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Amends by edwards_girl_4_ever Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 267]
Summary:

A look at the time SM skipped over in between New Moon and Eclipse.  How did Bella get back to her pre-zombie normal?

 

Bella tells Edward how much he hurt her; the only problem is she tells him this in her sleep. What will Edward do to regain her trust and make this right? How did they overcome the hurt and pain he caused? What effect does this have on the Cullen family?  This is a strong Bella, who does eventually get angry with Edward and put him in his place. 

 

A big thank you goes out to FrozenSoldier who made this awesome banner!!!!!!!

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 34210
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2010 Updated: December 10, 2010


Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: December 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Flowers

I truly hope Edward is on the right path, getting flowers for all the women in his life. I would be thrilled, but that's not the same. At least Alice hasn't vetoed his plan, so maybe he will be okay.



Author's Response:

Hey k1942,

 He is and he isn't, but he is trying and that counts. Fingers crossed it'll work out.

Thanks for continuing to read and review.

Cheers,

~E

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: December 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Reckoning

A bit late in the day for Renee's maternal instincts to rear their heads, but better late than never. Bella handled it pretty well, without having to lie to her mom too much. I wonder if here is where the anger seed is planted? I see Bella is still a little self-esteem deprived. She just can't see what Edward sees in her.



Author's Response:

Hi k1942,

Yeah, I know but at least she's trying. Again that was point, I'm so happy you get it. I think it is, I mean it was there before but I think the anger she is really aware of comes from Renee. She is, but she might not be for long... True.

thanks again.

Cheers,

~E

 

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: December 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Deliveries

Edward did an outstanding job on all his flower notes. They were very well received by Esme, Rose and Alice I thought. He saved his best one for Bella, as he should have. She seems to have loved them, so I hope she won't change her mind. Sure surprised her dad by accepting his restrictions so easily.



Author's Response:

Hey k1942,

I loved the notes too and are happy u liked them. Yes, they went over well, and how could he not when he poured out his heart to them. Yeah I keep adding and adding to Bella's and eventually had to stop myself LOL.

Thanks for reviewing and reading.

Cheers,

~E

 

 

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: December 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Facing the Flowers

Edward may have made a big mistake not answering his phone. It could be Alice with vital information. When is this guy going to learn? Bella's sleep-talking isn't very encouraging either.



Author's Response:

hi  k1942,

It was BIG mistake. It was! he'll learn in about 5 chs. nope it's not.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, i love ur reviews they make me smile.

Cheers,

~E

P.s I don't know if its your kind of story but you might want to check out my other story "Hamartia Rocks"

 

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: December 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Sunday: Take One

Not that he doesn't deserve some punishment, but I think you are being too hard on Edward. There is such a thing as making him too abased, I think it's not  necessary to make him a doormat. Let him make amends, don't emasculate him.



Author's Response:

Hi  k1942,

 I know where you're coming from, but it is the only way to make him get it, have a little faith, it'll all work out.

Thanks as always for reading and reviewing.

Cheers,

~E

 

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: December 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Sunday: Take Two

It helps a little to hear Bella's thoughts, and I agree that stuff is better out in the open than festering in side. I'm also thinking Bella and Edward both should be careful of what they say. Some things can't be unsaid.



Author's Response:

Hey k1942,

 See I said have a little faith. I could not write that scene as one sides, you need both to understand the hurt and the anger. Yeah, they should have , but they'll have to deal with. I might use that line.... I'll credit you if I do.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Cheers,

~E

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: December 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Yet I'll Hammer It Out

I really hope that Edward has figured it out, it will make his and Bella's life so much better. He truly does over-think everything. It's so simple, maybe that's the problem. If you treat everyone the way you want to be treated, you'll be much happier. At least, the whole family is trying to help and that will remind Edward how much they care.



Author's Response:

Hi again k1942,

 Sorry I'm answering all these at once, but I just have not had the time but I always respond.

Little secret, he has, and it will I think. He does, and that is what is standing in their way... partly. Again, you hit the nail on the head.

Thanks again for all the great review and i hope you enjoy the next chapters.

Cheers,

~E

 

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: December 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?

Can't argue with Bella, Esme is more of a mother-figure than Renee ever was. It is so good for Bella's mental health to be able to unload on Alice and Esme, secure in the knowledge she's sharing with two women that love Edward nearly as much as she does. I have my fingers and toes crossed that Edward will get that lightbulb over his head and get what Bella is trying to tell him. I want so much for them to be together, it hurts them both to be seperated, as history shows.

 
Summary:

Trippin'

 

Nicknames, food fights, clumsiness and a crush. Could falling really bring a couple together? We'll see....

 

SM owns the characters...I'm just putting them through a few new paces...


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3637
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2010 Updated: June 27, 2010


Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: July 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was too cute for words and sounded like something that could have easily happened. Isn't that always the way, she was trying to work up the nerve to speak to him while he's trying to be brave enough to talk to her? I loved it!



Author's Response: I think that happens a LOT in real life...peeps should be BRAVE! Thanks for reading, Kathy! Kathie

 
Lost (One-Shot) by Twivamp Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Written for the What About Alice? Contest. Alice feels lost in New Moon when Edward leaves.

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Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1857
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2010 Updated: June 25, 2010


Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: October 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lost

I never thought Alice would blame herself for Edward's leaving Bella. I figured she would have her hands full trying to soothe and support Jasper in his despair. Should have known she might shoulder some of the blame. It's a sad time for all the Cullens, no doubt about it and little do they know it will get worse before it gets better.



Author's Response:

When I was writing this, I had absolutely no idea that she'd blame herself. But then I thought, "Hey. She can see the future and she didn't see this. She will probably take some of the blaim." And that's how it happened, haha. I'm pretty sure most of the Cullens were blaiming themselves, or possibly others (in Rosalie's case). It's a hard time for them, like you said. Thanks for reviewing!

 

~Twivamp :)

 
Summary:

 

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 115917
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2010 Updated: January 15, 2011


Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - Not Again

I don't blame Edward for being deathly afraid of the flu, after all, it cost him his parents and his human life. Hopefully, Bella will be okay. Atleast they don't have to worry about Charlie getting out a shotgun.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Georgia on My Mind

Always wondered what would have happened, if Edward had stayed away, and Volterra never happened. Now I'm about to find out. In my humble opinion, Edward never should have left Bella anyway. I'm looking forward to watching him try to get her back.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Of All The Airports In The World...

Well, I guess we're about to meet the guy in Alice's vision. It's probably Bella's boyfriend. Maybe now Edward can do his mind-reading thing and get some idea of what's  going on in Bella's life.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Edward Meets Julian

Edward can't be too pleased to hear Dr. J.T. Yates tell him to call any time, as Bella lives with him! I wasn't too thrilled about that either, but what can you expect? After all, Edward left her and told her to have a life without him. That's why they always tell you to be careful what you wish for, lest you get it.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Incapacitate... Don't Decapitate

Bella really has changed in the last four years. Since when has she got into role-playing sex games? Who would have thought sweet, innocent Bella would go for that? Me thinks Alice screwed up, big-time! Not good!

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-WTF?

The picture isn't coming clear to Edward yet, is it? I kind of feel sorry for him, in a way, he's going to be really embarassed when he figures it out. If he figures it out, that is. It's just going to blow his vampire mind, I'm afraid.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Consenting Adults

Got to say it again, poor Edward! At least Bella isn't too angry with him, She must remember how protective he's always been of her, and understands how Alice could have had a defective vision. Had to laugh at Emmett, he just can't resist.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here

Emmett gave it a good try, with logical arguments, but blockheaded Edward isn't listening. I'm thinking Bella may be the only one who can get through to him. I hope she's not too hard on him, poor baby.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - For Her Own Good

Guess Edward never heard the expression, when in over your head, don't keep digging. He's about to realize he should have listened to his brother's widom. I fear Bella is about to lower the boom, right on his hard head.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Since When Does Bella Use the F Word?

Trust Jasper to get to the heart of the matter. Hope Edward is brave enough to take the excellent advice offered by Jasper. I got a vibe from Bella that she was hoping for a much different declaration from Edward than what she got.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Plan

The plan seems to be a good one, but those book titles from Emmett made me smile, especially Dr. Ruth's Sex For Dummies! That sounds just like her. Anyway, Edward's brothers are sure trying to help him win back Bella.  It just might be a bit more difficult than anyone knows.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Damn AT&T to Hell

Edward really wanted to hear from Bella, but we don't always get what we want. At least the first day of law school went pretty well. Now we'll see if he can keep his promise to Bella.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Julian Meets the Cullens

Oh, Edward, you poor little thing, calm yourself. Julian  may be afraid, but really has no clue how close he came to never leaving the Cullen's back yard.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Over My Already Dead Body

I'm beginning to see a tiny light at the end of the tunnel and it's not a train. I'm so impressed with Emmett's advice to Edward. Now all he has to do is implement that good advice.  Easier said than done, but worth it if she takes him back.

 
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The Road To Hell...

Good intentions truly pave the road to Hell, as I'm afraid Edward is about to find out. Boy, old habits die hard. As Bella told him, if he won't change his way of thinking and treat her as an equal, it will never work.

 




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