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Real name: Yasmin
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Boot Camp by Almis Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1317]
Summary:

 

When you’re young you’re supposed to have fun, law be damned. At least that’s how Bella Swan, Rosalie Hale and Alice Brandon saw it.

Three friends’ hell bent on having as much fun as they can while they are still young. Only problem is, what they find fun normally gets them into trouble with the law.

Now their parents have had enough and have come to a decision to send their teenage daughters to Boot Camp for six months.

Alice, Bella and Rose are certainly not pleased with their parent’s news and vow to make life very interesting for all those at the correctional facility. With the help of three boys, who love causing just as much trouble as the girls, they don’t have a hard time keeping to their unspoken vow.

 

 

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Characters are quite OOC but the couples are the same as always.

Rated because of foul language, there shall be a lot of it. Also underage drinking, law breaking and shenanigans like that.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 110414
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: October 09, 2009


Reviewer: Yazzy Signed
Date: March 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Emeralds

im proper loving this

update soon

xXx



Author's Response:

Yay! Haha.

Thanks for reviewing.

Alice.x

 
Reviewer: Yazzy Signed
Date: March 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Pizza and Boys

This is like amazing but how can you stop there? =[

i need to know whats gonna happen in class...lol

i would read it =]]

continue soon please

xXx



Author's Response:

Haha, cause I'm evil. :P

Don't worry though, the next chapter is with my beta.

Alice.x

 
Reviewer: Yazzy Signed
Date: March 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Sinful Teasing

i love this chapter

then again i love this story...lol

the bit with lauren made me laugh...and alice on jaspers back...lol

i can't wait to read more.

can i have a cookie now =]] haha lol

xXx



Author's Response:

Haha, thank you.

Hopefully it wont take too long to validate the companion story and I can coninue with this.

Yes, you can. *hands you a cookie* haha.

Alice.x

 
Reviewer: Yazzy Signed
Date: March 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Sounds Like a Plan

ice creams always good...lol

this is like my fave story.

i love the fact that all of them got in trouble during activities with demetri. lol

this is amazing...you have to continue soon r i will be very VERY sad and will cry.

xXx



Author's Response:

Yay, I'm happy you are enjoying it.

Please don't cry. Haha.

Alice.x

 
Reviewer: Yazzy Signed
Date: March 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Rise and Shine

I just caught up

that was amayyyzing

continue soon?   pleeeeaassee XD

xXx



Author's Response:

Thank you.

I shall.

Alice.x

 
Reviewer: Yazzy Signed
Date: April 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Defiance

The bit where emmett was speaking french/spanish made me laugh

Yhoo gots to continue soon. For mee XD

lol

xXx



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Will do.

Alice.x

 
Reviewer: Yazzy Signed
Date: April 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

It makes me sad when you leave it like that ='[

I don't like cliffhangers

But...jasper and alice and emmet and rosalie finaly got it onnn!!!!

woop woop

continue soon please...without a cliffhanger?? XD

xXx



Author's Response:

Don't be sad. :P

Haha, yes, I thought since Bella and Edward keep getting to kiss then the other four deserved to aswell.

Alice.x

 
Reviewer: Yazzy Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Visitors

I have caught up...again

lol

i keep getting behind and it's making me sad =[[

i absolutely LOVE this story

you have got to update asap

pllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeee

pretty please with a cherry on top

 

xXxXxXx



Author's Response:

lol, thank you.

The next chapter is with my beta, so it should be up soon.

Alice.x





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