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Penname: k1942 [Contact]
Real name: Kathy
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Summary:

What would Twilight have been like if the roles were reversed?

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Edward, Emmett and Jasper Swan are humans living in Forks with their dad, Charlie and they all work at the police station under their father.

Bella, Rosalie and Alice Cullen are vampires, sent to Forks by their vampire parents, Carlisle and Esme, as punishment.

Banner by Anne Cullen

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 65420
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2009 Updated: January 15, 2010


Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Awakening

Love how Emmett  is taking the change, like a duck to water. I'm somehow not surprised, it's  how I always pictured he would be, kind of gung-ho. He is kind of cute in his enthusiasum, like a big kid. Now, back to Edward, beaut- iful, trusting, Edward. Then on to Jasper!

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Acting Fast

So, there are a few bumps in Emmett's road. Too bad, he thought he had it under control. Close, but no cigar. Luckily, he could stop before killing his brother. That would have ruined everybody's day.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Brotherly Bond

Poor Jasper, I know exactly how he feels. Yuck! Well, boys and girls, so far, so good. Love all the abilities that seem to be manifesting themselves, this is a talented family of brothers, evidently.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Possession

Bella and Edward, just the way it's supposed to be . On a personal note, your's is a most unique view of the Cullens and the Swans, and I really like it.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Purple

That was unexpected. How the hell did Charlie get mixed up in all this? The surprises just keep on coming, don't they? I'm sensing pretty good stuff, though, so, bring it on.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Family Ties

Stay tuned! Are you kidding? You couldn't get me out of this story with a gun to my head! This is just too damn cool for words, even shed a tear over how wonderful it was to reunite Charlie and Renee, plus their sons.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Reunions

If that doesn't get you all choked up, nothing will. That is just the best plot twist, ever! Wish my brain could think neat things like that. Guess I'll have to settle for reading only.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Threads

That was amazing and I absolutely loved your story. Most all your stuff is safely in my favorites. Keep on writing, and I will keep on reading!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much sweets!  This was my first venture into the AU world and I had a blast writing this one.  I'm so glad you enjoyed it, your reviews really made me smile so much!!  *MWHA*MWHA*

 
Windows by goldenmeadow Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 85]
Summary:

Huge thanks to Gypsylady for the banner!

 

Jacob lurks outside the Cullen residence while, inside with Bella, Edward divines his wayward wolfish thoughts. Will Edward retaliate?

 

An intimate look into Edward's own mind as he re-lives that fateful kiss between Jacob and Bella the morning after their night in the tent, and his revelation to Bella of what that kiss and her relationship with Jacob has done to him.

 

 

 

Follows on from Cake but stands on its own.  Sexy angst-ridden EPOV, in character, post Eclipse/pre BD.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 14763
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2009 Updated: March 13, 2009


Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: December 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Windows

This proves that honesty really is the best policy. Edward confesses his evil, devious plans, but recants and is forgiven. Can't beat a deal like that! And, from the looks of that last sentence, he is about to receive his reward.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: December 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: ...and the Walls

Poor baby! Edward really suffered over that damn kiss. He should have had more faith in Bella's love  and in himself. I know how difficult it is to not know her thoughts, but come on!

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: December 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: ...Came Tumbling Down

Edward certainly covered himself in glory, at least in Emmett's eyes! Matter of fact, he kind of impressed Bella, too, I would think, as well as himself. Esme may not forgive him anytime soon for the destruction, but I have a sneaking suspicion neither Bella nor Edward really care too much. Talk about afterglow!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Fantastic! Yeah, afterglow and the walls blown down ;). '

Thank you for all of your winderfuk comments...I'm enjoying them so much.

Rie~

 
Summary:

Having stayed in Forks much longer than was wise or safe, the Cullens begin a new life in northern Vermont. Of course, wherever the Cullens go, so does Jacob and his pack. Life is peaceful in the wild, remote wilderness of the Green Mountains until a new family moves into a nearby abandoned estate, causing Alice to have visions of a new vampire coming to the area. This vampire has secrets of his own. And the new neighbors are much more than what they seem.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Other Character, Quil, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 334494
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2009 Updated: October 04, 2010


Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: September 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Step on it, Edward

Max is getting quite an education, just not what he had in mind. The students at Vermont Academy are a mixed bag, to be sure. It's kind of sweet of Alice and Ayla to want to fix the rift between Max and Taylor. Edward's unthinking remark really had me laughing, as did Taylor telling him to drive faster when she found out where they were going!

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: September 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Losing Control

I'm glad Max finally told his dad about his decision, and what made him change his mind. Robert sure felt terrible about hurting his son. He forgets he's a vampire sometimes. Boy, is it handy to have a vampire doctor just down the road. With teenage boys, it's practically  a necessity!

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: September 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Seth's Request

Robert is becoming a better father, aided by Tanya, than he realizes. He concentrayes on the younger ones more than he has in a long time. Max has had a great birthday and has decided not to become a vampire, I think.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: September 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Walking Out

The painful thing here is teens thinking everything in their lives is a tragedy and irreversible. They haven't lived long enough to know any better, so all we adults can do is hurt for them and try to ease their misery. Max is a really stubborn kid, with rejection  issues, plus he's breaking Taylor's heart.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: September 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Max's Birthday

Little Miss Versace dress indeed! That was pretty cute of Max, unlike the stealing Ayla's keys thing. That kid is gointo be in big trouble if his father finds out. Little Miss Snippity-butt, Megan probably got that photographer to snap her kissing Max's cheek. Taylor will not be happy with that! The prize Seth wants if he wins the race will most likely be Ayla's hand in marriage. Look out, Robert!

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Changes

Life goes on , even for the Cullens and the wolf pack. I wonder what effect the new neighbors will have on everybody? There's sure to be something, what with an unknown vampire coming around Christmas-time. Too bad about Bella's parents, shae lost them too soon.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Homecoming

Well, well, the new neighbors ought to fit right in with the Cullens. Ayla is obviously a hybrid like Renesmee and the patriarch is a vampire. My only questions would be how the rest of the children seem to be normal and how did that happen? Lots of questions, really.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: A Face to Face

Isn't that a kick in the head? Robert Foster sure is a very different kind of vampire, and his family even more different! It's hopefully a good thing for the two families to get to know each other. Might make life easier for all concerned, especially the Foster children. Wonder what Ollie and Clarisse are going to think of all the supernatural creatures living so close?

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: First Sight

That wolf imprinting is a powerful thing! Took poor little Ayla by surprise, for sure and probably Seth, too. It's terrible to think Leah hasn't phased to human in eight years. She must be so bitter! Kind of like the way Robert is, hating and denying what he is. He really ought to listen to what the Cullens are trying to tell him. Some people just won't hear what's in their own best interest.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: A Lucky Day

These folks are getting to be the E-Harmony of the supernatural world. First Seth and Ayla and now Carl and Leah. Kind of makes me  wonder who's next? Maybe Robert will find someone to spend eternity with! Anything is possible with this bunch!

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The First Day

The first day of school has been an interesting one for the Fosters. Ayla's brother, Max is a real piss-ant and kind of mean into the bargain. Their dad might well want to send him to military school, he needs a real attitude adjustment. Seth and Ayla are beginning to work out the knots in their relationship and should be getting happier in the future. She's got a lot to make up for and learn how to deal with.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Truth

Fancy that, a vampire doctor that makes houses calls! I sure hope Robert gets a handle on his younger children, and soon. The boys can probably be salvaged, if he hurries. Ayla came so close to confessing about Tomas and I'm sorry she didn't just go ahead and get it off her consience. Things are looking up a bit in the Foster household, that most likely means something bad is about to happen, though I hope not. Carlisle telling Bianca to expect twins was cute, too.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: At School with the Cullens

Edward needs to hear Max's thoughts so he can warn his father about how much Max hates Ayla. There's going to be a tragedy if something doesn't change. I do not like Megan one little bit, she and Max are really a pair, snobby, snotty and cruel. Megan's dad is a stereotype politician, a bit obvious, and we've seen his type before.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Tears & Laughter

Robert Foster may yet get the hang of being a father, to all his children. Esme is just a marvel of motherliness and just what Max needed. What fun, to have Leah ticked at Carl and Ayla mad at her dad as well as Seth. That's a pitiful attitude daddies have about their little girls.

 




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