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Penname: annamorphos [Contact]
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Member Since: February 22, 2009
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27 y/o aspiring writer, sushi fiend, and student.


 


 



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Summary:

 

Bella is left in a world of darkness after Edward leaves her. But just when things start to look bright again, weird things begin to happen. She wonders who could be the cause, knowing only one person could-Edward. But why after he promised to leave forever? An AU version of New Moon starting during her "blank page" period.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 73511
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2010


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Shattered

whooooo!  Awesome!  I thought it was victoria but wasn't sure.  Great job!  I look forward to the next chapter

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward have happily been together for decades but Bella craves something new and exciting in their sex life. Jasper steps up to the plate to fill the void in Bella. Where do they go from here and who else will help them along the way? One-shot turned into a lemony story.

 

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 18995
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2009 Updated: July 16, 2010


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That was awesome!

You have awesome writing skills and I can easily get visuals.

hee hee hee

awesome!  I'm anxious with anti-ci-pation!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you :) I'm glad what I'm doing works for you. Now don't be a stranger.

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Edward is waaaay too much of a gentleman sometimes!  I'm not talking about the forest incident.  I'm talking about Tanya.

Seriously!  That boy should rip her arm off and threaten her with it!  I hate Tanya so much!

lol

Eitherways, great story!
It's okay, Bella, Jasper can comfort you ::wink wink nudge nudge::



Author's Response:

Lol, I'm seriously loving all the Tanya hate. And Jasper? Let's just say that he'll have a bigger part in this next chapter.

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

haha! JACKPOT!

WHOO WHOO!

P.S. i hate Tanya so much



Author's Response:

Haha. Even when Tanya's only in the chapter for a couple sentences people still bring on the hate. I love it!

~V

 
Summary:

Rosalie is content to live her vampire life to its fullest, regardless of her resentment of her immortal situation. One day while hunting she comes across a dying man with an innocent face that she cannot resist. In an act of strength, she brings him home to change him into one of them.

How does the vain and selfish Rosalie deal with an irrational newborn vampire who can’t see past his lust for blood to even notice her? Will she be able to swallow her pride and have the patience to stand by him? Will Emmett be the man who can change her life for the better?

All Chapters are Rosalie's POV

Warning: Rated NC-17 for a reason. Some chapters may contain adult language, violence, assault, and sexual content. Lemons in future chapters.

Thank you to my super-efficient Twilighted Beta, Texbelle!

Got Twitter? Follow Me! @achelle131

V&P Awards and Recognition:

  • Mentioned on The Lazy Yet Discerning Ficster Blog
  • Indie Twific Award Finalist Best Canon (WIP) 
  • Sparkle Awards Alice Award Best PreTwilight Second Place
  • Golden Chocolate Awards Best Rosalie and Emmett Runner Up
  • Rec'd and Reviewed on the Altered Lions and Sacrificial Lambs Blog

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Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles, The Vanity and Patience Series
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 192931
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: December 28, 2011


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: The Uninvited

Aww :( poor Rosalie.
I'm sure as soon as Emmett finds out, he's gonna kill that guy!



Author's Response:

Hmm, you might be right! Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Reluctant Hero

AWWWW!!!

GO EMMETT!  I LOVE HIM SO MUCH! 
I also love how you write him! :) I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank oyou so much! I love him too!! Chapter 12 is with my beta, i hope to get it submitted on this site soon!

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Caught

HAHAHAHA!  Awesome!  Rosalie got caught!
great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you thought it was awesome! Wasn't that a pleasant shocker? Thank you for your review!

Vanity and Patience has been nominated on the Indie Twific Awards under under two categories:
Best Canon (WIP)
Best Characterization (Non-bella/edward)(WIP)
The first round of voting ends today, Monday 7/13. If you'd like to vote, there's still time! Please visit:
http://theindietwificawards.com/vote.aspx

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Return

awesome!  I love this story so much!  I absolutely love Rosalie's actions and the way Emmett still tries :)

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Scheming

hahaha!  Ooooh she's gonna make Emmett jealous!

This story makes me love Rosalie!



Author's Response:

Thanks! i'm happy im doing my job right! lol! THank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Lessons

whooo!  I've been waiting for an update!

I absolutely love this story!  I feel for Rosalie, she is so bitter that she won't let herself go.  :)  Keep going!  Update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoy it! I'll definitely update soon!

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Apologies

I'm so glad that Thomas didn't die! :D

Damn it Rose, she really is her own worst enemy...
and a terrible cock block for Emmett!



Author's Response:

Yes, i'm glad he didnt die either. I'd be an evil author to kill him off! As for the cockblock...LOL! i agree... but you never know how soon she might just give in ;-)

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Declaration

YAY!  ROSALIE! 

I love this story, and I already added Strengtha and Remorse to my faves.
This is such a great story!  Keep going!



Author's Response:

thank you! and thanks for also subscribing to S&R. I'll have to swing by your stories when im done writing V&P!

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Revelations

just what I needed at 6:30am.  Emmett the Volcano!

Awesome!



Author's Response:

lol! thank  you so much! And wow, thanks for reading it so early in your morning! hope it started  your day off right!

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Redemption

This chapter was so pleasant to read!  It's so refreshing to read Rosalie doing something for someone else.  :)  Yay Mr. Kent!

Very well written and flawless as always!  Applause!



Author's Response:

thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying a generous rose! thank you so much!

Sincerelly,

mariecel

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Broken Walls

Awesome chapter!

Haha!  I loved Esme's/Carlisle's reaction!  haha!  What exactly do you say when your living room has been torn to shyte?

lol! Awesome!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I"m glad you enjoyed their reaction and thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue: Forks

Awesome! I loved it!

 
Summary:

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Edward's POV of Bella's pregnancy, burning and awakening in Breaking Dawn.  Covers all the missing moments with Edward, Bella, Renesmee and the Cullens, and everything that they went through. Starts when Edward and Bella arrive home from Isle Esme and meet the Cullens at the airport. Find out what happened after Bella ran into Rosalie's arms...  

In a fraction of a second, I was at Bella's side, the rest of my family still frozen. I put my hands on Bella's shoulders.

"Let her go, Rose," I said, my voice deadly.  She just stared back at me grimly. I searched her mind, trying to get a hold of her plans.  There was a resolve, a plan to protect the baby at all costs.  And an aching desire she couldn't hide to have that baby as her own....

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Her face was so deathly still, no response.  She was unearthly pale, and there was the slightest blue tinge to her skin, the sky pale at dawn.  As I pressed my lips to hers, they were too cool.  I blew in gently twice, watching her chest rise and fall mechanically. I moved my mouth to her ear as my hands began to move again.

"Come on, Bella, love," I whispered.  "Come on, sweetheart.  I'm right here.  You did it. You've got a healthy baby. She's so beautiful. You were strong enough.  Now it's time for you to come back.  She's waiting.  I'm waiting, love.  I'm waiting for you, always...

 

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 191547
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: August 18, 2010


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Motherhood

Oh Edward :( he makes me sad sometimes.  You write him very well!

Ugh, Rosalie is such a hag!  lol! 

I LOVE EMMETT!!  "SUCCESS!"  haha that line made me laugh!  He's so triumphant that he found a blender :P

 
A Day At The Zoo! by JayJayHale Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

 

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It’s Emmett’s birthday (his human birthday but come on it is Emmett we’re talking about) and he wants to celebrate it with his family at the zoo! Hilarity ensues as the Cullen’s try to keep Emmett in line while still allowing him to enjoy his birthday. Told in everyone’s POV.

No Renessmee but Bella is a vampire!

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4394
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2009 Updated: June 07, 2009


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Happy Birthday Emmett!  I'm glad you had a good time!

 

Awesome story!

 
Summary:

Edward plans something beautiful for Bella just as her human frailty begins to rear its ugly head...


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 17325
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2009 Updated: July 08, 2009


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 (N.)

AWWWWW

This is awesome!

I can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!  The final chapter should be up within the next day or two.  I hope you'll enjoy the resolution.

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 (N.)

Yes!  I am so for the epilogue!

great story!  Awesome!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Check back in a couple of days, please.

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue

Awwww :) that made me happy!  Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad to could leave you feeling all warm and fuzzy!

 
Elysium by gothicfictionfan Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 608]
Summary:

This story begins almost six years after Bella became a vampire. Renesmee is almost an adult and has begun to attend an all-girls private school while the rest of her family begins classes at the nearby public school. She is unaware of Jacob's past feelings for her mother. On the first day of class, Edward and Bella encounter an unusual individual who begins to suspect something is wrong with the mysterious Cullen family. The story has shifting point-of-view.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 92540
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2009 Updated: August 13, 2010


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: A Necessary Conversation - Bella

OMG!  I love this story!
I know I've read it before on another fan fiction site.
(don't worry, I won't give away the ending!)

I can't wait to read it again! :)

Awesome writing!  Awesome plot!  Awesome everything!



Author's Response:

thank you! it warms my soul to see that you want to read it again! you rock! (thanks for not giving it away) :-)

 
Love Comes by stacylambert Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 457]
Summary:

The Cullens return to Forks to keep an eye on a new generation of Quileute shape-shifters. They find this new pack of wolves to be not only large, but led by the impulsive Jacob Black. When Edward falls for Bella Swan, who just happens to be Jacob's girlfriend,what will happen between the Quileuetes and the Cullens ?

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Aro
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 79824
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2009 Updated: January 23, 2010


Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Good Intentions

ahhh yes. It's not a complete story unless Edward jacks off!

lol!  Great story tho!  I'm loving it!

I read the whole thing up until here.



Author's Response:

Sorry if you didn't like that part. I was just trying to show early on that he wasn't quite the prude he is in the books.

I'm glad you're enjoying the story otherwise ;-)

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: The Visitors

awww!  Edward is so awesome.

I EFFING HATE TANYA!



Author's Response:

Yes, yes he is.

Don't worry, you won't see her for awhile.

Thanks for the review. :-)

 
Reviewer: annamorphos Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: The Dance

YES!  Give him syphillis!  mwahahaha!

great chapter



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed that part ;-)

Thank you!

 




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