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Summary: 
After departing Forks with the rest of the Cullen family, Alice becomes increasingly preoccupied with the information revealed to Bella by James about her life as a human and the vampire who changed her. Told partially through flashback and through present-day (read: during the New Moon time span) events, Down The Rabbit Hole explores the details of how Alice comes to an understanding of her past.
"I read that letter, just last week You were telling me the darkness had taken you and it had only lasted a week I don't know where your saviour is... Check the back room He's writing the book that describes the end as you're passing this life Now I see it: it's a doorway It's a doorway to my love..."
The Streets Fell Into My Window - The Red Paintings
July 2009: Indie TwiFic Awards Finalist:
Best Canon Complete Best Characterizations (non Edward/Bella) Complete

Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Alistair, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: The White Rabbit series, Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 58669
[Report This] Published: September 30, 2008 Updated: October 22, 2008
Reviewer: spinner_extraordinaire Signed    
Date: August 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Run, Rabbit, Run
Wonderful.
The way he refers to her as his muse, and all the references to Alice's Adventures in Wonderland made me think maybe he was Lewis Carroll. But then, that was written half a century before, and even if he was a vampire who would still be around, Alice wouldn't. Unless... he could see her because he also had visions of the future?
Just a thought. Love the story so far.
-Spinner
Reviewer: spinner_extraordinaire Signed    
Date: August 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: A Grin Without A Face
Even better than the last chapter. Your writing hints at a more archaic theme, like I would find in epic fantasy, but it works well.
-Spinner
Summary: "It wasn't long before I started to get anxious, so by the time I walked into the cafeteria, I immediately targeted lover-boy, sitting alone at the new table as I had predicted.
Can I talk to Bella now?? I thought toward him frantically, grinning ear to ear and almost shaking with excitement.
He looked up at me, weary. 'Keep out of it.'
Well, I wasn't going to have to wait much longer. Fine. Be stubborn. It's only a matter of time, I reminded him.
He sighed, as if to say 'Trust me, I know.'"
When change occurs in an immortal's life, it is irreversible and exciting. When you can predict these changes, it's even more intriguing. But when you can't change a future that might be fatally dangerous... then there's a problem.
Although her past is unknown, Alice Cullen's future is even brighter. Visions of a newcomer - Bella Swan - bring pain, joy, conflict, and even love to the Cullen family's reclusive, tight circle.
Told once by Bella herself, Alice's Twilight is a take on Stephenie Meyer's first YA novel - from our favorite sister psychic's point of view. Written by MissBella over at Twilighted.Net and read by many, Alice's Twilight is sure to satisfy any fan-pire's literature thirst.
This is Twilight, from Alice's point of view. It's NOT one-shot, finally. :) I decided to try something new. I've done Bella's POV, Nessie's POV ( story on the way) ... so now, why not try everybody's favorite sister psychic?
Seriously, you can look up Stephenie Meyer's Midnight Sun and see the exact dialogue. That's where I got the base... haha ;)
I do not own Twilight, but it does own me ;) Twilight and all characters featured in this story belong to Stephenie Meyer, who everyone loves and adores.
Take a look! Hope you like it.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlotte, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 52828
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2009 Updated: July 07, 2010
Reviewer: spinner_extraordinaire Signed    
Date: August 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: 22. Epilogue - A Corner of Forever
I started this earlier today. I finished it before the day was over. I'm goood. ;) Sorry I didn't review for every chapter. I wanted to get on with the story––it was that amazing. I did rate every chapter, though. (See, I am still awesome, even though I slacked off somewhat!)
Dare I say it mighta sorta been better than Twilight?
...No, sorry, I won't. I'd rather not wake tomorrow morning to find some of the more... "enthusiastic" Twihards leaning over me with pitchforks and murderous looks. It would completely ruin my morning. (But if Eddie––sorry, I meant Edward––was around, he'd know my words were all lies... What can I say? Oh! I know: "It's all my avid Alice-Jazz love speaking, honest! Don't stab me with the pitchforks, please!")
But seriously. That. Was. Amazing. Not only was it well-written, the grammar/spelling and attention to detail was impeccable. (It breaks my heart when there's a good story one can barely decipher because it's only passably english.)
By halfway through, I was hoping there would be more. Like, say, New Moon... Eclipse... It wouldn't matter who's POV it was. You just blended both your words and SM's words together so wonderfully, it left me aching for MOOOORE. It was downright artful. *eyes you jealously*
Thanks for writing such an amazing, wonderful, FANTASTIC story––and for sharing it.
-Spinner Author's Response: hi!
wow, thanks so much for the awesomely long review! usually i get "good job." or "i like it, keep writing this." hehe <33 you made my day!!
okay... if you cant get enough of your alicexjasper (like me. :p) i just uploaded a new chapter of my other story called "fluff, feist, and feathers." chapter 3 is TOTALLY jalice :)) check it out!
thanks again! love youu <3
love,
mb =]
Summary: It's the summer before Edward is preparing to leave for college to start his future career in music when a very different kind of future is literally left lying on his doorstep.

Excerpt:
I was just dreading the day that he would come home and say;
"Mom, (insert name) is pregnant."
It would happen one day; I just had this terrible feeling that it would. I reached forward and opened the door still thinking about the thing I feared most. He would either tell me that or he simply wouldn't know and then one morning we'd wake up and find a baby on our door- my trail of thought was severed there. My eyes had looked down onto the step unconsciously following my thoughts and at first I thought I'd been imagining it because of the nature of what I'd been thinking. It was only when its quiet whimpers reached my ears that I realised it wasn't a figment of my imagination after all.
Rated for swearing, not sexual content...sorry :(
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 13956
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2010 Updated: September 16, 2010
Reviewer: spinner_extraordinaire Signed
Date: September 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: The Grandmother's Plan
Sorry it's been so long before I reviewed!
I really like this chapter :) Emmett and Bella's relationship is perfect!
-Spinner Author's Response: Dw I'm so stupidly busy i aint had time to do anything for both versions of this story! lol Thanks tho :) Would u be able to have a look at chapter 6? :)
Reviewer: spinner_extraordinaire Signed    
Date: August 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Wail of a Newborn
I loved it, even after having read it... *pauses to count* 5(?) times. Or was it 6?
Either way, it's still as awesome as ever.
-Spinner Author's Response: :D!! We need go over chapter three again :( My beta on here says I need to correct errors because there were quite a few in chapter 2 apparantly :( Thank you!! Your stories are awesome too!!! - Abbie :D
Reviewer: spinner_extraordinaire Signed    
Date: August 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Better Off Without Me
Very exciting stuff!
And you've got 28 reviews for 3 chapters already! Congrats :)
I'll be reading on, of course.
Best go look at ch 4 now... O.o
-Spinner Author's Response: Yes it is! lol Sorry its taken me ages to reply! I feel really bad I got distracted writing 22 :) which btw I'm gonna make stupidly long, hopefully like 5,000+ :D I'm about half way there :) You'll be getting that in your inbox soon lol
- Abbie :)
Reviewer: spinner_extraordinaire Signed
Date: August 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Mine or Yours?
I gotta say, I'm disappointed that I'm not the first reviewer. But I'll get over it. :p
I also gotta say, this story looks mighty fine framed by all the Twilighted web designs. I'm so glad you got accepted! Now I can read this *fantastic* story in style! :)
-Spinner Author's Response: :D It's only up here because of you and Zoe! You're both awesome as I have said many times since I got that email early this morning! :D I'm happy about being accepted too incase you hadn't already picked up on that! lol Oh and why is fantastic got *? are you trying to be like facebook and make it bold or are you being sarcastic ?? lol :P Thank you for reviewing cos you didnt have too! Abbie :)
Reviewer: spinner_extraordinaire Signed
Date: September 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Granddaughter on the Doorstep
Now I feel bad that I never looked over it! I'm sorry... I was just really busy. :/
But it's a wonderful chapter! I'll be better, I promise.
-Spinner Author's Response: Aww, don't worry. My validating beta sent me loads of articles on the things I was doing wrong :) I'll still make you check them but I think I'm getting better :)
Thanks :D Abbie :)
Summary: 
Alice and the rest of the Cullens are finally feeling situated in Forks, and a void in their family has been filled by the sudden appearance of Bella Swan. But what happens when an almost-fatal mistake occurs, and suddenly the Cullens must disappear?
As Alice balanced Esme's grief, Jasper's guilt, Emmett's somberness, Rosalie's lack of emotion, Carlisle's sympathy, Edward's deadness, and her own sorrow all at the same time, the rest of the Cullens must start over in a new town. She deals with the transition in her own ways, even when everything around her seems crazier than ever.
When a stroke of amazingly bad luck sends her back to Forks, she finds a surprising discovery, one that alters her life- and could very possibly set it straight again. In a whirlwind of broken hearts and mending friendships, things might just come back together.
The much-anticipated sequel to "Alice's Twilight" is finally here!
Thanks VERY MUCH to enchantedmind for the PHENOMENAL banner!! It's exactlyy what I was looking for:)
Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Gianna, Heidi, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 9305
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2010 Updated: March 22, 2011
Reviewer: spinner_extraordinaire Signed    
Date: October 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Decorations
Just as good as Alice's Twilight was.
I really love your portrayal of both Alice and Jasper. And everyone else, if I'm being honest... But Alice and Jazz are my favorites :)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
-Spinner
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