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Penname: k1942 [ Contact]
Real name: Kathy
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Member Since: June 02, 2010
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Summary: 
Timing is everything. What if Bella arrived in Forks during the summer before Senior year instead of the middle of Junior year? What if Bella had spent the summer with Jake before starting school? How would things have changed if there had been no Biology class with Edward? No incident with James? No papercut on her 18th birthday? What if Edward had never left?
What If?
Now a contributor to the Bella and Jacob Chronicles! Thank you so much to Diamondheart for including this story in her amazing series!

Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Paul, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tyler
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 71718
[Report This] Published: August 03, 2010 Updated: March 23, 2013
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: February 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Can't Fight This Feeling
Just as easy as breathing. I guess thats a real nice way to get to really know somebody, maybe even fall in love. We'll see. At least the two dads are happy, they practically shoved them together, so subtle. The misunderstanding in Bella's room was kind of funny and kind of sweet. Author's Response: Hahaha - the dads part was hilarious to write...Charlie always showed such a blatant preference for Jacob in the books, I figured he'd prefer she date his best friends young son, rather than someone like Newton...or you know, a vampire.
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: February 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The Rules
I have to join Bella here and ask what kind of people are you hanging out with? That was just too funny, about Quil and Embry, no wonder Jake and Bella had to pull over to laugh themselves silly. Oh yes, and have a kiss or two. I'm with you, it was probably Edward watching from the trees, seething with jealousy that someone else dared touch his singer. The plot thickens! Sorry, couldn't resist. Author's Response: It's true...although I don't work with that boss anymore! Sadly I'm still stuck with the wacky brother in law. This was a really fun chap to write b/c I got to put some silly stuff in it.
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: February 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Green Eyed Monster
Poor Edward he doesn't have the experience to know what's happening to him. Just as Jake and Bella are virgins, I'm thinking, so is beautiful vampire boy. This just keeps getting more and more interesting. Author's Response: Yeah, for all his mind reading, poor Edward is a little confused about human mating rituals. Hard to believe someone that beautiful has been alone for so long :(
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: February 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Neutral News (bonnysammy)
Knowing, as I do that Bella has had time to get close to Jacob, and appreciate how sweet , uncomplicated( except for the wolf thing) and sunny-natured he is, still I vote to have Edward in her heart and soul. Can't help myself, I guess, Jake is beautiful, but Edward is drop-dead gorgeous, no pun intended. Author's Response: Drop dead....snicker....hahaha.
Thanks for the vote k1942. I know you're Team Eddie, so I appreicate you reading this fic!
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: February 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The First Day of School
Not bad for a first day of senior year. Too funny, how Edward manipulated his class schedule to match Bella's. Guess he doesn't plan on letting her get away. Alice was truly shocked that Bella had never been to a dance. She thinks all these rites of passage are very important for the human experience, never having known her own human life. If Bella asks Jake to the dance and he can't make it, she will most likely cancel too, so I fail to see how Edward capitalizes on that. Enlighten me. Author's Response: You clearly underestimate the powers of Alice Cullen if you think she wouldn't have gone to the dance without Jake!
Fortunaely Jake did say yes, so lots of drama will unfold! Hooray drama!
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: February 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Small Victories
The only fly in the ointment, as far as I can tell, is no Cullens at the bonfire, which kind of sucks. How is Edward supposed to get Bella's attention if he can't be around her? Things are going to be interesting, and you know that old Chinese curse,"May you live in interesting times", may be very appropriate. Author's Response: Well the Cullens can't come on their land, so I guess they never get to enjoy the beach. Too bad! It would have made it more interesting for sure...
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: February 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Preparations
Pretty easy to guess why Sam showed up at Jakes, full of questions about the Cullens, just checking on the neighborhood vampires. Easy too, to see what's up with Embry, he has phased and is now a shape-shifter. I always thought it would have been a bit better to tell these young guys what was about to happen, but that's just me. Typical shopping trip with Alice, but it was nice to have Edward along. Bella didn't realize that he could see her in that blue dress, through Alice's eyes. Must have taken his breath away for a second, not that he needs to breathe. Looking forward to the bonfire party and the homecoming dance. Author's Response: I agree, I kinda wondered why some of the tribe was in the know, and others weren't. I'd at least thought that the family members would get to know. I always felt bad for Colin or Brady, whichever one kept getting grounded and kept sneaking out to patrol.
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: February 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Your Kiss is Like Fire
I would say Bella had a very nice birthday, especially the present Jake gave and which she sweetly returned. Ah, young love. My only criticism is, it isn't Edward, but that's because I'm a stubborn old woman and not a big fan of change. I totally love the Twilight Saga, and in mind, it's always Bella and Edward. Your story takes getting used to and I promise to finish reading, no matter what. Author's Response: Oh k1942, you're a patient reader!
We can compromise - when I'm describing hot little makeout scenes, you can just pretend it's Edward!
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: May 07, 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Eternal Flame
Any reason Bella seems the last to know? I never thought she was stupid, or unaware. The wolves are worried she's in danger, they better find a way to let her know. The mind reading was about like I would have thought, and the lyrics were perfect. It is shaping up nicely and you are doing a great job.
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: July 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - You Give me Fever
Boy! The good stuff just kept coming for you, didn't it? I hope by now the morningsickness is better and the new job is working out. You take good care of yourself, the middle trimester you usually feel pretty well. I loved being pregnant. Back to Bella and Jacob, and pesky Edward. He really loves to rub it in when he has a chance, and get in Jake's face. I can see why Sam is amazed at Jake's control and wonders at the no imprint thing. Looking forward to how you handle all this,when you get a minute, that is. Take your vitamins and put your feet up now and again!
Summary: After her brother’s death Andria DeAngelo is leaving Lake Tahoe, California in search of a new start. The tragic death of Bella Cullen had torn the Cullens apart and left Edward in a constant state of depression. He only lives because of Renesmee. When Edward and Andria meet Edward must control his desire to kill her. Can Andria get away from the memory of her brother’s tragic accident? Will the Cullens be torn apart forever? Or can Andria save Edward and the Cullens and show them happiness and love again?
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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes
Word count: 221472
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2010 Updated: October 01, 2012
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: July 24, 2012
Title: Chapter 42: Summoned
I like that you didn't have Andria easily adjust to being a vampire, after all, only Bella had unusual control from the beginning. The summons to Volterra went about as well as Andria feared. Aro did everything he could to provoke a confrontation he could manipulate. The idea he could force Andria to stay there knid of blew up in his face. Good thing Demetri came through for them. It could have been really nasty, otherwise. Author's Response: Andria having unusual control would have been too much like the original Twilight and no fun to write, in my opinion. Her normal newborness makes her exciting. Thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: September 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 31: Favorite Place
This visit has been so good for everyone and is now officially perfect! It was so touching to see how Emmett and Rosalie are with all the children. It probably blew Jasper away when that darling little girl climbed in his lap and rested against him. These are all loving, caring beings, no matter they are vampires. Andria's grandparents have easily seen how very much Edward cares for her and trust him to be the husband she needs. I'm interested to see what happens at Blackbeard's house, too. Hopefully nothing too strange. Enjoy your students and have fun with them! Author's Response: I'm sad that the week with my students is over and I don't go back until November. They were all wonderful, all 74 of them, and they were as sad as I was to leave at the end of the week. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: August 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 29: Never Hate
That's really strange, having the review replies gobbled up by Twilighted! Guess it was just hungry. Kind of a wrenching meeting between Andria and her mother, but at least they cleared the air, somewhat. Some children have a nightmare childhood and never recover from it. It seems to have only made Andria stronger. It doesn't hurt to have Edward and the Cullens, either. Author's Response: Better to clear the air a little than to leave all of that bottled up inside. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: September 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 31: Favorite Place
This visit has been so good for everyone and is now officially perfect! It was so touching to see how Emmett and Rosalie are with all the children. It probably blew Jasper away when that darling little girl climbed in his lap and rested against him. These are all loving, caring beings, no matter they are vampires. Andria's grandparents have easily seen how very much Edward cares for her and trust him to be the husband she needs. I'm interested to see what happens at Blackbeard's house, too. Hopefully nothing too strange. Enjoy your students and have fun with them!
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 03, 2012
Title: Chapter 37: Honeymoon Part One: Paris
Edward is such a traditional romantic, so no surprise that he and Andria began their honeymoon in Paris. It sounds as if they are typical newlyweds, unable to keep their hands off each other for long. I wonder if the first time, without a condom, will yield any interesting results? And where else will Edward take his bride on their honeymoon?
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: May 12, 2012
Title: Chapter 39: Unexpected
Several things about this chapter, first how rapidly Andria's pregnancy progressed, and the bonus of twins! The next thing was Nessie's attitude and how beautifully Andria handled that. Next was her reining in Alice's enthusiasm over the nursery. The birth went so well and their beautiful, talented children are simply amazing! Looks like Edward and Andria get their cake and get to eat it too!
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: May 12, 2012
Title: Chapter 38: Honeymoon Part Two: Bordeaux
The second part of the honeymoon was wonderful, despite the horrific start. Andria handled the whole thing rather well, and shocked Edward with her comment about sexy red eyes. The house in Bordeaux sounds perfect, and I'm amazed they got out long enough to sight-see. Now that they are pregnant, I'm curious as to what Bella wants to talk to Carlisle about. What's that girl got up her sleeve?
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: December 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 34: Celebration
Andria had a psychic moment there, thinking trouble was coming. It just wasn't as bad as she feared, because the Cullens move every so often anyway. Maybe it won't be so bad to be closer to her parents. Sure sounded like Andria had a nice birthday, the summer has gone well, and the wedding is on schedule. Life is good! Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: January 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 18: A Night Out
I may be nearly seventy, but can remember very clearly how much fun it was to drink and party when I was seventeen. It's probably something most of us have done, although not nearly as well as the Cullen bunch seem to! Andria is quite the young lady, I'm liking her more all the time, although I must admit to being a teensy bit jealous of her and Edward. Silly, huh? Well, here we are, now I'll wait, impatiently, for your next chapter. Do I have to tell you outright, how much I like this story? Consider yourself told! Talk to you soon! Author's Response: The Cullen bunch certainly know how to party and have a good time! Jealously is not silly at all, I'm jealous every time I write another chapter! I'm so glad you like Andria, I've tried to mold her from myself, but Andria is more outgoing and much braver than I am!
I'm so thrilled that you love this story! I hope you stick with me, Andria and Edward's love story is going to be one heck of a ride! THanks again for your awesome reviews each chapter! I love them!
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: January 24, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Dreams and Changes
Andria is wise beyond her years, to have figured out as much of Edward as she has. I'm seeing the two of them growing closer with every encounter. This should be good for them both, but we'll see. Author's Response: They will continue to grow closer as time goes on, too! Another awesome review, and I love it!!! Thanks so much for taking the time to leave me a review.
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: June 04, 2012
Title: Chapter 40: Secrets
Wow! This chapter was chock full of good stuff! The twins are amazing, in their growth and talents, in so many ways. Andria's loss of her mother was a shock. What a tragedy, to make her peace with her and then have no time to enjoy it. Her step-dad really was a crazy bastard! I'm glad Andria told Vanessa the truth and Lucas convinced her to accept it. The grandfolks were smarter than she thought they were. How like them to notice the difference of the family. This should make life so much easier for all concerned, no more secrets!
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: February 08, 2012
Title: Chapter 36: The Big Day
Where are they going, that they have to make an entrance? Have to wait and seeI guess. The wedding was lovely and Andria's family are still a delight. They love her so much, as much as the Cullens, maybe a bit less than Edward.Are we getting closer to the end of your story? If so, I'll miss everybody.
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: June 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Goodbyes Are Forever
Pretty scary there for a while, Edward beside himself, thinking he was losing his love again. What a lovely idea to have Andria find and hug Travis in heaven, and then to meet Bella and talk to her. You kind of let us have our cake and eat it too, you clever girl! All told, a beautiful chapter! Author's Response:
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: October 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 32: Family
These chapters with Andria's family have been so good and I surely have enjoyed them. The engagement ring and this trip to explore and wrestle alligators, too. Jasper's discovery of family connection and recieving that uniform brought a lump to my throat. Hope your boyfriend's mom came through surgery well and is much better. See you soon!
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 24: Spa Adventures
The spa day sounded like a lot of fun, except for the bikini wax. The girls all really enjoyed the rest of it, even lunch. Well, maybe Alice and Rosalie didn't like it so much, but they were good sports about it. I can't blame Andria for wanting Vanessa to know everything, so they wouldn't have to part, ever. Her friend is happy that Andria has found Edward and they are so good for each other and so much in love. That conversation about having a big family was a bit uncomfortable. Vanessa can't know why one child will probably be the limit, and Andria can't explain. Edward laid it all out for her, the good, the bad, and the really dangerous, but of course, Andria will do whatever it takes to have Edward's baby. Speaking of danger, here's hoping Charlotte can be contained before she hurts Andria or the Cullens. That worries me a little, so I'll be waiting to see what happens. Author's Response: Charlotte will make her appearance soon! Thanks so much for the great review... I love hearing what you liked about the chapter and I look forward to hearing from you again! :)
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