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Summary:  You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.
This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life? Would she have found happiness with Jacob? And would Edward be too late?
* First in a series of stories
~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~
~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~
Winner of:
Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards
Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges: Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No
Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 63: Separation: Bella's POV
I never really make commits or anything, but I just wanted to let you know that this is my first Jacob and Bella story with no Edward that I LOVE!!!!! I am 100% Team Edward, and I try and read stories about Jacob and such, but they never keep my attention. Your story is awesome!!! I hope you are very proud of it. I normally don't like both POV because they seem to not really go anywhere. Then again this one is perfect. The chapters aren't too long and you really don't write things twice. Again I love this story.
P.S. I love this story but, I can't wait for Edward to come back. I am very excited to see where you take him into this wonderful love between Jabob and Bella.
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 70: Honesty: Jacob's POV
I just happened to stumble across it. I think what really caught my attention was the pictures. Like I said before I am a 100% Team Edward, so actually reading this and loving it is kinda surprising to me. :)
Summary:
 What if the wolf pack hadn't interrupted Laurent before he bit Bella? This is the story of Bella being changed despite Edward leaving her to prevent it from happening.
Rated for later chapters. Just like in New Moon, Edward will make an appearance eventually!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 71429
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2008 Updated: November 24, 2009
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Visions
OH MY GOODNESS!!! I love Alice's POV!! That was awesome. I love the cliffe hanger. :)
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Revelations
Another great chapter, like always!!! I love how you jump from view point to view point. I love knowing what is going on from all different directions.
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Waiting
I do love Edward!!! :)
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Reunions
Bella is such a beautiful vampire. I hope you have her and Edward stay together of course, but I want her to him a piece of her mind for leaving her. LOL
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
I love how she slapped him and sent him flying!!! AWESOME
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Together, Forever
Laura, you are a wonderful writer. I cried when I read the part of her talking to Charlie in his sleep. OMG!!! The tears just started flowing and I couldn't stop them. You are great. :)
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Again short and sweet. I do LOVE Alice!!! :-D
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I will never look at a rest area the same again!!! :-D I love getting ideas from you. THANK YOU! :)
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I thought the chapter was a little short, but it was good. You didn't try to fill i with a bunch of crap. :-D I love removeable shower heads myself. :-P
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Accomplice
LOVE IT!!!! I am so happy Bella is comfortable enough to talk to Alice about stuff like this. I know how important it is to have friends that you can talk too. Also they give great ideas!!! :)
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Additions
I love the panties on the bed!!!! :-D I kind of did that to my my boyfriend (now my husband), but I put a used pair of panties in a ziplock and put them in his underwear drawer right on top. After a few days he asked me for another pair. LMAO :)
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Consequences
I have to agree, a wet Edward does deserve a review. I love how you go between different POV. Again I love Alice!!!!
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Unexpected
LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!! That is all I can say! :)
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Control
AWESOME!!!!! That is all I have to say! :)
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Music
She is getting through her list pretty fast!!! I love it! :) I am really enjoying this story.
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Teasing
I think that is a brilliant idea for revenge!!!
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Awesome as always. :)
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
You have done it again. :-D I can't stop reading this wonderful story.
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
You have done it again. :-D I can't stop reading this wonderful story.
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I love how she took control over the whole sun situation. He just needs to learn and I believe he is, that she can take care of him just the same as he does for her.
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: 7 Days
I know I have told you this before, but I love this story. I love a really Edward and Bella story that has Bella all sad and crap over Jacob. THANK YOU for making her wishy washy over Jacob and Edward.
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: The Wedding
I cried when it went to EPOV and he was explaining what her walking down the aile and such. OHHH It was great. I loved the wedding. It was GREAT!!! I loved how you put the URLs to the items. I loved looking at them. The house is wonderful. :) Thank you again for writing such a great story.
Reviewer: Littleblueduck Signed
Date: June 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Loved the pictures. I love the Isle Esme!!! :)
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