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Penname: k1942 [Contact]
Real name: Kathy
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Member Since: June 02, 2010
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Reviews by k1942
 
Summary:

Bella isn't a werewolve, vampire, or witch. She's "something other." Vamps/Werewolves included. Cannon Pairings. Nominated for Indie TwiFic Award for Most Original Story Line WIP.


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 62264
[Report This] Published: July 28, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I wonder when and if Bella is going to tell Edward about her dreams. It has to mean something important that she has dreamed of him all these years. I'm guessing Bella will play a big part in the Quileute's future. I can hardly wait.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Okay, so I'm dying to know what it is that Bella shifts into. The suspense is a killer! Hope Edward gets a clue about his feelings concerning Bella. This is fascinating.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Closer to finding out Bella's secret, but not quite yet. I can tell Edward is very interested and not just in what she is, but in how she feels about him. Silly boy, he should know they are meant to be together.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So, to the Harvest Carnival, together. At least Mike got the message, hopefully. I'll bet Edward is glad Mike smells so bad to Bella. Sneaky little devil now knows some of what Bella can do.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm with Alice, what does it matter what Bella is, as long as Edward cares for her? Now he just has to get his family on board.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Perhaps we are about to learn about Bella's dreams and how they are bound up inthe Cullens and the Quileutes. You know something is going on, just not what it is.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So now Leah will have another female for moral support. Maybe that will be a comfort to her. I can see possible problems for Edward and Bella, but am hoping they can work it out.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Nice to see Mike get whats's coming to him, Lauren was the icing on the cake. It tickled me when Bella got in Rosalies' face. Some one needs to. Well, lets' hope nothing happens while the Cullens hunt and the wolves patrol.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Alice wouldn't be Alice unless she is dressing someone. It was cute how  horrified she was over Bella's unmatched underwear. Alice sharing the vision of Bella undressed was a tease to Edward and a clue to what Bella is. I'm glad she saw the birthmark and shared the following vision with Edward. The motorcycle talk was not only exciting to Edward and Bella, but me too, I love bikes.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Help! What is that girl thinking , running after a vampire on her own? I think Edward is about to find out what Bella is and maybe not in a good way. Just when things were looking a bit romantic, too.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

You must admit, it is a line unlike any other and unique to this couple. That Bella is a mountain lion is too cool. I can see why Edward wouldn't hunt them any more. This deal about a council is worrisome. Who are they and what do they want with Bella? Oh yes, how wonderful that Edward can read Bella's mind when she shifts.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

What a wonderful thing to be able to share yourself with another like that. Especially someone you love.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm really liking the way Edward and Bella are together. It's comfortable, easy, playful and quite sexy. They are very much equals in this story and it's really good.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

The visit went very well, I think. Edward's mother loves her and Jasper can control himself, Alice already loves her and Lord knows, Edward is in love with Bella. That only leaves Rosalie to win over, and she 'll bring Emmett.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow, what a responsibility, being a conduit to the Spirit World. Why do I feel this could be a cause of real unhappiness for Bella and Edward? Despite the protection of the pack and Edward, I have a bad feeling something may put Bella in danger.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Such a nice afternoon, even with getting caught in the rain. Cute , having to meet Bella's dad, eat pizza and get your clothes dried, while watching football.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I get the feeling there's a Norton Commando in Bella's future, if she will accept it. Charlie seems to be okay with Edward a boyfriend for his only daughter. Now, if only the identity of this mysterious council can be found, we'll all be happy.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Tickled me no end when Bella took care of that lecherous s.o.b, the girl is good . It was even better when her dad stood up for her. Even Rosalie was impressed.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Bella was wondering when the other shoe would drop and now she knows. Too bad, they were having a great time, everybody getting along, even playing together, you knew it was too good to last. Poor Bree!

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Nice of you to give Bree another chance. Bella held her own until Edward got there to help along with his family and hers. Now we know the Volturi are after Bella, for some reason. so everyone will try to keep her safe.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wouldn't you just know?  The damn Volturi are going to make life a misery not only for the Cullens but the Quileutes as well. Destruction, that's their answer to everything.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Therapy in the hot tub, wish I could have seen that. Also the Risky Business dance number with Emmett and Bella. It was so nice to see the lyrics to Only You, that one takes me back. The love just grows between Bella and Edward and that makes Esme so very happy for her favorite son.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Bella is my hero, the girl has nerve and courage, brains and beauty and lots of other good stuff. I notice Edward didn't argue about the binding ceremony. I can't wait for the potlatch.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Important information for Edward, from Carlisle. Did he plan on never making love to Bella? That would have been terrible, not to mention an awful waste.Things are coming to a head it seems. Playing his piano to help her sleep was so sweet of Edward; lucky Bella.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: November 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

That was as nice a wedding celebration as any I've ever seen or read about.The gift exchange was awesome and the wedding night was lovely.

 




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