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27 y/o aspiring writer, sushi fiend, and student.


 


 



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Love Comes by stacylambert Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 457]
Summary:

The Cullens return to Forks to keep an eye on a new generation of Quileute shape-shifters. They find this new pack of wolves to be not only large, but led by the impulsive Jacob Black. When Edward falls for Bella Swan, who just happens to be Jacob's girlfriend,what will happen between the Quileuetes and the Cullens ?

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Aro
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 79824
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2009 Updated: January 23, 2010


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Christmas Gifts

oh damn fluff chapters.

They make me all giddy inside!

Well done!



Author's Response:

Hehe.

Thanks for the review. :-)

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Confined Spaces

YEAH!  KILL JACOB! I'm glad someone finally had the guts to do it right.
lol!  Great chapter!  Epic!  I wonder how Charlie is gonna cope as a newborn.  We all know Bella has incredible self control..but what about Charlie!

and the waiting begins...



Author's Response:

LOL! I can't believe how well people are taking Jacob's death. Sounds like you didn't mind much ;-)

I can't give anything away about Charlie quite yet, but you will find out eventually. I mean... if he makes it. Shh!

I promise the next wait won't be so long, but if it is you all have permission to hunt me down with pitchforks.

 
Summary:

"Disarm you with a smile,
And leave you like they left me here,
To wither in denial.
The bitterness of one who's left alone.
Ooh, the years burn."

       -Smashing Pumpkins, Disarm

This is an alternative plot to when Bella is on the cliff, picking up from the top of page 358 of New Moon. Bella does not rush back into Edward's arms. Bella struggles a great deal with depression, anxiety, and esteem. Several characters may be slightly OOC in that they use occasional profanity.

 

"This story contains incidents of self-harm. If this is disturbing to you, please do not read."

 

What if Bella broke down on the cliff and truly tried to kill herself? What if Edward got the news in a different way and hadn't gone to Volterra? Where would it leave Edward and Bella? Where would it leave Bella and Jacob? This story will be an angst filled alternative, but I do believe in happyish endings.

 

 Thank you for the banner, Roonie!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Harry, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 28947
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2009 Updated: August 11, 2009


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Nobody's Home

whoa!  Awesome!
Poor Bella :( Jake was just trying to do the right thing.

Hurry!  Update quickly!

 
Summary:

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Lt. Edward Platt, a German soldier, has been assigned to the Auschwitz Prison Camp. He learns much more than the horrors of war and falls for a beautiful Jewish girl named Bella. Can Edward save Bella before they both become ashes in the sky?

Rated NC-17, AU/AU, Romance/Angst, Historical, OOC, ExB, HEA

ALL MUST READ:

This story has a backdrop of WWII and the Holocaust. It is a love story between a German soldier and a Jewish prisoner of war. I am Jewish so this setting is something that is a part of my family's history. I would never disrespect the Jewish culture and history nor my family's history.

There's no rape, coercion, etc, of any kind in this story. There is a scene with dominance, but not rape. Rape is a serious crime that should never, ever be confused with dominance. Never at any point in this story, does Edward use his position to force Bella to have sex with him. Bella gives her consent freely and truly wants to love Edward and have him love her in return. Again, it is a love story.

If anything about this story confuses or bothers anyone for any reason, please contact me or visit the thread: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=4718. There is no need for harassment, insults or general bashing. I will not hide nor take down any stories solely because some people have chosen to make false accusations that are both hurtful and disrespectful to all those involved. This story is my gift to those who have been following my writing. I am leaving this story up for those who have read and appreciated it. If you don't like this story, then please simply don't read it.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read this note and thank you for reading Ashes in the Sky. I sincerely appreciate those who see the beauty I put into the story.

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psymom, Twilighted Owner/Administrator
Twilightzoner/Validation Beta
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7932
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2009 Updated: June 20, 2009


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Ashes in the Sky

Okay I, like many others, read about the controversy with this story.  I don't see anything that even hints at rape.  What the heck is wrong with those guys?  I think they just wanted to stir up controversy.

Now on your story:  I absolutely love it!  It's a beautiful story mixed with so much pain.  I think you did a wonderful job encorporating life in concentration camps into this story.  I got clear visuals of everything.

I hope that those people leave you alone and let you continue writing.  Dude, if something says NC-17...what do you think is gonna be in it?

Great job!

 

 
Summary:

 

THIS STORY HAS BEEN PUT ON HIATUS. At least until september-october 2010. I am getting married in august and it's hard to plan a wedding and write at the same time. I applaud those who can do that. I am NOT giving up on this story and I WILL finish it. Eventually. Thanks for understanding.

After Edward left in New Moon, Bella changed. She changed everything about herself in hopes of forgetting him. She graduated and moved down to California. The one place she knew she would never see the Cullens. 4 years later, she is now known as Elle Swan, a successful interior designer. What happens when she is sent somewhere else for her job?

 

Thank you to heatherdawnc for the banner!

Favorite review so far:

Ahh... so good!! A perfect mix with fluff and reality, you're soo good at writing that I gets envious *envious sigh*.

Have I told you how good this story and idea really is. There are many different stories where Bella changes her personality drastically after Edward left. And of all those stories I have been reading I think you are the one that has captured Bella's personalty best. Many of the stories have changed Bella that much that if she wasn't namned Bella you shouldn't know it was her, but you, even if you see the big changes, you can find the Bella how she was shy, sweet and madly in love with Edward four years ago. With another words - I think you are the one that have captured Bellas character best.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 69614
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

awwww i love this story!  haha!  Cassie is so awesome!  She makes me laugh almost as hard as Emmett!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I love Cassie. She's just so fun! I'm stoked that she makes you laugh almost as hard as Emmett! Thank you for that and for the review!

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

hahaha!

I love Alice so much!  She is a force of nature!



Author's Response:

Haha, she definitely is! Thank you for the review!

 
Full Moon by seanchaidhe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

What if, instead of trying to distract Edward with kisses on page 51 of New Moon, Bella and Edward had actually talked about what was bothering him? Would Bella have been able to talk him out of questioning his place in her life? Full Moon is my AU version of Stephanie Meyer’s New Moon that answers the question: what might have happened to our star-crossed lovers if Edward had not left Forks for parts unknown?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 3853
[Report This] Published: June 22, 2009 Updated: August 31, 2009


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Stitches

whoooooooooo! awesome!

 
Re-Born by shelbielyncullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 389]
Summary:

 

You said you wanted forever.

You said you wanted me.

You said you'd never leave.

****

Set in the perpetually dark times of New Moon and many years beyond, and shedding a new light on the story, Re-Born provides a sick and twisted alternative to what was written by Stephenie Meyer.

****

After a terrible accident, Bella is changed into a vampire without her consent. Her transformation sets off an unforseen chain of events that no one is prepared to live with. In the end, some just can't hold on...

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WARNING: This story contains sex, violence, and high amounts of foul language. Not recommended for those with weak stomachs. ALSO, this story is VERY high-energy and VERY fast-paced. If you can't roll with the punches, I suggest reading something else.

-Shelbie Lyn Cullen


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Athenodora, Bella, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Marcus, Other Character, Rosalie, Sam, Sulpicia, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 40543
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2009 Updated: December 23, 2009


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The End

OOOOOOOO

I like it so far!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it!! Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Repetition

AWESOME POSSUM! I loved it!

I swear, Edward's a few paragraphs away from sprouting a uterus and crying.

Love the story



Author's Response:

thank you very much! oh, just so you know, I LOVE when people say awesome possum!! :D

and honestly, the more I think about things..well, the more annoyed I am with Edward. It'll all come out in the next few chapters. Haha.

thank you for your praise!!

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Adrenaline

awwwww yay!  hmmm this should definitely get interesting!  



Author's Response:

the next chapter I think is going to be the best yet :D

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Third Wheel

wow!  I think its great!  Please keep going!



Author's Response:

I absolutely plan on it. Outline of the next chapter is already done :)

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Killer

wha?!  So it this an ExB story?  Cause I know they didn't burn Eddie's body so he has a chance to come home.  And the last part hints at that...

grrrr!  Cliffies!

Great story tho



Author's Response:

It IS an E/B story, but the 'E' is not for Edward ;)

But you're right that Edward gets to come home :D and I'm not a huge cliffhanger person, so there won't be TOO many :)

Thanks for reviewing.!

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Family

WHO COULD NOT WANT EMMETT??

Seriously!  The man exudes sex! lol!



Author's Response:

THANK you. I totally feel the same way :D

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Pressure

HAHA! GO EMMETT!!

I really enjoy your writing and glad you have this story up.

I cannot fathom that someone was so immature to say "this sucks".
That is totally disrespectful.  I hope they read this and know that they
should be embarrassed.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your wonderfuls reviews and your ever-generous rating :)

 
Summary:

SEQUEL TO 'DANCING WITH DEATH'

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"But that was the joke. I was invisible. No one could neither see, nor hear me, if I didn't want them to. It just so happened, however, that I wanted nothing less from Bella. I wanted her to see me, just not yet."

 Do you ever get that tingling sentation going down the back of your spine? Making you feel paranoid, like there's someone watching you? The type that makes your heart rate quicken, your lungs stop working and makes you turn around quickly only to find that there's no one there? Well.... what if your pulse pounds, your breath hitches and your hair stands on end because there is someone there? What if you just can't see him? What if the predator lurking in the shadows was, in fact, invisible? What then?

 

Well, Bella, in the wake of everything else that's been happening to her, is about to find out.....

 

*WARNING: CONTAINS DARK THEMES*


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 44351
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2009 Updated: January 17, 2010


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Unseen View

ooooo i read the first one and loved it!

I can't wait to see what u do with this one!



Author's Response:

Thank you for coming back to read the sequel. I'm so glad you enjoyed DWD so much. I hope you enjoy IP just as much! :) Thanks for reviewing. Hopefully I'll be able to get the next chapter out soon.  

 
Coming Home by Dumblydor Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella behind after the incident with Jasper, and doesn't come back. Bella tries to move on with her life, but one day comes face to face with her past, and is changed. So, what happens after she returns to Forks years later, and finds the Cullens again? Read and find out.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 1599
[Report This] Published: July 04, 2009 Updated: July 25, 2009


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Home

Heya, so what happened to this story? Still workin on it, or has life taken ya away?  If it did then I totally understand :)

 
Disillusionment by Bkwrm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 135]
Summary:

Set in New Moon. A series of betrayals has left Bella bitter and alone.

With the threat of Victoria looming, she takes desperate action to protect herself and the people of Forks; setting off a chain of events that may lead to tragedy.

The Cullens' "perfect family" slowly unravels as long-hidden resentments come to the surface.

What happens when those we love show their feet of clay?

NO RAPE.

Don't own, (I wish I did!) don't sue!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 14475
[Report This] Published: July 05, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2010


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh yes, twirl your mustache while you give us a cliffy.

I love it!



Author's Response:

Mwa-ha-HA!!! *Rubs hands together gleefully with Evil Smile*

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OH MY GOD, ROSALIE IS SUCH A B%TCH!

Grrrr, you know, I almost hate her more than Tanya.

Great writing! I love the story!



Author's Response:

LOL, I wonder why people hate Tanya. She never actually DID anything (in canon) but lust after Eddie. And she has a lot of company!

Rose on the other hand... is about to get her head handed to her.  

 
Beautiful Lies by tmr Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1086]
Summary:

Emily Haines, Our Hell, Dir. Jaron Albertin

In her incoherent state after Edward leaves her in the forest, Bella's sleeping lips betray her: "Edward is a vampire and I will be one too."  Although the story opens in a mental hospital, it quickly leaves after the first chapter and never looks back...  AU/Dark:  This is not your typical AU-New-Moon story line.  The first few chapters are somewhat normal, but the story then takes a quick and hard turn into a very AU.

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Alistair, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Gianna, Irina, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Leah, Makenna, Renata, Renee, Rosalie, Sulpicia, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4291
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2009 Updated: September 15, 2010


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

Oh my gosh, that was so awesome!  Myself, I love dark chapters and such.  I look forward to your next update with great anticipation.

:D



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing.  I was worried I might lose some people with this chapter - it is not exactly rainbows and unicorns after all - so I've been thrilled and relieved with the response so far.  

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

whoo!  Awesome chapter!  Can't wait for the next one

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Keep reading and reviewing please : )

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

AWESOME!  I LOVED IT!  AWWW

its like she's projecting her thoughts to them or something.

wow, update soon!



Author's Response:

Yes, exactly!  Your review made me so happy.  Thank you.

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

oooooooooo gettin interesting!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

coolness, loving the story!



Author's Response:

Thanks so very much.  I appreciate you reading and taking the time to review.

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 24, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

Oh yeah Carlisle!  You tell him! 

haha!  I knew he had some bada$$ in him somewhere!



Author's Response:

Thanks!   My Carlisle has all the same compassion, but also equal amounts of fierce protectiveness over his family.  And, truth be told, I think Carlisle's character is too flat most of the time - I agree with you that he has some serious badass in him.  :)

 
Failure To Thrive by Julesnerd Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 686]
Summary:

Bella remains sexually unfulfilled after three separate liaisons with “boys” instead of men. Diagnosed as frigid, she is on the verge of giving up on her sexuality.  She encounters Edward Masen, another sexual misfit, and things begin to change.  B/E/AH/AU/OOC.  Rated NC-17 for language and sexual content.

WARNING: THIS STORY CONTAINS ADULT THEMES RELATED TO VIOLENCE AGAINST WOMEN


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 149083
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Research and Recovery

HAHAHAHAHAHA!  CHICKEN AND A CROISSANT...

oh my god!  I heart inuendos!



Author's Response:

If you can believe it, what you read was actually the toned down version of the chicken and croissant conversation. It was even more vulgar, but my beta knocked some sense into me.

-Jules

 




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