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Penname: wickedvampires [Contact]
Real name: Melanie MacIntosh
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Addicted by lizzylillyrose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

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Her life was uneventful until she met a stunning, mysterious, obsessive man with a monstrous hidden past. What happens when the past catches up with him and throws them both into the unknown?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 262583
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2010 Updated: August 15, 2011


Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Captive

whoooooo!!! I am glad Esme is back. yay!!

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed
Date: August 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Finding Esme

oooooohhhhh the suspense is killing me!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! :)

 
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Date: July 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Morning After

omg!!! is all I can say. Can't wait to read the next chapter. :)

 
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Date: July 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Awakening

omg I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Will there be a happily ever after and a reconcilation with  Rosalie and Alice now that James is gone?? Your story making is epic. I loved every word of it!!!  :)

 
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 SECOND PLACE WINNER in the PICK-A-PIC CHALLENGE:


Bella is undergoing scary and wonderful changes. Will Edward, a DEA Agent, help her or is he going to be a meal?


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AU Rated M for violence


Validating beta...the wonderful nikkipattinson


 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 20474
[Report This] Published: January 25, 2011 Updated: November 03, 2011


Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Epilogue Part One

loved this so far. please don't take to long for the next anticipated chapter!!  Keep up the great work!!! :)

 
Summary:

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Bella is a successful romance novelist with a unique way of researching the hot and steamy scenes that are the essence of her books. When she moves to a new city and falls in bed with a man who is the physical embodiment of her latest fictional stud, will she be able to move past her meaningless hook-ups and finally get serious?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 122690
[Report This] Published: March 06, 2011 Updated: March 18, 2012


Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed
Date: June 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

this is by far the best chapter you have written. Very erotic!! Don't keep us in suspense too long. Can't let Mystery woman be too evasive from poor green eyes.  Keep up the great work!!!



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks so much! I appreciate the great compliment. I admit that I feel pretty bad for Edward... poor guy is getting pretty blindsided by Bella and his dick! Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

 

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This is The Parachutist’ sequel.

It is the summer of 1945 and the war in Europe has ended. Despite his transformation in a vampire, Edward has found his love again, has prevailed over his bloodlust and they have married. Now he is going back to America with his human bride, where they’ll join Carlisle’s family. How will be their life with the Cullens, when will it be the right moment for Bella’s transformation? Will the Volturi discover them, will they face new dangers?

This story is rated NC 17, as there will be sex and some violence. I am not going to put warnings on individual chapters. If you are under age you should not be reading it.

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 Raum made this beautiful blinkie for me

 

 

Make haste, my love, my soul, make haste and come back to me. It is time.

Bella's eyelids flutter open…

 


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 50983
[Report This] Published: March 07, 2011 Updated: July 18, 2011


Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Song of Songs

I only got this FF website a little while ago but I am telling you that I absolutely love your Parachutist stories. Loved them!! I can't wait for the epilogue of this one. You have done your homework for historical incidents and matched everything very well time wise. Wow  I am floored. Beautiful. Keep up the great work!! :)



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much. Yes, I do my research throughly. In the new vamp story I am drafting, happening in the Middle Age, I am doing my homework as well, down to the underwear people wore (or didn't wore) at the time ... well, if underwear has to be shed, we must know how to call it, LOL.

I will submit the epilogue today. I have only to choose the images that accompany it.

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Epilogue

I really loved your series of the Parachutist. You are a marvel at story making. I look forward to reading your new stories. Keep up the great work!!! Congratulations on completing this series. xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I too hope you will like my next story. It is not ready to post yet, though, because I want my stories practically finished before I start. I hate it when stories have long delays between updates, or are never completed and would not do that to my readers. So you will have to be patient: I'll try not to disappoint.

 
Summary:

One lie sealed his fate. He couldn’t look back and he couldn’t move on, but what happens when he finds out, sixteen years later, it was all a lie. Can he become the father she needs, and can she accept that she was really wanted? Canon pairings eventually.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: No Word count: 144782
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2011 Updated: May 12, 2012


Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

ooooooohhhh!!!! absolutely can't wait for next one!!! loveit.!~!!

 

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

don't wait too long to bring the next chapter!!! I love your story!!! squeeeeee!!! What a cliffie!!!

 
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Date: July 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love your story.... Make some romance soon with Bella and Edward... They are meant to be... :)

 
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Date: November 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

uh oh!!! patiently waiting the next chapter!!! :)

 
Summary:

Cause: Edward gives Bella exactly what she wants for her birthday.

Effect: He must leave her behind for good.

Effect: Bella disappears.

How will Edward survive without her? What other effects will there be for Edward and the rest of the Cullens?

Beginning with New Moon and taking a drastically different direction, this story is Edward's side of my first published story Consequences.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Edward
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Series: Effects and Consequences
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 59478
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2011 Updated: March 08, 2013


Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5- Paradise Lost

man what a great cliffie!!! anxiously waiting the next one!!! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks :) More coming as soon as the next chapter of Consequences (Bella's side of the story) is updated ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5- Paradise Lost

oh keep writing!! I love Edward's POV!! <3



Author's Response:

I kind of fell off the fanfic wagon. I don't plan on writing anymore past this story BUT I do have the whole thing waiting to post :) So more is coming soon!

 
Summary:

Edward and Bella share a class at the University of Washington-and not much else. She's shy and reserved as she adjusts to her new life in Seattle. He's angry and isolated because of his upbringing in LaVerrot, a secretive, gated community. They're drawn together, but secrets of her past, and revelations of his pure lifestyle, threaten to keep them apart.

There is mention of sexual abuse and rape in this story. Please avoid if this is a trigger.

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 95 Completed: No Word count: 618155
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2011 Updated: February 02, 2013


Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 67: Weary and Wary

hope you had a wonderful trip with your hubby and your boys. I went there about fifteen years back and enjoyed everyday of it. Will be taking my kids there in a few years when my youngest is about seven or eight.

Really enjoyed this chapter. Emo Edward. Love him!!!  :)



Author's Response: Thanks, sweets. We're actually leaving today ;) Our boys range in age from 7-12, so i thinik they're the perfect age. (baby girl is almost 3, so we decided to wait to take her in a couple of years). Thanks so much for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. --- see ya in a couple of weeks. Deanna (ilovealion) EPOV of PR

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 78: Pleasure

oooh that was a fuck haut chapter there!! I am so anxious that they get out of there before Aro does arrive. But alas this is your story and it must go on. Very anxiously awaiting your next chapter!! <3



Author's Response: I will go ahead and tell you... they have no plans to leave. They want to meet Aro head-on. Have no fear. We are HEA girls. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. We appreciate it... Until next time--- Deanna (ilovealion) EPOV of PR

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Trust Me

ooohhhh I can't wait for the next chapter. This is a very well written story. It was a little hard to get into at first but very well organized and plot only thickens more. Ahhh need lots more Edward but I will settle for Bella too. Keep up the great work!! squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review. I'm glad you stuck with the story!! We appreciate it. ----- See ya soon, Deanna (ilovealion) EPOV of PR

 
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Date: November 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Sealed Without a Kiss

omg i just chewed off all my long nails!! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!!! Squeeee!!!!



Author's Response: I'm sorry we made you mess up your manicure. lol We're working on the next two chapters, so we should update on time. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review. <3 Deanna (ilovealion) EPOV of PR

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Speculation

EACH CHAPTER GETS BETTER AND BETTER!!! I sincerely hope that Aro is not Edwards father but only you can tell how it will all unfold. Can't wait for the next chapter which is tomorrow!! squeee!!!

PS I went to see BD Pt 1 six times too. There were changes that I would have made but nonetheless the movie was still five out of five. The ending was epic (Bella's transformation). Chills!!! :)



Author's Response: Couldn't agree with you more about BD1. Loved it. --- Thanks so much for your kind words. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. The surprises that are ahead will probably knock your socks off... I can't wait to get the answers to you guys.--- <3 Deanna (ilovealion) EPOV of PR

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 72: Circle of Friends

I am both nervous and giggling with glee for the next chapter.  Nervous for what is going to happen to Bella or anyone now that they all know to some degree that Bella is in danger.  Excited that Bella is planning a tryst. Don't keep us in suspense for too long. Keep up the great story writing. Love it!! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. Te next chapter is going to be full of action and lemons. We're writing it now. Hehehe. I can't wait for the next lemon. It will be in BPOV. Thanks for taking the time to review. We appreciate it. 

Xoxo

Deanna (ilovealion) EPOV of PR 

 
Paradox by spacey25 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 378]
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Bella is a newborn vampire that is unlike others of her kind. Changed by James, a centuries old vegetarian vampire who has an unhealthy obsession with making Bella his mate, she flees her life in small town Forks and heads to Chicago. Intent on using her new abilities to help people, she and her best friend Rosalie spend their nights walking the streets of Chicago, searching for people to save, find the missing, and bring criminals to justice. In a dark alley, she runs into Edward Cullen, a handsome, cocky, homicide detective who immediately is captivated by the supernatural beauty.

The two eventually come together to bring down a serial killer who is not human and Bella finds herself falling for the cop and his entire family, revealing her secret and putting them all in jeopardy. When tragedy strikes, Bella is faced with the difficult decision to bring others into her world or leave them to die, including the man she loves.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 135869
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2011 Updated: September 14, 2012


Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

awww Bella dark days now. Hope it ends soon. And oh no James is still going to be a threat to her. Should have finished him off. lol. Every reader wants the villian killed off ASAP

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

oh man what a cliffie!! A dad??? Is it Leah? hmmmm

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

OHHHH CHILLS RIGHT UP MY BACK!!! I am so in love with your story. I wish someone had recommended this to me when you started writing it. Keep up the awesome work!!! :)

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

SQUEEEEE!!! *thud* oh man I love this chapter!!! :)

 
Reviewer: wickedvampires Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

ooooohhhh this looks too good to be true. A reversed persons story. This time Edward as human. Oh I am so excited!!! Looking forward to the next one!!:)

 




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