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Some random things I like, in no particular order... My husband, making cupcakes, travelling, sleeping in, drinking vodka, swimming, Robert Pattinson, shopping, Empire Records, stripy socks, summer, Dirty Dancing, Jake Gyllenhaal, pretty scarves, my cat, playing on Twilighted!
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Summary:

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There is real life, then there's Real Life.

 

We all know that Rob and Kristen belong together. So what happens when that finally happens, just years down the road? Enter Ever After . . .

 

A series of one-shots, that are tied together by the moments that make up a couple's life together. Add a few 'sex-haired' babies and some Twilight friends for fun.

 

Rated NC-17 because you just never know when the lemon muse will show up.

 

A new series from  jakeward and the shrew.

 

*stories will not be necessarily be in chronological order. Cause that's how we roll. :)

 

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kellan Lutz, Kristen Stewart, Other Character, Robert Pattinson
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Series: Ever After . . ., The Robsten Files
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 118030
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2013


Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: So Not Hoppy

So... am I the Sam in this situation?!

Hehehehehee.

 
Need to Escape by lostluggage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5732]
Summary:

 

 

When Robert Pattinson needs to escape the crazy life of stardom- he finds an unlikely ally to see him to safety- a quiet bookshop owner who is secretly infatuated with Twilight, and a certain young British actor.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 97 Completed: Yes Word count: 829399
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2012


Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed
Date: September 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65-Two Outs, Bottom of the Ninth

Yayyy, what a lovely chapter!

I just adored the part when they were holding hands and Jen didn't realise it, but Rob did. For some reason that just struck me as so sweet.

I'm so excited for the two of them to come out as a couple! And a little bit scared too, of course.

But most of all... yayyyyy! I'm so pleased they finally reached home base. It was a slow, bumpy road but they got there. Whew!

Thanks for another great chapter, Steph!

-SwimmingBee



Author's Response:

thanks my dear! 

ah the holding hands. you know he must be so pent up, having her so close, wanting so much to be with her in everyway, and she is trying so hard to cope. having him aware of their hands. yes, so sweet.

hehee the outing.. me too. 

thanks so much my dear!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64- Friends and Allies

Awww, I loved this chapter! (What am I saying, I love every chapter!)

I loved that Rob and Jen are talking about their feelings properly again, and their needs. They'll get there eventually, I'm sure of it.

I loved that Jen found a great friend who seems like a genuinely good person.

And I loved that Nick is back in the game. I kinda love Nick, even though he was a bit of a poo once upon a time. He's redeemed himself, in my books.

Love, love, love!

Thank you, Steph! *hugs*



Author's Response:

aww thanks my dearest! 

they really are finally trying to open up and be honest with one another. something every relationship should be built on.

and jen really needed someone like Leah. someone outside of the Rob madness, but who understands it.

sigh. it means so much to me to hear that Nick is finally getting out of the doghouse. i really need to send Real Nick a gift basket. hehehe.

thanks my dear! 

mWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed
Date: August 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63- Warmth

Aww, I loved this chapter! So pleased that Jen has some of her warmth back again. It's sure to be a slow process, but I'm sure the two of them will get there again. Happy sigh!

I hope we get to find out what their sign for Kristen was! I'm very intrigued...

And thanks so much for the recommendation, Steph! I must admit, my heart skipped a little beat when I read that. I had to do a double take and read it again. What on earth am I doing being mentioned in the greatness that is Need To Escape!? Wow! I'm honoured. Thank you! :)

Good luck with your two week break, and I look forward to lots more Jen and Rob soon. *hugs*



Author's Response:

thanks my dear!

yep, they are getting their groove back. Jen is returning to herself.

haha! kristen's symbol... we may learn what it is... smirk.

I am happy to rec you! i know how hard it is, not only with a new story, but over here in RPF land as well. we gals gotta stick together! LOL!

so no problems rec'ing. i am honored to do it. 

thanks my dear. more very soon i hope!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed
Date: September 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66-Remember Me

Another fabulous chapter, Steph!

Eeek, I'm glad you said the bleeding thing at the end was nothing major, because I was getting worried there!

I had to go watch the Today Show interview again as I read about it from Jen's perspective. I have to say, it was fun watching it and thinking Jen was standing a few meters away! Hehee. And even though I looked, I still couldn't see the rip in his jacket. *shrugs* I guess Jen has a better eye than me!

Loved Rob's comment about his librarian fantasty, too. Wah! They simply must revisit that later... ;)

Fantastic, Steph! Thanks for another wonderful chapter!

-SwimmingBee



Author's Response:

Thanks my dear!

yes, nothing major at all, just biology.

LOL! i love that you can imagine Jen there in the sidelines, shaking her head and trying to offer him support! really I could only see the rip in the pictures. I think the camera man cut it out. thank god!

oh yesm we shall revisit Librarian times.... js...

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70- Not as Easy as You Might Think

Happy sigh! Another fabulous chapter!

I love that Jen tried to make spitting out the toothpaste sexy. Hehee. That made me chuckle!

Oooh, so Jen freaked out a wee bit while watching Rob / DuRoy in action. She really hadn't thought about it much up until then, so I imagine it would have been a bit of a shock! Luckily, lunch in the trailer seemed to calm both of them down.

My very favourite line has to be... "It was so much easier last night!" Bwah, ha! Go Rob!

Loved it, as always. :)

-SwimmingBee x



Author's Response:

thanks dearest!

Jen thought she could handle it. How I really don't know. but thankfully her man proved to her that she is his one and only!

heehee. "IT was so much easier last night!" was the line that shaped this entire Bel Ami sequence. It's interesting how one line can become a chapter or two. But that line has been in my head for months! LOL!

glad you loved it!

thanks hun!

MWAH!

steph

 
Summary:

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Banner by mmp1953  Thanks, Margie, you're the best!

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What kinds of dreams and fantasies are "older" women allowed to have? Just because my body was older didn't mean that I wasn't young at heart and mind. A chance encounter with Kellan Lutz would re-enforce that fact. My life would change forever.

I am so humbled and thankful to those who nominated and voted for KMIYM in the Faithful Shipper Awards - Spring  2011. It came in Second place in the RPF - Actor/Other Character Catagory   Thank you, thank you, thank you! Love y'all! 


Categories: Other Characters: Kellan Lutz, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 258790
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2011


Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 The Premiere

Another lovely chapter, Ellen!

After a special pampering treatment, they really all had a fabulous night at the premiere. Especially Ro and Cam, hehee! Will we hear more about them, I wonder?

And some more steaminess from Kellan and Ellen, too. Woo! They're definitely captivated by each other... I just hope it lasts for them!

This has been such a happy, lovely story to read so far Ellen. I'm really enjoying reading a few chapters when I get a chance - perfect for my summer holidays! Thank you! :)

-SwimmingBee x



Author's Response:

Hi Bee!

So glad you're likin' my little fantasy! Comin' from you...the awesome Gemma creator...is high praise indeed! Thank you!

Yes, the premiere was fun, and Ro and Cam appear from time to time. You will find that Kellan and Ellen are very active in the physical part of their relationship...like rabbits *wink* *sigh* And in my romance, cheese, and HEA lovin' mind, yeah, it lasts!!

Lots of lovin', angst and happiness ahead. Hope you continue to enjoy it!

 



Author's Response:

Hi Bee!

So glad you're likin' my little fantasy! Comin' from you...the awesome Gemma creator...is high praise indeed! Thank you!

Yes, the premiere was fun, and Ro and Cam appear from time to time. You will find that Kellan and Ellen are very active in the physical part of their relationship...like rabbits *wink* *sigh* And in my romance, cheese, and HEA lovin' mind, yeah, it lasts!!

Lots of lovin', angst and happiness ahead. Hope you continue to enjoy it!

 

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Declarations and Disclosures

Whew, steamy bathroom sex!! Go Ellen and Kellan!

Their karaoke was very sweet. I must admit, I was a bit worried when Kellan was looking down at the table instead of at her... But clearly he was just taking a moment to settle himself down before he ravished her! Phew!

Oh, hello Rob! :) (And Tracie, grrrr!)

I'm so glad they've started the talk they need to have, in regards to Ellen's age and history. Clearly it doesn't matter to him, but it's still important to her. As you said, they need to get to know each other, but they adore each other already. Aww. Loving this, Ellen!

Onto the next chapter! :)

-SwimmingBee x



Author's Response:

Hey sweet Bee!

Thanks so much for the awesome review! You inspire me with your wonderful talent and am humbled by your words.

Yeah, well, the bathroom sex was steamy and I blushed the whole time I was writing it! It's become easier to detach myself during those times...and there are a lot of them, usually two a chapter! They are not meant to be sex for sex's sake, but as an integral part of their relationship and love for one another.

Singing is one of my favorite things to do, and I just had to throw some karaoke in there. And yes, Kellan was tryin' to settle down. These intense feelings are new to him and he's tryin' to come to terms with them. But hormones explode whenever they're together and he can't keep his hands...and other parts...off of her.

Rob (and Tracie...sorry!) play a very important part in this story, right through to the end. Just put yourself in there in place of Tracie! lol Rob becomes one of Ellen's best friends.

Yes, the "talk" is a very important part of this story, and he just doesn't care about the "age thing". The insecurities are all on her side and it causes some BIG angst in later chapters.

Thanks again for reviewin', darlin'! You understand what each one means! Hope you keep enjoyin' Kellan and Ellen's story!

Love ya, sweetie!

Ellen xx

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey Ellen,

Guess what - I'm finally catching up on your story! Yayyy! Am I too late? Are you still updating it? I hope so!

I loved this first chapter. Kellan and Ellen (love her name, by the way...) are adorable together. Their first meeting had me smiling the whole time, especially when she had to tell herself, "Don't be a fangirl! Don't squee!" Hehee.

Clearly Ellen still has a few self-esteem issues, but hopefully with Kellan's help, she'll get there. Sigh, what a lovely start to the story! Looking forward to reading more! I'm on summer holidays at the moment so I plan to read and catch up from now on. Yay! :)

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Letting Go

Whew, what a hot start to your second chapter! I giggled in shock when Kellan undid her robe. Oh my goodness!! He certainly has enough confidence for the both of them, doesn't he!? Ha! Poor Ellen had a little freak-out moment, but I'm so glad she decided to just go for it. :)

Aww, their love-making session was hot! Clearly they had lots of fun exploring each other and getting to know what the other likes. Ellen did a wonderful job of squashing down any insecure thoughts. Phew!

You write Kellan so well - I can just see him smiling that big, cheeky grin as he talks to her. This is the first Kellan story I've read, actually. You convinced me to give it a go, since you gave Rob a go in my story!

This is my favourite line of the story... "I think we need a little nap now, don't you?"

For some reason, it just struck me as so sweet and lovely, after their session in bed!

Ooh, I wonder what their night out will bring. A bumpy ride, you say? Eeek! Hopefully not too bumpy. But I'm all strapped in, ready for the ride!

Thank you, Ellen! :)

- SwimmingBee x



Author's Response:

Hi Bee!

Sorry it's taken a few days to respond, I'm still recoperatin' from the heat attack. Don't spend near as much time onine as I'd like!

I'm so glad to find you here., and no worries, I'm still updatin', in fact, chapter 28 was just posted today.

Yes, my Kellan is full of confidence and he will help Ellen with her issues. I write Kellan as I see him...Oh I'd love to see him again! The meeting at the convention really happened, just that way! lol

You will find that in this story, the love between Kellan and Ellen continues to grow deeper and stronger...not that there aren't bumps in their road, but throught any angst, the love stays strong. And there are definitely bumps!

Thanks again for reviewin'. You know how important they are!

Love ya, darlin'!

Ellen xx

 
Summary:

 

Robert Pattinson is twenty five years old and a solid A-list international star. He is on the last leg of a European promotional tour for his latest film, when he meets a sexy much older woman who has been hired to serve as his language interpreter. What will develop during their travels throughout Spain, Italy, England, France and America? Will this older woman teach Rob about love and lust or will he have something to teach her? Lots of ripe, juicy, delicious lemons and possibly other fruit, I promise.

 

Finalist for best RPF in the 2010 Faithful Shipper Awards

Winner for Best Comedy—Reality Rebellion Awards 2010

Winner for Best First Kiss—Reality Rebellion Awards 2010

2nd Place for Best Original Character—Marisa, Most Original Plot, Best One Liner—“Your scent is still all over my fingers. It’s driving me to distraction.”

 

Finalist for best RPF in the 2011 Faithful Shipper Awards

 

Thanks so much to all those who voted for OTI!

 

Banner created by the wonderfully talented DreamySims1

 


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Completed: Yes Word count: 294618
[Report This] Published: October 25, 2009 Updated: March 25, 2014


Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed
Date: September 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35--Oh, là, là

Ooh la la indeed!

Loved hot, bossy Rob. I'm so glad he didn't let her break up with him. They're too great together! Looking forward to when Rob gives his Mum a piece of his mind! Poor Clare.

Mrs Pattinson?! Wahoo! Was it a real proposal though, or just a discussion about their future? Hmm. Can't wait to see how Marisa takes that one!

More please! :)

-SwimmingBee



Author's Response:

Glad you liked bossy Rob. I think real Rob has it in him. He's said he's stubborn and possessive, so I'm sure that side of him comes out when needed. Yeah, I don't know what Rob is going to say to his mom, we'll see, lol. As for Mrs. Pattinson, you'll have to wait and see in the next chappy... Thanks for reviewing bb!

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37--Avril à Paris

Yayyy! I'm just 'chuffed' this updated so quickly after our recent Twitter conversation!

I think I'm still blushing from the raunchiness. Wooo, boy. Go Rob and Marisa! I love Rob's point of view... especially in regards to him enjoying the view. He really didn't care less about the Eiffel Tower. Hehee. Love it!

I reckon Rob is a saucy little minx too. :)

Thanks for another fabulous chapter, Scilla!

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34--La Folie

Oh, Scilla! Waaaah!

Even though this was an angst-filled chapter, there were definitely still moment that made me chuckle. Like Tom looking like a prepubescent boy with rosy cheeks and a cigarette. And Richard stretching out on the lounge chair in just his Speedo. Haaa!

And go Clare, ordering a Gin and Tonic! Woo!

But whew, she sure did come off harshly! Yeouch! Maybe we should blame it on the G&T. Poor Marisa!

And oh dear. I hope she gets to France quickly, because surely there's no way Rob is going to let her break up with him. Right!? Eeeek!

She's braver than me though. I would never swim butterfly-style naked in the swimming pool. Hehehee.

Loved it! Thanks for another wonderful chapter, Scilla!

-SwimmingBee



Author's Response:

I love the way you've highlighted all the points in the chappy! Now that I think about it swimming butterfly naked would be kind of funny. On and as for the Gin and Tonic, one of my English bb's told me to put that in there, said it wasn't even considered a cocktail in England, more like a palate cleanser, lol. Can't wait 'til you read the next chappy, lots happening. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed
Date: August 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Aww, I love your story, Scilla! I've been reading for ages but I've been a bit bad and haven't left reviews, sorry! I've started posting a bit more on RAoR too. I think after far too long lurking, it's time to actually join in on the h00ring. :)

I shall never think of peach pie and ice-cream in the same way again!

Bring on some hot skyping! Yay!



Author's Response:

Hi SwimmingBee, I saw you on RAoR, so good to see you here too. Peach pie and ice cream for the win, lol. Hot Skyping coming right up. Please keep reading and reviewing. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed
Date: August 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

Wow, Rob certainly did learn how to Skype!! Whew! Hot!

OMG, I couldn't help but giggle about the fact that Marisa brought Clare peach pie! Hehehee. So naughty! And I love Rob's real Peaches shirt, too. How funny! Maybe he's been reading your story... ;)

And the missing condoms. Hmmm. I think Richard stole them. Hehee, no, maybe not. But maybe it was the stalker, to mess with Marisa's head!? Nasty girl!

Love the chapter, can't wait for more! Bring on Paris, ooh la la!

 

 



Author's Response:

Yep, that Rob's a quick learner, lol. Marisa had to show off her "speciality" right? I stumbled on that Peaches pic of Rob and obviously had to use it. If he only knew, lol. Good theory on the missing condoms. Paris is just starting and "Oh, la, la" will probably be one of my chapter titles, so you're right on track there. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Summary:

Robert Pattinson changed her world with a kiss. Ashby Heaton, 'the friend' had been lost forever. What happens when he runs? What happens when she can't find him? And what happens when she moves on? He's 'Everpresent Everywhere' yet nowhere to be found.

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Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 40307
[Report This] Published: December 03, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010


Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Thirteen

What a rollercoaster of a dinner! Awkward silences, arguments, big discussions... whew!

And now Ashby's going back to London, Rob is going home with Kristen, and there's no more chapters! Waaaah!! Pretty please, with sugar on top, post the rest? I really want to know what happens!

This is such a wonderful story, Rainer. I sat down to read a couple more chapters and got totally caught up in it. And now I'm read the whole thing, so far. More please! :)

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Ten

Eeek! The trying on of the dress was hot! Rob's hand on her neck, on her back... sigh! And then, the note. Sigh! What a beautiful note from Rob. He loooves her.

Okay, so as "nice" as Parker is, she kinda needs to snap out of it. She's way too fun and sparky for him.

Loving this story, Rainer! x

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Eight

Ohhhh, poor Rob! He's heartbroken! But then again, he kind of deserves it, I think! And poor Parker. He's about to get quite a shock, I think.

I like Parker. He's lovely to her... But I kinda just want Rob and Ashby to get it on. Hehee. I'm bad.

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Six

OMG! They're getting married!? Parker, Parker, Parker... Whatever will Rob have to say about that?!

Clicking on next!

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Four

Eeeeeek!!

They kissed! Well, kind of. He kissed her, she kissed him back, and he freaked out!!? Grrr, Rob! Silly boy!

Can't wait to read more about these two. Loving it! :)

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue & One

Woo, what a great start. I love Ashby Heaton - she's a little firecracker, I think! Always go for the shins... She doesn't seem to take any of Rob's nonsense. Go girl!

And Annabelle the boy dog. Hehehee. You do make me giggle!

As for my favourite chick flick? Dirty Dancing, of course!! Squee!

Looking forward to seeing what their night brings!

-SwimmingBee x

 
Finding Forever by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1350]
Summary:

On her way to London, a broken Sarah Anderson meets the one person who can save her from her darkened existence. Their age difference is the least of their worries.  What will they teach each other and do you really have a second chance at forever?

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Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes Word count: 268155
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: February 14, 2011


Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39(Shabbyapple)

AUgfgdjhgjhhjgjhbhh!! Beth kissed him!!!

Gah, poor Sarah. Her old insecurities boiled to the surface so quickly. Even though she knew Rob loved her, she couldn't help but worry and let her defenses go up again. And why wouldn't she? Beth is a clever girl. Grrr!

Phew, I was so relieved when he finally called her. Even if she was drunk and big muscly Travis was there. But eeek, "She started it", Rob!? I'm with Sarah. What does that mean!? Uh-oh!

Ooh, the last part of the chapter nearly killed me. He's here!! Yay! Oh wait, no he's not. Boooo. Sigh, such a roller-coaster of emotions. You wrote this chapter so well. I can't wait to see what happens next... Something tells me it might not be good! Eeeek!

Sorry for my rambling review. I think I need to process the chapter a bit more. Loved it though, thank you! x

 



Author's Response:

Hi hun!

dlfjeojfald;fmad;sfkasfjdfn Yes! LOL

I love your reviews. I just love them! It's exactly how I felt when I wrote it-a full range of emotions for her and for him.

Oh, these two need to have a talk... that's coming up... (*whispers more EEEKs may occur*)

Lots more on the way.

XO

Les

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43(Shabbyapple)

Hmm, progress? A little bit, I think!

At least they're slowly starting to talk to each other - even if Rob is drunk and passing out. Her poor boys, so confused and sad. Sigh.

These past few chapters have been so beautifully written, Les. It must be difficult to write, but you've done a wonderful job.

I think Sarah and Rob will work things out. They have to, right!? They love each other! They're just stubborn and confused. But they'll get there, I'm sure of it. :)

Oh, and thanks for the shout-out, too!

Can't wait to read the next chapter. Some more gradual progression, I hope!

-SwimmingBee x



Author's Response:

Hi hun!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Progress...yep...it's best when it happens gradually!

These were hard to write, but also cathartic, if that makes sense at all.

Glad you are enjoying.

XO

Les

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42(Shabbyapple)

Oh, Rob Rob Rob Rob Rob!! What a mess he's made, for himself and for Sarah. 

This was a difficult chapter to read, but amazingly well-written. I could really feel Rob's pain and how much he's punishing himself over what he did. We're still not completely sure about what he did though, right? Am I being naive in thinking that maybe they just kissed and fell asleep? Grrrr!

Drinking himself into an oblivion is never going to help, but boys don't know that, do they? Lucky Sam took care of him (well, kind of... He listened, anyway!) and Kellan got his act into gear as well. Nick's certainly not afraid to tell it like it is!

But hehee! Rob did a body shot off Sam!? Heheheheee. I think we need an out-take of that one day! How funny!!

Such a sweet ending, falling asleep on the phone together. I don't know if any good will come from that the next day, but clearly, they both needed it at the time.

Amazing chapter, Les. Off to read the next one now!!

-SwimmingBee x



Author's Response:

Hi hun!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

He has made quite a mess! And you're right-drinking and boys-they don't get it! They really don't!

Glad you enjoyed hun!

XO

Les

 
Reviewer: SwimmingBee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38(Shabbyapple)

Yayyyyy!! I've finally, finally caught up!!

I looooove this story. I love Sarah and Rob's relationship. I love that in the beginning she was so reserved and just couldn't believe that thee Robert Pattinson would actually be attracted to her, let alone actually falling in love with her.

And now look! They're in love and missing each other desperately. Awww.

That being said, I was so pleased when she hung up on him. Eeek. Is that bad? He was so grumpy and demanding. Even Rob needs to be told off occasionally. Beth or no Beth! But grrr, what's she doing there!? Hopefully he tells her to leave, quicksmart!

It's so cute how he always writes, "It's Rob, by the way" in his messages. Hehee. I giggle every time.

Sigh! Such a lovely, hot, sweet story! Love it! 

Ooh, and thanks for the shout-out in the last chapter, too! You're lovely! :)

Can't wait to read the next chapter, now that I'm all caught up. I'm kinda glad my stomach is all icky and squirmy now, because I got to have a day off and catch up with your wonderful story!

-SwimmingBee x

 




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