her? AU and OOC, Rated NC-17 for language and sexual content.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 292396
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: December 25, 2009


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: July 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Choices

I have read all 47 chapters this far straight through......LOVED every one of them. Keep up your wonderful writing ;-)

 
Summary: Feature

 

While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse.  When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help.  But of course, fate has plans for this man.  Canon Couples.  AU.  DARK Themes.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: October 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: The Dinner

I sure hope whoever was responsible for tourchering  Edward doesn't get him again.

 
Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: January 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Hunt

Please say you are going to continue with this story.  It's been a long time since the 'Vision' update. Please continue writing it ;-)

 
Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: October 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: The Beginning

Wow........3 yrs on this story?.....I've been following it a little over a year now. I've enjoyed it a lot ;-)

 
The Night Before by evieeden Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 441]
Summary:

What if the first time Bella dreamed of Edward she wasn't really dreaming. Would their growing relationship be tainted by what had already occured?

Based on the 'that was the first night I dreamed of Edward Cullen' deleted scene from the Twilight DVD.

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Thanks to m81170 for the banner.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 54658
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2012


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Tentative Beginnings

I do hope you continue your chapters for this story.  I have enjoied what I have read so far. Keep them coming ;-)

 
Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

We all believe that Edward and Bella are meant to be together...but what if there’s more to that than meets the eye?

 

What if there are forces at work that they don’t understand? How will they cope with events that have no discernable meaning?

 

This story starts out two weeks before Bella and Edward’s wedding. But, right away, things go wrong. They struggle with mishap after mishap, all the while wondering if they’re destined to be at the center of conflict and angst.

 

All the major characters of Twilight appear. Canon couples. Lemons in various chapters. This is a more realistic view of Edward and Bella’s relationship before the wedding. He certainly wouldn’t carry her off to a desert island alone, having never even touched her. They would have experimented a bit.

 

Eventually all characters get their Happily Ever After. I just drag them through hell before we get there. No characters die before their time.

 

And I’ve adhered to canon up until the story starts—Post Eclipse. After that, it diverges from SM’s version. So...no Renesmee. No pregnancy.

 

I’ve poured my heart and soul into this story. It took me over a year to complete. I thought about it constantly. For that hard work and diligence to form, grammar and style, I’d like just one tiny thing from you, the reader.

 

I’d like a review. If you love it, if you hate it, if you’re just indifferent and will never look at it again, I’d like to hear that. It’s not a lot to ask. So...I’ll say thanks in advance for the wonderful reviews you’ll leave after you read each chapter!

 

Maria

twilight gypsy

 

  


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 178339
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2010


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: March 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Pink Cadillac

 I want Cranberry Relish and Snickerdoodles ;-p



Author's Response:

Hey, Purple Passion!

I believe you missed the entire concept for the recipes. They were as bribes to get reviews. I'd be GLAD to send you the entire file if you'd give me some reviews. You're quite a few chapters in but you haven't left me any of your thoughts about what you've read.

Is is good? Do you like it? it is different? do you like the characters as I've portrayed them? what don't you like about it?

Thanks!

Maria

 
Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: March 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 45: EPILOGUE

I finally got a chance to really sit down and read this whole story.  I really did enjoy it. So sorry it had to end. :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading! I appreciate it!

Maria

 
Summary:

 

 

Years have passed since Edward left Bella in the forest. She's finally worked through her heartbreak but has never moved on to another man. She treats her best friend, Jake, like a beloved pair of old jeans. Jake is not happy with this situation. When he takes matters into his own hands, Bella's resulting epiphany makes her realize she needs to learn how to seduce a werewolf.

 

I looked across the room in shock. My beautiful Jacob was smiling down into the eyes of that witch! He was giving MY smile to somebody else. MY smile! His hand was on her arm. How dare he?

 

 

 

                                                                                             

                                                     

 

                                                                                             

                                                               

                              

                                                                                                                      

 


Categories: New Moon, Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Brady, Charlie, Claire, Collin, Edward, Embry, Emily, Jacob, Leah, Other Character, Quil, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 140728
[Report This] Published: November 21, 2009 Updated: June 23, 2012


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: June 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Love the chapter ;-)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Joyce. I appreciate it. :)

 
Summary:

 

A Leprechaun caught...A wish gone awry...A case of amnesia...with a twist of LEMON...Shaken, not stirred *Human/Vampire*

*WINNER of the FFFW "Luck of the Irish" One Shot Contest*


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6567
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2010 Updated: April 12, 2010


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: August 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: ~A Real Boy~

I liked this story.  Sure hope you decide to continue it in the near future ;-)

 
Summary:

After the Cullens leave Bella behind she must find a way to survive her pregnancy. Betrayed by the Denali, where is she left to go and what will she become?

Is it a price Bella is willing to pay?

Every choice bears consequences, positive or negative, and results of the consequences will change the course of their lives drastically. What will their consequences be?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Effects and Consequences
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 96247
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2010 Updated: July 09, 2012


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: December 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Reclaiming

Love this chapter, though I guess I should start reading this story from the beginning ;-)



Author's Response:

The beginning would help ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Eternal Horizon by Kateration New! Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

It has been 17 years since Isabella Swan’s death, and young Adora has moved to Forks, igniting gossip everywhere she turns. As Adora slowly unravels the clues that lead her down a path riddled with even more questions, she begins to realize that it seems to be more than coincidence, drawing her farther away from the life she knows, and into a world, she does not understand. The closer she gets to the truth, the more her own destiny becomes irrevocably entwined with the girl that haunts the small town. She wonders why everything that’s happening revolves around the mysterious Edward Cullen, and why he seems to hold the key to the answers she’s spent a lifetime searching for.

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This story takes place 19 years post Breaking Dawn, and although at first, to those of you who love the classic Edward and Bella love story, it may seem that the initial plot isn't heading in that direction, I promise you it is. I perfer to stick closer to the characters Stephanie originally created.

I consider this story to be pretty much the unofficial 5th installment of the Twilight Series, it takes place after Breaking Dawn, it is 100% canon, which means that it does NOT deviate from the storyline of the books, although in the first few chapters it doesn't seem like it, but trust me, it does.

Edward still loves Bella.

And so on, also for:

Alice and Jasper

Rosalie and Emmett

Carlisle and Esme

and Renesmee and Jacob.

I did not touch these pairings or alter them...trust me.

Vampires are fantastical creatures, and Bella's luck is just too bad for them to have just lived happily ever after, plus...there were a lot of things that Breaking Dawn did not answer...at all. Like what happened to poor Leah? How did Jake and Renesmee end up? What about Edward's belief in his soul, or rather lack there of, what happened to that? Is Rosalie going to be a *insert bad word that rhymes with witch* forever? Won't the Volturi come after them again? What happens to the humans decades later? How long did the Cullen's stay in Forks after Bella's change?

There were A LOT of unanswered questions, so I wrote Eternal Horizon to answer them.

It's written with 99.999999% no grammatical errors, because I'm sure some managed to somehow get past me, and in my opinion, it's written as closely to the original books as I possibly could, I studied how Stephanie wrote and tried to make the flow of Eternal Horizon similar.

The summary that I originally went with hasn't seemed to garner enough interest to do this story justice, so here's an excerpt for you:

The memory made anger flush though me. “You should have been frightened.” I spat bitterly. “But it seemed as if no matter what I said to you—no matter what I did—you were utterly incapable of fearing me.” I gritted my teeth in frustration—irritated by the fact that perhaps my hallucination may have been correct. Maybe there wasn’t anything that I could have ever done. “What a poor excuse for a vampire I was,” I groaned, “unable to frighten one tiny, fragile human girl—the laughing stock of monsters everywhere, I’m sure.” I sighed remembering Emmett’s teasing—

Maybe you’re not as scary as you think you are,” he had chuckled. “I bet I could have frightened her better than that.”

“And, maybe, I should have let him—seeing as how I had proved to be utterly incapable of doing so.” I muttered sourly. I imagined that somewhere Bella was frowning petulantly at me for saying that—it made a smile tug at the edge of my lips. She never had liked me insisting upon what I’d thought was best for her—even if I’d only been trying to protect her.

Please read and review, just take five seconds and tell me what you think, PLEASE?

And maybe once you read it, you can think of a better Summary that will get people's attention.

 

The main characters herein depicted, and the rules of the world that they are bound in, are not of my creation. They do not belong to me. They belong to Stephanie Meyer. She created a universe for us all, where we might lose ourselves in the untamable desires and dreams of our own hearts. I am very grateful for all she has given us, for she has breathed a new hope into lives, shrouded by the attempts our society has made, to repress our imaginations, and limit our struggle to reach far and beyond the boundaries of our own fragile existence. I will claim no credit for the inspiration of a lifetime, I will however say, that it was my own fatally flawed dissatisfaction with the closing fragments of the world she created, that spawned the words, of which I have carefully pieced together here, in my own refusal to accept the fact that Edward and Bella’s story was complete. After all, they are vampires, and vampires are immortal. Moreover, as long as they exist, so does their love. And if they cease to exist; does their love cease to exist too? Or is love eternal, undying…forever?

I present to you, my own vision of Stephanie Meyer’s world, where faith knows no bounds and love never dies.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 164370
[Report This] Published: May 10, 2010 Updated: June 16, 2013


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: March 18, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Love Endures All Things

OMG!!!!!!! this was not what I was expecting. This story is realy good.  Keep the chapters coming.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it! I have the next three chapters prepared. Just waiting for approval! Believe me, it gets better.  

 
Summary:

Without Bella's love, I can merely exist. Now that I've lost her, I am bound to wander this earth, alone and unchanging for eternity. - Edward, attempting to be noble, leaves again after the Night of Tears. Now Bella must run after him and piece her broken vampire back together. When they reunite, can they begin to open up to each other and through honest conversations, start to build a stronger relationship? Eclipse/AU.


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 168167
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2010 Updated: January 23, 2013


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: December 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Stronger Than Ever

Well.......if they wait until she's vampire, does that mean they will be one of the rare vampire couples that are able to get pregnant and have children? That would be interesting ;-) What do you think?



Author's Response:

There's vamp couples who got pregnant? Interesting. Not in this story, but that's something I'd like to hear more about. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 

TMOT :)

 
Sent From Heaven by Alice1290 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 351]
Summary:

After her brother’s death Andria DeAngelo is leaving Lake Tahoe, California in search of a new start. The tragic death of Bella Cullen had torn the Cullens apart and left Edward in a constant state of depression. He only lives because of Renesmee.  When Edward and Andria meet Edward must control his desire to kill her. Can Andria get away from the memory of her brother’s tragic accident? Will the Cullens be torn apart forever? Or can Andria save Edward and the Cullens and show them happiness and love again?

Lemons in later chapters!

 

Thanks to FrozenSoldier for the banner! Sent From Heaven Banner

Thanks again to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner!

Banner made by Mehek18 for thetwilightawards.com!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 221472
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2010 Updated: October 01, 2012


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: April 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Honeymoon Part Two: Bordeaux

I really loved this chapter. Well........it's official..they're pregnant !!



Author's Response:

PREGGERS!!!!! YAY! I'm glad you loved it! Thanks bunches for the review!

 
Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: May 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Unexpected

I'm so glad that mom and babies are doing fine. What is with this Cullen family with all it's tallented members ;-)

 
Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: June 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Secrets

Loved this chapter....especially Andria's grandfather. He was a riot ;-)

 
Summary:

A dark angel visits Bella Swan in her dreams, filling her with lust and unparalleled pleasure, but what happens when the line between fantasy and reality starts to blur?  

Banner by @Miztrezboo

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: No Word count: 263309
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2010 Updated: August 16, 2011


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: August 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Breathe Again (Part 1)

I hope everything works out and Edward survives this transformation, both for himself and Bella.  Keep the chapters coming.

 
Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: March 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Prey

Please keep writing........this can't be the end to Bella Swan  :0



 
Summary:

Vampire Edward, having abstained from human blood for so long that he is almost densensitized to it, moves to Seattle as a 1st year pediatric resident. What happens when he foils James' lunch plans by saving Bella, a strangely intriguing human grad student?

Cascade Effect


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, James
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 47256
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2010 Updated: August 27, 2012


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: December 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Oh Brother

Poor girl.........such a danger magnet !!!



Author's Response:

Makes you wonder what it is about her, doesn't it?

 
Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: December 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Alice

Too funny.....;0

 
Harvest Moon by JanaOnWheels Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 582]
Summary:

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The first few months after the change were always the most difficult. Instincts rule over rationality. Since raging thirst is never far from a newborn’s mind, it often makes for careless choices.

The girl would need supervision. A patient teacher to guide her and keep her out of trouble. I didn’t just feel obligated to fill this role, I yearned to fill it.

 

*Nominated for a Vampies Award, in the category: Bloody Newborn - best characterization of a newborn vampire. (It didn't win, but it was an honor being nominated. Thank you.)

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 79936
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2010 Updated: October 14, 2011


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: October 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Don't say that........it doesn't suck!!!! I thought this chapter was cute. Believe it our not this is the ony chapter I've read so far. I know, I know......now I'm going to chapter 1 ;-)



Author's Response:

LOL! Yeah, um, you kinda jumped ahead a bit, it seems. :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

 
Full Moon Rising by content1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 624]
Summary:

Banner by the awesome Frozen Soldier!  She is amazing!

 

 

We had survived the Volturi and were finally able to enjoy life without fear...until new threats arose.  These were more sinister than any before...because the most terrifying one came from within me...

The lead figure took a few long steps toward us, and I felt Bella stiffen beside me and heard her gasp of pain.  Hands moved toward the cowl of the robe, pushing it backwards.  The moonlight made a valiant attempt to shine through the clouds highlighting him as the angel he’d always seemed.  Bright red eyes scanned the group as a sneer claimed his face, twisting it.  He looked toward the assassins beside him, after one last cold look toward us, he gave his order.   “Destroy them.”

The family tensed at the callousness in his voice.

“Edward…” Bella breathed out from beside me.  Pain laced through her voice.

The figure hesitated only slightly as the weak light framed his bronze hair and the scar along his cheek.  Then as he turned away, the robed figures dashed past him toward us.

 “Henry!” my family screamed around me as we braced for impact.   “Remember our training,” I shouted.  “And if possible bring Edward back alive…”

 

Sequel to Harvest Moon, my Shimmer Award, Vampie, and Twilighted OC Character award winning story.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Heidi, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 62 Completed: No Word count: 356938
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2010 Updated: June 10, 2013


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: January 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Meadow

Enjoyed very much ;-)

 
Summary:

Isabella is a handmaid to Princess Jessica, Daughter of King Aro. When a knight from a neighboring kingdom wins his choice of bride, Sir Edward bypasses the princess and claims the handmaid instead. Isabella suddenly finds herself married to a man she does not know, and is tossed into the middle of political plots and scheming nobles. Her life is further turned upside down when she is unable to give her husband the one thing he must have.

"This is the hour of Forks' revenge. Volterra will fall to us for Aro's actions against your Queen, and no one – no one – who fights for Volterra will survive. We will not stop until every wall, every tower, every single structure in all of Volterra has been razed."

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 229617
[Report This] Published: December 06, 2010 Updated: December 02, 2011


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: November 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Utterly Destroy

Jessica got just what she deserved........Hope King Edward finds his Queen in time.

 
Summary:

On Bella's first day of college, she's seated next to mirror image of her dead mother. In her quest to find out the truth behind the resemblance, she's drawn into a world she never knew existed

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Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 28116
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2011 Updated: January 28, 2013


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: February 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Ambition should be made of sterner stuff

Please finish the story in the format that it is already in.

 
Teacher's Pet by Red Koolaid Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1119]
Summary:

Bella is in her senior year, studying fine arts at a Minnesota University. Edward is the hot new professor on campus. Bella is shocked when Edward asks her for a date -- spend the weekend with him at his lake home -- even though they barely know each other. From mirrors on the bedroom ceiling, to people who show up at the most inopportune times, they are in for a wild ride. Can they find love in all the right places?   

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 63 Completed: Yes Word count: 272670
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2011 Updated: June 15, 2012


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: February 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50: Unexpected

Too funny.......;-)

 
Silver and Gold by kkalmm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 74]
Summary:

Silver and Gold by @kkalmm: Banner by @FrozenSoldier

Maria wants Jasper back and badly. When she tries to hurt him through the one he loves the consequences are huge for both vampires and werewolves. Rosalie's life is shattered and Emmett has to pick up the pieces. A mostly canon, post Breaking Dawn, epic that causes all manner of chaos amongst vampires, werewolves and the Volturi. C/Es, A/J, Em/R, Ed/B & Jacob/Leah

Banner by the truly amazing FrozenSoldier


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 54299
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2011 Updated: September 29, 2011


Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed
Date: June 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelation

I have enjoyed every chapter so far........please keep writing!



Author's Response:

Pleased you're enjoying it. I'll keep writing, if you keep revewing! K :o)

 




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