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Penname: vmaale [ Contact]
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Member Since: May 11, 2010
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Summary: 
NOW COMPLETE! We all wailed a collective 'ugh!' on the fade to black scenes during Edward and Bella's honeymoon, not to mention the frustratingly limited Jacob POV. This canon story fills in all the holes that were left by SM -- mostly from Edward's detailed POV.
Enjoy a captivating look at the romance, emotions, music and imagery of Bella & Edward's honeymoon, the struggles of the pregnancy, the bliss over Edward hearing the unborn child's mind, the harrowing birth, and finally Edward's joy as he bonds with Nessie during Bella's transformation.
Banner by the talented m81170
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 96645
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2009 Updated: December 29, 2011
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: June 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Forbidden Love
already love this fanfic :) Author's Response: Awesome -- cuz it only gets better! Thanks for leaving a comment and hope to hear from you again. Next chapter to be post very soon!
Summary: 
Edward and Bella’s first night at the cottage was the first chance for both to really make love as themselves. This story celebrates the beauty of their unfolding passion with copious lemons, and more importantly, lots of romance, intimacy, sweetness ... and a gradual surrender to their wilder natures.
Will Edward finally let go?
And if he does...
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 45428
[Report This] Published: February 08, 2010 Updated: October 11, 2010
Reviewer: vmaale Signed 
Date: October 03, 2012
Title: Chapter 6: The Hunt
pleaseeeeee update please
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: August 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: On Top
please update soon
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: May 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: On Top
I simply love love love this story
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm so glad that you do. I really bring alot of love to the story, so it's great hearing that it's loved. I appreciate you writing.
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: January 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: The Hunt
please updateeee Author's Response: Hi Vmaale,
I promise, I will finish this story eventually. But right now, is my last semester and I am trying to get my thesis done and graduate. I'm afraid creative writing has taken a back burner for the moment. I hope to get back to writing soon, but don't know when that will be realistic. Thank you for your patience and support. I promise happy endings and at least two more chapters of the story.
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: May 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: The Wedding Dress
the best chapter ever....
I liked a lot the EPOV...
just can't wait for the next one Author's Response: Thank you , thank you, thank you!!!
I'm so glad you did. I was even more nervous about doing a whole chapter in E dialogue.
I am planning the next chapter already. I hope to start writing on it next weekend.
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: May 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: The Wedding Dress
I've read this chapter again
I love it. <3<3<3<3
please post the next one quick Author's Response: Hello, I'm finally back to writing now. Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it.
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: October 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: The Hunt
very animalistic....
I like it
great chapter Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: July 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: On Top
please update soon Author's Response: I'm back to it now. Sorry for the long gap. RL has been doing alot.
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: September 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Tick Tock
I say " In & Out"
better have both :D
love it
I'm glad that you didn't gave up on this story cuz' I like it a looooooot Author's Response: Thank you!
No, I am not giving up on the story. This summer was just very busy and stressful. I couldn't get settled and get settled into the space I like to be in when I write.
I like your little pun there wth the in and the out...I'll see what I can come up ith for you :-)
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: May 31, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: The Hunt
please update
I can't wait
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: September 10, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: The Hunt
are you going to finish the story?
please let me know...
I love it
Summary: When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath.
Hurt/Comfort/Romance, ExB
***Gorgeous banner artwork (above) was made by the talented Fernanda. Many thanks to her for allowing me to use this masterpiece for my banner. View more of her work here***
 
Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Word count: 160351
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2010 Updated: November 21, 2012
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: October 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
please update soon Author's Response: I'm so sorry it's taking me forever to get the next chapter finished. My thesis stuff it taking up all of my time and I had several unexpected curve balls thrown at me. But I promise that I'm not abandoning this story. I'm working on it when I can. Thanks so much for not forgetting about me! It means a lot :-)
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: January 10, 2011
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
no, Renne should not find out about vampires
she might be very perceptive but soo much like bella
:D
& if you continue this story with the wedding & honeymoon it would be awesome
it would have a proper ending
hugs&kisses till next time
Author's Response: Hey thanks for your vote! You'll be happy to know that I decided NOT to have Renee (or Charlie) find out about the vampires.
I definitely do plan to take this story to the wedding and honeymoon, it just may take me some time, lol.
Thanks so much for your review and sorry for my late reply!
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: September 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
he is not alone???
who's with him????
I really really hope that jacob would die in the next chapter so bella can go back to normal....
I don't know if I can take more complications.... Author's Response: You'll find out in the next chapter!
Don't worry, everything will take a turn for the better VERY soon.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: August 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
what word????
I hope bella will be less jumpy & she will recover soon Author's Response: He he. You'll see in the next chapter :-D
Jacob will be dealt with VERY soon and then Bella will really be able to start healing fully :-)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: September 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
yes, Edward & Bella defenetly deserve a break
:d
I already see their future :
Bella healing, wedding, honeymoon and.......
BAM !!!!! Renesme
lol
can't wait to see some happy and funny chapters
by the way: this chapter was awesome !!!!!!! Author's Response: Ha, ha, yeah I think so too :-)
Yes, there won't be anymore surprises now. There will be some angst/healing but there is also going to be lots of E/B fluff thrown in along the way as well! I just love the fluffy stuff! :-) The action/suspense stuff is over. I enjoyed writing that as well but I truthfully think that the best parts of the story are still yet to come!
I'm very glad you enjoyed the chapter. And thanks for commenting on my video! Unfortunately it got deleted by youtube :( BUT I uploaded it again as an unlisted video. If you'd like, you can now access it by following the link here (hopefully it won't get deleted again): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JUgs65LCc2Q
Thanks so much for your review!
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: July 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
things keep getting better
that's gooooooood :)
they finally kiss after what happend....you 4shure made us all very happy Author's Response: Sooo nice to hear! Thanks so much!
Glad you enjoyed the kiss. It was an important scene :-)
Many thanks for your review! It truly means a lot to me!
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: October 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
hmmm Charlie & Renne...maybe they are together again
who knows...(you...lol)
& I am waiting for more intimacy between bella and edward
thank for updating
kisses Author's Response: He he, a lot of people seem to be thinking that about Charlie and Renee...lol
Thank you so much for sticking with this story and taking the time to review! It means so much!
xoxoxxo
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: July 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I hope nothing bad will happen when edward's hunting
love this story <3<3<3 Author's Response: Yeah, he probably shouldn't have asked that question at the end there, lol.
I'm so happy to hear it! Thanks so much for your review! I hope you continue to enjoy!
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: July 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
If it isn't Jacob in bathroon, then who???
I guess I'll find out in the next chapter... :)
I really really hope that Bella becomes more confident & open with Edward ( I mean at the kissing part..:D lol )
sooooo....great chapter <3
hugs & kisses Author's Response: Yep, you'll find out in the next chapter!
Yeah, she'll get there, but it will take some time.
Thank you so very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your review! BIG hugs and kissed to you! :-)
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: April 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I'm glad they are working things trough...
& I hope there will be more & more happy moments
luv ya :) Author's Response: Hello, vmaale! So nice to know you're still reading! Don't worry, things should be getting happier with each chapter! :-)
Thanks so much for the love! xoxoxo
I have just submitted the next chapter for validation, so it should be up soon!
Reviewer: vmaale Signed
Date: May 31, 2011
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I know it's gonna take some time for bella to get back to normal but I just can't wait :)
she & edward deserve their happy ending
take care & I'll wait for an update
hope it's gonna be soon
kisses
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