If Kachiri and Zafrina can't locate these rogue vampires, they must be the ones with the power of invisibility. That's going to make them a bit harder to find and deal with. That's what the Cullens get for destroying Aro and Caius, kind of like, tag, you're it!

This whatever Nessie has for Sean Bowden, makes me wonder if she knows about the imprinting of shape-shifters and their mates. Almost makes me a bit sorry for Jacob, if Ness is about to throw him under the bus.

Kind of like a hive of bees, then, with all sharing in the talents and efforts of each other. Quite a unique  premise, and one which is totally logical. The other covens around the world may have their hands full soon.

Charles SWan and a fishing pole, a beautiful combination. I see what his family is saying, though. That's not much of a plan, and Charlie is too young to sit on his butt and do nothing, it would kill him. He needs to be of use and stay busy.

Sounds like these two yahoos have a fairly decent escape plan. Without Charlie Swan as police chief, they may just get away with it, too. Somehow, I feel like this will mean an intersecting  path, between the convicts and the wolves, and maybe the vampires, too. That should be entertaining!.

That Kadin is a sneaky devil, he thinks he can get rid of the Olympic and Volturi covens and have more power for himself. He seems to be quite the politician, looking out for the main chance.

Esme never gives up her role in the family, which is being the heart. Her love is boundless and unending, all encompassing. I think she answered Grace's plea because of her compassion, and it was the right thing to do. She saved that girl a miserable death and gave her what she wanted. Esme's tender heart will always wonder if she did the right thing, but like Carlisle with Elisabeth, it was. It's good, too, that she could help make Bella feel a bit easier about her near-slip.

I was pretty sure they would wait, because it felt like that was very important to Edward and he's so important to Bella. You wrote it perfectly! Wonderful love making, and so sweet when he made her drink cranberry juice, and pee! Now that's being considerate of your virgin bride! Their honeymoon was cute, too, especially the sandy beach part!

I'm kind of ashamed of Charlie Swan, trying to be a manipulative father, like he did! I hope he comes to feel ashamed of himself! Reading this, you know full well that these two are meant to be together, forever! Nobody should mess with that!

You'll get no complaints from me! I think this little tale of yours is absolutely darling, and am enjoying it thoroughly! Go, Bella!

The truckstop waitress, Dot, was so sweet to Bella, just really got a kick out of her! Edward telling her how long he had waited for her was just as she had hoped, too bad Bella never got the chance to tell him, ditto! Things are going along swimmingly, and no surprise that Bella used her second wish to make sure of their future together. Now to make sure Rosalie and Emmett meet and life is good!

This does sound like the wish is coming true, bit by bit. Just a few more pieces of the puzzle, sort of, left to happen. Part of the 'crush on Edward" deal, seems to be due to Bella's lack of self-confidence. She just won't see herself as worthy of his romantic attentions, for some odd reason!

Interesting? I'll say! This whole idea is wonderful, in the true sense of that word! You have hit the jackpot with this one, even with no sparkling vampires! Too bad Bella doesn't quite believe, yet.