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Summary:

 

Let's pretend that Jane Austen had the idea for Twilight first...

janeportrait2.jpg Austen's Twilight Banner picture by Jaxidy


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 16200
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2010


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The First Two Dances

so glad you've picked up this story again!! 

 
Summary: Feature


He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?

OOC, canon at heart.
Banner by FatApolloLove


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue in Review

loved this story! BEAUTIFUL writing.

 
Last Rites by Halo Jones Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 444]
Summary:

 AU. E/B meet under different, violent circumstances, his nature exposed to Bella from the start. Surviving that first encounter together, they navigate a slow road toward friendship, then romance. But obstacles begin to multiply around them, and soon the question arises: are these obstacles random or by design - and by whom?

Based on the following Twilight quote: "All this time [Esme's] been worried bout me, afraid that there was something missing from my essential makeup, that I was too young when Carlisle changed me."

Thanks to christine30974 for helping out with the banner.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 79807
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2009 Updated: January 04, 2012


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: What Have I Become, My Sweetest Friend?

an intriguing story!  i like it!

 
With Teeth by TalulaBlue Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5900]
Summary: Feature

Edward is a 27-year-old alcoholic/addict struggling with his recovery. Bella is a 23-year-old who's moved back home after college. This fic chronicles how they meet, fall in love, and struggle with the complexities of their relationship. Not nearly as maudlin as it sounds (I hope).

Rated NC-17 for graphic (and sometimes non-romantic) sex, drug and alcohol use and abuse, profane language, and brief (very brief) suicidal ideation (although NO suicide attempts). No sexual assault, no cutting.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 183053
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2010


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

i'm really enjoying your writing.  thank you for it.  didn't think the relationship would seem this plausible. nice.

 
Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

i effing love your story and your writing!

 
Summary:

Based in Brooklyn. Edward and Jasper are brothers, each dealing with grief, ego and passion.

Zigster Banner

This is a love story between a magician, a dreamer and an artist.

AH/AU

(Banner is by the ginormously talented Zigster. Brooklyn REPRESENT!)

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 180885
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2009 Updated: June 24, 2010


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

great writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and writing to let me know!

xot

 
Second Chances by lislar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 742]
Summary:

 

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Thank you to m81170 for the gorgeous banner! 

 

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 I love my new banner, made by itsanewday!  Thank you!

Renee is a mess and constantly on the move, dragging fifteen year old Bella around with her from one dump to another.  Her life takes a turn for the worst and Bella is sent to Forks to live with the father she never knew existed.  Charlie enrolls Bella into a support group to help her deal with her past.  The support group doesn’t just change her life, but her intense attraction to her mysterious doctor and their subsequent relationship indelibly shapes the course of her future.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No Word count: 198415
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: March 12, 2012


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: The Right Ingredients

i want to marry your story



Author's Response:

Aww, you're so sweet!  Thank you!!! :)

 
Numb by Tyranny New! Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 592]
Summary:

Numb by Tyranny

 

Bella has spent her life abused and betrayed. Now she feels nothing. When she meets the new boy in school she starts to feel again. But is the pain worth the possibility of something better? NC-17 for violence, language, possible lemons in later chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 102338
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2009 Updated: May 23, 2013


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed
Date: August 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

"History was blissfully uneventful" - awesome!

 
Solar Midnight by LaRosada Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 433]
Summary:

 

One of the key events that creates the epic nature of the Edward/Bella love story is the moment that Bella’s scent first hits Edward, and Edward somehow resists.

But what if Edward’s self control had kicked in just a moment too late? What if his proximity to Bella once his conscience reawakened was just too much, and he couldn’t restrain himself. What if he bit her, and Bella had a new life forced on her, before she had any desire to live for an eternity?

Before she had experienced Forks High School, made friends, and re-connected with Jacob. Before she knew what Edward was. And most importantly, before they fell in love.

What would Twilight look like then?

This is the story of the seemingly insignificant moment that changed everything…


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 74511
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2009 Updated: October 16, 2011


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Last Breath

yay!

 
Summary:

 

Edward Cullen began life in the highlands of pre-medieval Scotland.  He should have died there, revered as the warrior-king he was.  He didn't.  In the aftermath of a battle against Celtic invaders his life is forever altered; he is murdered and transformed. He struggles to come to terms with his new life over the centuries despite finding meaning in his family, his studies, and his music.  Just as the tedium begins to destroy the tenuous foundations of the life he has built, the arrival of a familiar woman disrupts everything.

 


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 67089
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2009 Updated: October 24, 2010


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Endings and Mendings

damn i love your writing

 
Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Divine Providence

you are awesome!

 
Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Vampire Biology

really enjoying this story.  smart writing. you've neatly sidestepped all the usual twilighted pitfalls.

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is an anomaly as far as Bella Swan is concerned, defying all her preconceived notions about the whorishness of hockey players. Through incessant stalking and persistence, can Edward wears down Bella's resistence and teaches her to embrace her inner hockey hooker? A ridiculous love story.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 14519
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2010 Updated: August 19, 2010


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot

this is a fun story.  thanks for making me laugh.

 
Waking Up by RiaMaria Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 847]
Summary:

Set in the summer after Twilight, 2 weeks before the beginning of senior year, Bella wakes up one Saturday morning to find a sleeping, HUMAN Edward beside her.

"It was late August and we were going back to school in two weeks, so every single day had become invaluable to me. To be treasured, remembered forever, saved for a time I must leave to allow her to pick up her life as if I had never disturbed it.

But what about now? If I am truly human, that is no longer the case. I can give Bella everything she ever wants, everything she deserves. A real life, a husband... children? I have no need to leave her. I can stay and love her forever... If she’ll have me."

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Thanks to angel_gidget for the awesome banner!


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 214413
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2010 Updated: November 05, 2010


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed
Date: July 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Waking Up with Edward

fun story! thanks!

 
Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed
Date: July 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Acceptance

she normally wears a bra to bed?



Author's Response:

I seem to recall in Twilight she used to go to bed virtually fully clothed... Obviously not doing so would have been far too debauched. LOL!

I am kind of taking the mickey, this story is full of tiny things like that, as I'm snarky...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

 
Summary:

"We live in a darkness of our own making... blind to a habitant world all but unseen by us. A world of beings imaginable to us only as flights of fancy. Who are these beings we dare to imagine but fear to accept? If they know our secrets, why can't we know theirs?"

MYSTERY/ROMANCE (maybe). A disgraced journalist, a goth hacker, and a mysterious disappearance. AU, mature.

WARNING: Contains actual plot and might make your head hurt.

This tale is a nod to the great Mr. Steig Larsson, author of the Millenium trilogy and is one of my favorite contemporary authors. This is not a crossover, though. For more info, please refer to my LJ at http://eun-hye1.livejournal.com/8505.html


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 26875
[Report This] Published: March 08, 2010 Updated: June 07, 2010


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i like your story!

 
Edit My Life by djoneal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 239]
Summary:

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Bella, after having her life ripped apart, moves to Portland in an attempt to escape her shattered dreams and stalker of an ex. Broken and disillusioned, will she be able to pick up the pieces and start anew? Will she ever trust enough to love again?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 161928
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2010 Updated: May 29, 2011


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Calamity Jane

i love your dialogue!

 
Summary:

Bella moves to Forks, to avoid her newborn mother and the demented vampires who want her dead. Much to her surprise, she finds five of those very same creatures attending school with her.

Now she has to hide her knowledge and abilities from them, especially the very attractive Edward. But what happens when Renee exposes her secrets to the very people she's worked so hard to hide from? 


Categories: AU, Twilight Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 22668
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2010 Updated: September 18, 2010


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed
Date: July 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to reading more!

 
Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 669]
Summary:

Banner by Whatobession17

Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 149789
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2010 Updated: November 12, 2011


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling

aw! i love romantic homeless stories!!

 
Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1968]
Summary:

 

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 146076
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2010 Updated: February 03, 2011


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

write more! write more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review and giving my story a chance! Chapter Six is in line to be validated as I type, which is the most recent chapter that I have written. So from here on, the story should be updated weekly, hopefully on Fridays! My supervisory beta is awesome and fast, so hopefully we'll be good to go!

I totally love your enthusiasm! It's very catchy! I'm totally going to go write more now! XxXxXx

Thanks again and lots of kisses!

<3 Shel

 
Summary:

Thanks to FrozenSoldier for the awesome banner

 

For a long time, Twilight has been Jen Porter’s only escape from her miserable reality. After a freak accident on a train, Jen finds herself actually living in the world of Twilight, as Bella's twin sister. At first, it’s a dream come true, but she soon starts to realize that her existence in Bella’s world could permanently alter the course of events. To make things worse, her old life in Australia keeps creeping back in. Something bad happened before Jen woke up in the world of Twilight, and everyone else seems to know something she doesn’t. Has the line between the real universe and alternate universe become blurred?

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 110438
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2010 Updated: July 01, 2011


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Nice

more please. okay.

 
Summary:

Edward never came back. But that's okay, because Bella Swan is doing fine. Her life has been vampire free for four years and, while it was rough at first, she's content with her new life. That is, until a certain vampire casually walks back into her life. Can Bella accept the lessons that life is trying to teach her? Or is her future doomed to be dictated by her past?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 74546
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2010 Updated: January 02, 2011


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed
Date: November 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

super cool!

 
Summary:

There's a dusty old bookstore in Seattle where the proprietor keeps odd hours and knows the location of every book in his stock.  What surprises hide in its stacks?

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes Word count: 122523
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2010 Updated: February 01, 2012


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

best self love scene ever

 
A Thousand Leaves by flabella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 607]
Summary:

Isabella Swan met the Cullens when she was a child, growing up as Alice's best friend. Not every Cullen liked Bella, though. Alice's older brother Edward took it upon himself to make Bella's trip toward adulthood a nightmare. Everything changes when Edward is sent to prison for the murder of Bella's mother, Renee.

Special thanks to crazyj9girl for the top banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 182060
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2010 Updated: June 21, 2011


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Seattle, part two

great story!

 
Summary:

bannerVampire Edward meets human Bella when she is being attacked in a dark alley. Things get ugly and Edward is forced to take her to his house to save her.Not all great love stories start once upon a time and far far away; some begin down dark alleys.

Banner by Libby at thetwilightawards.com


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 45321
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2010 Updated: February 21, 2011


Reviewer: justlooking94347869 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Vampires and other things that suck

funny - check

well written - check

sweet - check

i like you.

 




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