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Penname: wickedvampires [Contact]
Real name: Melanie MacIntosh
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Member Since: May 30, 2010
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Paradox by spacey25 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 378]
Summary:

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Awesome banner created by Amber.

Bella is a newborn vampire that is unlike others of her kind. Changed by James, a centuries old vegetarian vampire who has an unhealthy obsession with making Bella his mate, she flees her life in small town Forks and heads to Chicago. Intent on using her new abilities to help people, she and her best friend Rosalie spend their nights walking the streets of Chicago, searching for people to save, find the missing, and bring criminals to justice. In a dark alley, she runs into Edward Cullen, a handsome, cocky, homicide detective who immediately is captivated by the supernatural beauty.

The two eventually come together to bring down a serial killer who is not human and Bella finds herself falling for the cop and his entire family, revealing her secret and putting them all in jeopardy. When tragedy strikes, Bella is faced with the difficult decision to bring others into her world or leave them to die, including the man she loves.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 135869
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2011 Updated: September 14, 2012


Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

oh god no!!!!! Oh I hope she doesn't leave him!!!! Keep writing!!!! :)

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

oh dear. Bella wake up soon. :(

 
My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 167]
Summary:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Can she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it make a difference that she is given to the Viking chief, Edvard, to be his bed thrall? Rated M for old time lemons.

Winner of the Adonis Award "Best Edward" in the Shimmer Awards.

Warning:  Bed thralls were common during the Viking Age in Scandinavia, when many women were captured during raids to become slaves. Consequently, this story contains non-consensual sex themes.  This is a historical piece of fiction and should be viewed in that context. I in no way endorse sexual slavery. It is a heinous crime.

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 39329
[Report This] Published: May 02, 2011 Updated: October 04, 2011


Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed
Date: June 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

this is one of the best stories I have read so far in FF. I can't wait to see the next chapter!! Keep up the awesome work.  OHHHH EDVARD!!!!

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oh a cliffie~~~ DOn't keep us in suspense to long. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

 
Summary:

 

One seconds loss of control and all is ruined. Trapped in her own body Bella needs to find a way to make herself heard.

A tale of love, loss and family.

Jasper/Bella Friendship. Eventual Edward/Bella romance.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Leah, Paul, Rosalie, Sam
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 112104
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2011 Updated: December 27, 2011


Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Alternate Ending

beautifully made story!!

 

 
Summary:

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the attractive and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story, From Hate to Heat, develops so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Who, exactly is reading Bella's/bellybeans' fanfic? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Hilarity/UST/Love and lemons.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 58 Completed: No Word count: 392379
[Report This] Published: June 21, 2011 Updated: April 23, 2013


Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Into the Lair

omg!!!!! what a cliffie!! ilove it!!!

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect

ooohhhh how did he figure where she was teaching at?? maybe i missed it at the beginning or something. I love cliffies. :)

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: When the S#!t Hits the Fan Fiction

oh that was epic!!! I can't believe Edward is reading her "anonomys" fiction and is realizing that is about  him..  It just blows my mind. Oh man I hope he doesn't say anthing rash to bellybeans in a review.

I just realized that your reviews just topped over 1000!!! Congratulations!! I am going to spread the word out to more of my fan fiction friends!! :)

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: McCarty Party of Five

oh Squeeeee!!!!This is turning out to be one of the best stories I have ever read after MOTU and the List. I am totally spellbound by it. Keep on writing!!! There are still a couple more chapters before your last update. Thank god!! :) squeeeee!!!!! BELLYBEANS!!!!

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks

hehehehe what a cliffie!! Cat is out of the bag!! Well partly I guess. lol. Better be some juicy hot tub lemons in the next chapter. Lol. Just kidding. i love your story!! Keep up the great work!!! Keep us laughing too!! :)

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Word Processing

oh squee!! You are going to tell us the dream word for word!!! RIght?? I loved how you made the reply to Stardusted from bellybeans. Totally down to the right words.

Your story line is amazing. I am anxiously waiting for your next chapter when you are ready. Keep up the great work. :)

 
Summary:

 

Thank you to ArtBeats+Life for the banner!

 

Written for Smut University's Back to School Fundraiser 2010.

 

Continued for SU's Back to School Fundraiser 2011.

Bella spends her summer cleaning houses and daydreaming about a certain green-eyed client she'd like to perform naughty fantasies with.


Thirty Dirty Days

It's going to be thirty days of smut. Thirty days of dirty, dirty cleaning. Thirty days of wild fantasies. All leading up to that one final conclusion we missed out in the original OS: Bella and Real Life Edward gettin' it on.

The conclusion will be submitted into PTB's Back to School Fundraiser Summer 2011 Yearbook. If you're interested, all you have to do is donate a minimum of $5, and you will not only receive my OS, but one shots from many authors around the fandom. For more information visit: www.projectteambeta.com

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 34565
[Report This] Published: June 22, 2011 Updated: January 17, 2012


Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Thirty Dirty Days--Day 30

awesome!!! I am totally weeping from this story.

PS I am actually a head housekeeper. ;)

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Thirty Dirty Days--Day 20

can't wait for the next chapter!! Whooo!!! hot and steamy!! Love fantasies!!

 
The Walmart Saga by up2late Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Edward moves to Los Angeles right out of high school in the hopes of becoming rich and famous. Instead, bad luck forces him to get a job at Wal-mart. When a hit tv show films at his store, a run-in with one of its stars changes everything. PWP/LEMONS! E/B


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 12162
[Report This] Published: July 18, 2011 Updated: September 05, 2011


Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

oh man!!!Happily waiting for the next one. Gotta change my undies now. lol



Author's Response:

Ha!  Can't say I've ever gotten that response before! Will post another one soon and they definitely have some more fun times ahead that I've just yet to write! ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Stolen Dreams by Shasta53 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 432]
Summary:

Bella and Edward were ready to become parents as seniors in high school, but tragedy ended their dreams and pulled them apart. Ten years later, they reunite, but all is not what it seems. ExB


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No Word count: 169508
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2011 Updated: November 11, 2012


Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

oh man Renee is going to disrupt the life there or will she be understanding??? Keep writing!!! love it!! :)

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

squeeee love lemons.   I hope Bella doesn't get to traumatized if she has to testify.  Be strong!!! :)

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

WOW!!! I love your story.  I can't wait to see the next chapter!!! Is Carlisle going to freak out??? Mentally chewing my nails!!!

 
Sins of my Past by content1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary:

Banner by the awesome angelgoddess1981!  You rock babe!

Bella was left by Edward to clean up the ruins of her life after his betrayal. What happens when Edward finds out that not all was as it seems. What are the consequences of his sins and what will he do to get her back?

TwifanfictionRec's - Top 10 Favourite Fics - October 2012


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 91 Completed: Yes Word count: 421991
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2011 Updated: January 14, 2013


Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Fences

oh squeeeee!!!! Need to have a Carlie POV soon. And of course an Edward POV as well. <3



Author's Response:

Edward coming up soon...just hang in there.  I'm trying to get the next chapter loaded tonight! 

Demetri sent to you...

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Observer

Oh pls make the next one a little tiny bit steamy!!! Squeeee!!!



Author's Response:

Steamy will come...just hang in there.

Aro sent directly.

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Vixen

ohh I think it is a good idea for Bella to take it a little slow but the chemistry is so strong between the two of them. Don't know if that is going to work out. Hmm. Love your last chapter. You keep it slow burning but with promises for the future. Their love for each other is undeniable. Keep up the great work!! :)

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Kisses of Acid

Squeeee!!! This is a great story!! I am way to anxious for the next chapter!!! Keep up the great work!!! <3

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Light

oh that is an awesome chapter!! Keep writing!!! Now she is going to see Edward's eyes all the time in Carlie's. ;)

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Orders

omg i am so sucked into this story!!! Keep up the great work!!!

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Beginnings

squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Oh I was just getting hot reading that and realized the chapter has ended!!! (pouting) and (panting) lol. Keep up the great work!!! next chapter really soon please!! Pretty please!!!



Author's Response:

Working on it tonight, but trying to get Aro/Tanya out.  Which by the way I'm sending to you!

content1

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Confessions

whew!! Huge sigh of relief that Edward has pulled through!!! Huge sigh of relief that Bella admits she loved Edward all along!! Huge sigh of relief that Edward hears her say it to him. Swooonn!!! Keep up the great work!! Your story writing is epic!!

 




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