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Avid reader, baseball fan, part-time amateur writer and graduate student, cat lover, corn shucker, enchilada roller, dog poop scooper, car washer, clothes folder, kid shuttler, shower singer, football tailgater, full-time wife and mom. As Warren Zevon once said, "So much to do, there's plenty on the farm. I'll sleep when I'm dead."


 


CURRENT STORY RECS:


"Open Up Next to You" by LJ Summers. The author's reputation alone is enough of a reason to read it, but it also happens to be a wonderful story. I think my favorite quote ever from a fanfic piece is in this one. Complete.


"Trip of a Lifetime" by samekraemer. The stars at night... are big and bright... *clap clap clap clap* deep in the heart of Texas! AU-Human, canon couples, plot twists to rival "Dallas," and lemony goodness. Complete.


"The Difference Between Love and Obligation" by GreatEscape. AU-Human, mostly (and eventually) canon couples. Emotionally charged and realistic. You must read this one if you're an AU-Human fan. Complete.


"Cauchemar Vivant" by Lunar Siren. AU. A very intricate vamp-involved storyline that's not for the faint of heart. Badassery abounds. Hope it comes back from hiatus.


"Mary Alice, Full of Grace" by MissManda. Pre-Twilight AU. Love, love, love. Be forewarned that there is violence within, for those who are sensitive to such. In progress.


"A Different Kind of Love" by LauraEmily18. Sequel to New Moon AU "Broken Spirit." Some things will probably make a bit more sense of you read the prequel first, but even if you take this story on its own, you'll enjoy vampire Bella and Edward as they foster children in England. In progress.


"Roses in Winter" by WhisperingWolf. The journey taken by Angela from Weber to Cullen. You'll be angered, heartbroken, and filled with joy alternately. In progress.


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Reviews by Screaming Mimi
 
Summary:

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When Edward takes Bella into the forest after her disastrous birthday party in New Moon, Bella's reaction is nothing like he expected. Will this be the end of their love or will they find a new path to forever? A canon-based but very different AU approach to New Moon. Some OOC and OC.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: No Word count: 206889
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2012 Updated: July 03, 2014


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: February 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Not Today and Never Again

Bye, bye, love

I'll catch you later

Got a lead foot down on my accelerator

And a rear view mirror torn off

I ain't ever looking back

And that's a fact.



Author's Response: I've tried all I can imagine I've begged and pleaded in true lover's fashion I've got pride - I'm taking it for a ride Bye bye, bye bye, my baby, BYE BYE!!!! Mimi, this review made my day!! Jo Dee ROCKS :-) :-)

 
Summary:

 

Written for the Twilight Canon Tour, New Moon Round.

Edward left Bella in the forest and she went catatonic.  Her parents got her to therapy and her therapist has told her she has to "write out her pain" to process it. Reluctant at first, Bella gradually finds strength and confidence in her online anonymity.

Until she realizes that, having crossed a line, she wasn't so anonymous after all.

Excerpt:

Did Edward ever look that happy with me?  Or did my blood always cause him so much pain?  He said he’d always love me...in a way. But it must not have been that way...  


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10056
[Report This] Published: February 08, 2012 Updated: February 10, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: February 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting piece, LJ. I feel terrible for Renee, Charlie, Phil... And of course the Pack will know what happened to her, while Charlie will never understand or stop looking.

We, as readers, always focus on the fact that Edward screwed up royally and created the chaos. We are so certain that Bella would never reveal the secret that we don't often stop to think what might happen if she did screw up.



Author's Response:

Good morning!

I felt bad, too. Charlie has a real mess on his hands. At this time in the Saga timeline, the only Pack members there were, were Sam, Jared and Paul. They would have kept things pretty close to the vest, I think. And they knew that the Cullens had left and they didn't scent any of them near the Swan  house - but they did smell vamps.  And they'd keep the secret.  Because they had to.  Which sucks, but yeah.

There are a lot of repercussions with different actions. It is interesting to explore them.

Thanks for reading!

LJ

 
Summary:

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This was my entry in THE CANON TOUR—NEW MOON ROUND

PROMPT/summary:

A mother's love (and meddling) knows no bounds. Unbeknownst to Edward, Esme stays in touch with Bella.


Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2546
[Report This] Published: February 09, 2012 Updated: February 09, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: February 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love Esme' and her "shouty caps." She's so cute. This was well written.



Author's Response:

Good afternoon, Screaming Mimi!

Thank you!  So glad you enjoyed Esme!

Kathis

 
My Impotence by SqueakyZorro Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

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As Forks' police chief, Charlie was used to being in charge. While he loved having Bella with him, he'd experienced a rude shock when he realized that a father can't truly be “in charge” of his teenage daughter. During the ups and downs of Bella's relationship with Edward, Charlie understood for the first time the true meaning of impotence.

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Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Charlie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2168
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2012 Updated: February 10, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: February 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Nicely done.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)

 
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After years of marriage and four kids, Esme thinks her life with Carlisle is just fine. But when she overhears the glamorous Tanya make a play for Carlisle, she starts to see things in a different way.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Carlisle, Esme, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5523
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2012 Updated: February 11, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: February 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: She's Been Good to Me

Well, my goodness. That was some piece of work... as is Tanya, lol!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I think! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Detente by SqueakyZorro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
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When Carlisle and Esme had enough of Edward's and Rosalie's bickering, they left the bickering kids on a deserted island while they went to Isle Esme. A whole month with nothing to do but keep from ripping each other apart. NC-17 for lemons.

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Written for mostly a lurker's fundraiser


Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU Characters: Edward, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5061
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2012 Updated: February 19, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: February 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - One-Shot

Interesting piece. I liked it.

 

 
Summary:

 

Welcome to Las Vegas

Bella Swan is living life in the fast lane. Jasper Whitlock is a wealthy businessman looking for a good time. What will happen when Bella and Jasper meet in the city of sin?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Brady, Bree, Carlisle, Charlotte, Chelsea, Collin, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Maggie, Marcus, Other Character, Peter, Rosalie, Siobhan, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 8613
[Report This] Published: February 18, 2012 Updated: August 22, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: February 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, you certainly started things off with a bang.

 
I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1050]
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After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death - NOT Edward or Bella.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes Word count: 419120
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2012 Updated: March 09, 2013


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: March 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is really fascinating so far. Thanks for incorporating the story about your relative in here.

 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it!  I thought the story about Aunt Margaret fit the context well, I needed something to inspire Bella to write to him.  Thank you for reviewing!

 
Summary:

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him?  AH/OOC/18 and over please.  Banner made by SoapyMayhem FanFiction


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 324629
[Report This] Published: February 27, 2012 Updated: November 25, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: April 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: New Job

I wondered when he was gonna figure out that she puts herself last, when it was going to really click for him. Nice story progression.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  We are both extremely proud and excited at the response this story continues to garner.  Thank you for being one of those who leave us some love.  To heed off a bunch of extra questions, we want to be clear that all three of them (Bella, Seth, and Leah) have birth certificates, social security cards, and were born in hospitals. Bella lived with her birth mother for a while (more will come about this soon), then she went to live with her father and step mom (cough.. MONSTER).  Bella does not know anything about her actual information; she has been kept ignorant for MANY reasons.  Bella does however have all the needed info for the kids, a part of that is because of Zafrina and Aro assisting her in getting the needed paperwork found.  As for Edward, you will continue to see the changes she causes in him, and at least they are for the better.  He will learn about her slowly, but that is because he is still fearful himself of getting hurt.  Thanks for the story love and we look forward to hearing from you again!

Kasi (& Nikky)

Here is the teaser for chapter 8… Subject to changes during BETA process… of course.

I shake my head.  “We are fine Isabella, you can return to what you were doing.” She gives me a nod, turns, and walks away.

“So that the famous Isabella then?” I can’t tell by his face what he is thinking.

“Yeah, that is her, so first thoughts?”

He lets out a sigh and rubs his head. “She’s what, twenty-four?”

I nod my head.  “Well, in three weeks she will be.”

He walks with me towards my kitchen. “Well, she sure is small and not just in height.  She looks like she has missed some essential nutrients over the years.  She’s very pale and the dark coloring under her eyes would lead me to believe that she doesn’t sleep much and she looks to be extremely tired.  Her pupils show that she needs more Calcium, and Iron. She also looks to you for permission to call me Jazz.  She seems to be unsure of what she is, and isn’t allowed to do.” He stops talking while pouring himself a drink. I pull at my hair having not learned anything new about her.

I make us lunch as we continue to chat some more, but not about the topic I want to discuss, Isabella.  I make some extra food for her on the off chance that she hasn’t eaten anything yet.  After what I saw at the mall and what Jazz just confirmed, I assume she more than likely has skipped lunch. I decide to make up some sandwiches to go with the soup I am making.  I can’t decide on what kind to make, so I make four different kinds.  Everything is done, and I carry the covered pot of soup to the table. 

“Isa. . . Ouch, what the fuck, Jazz?” I ask rubbing my head where Jasper just slapped me.

“She is not your pet, Edward.”

I glare at him.  “Jasper, I know that, I was just. . .” 

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: April 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Walls We Build

Wow, what a bastard. She didn't do a damn thing to deserve any of that. This goes way beyond a bad week; I hope he can see that.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing our story.  Nikky and I are very proud of this story and it takes a lot to write things sometimes that even upset us.  We really needed to show just how darkly tainted Edward is, and unfortunately right now many of you hate him.  I know it will take a lot for you to relinquish those hatred feelings, but we hope that we are great enough writers and story tellers to achieve making you like him again.  We know it is always easier to burn a bridge than it is to rebuild it, but we promise to put forth the effort in doing so.  We want to thank you in advance for your votes, support, rec’s, and for just being on this twisted journey with us.  This story will be somewhere around 30 chapters when all is done and said.  We hope that you continue to read and review and share with us your thoughts.  From the bottom of our hearts, and to the moon and beyond... Thank you.

Kasi (& Nikky)

Chapter 6 Teaser… All Subject to change during the beta process…
The shitting feeling is still there, and I have no idea what the fuck I can do to get rid of it.  I head over to Jasper’s office hoping to see him.

“Jasper says that you can go in now.” I look at the woman speaking, and I give her a curt nod as I head into his office. “Edward,” I look at him and he stops talking, and tilts his head to the side.  “Okay, what is going on, what happened?” He asks as he waves at me to sit.  I sit down on the seat across from him and rub my face.  I sigh unsure where to start, so I jump up and start to pace the floor.

“I screwed up, and I mean I really screwed up this time.  Jazz, I fucking hurt her, and I mean really fucking hurt her.  I don’t know how to fix it.  How I can get her to forgive me for what I have done?  I mean, fuck I’ll be lucky if she even speaks to me again.  Well really I know she will because she, fuck, I don’t want to say she is weak, but if I talk to her she will reply. How do I make right Jazz, without putting myself out there?  I don’t want to get hurt again, I could with her and I can’t go through that again.  Fuck, but I don’t think she do that, to anyone really.  She’s not made that way, but I have really gone and hurt her bad.  I never gave her a chance, I was still. . . no, I am to fucking scared.  In this case I think I made a new friend, but the dream. . . and I thought she stabbed me in the back like all the others.  I see her face in my dreams, the last two nights have been worse than all the rest.  I can see how much I hurt her, and the bad thing is she did nothing to warrant my anger.  All she did was fucking help me, time after time.  So many times, and she has been so hurt before and I know it’s been bad.  I can see it clearly in her eyes, the pain and the fear.  What if I push it what if she can never let anyone in ever again because what I did.”  I am still pacing and pulling my hair, I am so upset.  “Fuck Jazz I was a real fucking prick, and complete asshole to her.  Tell me what I can do?  Please I need to fix this, tell me how I can fix it please?”  I beg him as I feel my breathing speed up.  Jasper who was still sitting in his chair looks at me and suddenly comes out of his trance, as I feel the cold sweats start.  “Please Jazz you need to tell me how to fix this.”

 

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: April 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise (Content1)

Wow. What a sad little story for our Bella. I know there's still more to it than that, and I'm interested to hear it. I think Edward is doing better with Isabella, but I have to say, I liked how he handled the Siobhan situation. Meddling little Alice!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Neither Rose nor Alice will be improving their behavior, anytime soon.  There is much more story to hear yet.  We know that the more the story develops the more we all want Edward to just post haste stop going to Aro’s club.  I wanted to give a clear run down on the girls that he sees there, so that we can keep things straight.  Edwards’s girls at Aro’s:  Sally: sex addict 27 tall she about 5ft 8 red shoulder length hair thin and tall. Likes roll play.  Irina: 6ft tall slender and Blond Hair to her cheek bones like rough sex and anal sex. 29 years old.  Carmen: 5ft 6 long black hair enjoys being controlled by men, average weight and size. Likes BDSM and being restrained.  Maria:  5’5 180 pounds curvy and thicker than other girls.  Sandy blonde hair, cute features and very large breasts.  More relaxed and sensual.  Edward only sees her maybe once a month, sometimes longer than that between visits.  He controls her too, but it is all about sensual and erotic pleasure with her than it is about rough and controlling hard core sex.  Some question if he chose Maria the last time and more often, because she reminded him of Bella.  Truth be known Carmen would be the one who resembles Bella the most.  He is not with Maria to pretend she is Bella, but because from Maria he gets the softer more sensual erotic side of sex.  Edward had made the decision a long time ago to make himself this untouchable person, and when it came to the girls most of the time he went with the hard core domination side of the act.  I can’t say that Edward’s visits to the club will cease right away, but I do assure you that soon our professor with the extremely dark view of all women will soon realize that he just can’t do it anymore.  He may be smart and he may be a lot of things, but sometimes when you shut yourself off, it’s hard to wake up those pieces of yourself.  I hope that this helps a little in the explanation of Edward and his tainted views.  I will tell you this, I just got done with my part on a chapter where he comes clean with Bella about what he did when he spent time at the club, and telling the truth can be quite cleansing.

Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)

 

 

Chapter 9 Teaser… Subject to changes during BETA process.

“Mr. Masen, I don’t mean to be rude, but where are we going? Do you need me to work at your house today?”

I shake my head as we keep walking.  “No Isabella, as you know all my employees have to have a medical check.  I am accompanying you to yours.”  We stop walking when we arrive at the bus stop. I look at Isabella who is looking upset.

“Mr. Masen, I didn’t bring any money with me.  I can’t afford to have a medical check, I am sorry.” I look down at her and frown.  There is something in her expression that tells me that it’s not just money she is worried about. I look up seeing the bus coming to a stop beside us.

We both get on, but this time I lead her to the seats at the back.  I motion for her to sit and I sit next to her, leaving a little room between us. “Isabella, I set up a medical plan for each of my staff including you. Your medical is a part of that so you don’t have to worry about payment, it has already been covered.” I am not really lying, more like stretching the truth a little. “I know that you don’t like people too close to you, for that reason I am taking you to see a dear friend of mine.” I smile thinking about how to explain Carlisle. “His name is Carlisle, and he is much more than a friend to me.  I guess you could say that he is like a father figure. He is a very compassionate man, and he has an amazing ability to relax people. He will not hurt you. I would never allow him, or anyone to hurt you.” I didn’t really mean for what I said at the end to come out, but as I looked into her eyes it just came out.  She looked me right in the eye for much longer then she usually does.  I watch her reaction and notice her bite her lip, as she nods her head.

“Will you stay with me, the whole time?”  She asks, as her eyes fall to the floor. 

Without meaning to, my hand moves to the underside of her chin.  I feel small sparks on the tips of my fingers as I keep my fingers against her skin.  These are those same comforting sparks I felt the night of my panic attack, I dismiss it.  I slowly tilt her chin up, making her look at me again. “I will stay with you, if that is what you want.  This is your choice Isabella.  I know that I have been ordering you around a lot, but this time it is your complete choice and decision.  If you wish for me to stay in the room with you, then I will.  If you want me to leave, then I will.  This is all about you, and what you want.” 

She keeps looking at me and I could feel her shaking a little, but she never pulls her face away from my hand.  “I would like you to stay in the room please, Mr. Masen.” I nod my head letting her face go.

 

 

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: July 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Illness and Surprises

Gina got her due. Thank you for that. I feel badly for Emmett, but I really hope Rose gets her just desserts, too!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View and being such a wonderful part of our success in writing this story.  We both put a lot of time into this story and we are very grateful to have the following that we have gathered.  A lot of you are asking about Sue and when her return will come.  We have made no secret that she will make an appearance, but before she does there are a few other things that will happen.  At this point her return will not be for a few chapters yet.  There are a lot of comments about Rose and there isn’t much about her in the next chapter, but after that there will be some things coming up.  As we have said other times there are approximately 30-35 chapters within this story, and there will be around 6-8 Out-Takes posting...The Out-Takes will post under the name ‘Enduring His Cimmerian View’.  There were not a lot of questions, and we have covered most of the comments concerns or worries, but if you have more questions you can always find us on Facebook under TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  There are always people leaving comments and their theories there, come join the conversations.  Kasi &(Nikky)

 

Chapter 22 Teaser...subject to changes during BETA process.

We spent most of our day watching Christmas movies, and for supper we had a huge spread of really fattening foods.  I had Eric prepare for me several wonderful dishes.  I had wanted something easy for today - something that wouldn’t take away from our family day.  The dishes he made only needed to be warmed up before serving.  The kids loved it, but then again, we had some great things to choose from.  Bella really loved the extra cheesy enchiladas and the lobster bisque.  There were so many things to choose from that we had enough leftovers to last us for the next few days.  After we ate, we cleaned up the kitchen together. 

We all settled down in the living room after the clean-up was done for our new tradition.  After we were all settled in, I passed out a few gifts to each person in the room.  “Okay, here are a few gifts that you get to open before we go to mass tonight.”  I made sure to pass out the gift bags that held our new matching clothing that Esme had chosen for our first Christmas mass together.  I had asked Esme to help, and she did, but then refused to let me pay her back for the gifts.  Esme said that the new outfits were from her, and that she was happy that I and my new family were going to attend services together.  

“Edward, we can wait and open these gifts tomorrow, can’t we?”  Bella asks.

“No, Baby; these gifts are for tonight for our church service together.  This is our first Christmas mass we get to spend together and these gifts will help make it more special.  They are from Esme, who wanted to help make this special.  There are gift bags for each of us.  Okay everyone, open them up and let’s see what we have.”

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: April 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Making Amends

Well that's an interesting development with Gina. I didn't think her actions would come back to bite her so soon, but I'm glad they did.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.
This story is not always easy to write, just as parts are not easy to read.  Edward does not know yet of course, but it is very true Isabella cannot read nor write.  She has never attended school.  Bella was never allowed to be a child, or experience a normal childhood, in any way, shape, or form.  Bella has nothing more than a glorified slave all of her life since her birth mother passed away.  We don’t want to give away more of her story than that, but feel free to keep asking your questions and we will continue to answer what we can.  Edward does have a long road yet to travel, and part of that is to get him-self healed enough so that he can love someone and trust someone.  Edward’s view is very tainted and with great reason, there is much more to learn about him.  He will continue to improve, but he will have his moments.  Keep in mind as of right now, Isabella has not lied to him, but she has withheld very important information.  She doesn’t correct him on her age, because she fears his reaction. 
Kasi (&Nikky)

Here is the teaser for chapter 7…Subject to change during BETA process as always.

I have written out everything, when I look at my watch seeing that it’s ten after ten.  I know that being on time is something she is normally good at.  I rub my face, fuck maybe she changed her mind about the job, or she just lied to me just like every other fucking woman I’ve ever known.

Or maybe you scared her, and she said yes to the job thinking that you wouldn’t let her leave the room unless she agreed.

Knock. Knock.

Thank god, she is here finally.  “Come in Isabella,” I say to the closed door.  The door opens, but it’s Taylor who is standing there. 

I frown at him.  “Hello, I see you beat me here,” he says smiling at me.  I wave at him to come in, but I am still frowning.  “I take it I am not who you’re waiting for?”

I shake my head.  “I was expecting someone, but I don’t think she is coming.”  I sigh, and throw my pen on the desk.

“Small pale girl, brown hair, looks a little lost?” I look at him, and nod my head.  “I think she is standing outside,” he says motioning his thumb toward the door.  I move toward the door, and Taylor stops me.  “Here, take this; it’s really coming down out there.”  He offers me his umbrella and chuckles as I take it and head out of the office.

I head to the front, and see Isabella standing outside in front of the window in the rain.  I open the door.  “Isabella,” I call to her standing in the door way, she turns and looks at me. I wave at her to come in.  “How long have you been standing outside, and why didn’t you come in the restaurant when you got here?”

She walks up to me, clearly worrying I am mad by the look on her face.  “I thought that…you said to meet you outside.  Didn’t you, never mind, I am so sorry…sorry.”

Looking at her, I see that she’s drenched to the skin.  The jacket she is wearing is paper thin, and clearly very old and well used.  I know that she been outside a long time.  I close my eyes, pinching the bridge of my nose.  “I am sorry I meant for you to come in, if I was not out here.”  She walks through the door; I know that she needs to get out of her wet clothes.

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: March 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Stalking

I like what you guys have done so far with character development. I kinda hope bitchy Rose learns why Edward didn't show to dinner, though... I don't give a crap if she apologizes for being a bitch, just the fact that she learns The Truth as opposed to The Truth According To Rosalie would work for me. *laugh*

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  There have been a few questions regarding Bella’s age.  Bella was 13 when she was left to care for her half sibling twins.  She was left to care for them by her step mom after her father’s death.  She obtained employment with the help of Aro who owns the building she lives in with her half siblings.  Her employment record is based on her fake ID that Sue her step-mom left her with.  More about Isabella’s back story will come out in the future chapters.  Edward is quite the monster in the next chapter, but he will see the error of his way.  Thanks for all the story love we are getting, and being a part of that.  We cannot promise that rose or Alice will ever be someone you will like in this story.  Rose is very much a horrid b*tch.  I cannot waitt o hear your thoughts on the next chapter.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)


Chapter 5 teaser, subject to change during beta process.

I feel myself wake with a jolt, and I sit straight up.  No longer gasping, but still struggling to calm down.  My breathing is hard and have cold sweat covering my whole body, fuck that was some dream.  I get up and walk into my bathroom; I turn on the water in the shower.  I let it warm a little before stepping into take a shower.  I close my eyes as look up letting the hot water hit my face.  I take some calming breaths trying to shake off this fucking dream.

Leaning my left arm against the wall to support myself, I tip my head down.  With my eyes closed I feel the hot soothing water cascade down my back.  Fuck this not working!  I still feel the effects the dream has had in the pit of my stomach.  I feel my heart starting to race; I open my eye look at seeing my hand shaking.  Knowing that the shower is not helping, I step out and look for the pills Dr. Hall gave me.  I take two of them and wash them down with some orange juice.  After sitting in a towel in my living room for an hour, with the medicine in my system I am now calm.  I go to my bedroom and get dressed, and head off to the college.

I head to Marcus’s office first to get the low down on what happened during my week absence.  After finding that I did not miss much, I set my class room up for my first class.

The day passes by in a blur, I look at my watch knowing that Bel. . . shit, no, Isabella will be coming in soon.  With that thought I pack up my things and leave my room.  As I walk out the main entrance, I see her coming toward the door.  From the corner of my eye I see her smile, as she steps aside to let me out.  I don’t return her smile, or look at her.  I walk out letting the door close behind me, and continue to walk away from her.

 

 
Summary:

Bella’s lonely after her high school friends leave to attend University while Bella is stuck in Community College taking care of Charlie.  She decides to join a dating site to make some new friends.  Will she get more then she bargained for?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 2122
[Report This] Published: February 29, 2012 Updated: March 20, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: March 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Sounds good. Looking forward to more.

 

 
Summary:

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In a moment of weakness, Jasper snaps at Bella during her birthday. How does the slip that last for less than second affect him and his wife? Pull up a chair at the Cullen family meeting that happened after Edward took Bella home.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5856
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2012 Updated: March 01, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: March 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Less Than A Second

Nice work. This is one of those scenes from the Meyer books where you'd want to be a fly on the wall, and you gave that to us.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. This is a nig moment in the books for me. I understand why SM didn't write it. One can only take the story in so many directions. She needed to stick with E&B. However, I had fun doing it for her. ;)

~MA

 
Cosmic by unicornelious Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

When fate delivers beautiful, broken Bella to his family's doorstep, Edward and Bella's lives are forever changed, for better or for worse. All human.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 11503
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2012 Updated: April 18, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: April 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Well, Damn

Very mysterious. I like it.

Next chapter, write from the pov of whoever clamors for the most attention. 

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: March 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to

My heart wrenches for this child. I fear this is going to be a rough journey for her. And we haven't even met the rest of them yet.

Very nice start.

 

 
Mount Olympus by jakeward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 230]
Summary: Feature

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Falling for your best friend is never easy. Asking your best friend to be in an unconventional relationship while fighting your feelings is something entirely different.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 91530
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2012 Updated: March 28, 2014


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: March 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Not Your Momma's Mythology

This has started out really funny, probably because a lot of the words and emotions are familiar. I had one of those for a while... And now we've been married almost 17 years. ;-)

 



Author's Response:

Are you serious? That's rather awesome!! 17 years? Wow!!! I hope you like the rest of the story, as well as this first chapter. Thank you so much for taking time to read this story and posting a review.

Xo

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: April 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Kydoimos, Burned Bacon, & Bea Arthur

Heh heh heh... "let me unsuccessfully cover up the awkward." Funny.

 



Author's Response:

:) I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for taking a chance on this one!

Hugs!

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: April 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Pythias & Damon

Haw! Holy awkward, Batman!

 



Author's Response:

LOL!! That's awesome! I love that! I may haveto start saying that. :)

Thank you so much for reading and posting reviews!! super hugs!

 
Loads of Time by Willow2883 Rated: PG-13 starstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

For the past 15 years Bella has been trying to say goodbye to her best friend and let him go. But some things aren't so easily done. Post Breaking Dawn. Honorable Mention in the Truly Anonymous Twilight Contest.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1433
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2012 Updated: April 06, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: April 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (One Shot)

Melancholy and quietly emotional. Nicely done.

 



Author's Response:

 
The Loving Kind by thimbles Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 120]
Summary:

 

 

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There were nine words on the square of paper.

Nine simple words that I have waited over a year to hear: "I was wrong. I miss you. I love you."

 

My biggest mistake was falling in love with Bella. My second was telling her.

 

Please be advised: this story contains language, sex and will deal with themes of severe depression and suicide.

 

My stunning banner was made by the amazing Frozen Soldier!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 76253
[Report This] Published: March 27, 2012 Updated: September 04, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: April 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Big Eyes

Well. He tries to find out the tiniest piece of info about her, and damn, if it's not a tiny piece at all. Good chapter.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you. Lots more for them to learn about each other!

Shell xx

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: April 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The Fear

Good start. Sounds interesting so far.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Shell xx

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: August 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Happy

My heart breaks for Edward. :-(

 

 




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