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Penname: JanaOnWheels [Contact]
Real name: Jana
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Member Since: June 24, 2010

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Hide and Drink by Savage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7602]

Now Complete!

Bella’s blood was just too tempting to be ignored.  In this version of Twilight, Edward takes Bella on a sadistic journey with his monstrous side.  While Edward drags her around the world, barely keeping a step ahead of his frantic family, Bella battles the monster for possession of the gentler vampire inside her captor.  EPOV.

Winner of the Faithful Shipper Awards for best Alternate Universe.

Winner of The Vampies, Twilight Vampfic Awards for Best Dark Vamp.

Winner of the Immortal Sin Awards for Best Darkward and Hottest Dark Vamp Fic!

Thank you Lace for the Banner!

“There was no other blood like this.  Once she was gone, it would no longer be within my grasp.  But if I stopped now, she would heal.  Her body would make more.  The blood would replenish.  I could drink again.  The promise of more – it was the only incentive that could have caused me to stop.”


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 249263
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: August 28, 2010

Reviewer: JanaOnWheels Signed
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Vials and Trials

Okay, um, holy crap.

I'm not even sure of what to say here, but I can't just NOT review.

I don't usually like 'dark Edward', but something about the summary made me click. Read the first chapter, left to go see Eclipse for the 15th time, came back and read up to chapter 22 before going to sleep.

Had a nightmare about it, woke up, kept reading. I finished reading what you have posted a while ago, but honestly didn't know what to say in a review. I still don't know, but I'm here to give it a try. Or at least babble.

It's brilliantly written, for starters. Edward is dark, but there are reasons, and there's a tiny (admittedly fraying) thread of goodness to him from the start.

Then he loses his ever-lovin' mind. Holy crap. This is by far the 'best' insanity I've ever personally seen. And what I mean by 'best' is... one could really feel the insanity. I felt drawn in, and shocked, and empathetic.

The two 'best' insanity scsnes were with the little boy and on the beach. That whole beach thing, with 'Sand Bella'... holy crap! That a little bit blew my brain.

How much can you write in these? I should wrap it up, 'cause I don't know if my ramblings will get cut off.

I'm hoping for a happy ending. I'm actually glad I came in late on this story, with so many chapters already posted. I think I would have lost my mind worse than Edward, waiting for the next. Now it seems there are only two to go. I can keep my sanity through two. Hopefully.




Edward Masen has lived the life of a nomadic vampire, travelling with James and Victoria since he awoke as an immortal. His ability to read minds has had the unusual side effect of making him a vampire with a conscience. Despite the ridicule from his coven mates, he's confident he's making the best of his existence and doing what's morally right... until he stumbles upon a brown-eyed girl reading in a meadow in Forks. As he attempts to befriend her and learns more about the sleepy town of Forks, Edward finds there's a lot more to being a vampire than he ever thought possible.

Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, James, Victoria
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 276627
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2010 Updated: June 26, 2012

Reviewer: JanaOnWheels Signed
Date: July 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Mortify

Since I get to read this while beta-ing, I never took the time to read it here. You have all kinds of 'thanks' to me in your ANs!

You're most welcome! And, yes, you have won me over to the Twilight side! Where are my cookies?! (grin)

This is an excellent story, and I can't wait to see more! Yes, that's a hint! Write, woman, write! Don't make me slip on the kicking boots!


I'm here for you in any way, you know that!

Luv and huggles!


Author's Response:

Your bribe cookies are waiting for you whenever you want them, did I forget to mention? So long as you don't mind the pixellated variety... :P Since they aren't very fulfilling, perhaps we can work something else out... :P

I'm probably more glad than you are that I won you over, trust me. It's much more fun to talk Twilight with someone involved with the series :)


Bella's a determined professional, her career takes priority in her life. With no time to date she decides to get herself a B.O.B. When it leaves her less than'satisfied' she returns to the store & meets a sexy manager who offers to show her the bunny way

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 20223
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2010 Updated: January 14, 2011

Reviewer: JanaOnWheels Signed
Date: July 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bunny Hop, Anyone?

Very well written. This kind of thing can be done poorly so very easily. You dodged that. I would like to see more, please. I would like to see Edward help her out with her sexual frustration. (grin)

Will keep a look out for an update.



Summary: Feature

At the last possible moment, Edward is unable to entrust Bella to anyone else after the baseball game and appearance of James - even if being the one to protect her means kidnapping her and making her, for all intents and purposes, his prisoner.

Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 20823
[Report This] Published: August 25, 2010 Updated: July 24, 2020

Reviewer: JanaOnWheels Signed
Date: September 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Goodbyes

Understanding Your Vampire - a Glossary and Instruction Manual for Humans Who've Lost Their Damn Minds.


LOLOL! Yeah, that was funny.




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