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Real name: Amanda
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Avid reader, baseball fan, part-time amateur writer and graduate student, cat lover, corn shucker, enchilada roller, dog poop scooper, car washer, clothes folder, kid shuttler, shower singer, football tailgater, full-time wife and mom. As Warren Zevon once said, "So much to do, there's plenty on the farm. I'll sleep when I'm dead."


 


CURRENT STORY RECS:


"Open Up Next to You" by LJ Summers. The author's reputation alone is enough of a reason to read it, but it also happens to be a wonderful story. I think my favorite quote ever from a fanfic piece is in this one. Complete.


"Trip of a Lifetime" by samekraemer. The stars at night... are big and bright... *clap clap clap clap* deep in the heart of Texas! AU-Human, canon couples, plot twists to rival "Dallas," and lemony goodness. Complete.


"The Difference Between Love and Obligation" by GreatEscape. AU-Human, mostly (and eventually) canon couples. Emotionally charged and realistic. You must read this one if you're an AU-Human fan. Complete.


"Cauchemar Vivant" by Lunar Siren. AU. A very intricate vamp-involved storyline that's not for the faint of heart. Badassery abounds. Hope it comes back from hiatus.


"Mary Alice, Full of Grace" by MissManda. Pre-Twilight AU. Love, love, love. Be forewarned that there is violence within, for those who are sensitive to such. In progress.


"A Different Kind of Love" by LauraEmily18. Sequel to New Moon AU "Broken Spirit." Some things will probably make a bit more sense of you read the prequel first, but even if you take this story on its own, you'll enjoy vampire Bella and Edward as they foster children in England. In progress.


"Roses in Winter" by WhisperingWolf. The journey taken by Angela from Weber to Cullen. You'll be angered, heartbroken, and filled with joy alternately. In progress.


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Reviews by Screaming Mimi
 
Summary:

What do you do when the love of your life has no memory of you? Two years after they left her, Bella is back in the Cullens' lives. The only problem is that she doesn't remember them. A Bella and Edward love story.    


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 116697
[Report This] Published: December 11, 2011 Updated: June 25, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: April 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Missing

Friggin' stubborn self-sacrificers, both of them. I think she knows exactly what she's doing. Maybe she's even trying to teach him a lesson.

 

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: December 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven - Nightmare

Haw! Trust Emmett to end the chapter with the funny.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Simaril x

 
Invisible by Viridian1 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Invisible Banner

(AU/New Moon/Canon/BPOV)

Edward leaves and Bella does not recover. "So the night Victoria leapt through my open window, crouching like a cat at the foot of my bed, I regarded her with the same enthusiasm as I did the leaves that fell from her tattered clothes and littered my floor. I blinked."

Rating: R for Dark themes. No language, No lemons.

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6916
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2011 Updated: December 31, 2011


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: January 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Invisible

That was a unique exchange between the ladies. I enjoyed looking at that in a different way. And cool power Bella's got, too.

 
Summary:

Ten years after the events of Eclipse, Edward meets his true vampire mate; Bella is left desolate. Alice and Jasper take her in with them to help her through her heartbreak. Rated for mature relationship issues.

 

Banner by the lovely evieeden.

Excerpt from Chapter Two:

 

"I love you," she protested, sounding hurt and small.

He stepped closer, one hand tentatively extended. "I love you, too. In, in a way."

After dragging one final breath into her lungs, Bella turned. "In a way?" Her arms were wrapped about her torso, her eyes wide and dark and frightened. "What does that mean?"

"It means that — that out of all the things I was afraid of, Bella, I never ever thought I would not be your mate when you changed. But when you awakened, got through the initial adjustments, I could read it in Jasper's mind. We did not share a vampire mate bond."

tear jerker

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: Undeniable: Vampire Mate Bond Series
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 54397
[Report This] Published: December 16, 2011 Updated: January 27, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: January 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: In the Middle of it All, It's Nobody's Fault

Honestly, this chapter frustrated me. I understand Bella's "what's the point" attitude, but this is still too close to the Bella who quietly lets everyone walk all over her that I get so tired of. Esme shouldn't get to giggle about Bella's "possibilities" after not seeing her for 2 years. When Bella wants to be alone, Edward shouldn't get to be the one who worries and chases after her, no matter what he *heard*. And the couples having their fun... Sooooo inconsiderate. I know, that was probably the point, but still. 

I know you've got a plan, so of course I'll continue to read. You write well and I have enjoyed the other chapters. This one was also nicely done- the reunion was just different than I would have liked.



Author's Response:

Good morning!

Remember that the Cullens are only human. Really.  They're not perfect.  They are a family that has, for almost a century, adjusted to changes in the family dynamic, making things as smooth as possible.  

Bella is still healing, but she is getting better, honest. She's strong enough to face the new wife, which is cool, and she is strong enough to confront Edward in mild ways.  And she gets better.

I do have a plan, honest. 

But do remember that the Cullens we know through Eclipse canon are seen primarily through the eyes of a human girl who cannot pick up on the nuances of their internal dynamic.  So what we see in the books is NOT how it was all the time.  Too much was kept from her.

And family reunions can totally suck. lol

Thanks so much for reading!

LJ 

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: January 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Let the Rain Come Down

Being an empath drove him crazy.

I absolutely love that line.

 

I think Bella should just do what she wants to do. And if she doesn't know what that is yet, that's cool. Sounds like she's having fun with the Whitlocks.



Author's Response:

Good morning!

LOL Glad you liked that line. :)

Bella will do her best to do what will make her happy. Eventually. 

She is having FUN. :) In spades, even. lol

Thanks for reading!

LJ

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: January 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye

Well, holy schnikeys. He's just so damned pathetic after all, that Edward. At least Bella won't be going anywhere for a while. Curious and intriguing.



Author's Response:

Good morning!

Holy schnikeys? I have never heard that before; thank you. :)

Edward...is under a compelling supernatural bond.  It's hard for him. Poor lad. 

Bella - well, you'll have to see what happens with her...! This is, after all, her story. :D

Thank you for reading!

LJ

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: January 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Sky, Don't Let the Sun Go

Ah, a happy trio. Very nice.



Author's Response:

Good afternoon!

Yes, indeed. A very happy trio. :)

Thank you for reading! The next chapter has been slid into the queue.

LJ

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: February 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: The Edward Outtake

Woo hoo! Sequel coming up! Can't wait. Glad you're continuing this adventure.

I just hope that you don't make Edward "right." He's so damned smug when he's right.



Author's Response:

Good afternoon!

The sequel is actually already posting, can you believe?  It's on my profile. I just slid chapter four into the queue. :)

Edward...well... you'll have to see. LOL

Thank you for reading!

LJ

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: January 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Jump Start my Kaleidoscope Heart

Veeeeeeery interesting!



Author's Response:

Good afternoon!

Heh, you think so? *beams*

More will be forthcoming very soon!

Thank you for reading,

LJ

 
The Walkers by annamorphos Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 106]
Summary:

After a shocking discovery, Bella is forced out of her rainy, northwestern home and takes up residence in sunny Jacksonville, Florida. While she expects her life with vampires is over, she is unknowingly moving deeper into supernatural waters.

"There's always a bigger fish."

 

Banner provided by the awesomely amazing SoapyMayhem!

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 201861
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2011 Updated: September 12, 2013


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: February 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think I like Nora. She seems good for Bella, for now at least. I'm glad Bella has an outlet... Funny that it should be in a bookstore that seems perfect for her.

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: February 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Interesting. These "people" must not realize how perceptive Bella is.

 

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: April 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I can't decide if Renee needs to back off, Bella needs to buck up, or both.

 



Author's Response:

Renee's trying to take care of Bella, but she's not experienced enough to do it.
She means well, but her methods are poor.

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: August 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Interesting explanation of things. I like the Irish tie-ins.

 

 
Soliloquy by Simaril Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 180]
Summary:

Edward and Bella have been reunited and are building a new life together. But with the changed family dynamic, and a new threat on the horizon, things are not going to be easy. Sequel to I'm Only Sleeping.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 103730
[Report This] Published: December 27, 2011 Updated: April 24, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen - All Alone

I knew it wouldn't be that easy. And now Aro has set her up with Irina's wrath. Mother of pearl!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Simaril

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: March 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: The Hurt Doesn't Go Away

Oh. My. Gosh.

You are so wrong for ending it there.

I'm not sure Bella didn't plan for the whole encounter to happen that way.

 

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: January 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven - Here Comes The Night

I've read both stories straight through to this point and have enjoyed them very much! I like Bella's carefree eccentric streak and the humanity she's brought out in each vampire. The positive relationship with the pack is a bonus. Nice job. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Simaril

 
Compulsion~Oneshot by gopher4953 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Summary:

 

What happens when two strangers connect across the expanse of a deserted beach? Over a few weeks, the compulsion grows even though they have never met. When they do, is it real or fantasy?

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Emmett, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3627
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2011 Updated: December 30, 2011


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: December 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hot and mysterious.



Author's Response:

Hi, sweetie!

Thanks for reviwin' it means so much when someone takes the time to comment on what you are tryin' to do!

Hugs,

Ellen xoxo

 
Summary:

Jasper loves her, he really does, but sometimes he wishes that she didn't love to hurt him so much. Originally written for the Fandom Against Famine compilation.

 

   

Thank you to the amazing FrozenSoldier who made this banner and then let me use it.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1593
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2012 Updated: January 03, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: January 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Bad Girlfriend

Bitch! She deserved at *least* that. Shoulda dumped her publicly. Nice piece.

 
Summary:

Becoming a wolf was the worst thing that ever happened to Leah, and it was all Bella Swan's fault.

 

   

Thanks to the amazing FrozenSoldier for this banner.


Categories: AU, New Moon, Eclipse Characters: Bella, Emily, Jacob, Leah, Sam
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2009
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2012 Updated: January 03, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: January 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Hating Bella Swan

Good piece. Enjoyed reading it.

 
Labels by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 212]
Summary:

Banner

BANNER BY READERGOOF!  THANK YOU, LOVE!

“Everyone has labels attached to them that they acquire over a lifetime... mother, daughter, wife, lover, friend, co-worker.  I happen to have all of those labels attached to me, plus one in particular that I’m not happy about…widow.  I have a daughter who never met her father, and parents who try to help me out but drive me crazy, along with a father-in-law who I take care of in the absence of his son.  Along with the label of “widow” came another label that I’m not happy about and it’s one I assigned to myself…crazy.  The reason I’m crazy is because every night in my dreams, I talk to my dead husband as if he was still alive.  I was perfectly content to live with those labels until someone showed up in my life that caused me to add another label to my seemingly never ending list…screwed." –Bella Black

 

AH/OOC.  Canon couples, eventually.  This is a story of a woman trying to deal with a devastating loss, so there will be sadness, but there will be humor and there will be love.  There’s foul language, eventual lemons, and it’s told in Bella’s POV.  It’s rated NC-17 for a reason.  It’s a love story at its heart, but it’s not an easy one.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 125316
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2012 Updated: June 18, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: February 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Curious, this Finn Platte thing. Nice twist.

I like what you did on Jacob Day. Bella needed that.

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: February 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bella is kidding herself.  "No harm, no foul?" Too bad she doesn't see it.

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: February 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 -

Darn that stubborn Billy, but bless his heart. 

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: March 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well, well, well. This should be interesting. Can't blame Bella for not wanting to fall back under that Cullen spell, and I get the whole "crazed and confused" thing on their part, but really. One or two short calls in that time is reasonable. I'm gonna enjoy some good old fashioned man competiton between him and Peter.

Oh, and I wasn't gonna shoot the messenger... er, writer... I just meant that Redward and his parents royally effed up and should have some consequences!

 

 
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: March 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Cute chapter all around. 

 

 
Summary:

Bella's never been ashamed of who she is, but not everyone feels the same way.

   

Thank you to the lovely FrozenSoldier for the banner.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3507
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2012 Updated: January 04, 2012


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi Signed
Date: January 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Some Women

Oh, I really wish you'd add more to this. I'd love to see what an angry, hurt lesbian Bella is capable of.

 




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