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Reviews by amvel
 
Summary:

 

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Bella Swan has spent a lifetime putting everyone else's needs before her own. Could a chance encounter with a mysterious stranger begin to change all of that?

Warning: Some dark scenes and subject matter at times, will try to post warnings on each necessary chapter.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 172047
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2010 Updated: March 16, 2011


Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Come Undone

loved it!!! it is getting better and better. i hoping a name slips soon. *wink*



Author's Response:

Haha! No way am I gonna bring this down with a little oopsy name slip. Nice try, though! ;-)

 
Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: July 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Metaly of Unfinished Songs

I loved this chapter!! I so want them to bump in to each other at the hospital and sort it out from there.

FYI - your playlists are super! I've downloaded quite a few of the songs!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the music!!

 
Summary:

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College student Bella decides to branch out and take an art class for fun.  Edward is looking for a model for his BFA exhibit.  What happens when they get a good look at each other?  All human, canon pairings.  Yum Yum!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 42532
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2010 Updated: November 06, 2011


Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: August 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Sparky Strikes Again

OMG!!! Where did you go??? I am dying here!!!



Author's Response:

okay, love, deep breath!

sorry i didn't respond earlier.  it slipped off my radar.

anyways, chap 7 just posted a few hours ago, so you should be good (i hope!!!!) for awhile.

thanks for reading and caring!

--jen

 
Summary:

A feisty girl with a sharp wit and sharper tongue, eighteen-year old Bella Swan finds herself forced into a life in London that she never wanted. In a revolt against high society, she travels to the seaside to spend the summer with her petulant godfather. But now, instead of escape, she finds herself being pushed into a marriage with the appalling Lord James.

When chance leads her to a pirate boat anchored for rest, she is captured and brought aboard. The arrogant and handsome pirate captain, Edward Cullen, sets the terms that she will learn to be a member of his crew, and will only be released when he feels he can trust her with his ship's location. 

While Bella begins to enjoy the life of piracy, and strike up a heated romance with the Captain, Lord James will not take his intended fiancé’s disappearance very well… nor will he give up until Edward is hung from the highest tree in England.

 

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Thank you to Frozensoldier for the new banner!


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 34869
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2010 Updated: August 29, 2010


Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am so glad your back!!! I am completely addicted to this story!!! Can't wait for the next chapter now that we know your well again!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much *blushes*!! 

PM teaser coming soon! ;D

 
Summary:

Edward Masen has lived the life of a nomadic vampire, travelling with James and Victoria since he awoke as an immortal. His ability to read minds has had the unusual side effect of making him a vampire with a conscience. Despite the ridicule from his coven mates, he's confident he's making the best of his existence and doing what's morally right... until he stumbles upon a brown-eyed girl reading in a meadow in Forks. As he attempts to befriend her and learns more about the sleepy town of Forks, Edward finds there's a lot more to being a vampire than he ever thought possible.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, James, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 276627
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2010 Updated: June 26, 2012


Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: September 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Enlightened

i think the story is going great!! i loved the backround on the cullens and the connction. i am glad you added it.

looking forward to more!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks :) Now that it's out there, I agree, it needed to be done :)

 
Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: September 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Frantic

OMG! OMG!!! Totally understand the why's of this chapter!!! I am excited - can not wait for the nexr. Keeping my fingers crossed he dumps James and Victoria.

He knows Alice??? I am so intrigued!! :)



Author's Response:

A lot will be revealed in the next chapter when it comes to Alice :) The James and Victoria issue might take a little longer to be dealt with ;)

 
Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: September 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Threatened

that was wonderful! my heart is singing! can not wait for the next chapter and more of the cullen connection!! :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter :) The next chapter will be all about the Cullens. It's already submitted and waiting for validation, so it shouldn't be too long :)

 
Bella? Marie? by Nyomi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1290]
Summary: Feature

ON HIATUS. [sorry guys :-(]

Bella (22) longs for love and acceptance, yet her fear of rejection keeps her guarded and single. Her craving to feel needed is fulfilled by working as a live-in nanny to Rosalie, who's a single mom to four-year old Henry.

For months, Bella has been secretly infatuated with Rosalie's ex-husband, Edward (29), but he barely acknowledges Bella during their brief encounters. That is, until one night when she bumps into him at a club.

However, he doesn't recognize her at all.

Afraid for her job, she tells him her name is Marie. He acceptes her pseudonym, and feeling safe with anonymity, Bella reveals her wild side. 

She makes the most of the night, but what happens when he tries to find the mysterous Marie?

When Mr. Cullen gets to know Bella, will he still want Marie?

How will that one incredible night shake their worlds?

AH/OOC/MA

*Rated for language, adult situations and sexual content from early chapters.

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 129626
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2010 Updated: September 30, 2011


Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: August 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Massage

It was better than what I was hoping for!!! So sensual, I loved it. Can't wait for that first real kiss, it's going to kill them, and me!!!



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you liked the chapter and that it was more than what you'd hoped for! Thank you so much for reviewing  :-) Chapter 12 is coming really soon, but here's a little taste to wet your appetite until then! It's from Bella:

 

My smile faltered as I got the feeling I was being watched. Cautiously, I raised my eyes and was instantly met with Edward's twinkling gaze. His happy expression quickly vanished, replaced with one of indifference as he stood behind the far end of the island counter. He looked down at the countertop, loudly clearing his throat, his eyebrows knitted together in a tight frown. His serious demeanor instantly engulfed us in an uneasy, awkward silence.

 

Quickly helping Henry to his feet, I dragged myself up from the floor, brushing my jeans off and straightening my plaid flannel shirt. I tried to ignore how my chest was constricting around my rapidly beating heart while nervousness rolled coldly in my stomach. The lighthearted and cheerful atmosphere quickly became so heavy and tense, it was suffocating.

 

 

 
Summary:

Suspicions 1

 

Suspicions 3

 

Geeky Bella has a theory. She suspects that popular Edward Cullen is not who he claims to be. Being one not to let things go, she decides to investigate. Are her crazy speculations true or will she be left feeling foolish? Most importantly, how far is she willing to go to prove herself accurate? OOC

 

Huge thanks to palewhite_n_icecold, babistarr and writegina2 for their awesome banners!

 

Suspicions 2

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 77833
[Report This] Published: May 10, 2010 Updated: April 09, 2011


Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: December 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: To Sleep, Perchance To Discover?

well, yes, it will drop with long waiting time on updates. usually when there is a long wait, the assumption is the story is abandoned, writers block, or author lost interest. it's sad because many do follow the stories but we learn to live with it when that happens and wind up moving on to another story to follow.

i, on the other hand, do not like the long waits and do get frustated, but always come back when there is an update!

i love your story and always hope the wait won't be to long. i follow you on FF as well, updates are faster there.

looking forward to your next chapter and more of edward and bella craziness!!!

missedf you, but still with you!

 
Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: August 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: You Won't See Me Going Up Against Any Windmills

This is getting better and better! You have quite the imagination!!! Looking forward to the next update. :)

 
Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: July 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Charging Particles Is A Hard And Long Process

this story is hysterical!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

and thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: June 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Strange Case Of Dr. Swan And Mrs. Cullen

What happened to my story????

 
Summary:


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I'd been dissatisfied more times than I could count in the past two years, which probably wasn't a bad thing. Usually, it just meant another long month of disappointment on my part when we realized the new batch of women were no good. We'd found several candidates that fit our needs, but as was often the case, they lacked that certain spark I'd personally been looking for. It didn't matter, though; I always had a lot of fun deciphering through the rejects.

 

It wasn't about promiscuity; it wasn't about experimentation, although we did plenty of that. Our program was about learning how to find sexual pleasure, adapting to different methods, and finding that one person who chemically and physically matched us to perfection.

 Rated NC-17 for graphic lemons, sexual/adult content, and foul language. Canon couples...eventually.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Garrett, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 108433
[Report This] Published: May 18, 2010 Updated: March 02, 2012


Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 The Consorts

Great story - hoping your getting to the point soon!!!!  :)



Author's Response:

Wow... she just got to the party, my friend. Can't rush passion. Eddie's coming in the next chappie :D

 
Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The Mated

Personally, I have no creative ability and applaud all the authors who spin these stories. I find them fascinating and highly addicitive. But like a good tv show, when they take certain turns, no updates, and just seem to chug a long, it is frustrating. Very much for me who has no imagination and live vicarously through the stories!

Here's hoping chapter 9 gives us a smile on one level or another!! :)

 

 

 
Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: August 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 The First Experience

Holy smokes!!! No warning??? Slash - was not expecting that!

Been following off and on since the start, guess I'll be on for a bit just to see where your going.

You are definately full of surprises. :)

 
Summary:

College professor Edward Cullen is thoroughly annoyed by his student Ms. Swan. Everything about her bothers him, and he longs for the semester to be over. But what happens when he meets her one night when they aren't in school? Lemons and naughty language

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 78065
[Report This] Published: May 23, 2010 Updated: July 31, 2011


Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: June 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i like it, he is so adorable! i would love to see him take a littlwe control and shock her!!!

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Forks and Bella behind after the incident with Tyler's van. Now, five years later, he finally returns to his family and the Pacific Northwest. While picking up his latest Swedish automobile, he is confronted by a very familiar scent. Will Edward be able to fight the pull his singer has on him a second time? Or will he stick around long enough to find out What Drives Her?

AU after Chapter 4 of Twilight, Original Characterizations, Canon couples.  

Banner by Jen!

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Banner by TAmmyAZ!

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Embry
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 246355
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2010 Updated: November 13, 2011


Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: September 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Only Exception

aahhhh....such a sweet chapter - i am so glad!!! so looking forward to more of this story!!!

many blessings on your husbands safe return -



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the well wishes!  I'm happy you  enjoyed the chapter.  ;-)  Ginnie

 
Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Sway

what a fabulous chapter. so sweet and intense at the same time. been folloeing from the start and you never disappoint! love the whole path the story is following as well as the focus. looking forward to more!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for staying with the story from the beginning, I appreciate that so much. 

Thank you as well for your review, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!  :-) Ginnie

 
Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: September 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Stay

Oy!! Damn wolves!!! But now we know the stupidity they will stretch too. Glad you explained where it was coming from.

I love this Edward, so very different that usual angst written charater of the norm. And Bella is quite believable as well.

Nice job on the flowe as always!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  It's a joy to have these characters embraced.  I try...

UNtil next time! :-) Ginnie

 
Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: August 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Riding In My Car

Ecellent chapter, so worth the wait. Great storyline, so different than than the usual you see here. Keep going! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  All very nice things to hear and I appreciate the continuing reviews!  ~Ginnie

 
Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: August 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Me & You

You are now one of my favorites! I am really enjoying this story. I love the new Bella, much stronger than the usual stories presented but strong in way without being callous. Such a nice balance. Your flow is so enjoyable and I have no attention span what so ever, you have me hooked!!!

 Kudos to your talent!!!! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I appreciate your kind words and the thoughtful review, more than you know!  Hugs, Ginnie

 
Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: September 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Deals Off

Moronic wolves - always interferring with true love and losing every time! LOL!!

Great chapter as always!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!!  Moronic... yes, that's a bit true.

Thank you for reviewing.  I truly appreciate it!  Ginnie

 
Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: March 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: The Cullens Part 2

OK, now I am scared!! You never taker this long on an update!!! Your aren't abandoning the story are you - I don't think I can take the disappointment. Your one of four stories I follow now becaue of things like that. please say it isn't so!!!



Author's Response:

Hey there Sweetie!

 

NO, absolutely, NO!  I am not abandoning this story.  Quite, the opposite in fact.  I'm working on finishing it.  It's just been a little tricky to wrap everything up and I wanted to make sure i had it right before I began posting again.  Unfortunately, Twilighted doesn't give me an option to post Author's Notes, so I've had no way to send word out that I'm still alive and kicking.  Or typing, as the case may be. ;-)

SO... I appreciate you contacting me.  Maybe a few people will check the reviews and see this. I can't give you an exact date on the next chapter, but I hope it will be posted no later than Sunday. 

As a bonus, here is a small teaser from the next chapter.  Thank you for reviewing and checking in with me!


From Chapter 24 of What Drives Her:

                "You're dad's coming back," I said quickly.  I tucked a strand of wayward hair behind Bella's ear and smiled crookedly at her, hoping to make it look as though we hadn't just been having a serious conversation.

                Bella blushed and pushed my hand away.  "No dazzling in front of my parents, please," she whispered.

                Her words caused me to start laughing lightly, and I was chuckling still when Charlie finally appeared from the kitchen.  Renee coincidentally made her way back down the stairs about the same time. 

                "Well, Sue is insisting she take Seth home immediately," Charlie announced.

                "What?  Why?" Renee asked. 

                "He has the flu.  I guess it's pretty bad.  High fever.  Throwing up.  The whole nine yards," Charlie answered, rubbing the back of his neck. 

                "Charlie, if you go back to Forks now, you may not make it back here in time for Bella's graduation," Renee said, her voice concerned.

                "Not to worry, Ren.  Seth has his own car here," Charlie soothed her. "Sue will drive him down in that."

                "Oh, thank goodness..."  Renee put her hand over her heart dramatically, making Bella shake her head and Charlie roll his eyes.  Renee noticed the gesture and began stammering.  "I mean, it's not good that Seth is sick, or that Sue can't make it to the graduation, but... oh, you know what I mean."

                "Yes, Renee.  I understand," Charlie chuckled. 

                Bella laughed quietly along with him, but her smile didn't quite reach her eyes all the way.  I squeezed her hand gently, and was not at all surprised when Renee sat down on the other side of her daughter and put her arm around Bella's shoulder.  I sat back a bit to allow her to comfort Bella. 

                "Don't worry, baby.  Seth will be fine.  He'll be over it in a week or so," she murmured.

                Bella smiled at her mom and nodded, but didn't say anything which just made Renee nudge her shoulder and lower her voice so she was whispering softly right above Bella's ear.  "Besides, I'm pretty sure you happen to have the hottest boyfriend in all of Seattle right now, so you don't get to be morose." 

                And even though I shouldn't have been able to hear, Bella knew immediately that I had, and her sputtering, red-faced response had me fighting very hard not to laugh. 

                Unfortunately for all of us, when Renee began laughing at her daughter's reaction, it drew Charlie's attention and he looked from the girls to me in question.  I shrugged, but not before he noticed the odd expression on my face.   

                "Everything okay over there, Edward?" he asked suspiciously.

                "Oh, yes...  Fine, sir.  I just had something stuck in my throat for a second."

                "I'll bet you did," Bella muttered.  When she finally turned her face to look at me, I honestly couldn't help but grin widely and wink at her.  Predictably, it turned bright red once more. 

 

 
Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: December 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Choosing Sides

this was my favorite chapter. wonderfully done. and though i hate waiting on updates, this was truly worth it!

i hate the wolves and am so glad they are as mornic as they are and bella is strong and knows what she wants!

i am not even going to try and guess what comes next, i know it will be fabulous!!!



Author's Response:

Wow... thank you.  After all that went in to it, your comment really means a lot.  I'm sorry for making you wait... thanks for forgiving me! :-) Ginnie

 
Reviewer: amvel Signed
Date: December 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: In The Sun

What a wonderful chapter!!! This is my 2nd favorite chapter!!! I am sure next will be just as good. You have such a great flow going on and it will be worth the wait for the holidays. I will patiently wait, no grumblings as I understand you are not my personal story teller, though, maybe Santa will see otherwise ;)!!!

I love that your Bella is not sappy and knows what she wants and does not tolerate Edward controlling everything. Seems the shoe is on the other foot and she controls him. Love It!!!!

Wonderful chapter, big hugs to you!! Happy Holidays!!



Author's Response:

Ah, thank you so much!!  You guys did it by the way-- 402 reviews as of today!  Poor Santa never even had a chance. ;-)

Thanks again, Ginnie

 




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