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Penname: nobi-fawkes [ Contact]
Real name: Naubahar
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Member Since: April 23, 2010
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Summary: 
"My life was an unending, unchanging midnight. It must, by necessity, always be midnight for me. So how was it possible that the sun was rising now, in the middle of my midnight?"
Many have tried to finish Stephenie Meyer's "Midnight Sun" (Twilight from Edward's point of view) and from what I've seen, none of them truly finished what she started. This ending to "Midnight Sun" starting at Chapter 13 is not only picking up where she left off, but uncovering the Edward that she created, and blending the perspectives of many to hear the rest of his story. This first book is a unique turning point in the arc of his character.
Categories: Twilight Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 81011
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2010 Updated: September 11, 2010
Reviewer: nobi-fawkes Signed
Date: May 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Goodbyes - Chapter 21
I love your take on Midnight Sun. It's really insightful. I loved the crack you made about Team Jacob. It was hilarious. I was reading it on the bus and nearly laughed out loud. I do find, however, that the more you go on, the more contemporary Edward sounds when he's narrating. I'm not sure if it's intentional, but you ought to go back to reading Midnight Sun and get back into his own 'voice'.
I can't wait for the next chapter though :)
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2010 Updated: March 24, 2011
Reviewer: nobi-fawkes Signed
Date: June 24, 2010
Title: Forgettable
Angela's definitely getting lucky ;) I'm so upset! I wanna get another upset! :( (end childish rant). I love this story. I just want MORE :D Author's Response: LOL. Another chap on it's way soon. I'm putting it in here tomorrow for validation. :-) I know, Lucky Ang! So glad you're liking the story! Belinda. xx
Reviewer: nobi-fawkes Signed
Date: June 30, 2010
Title: Forgettable
I LOVED it and HATED it. They were so close to having mind-numbing, spine-tingling sex and he has to pay attention to what she was saying! He does remember everything, but he just thinks they're his fantasies but now he knows differently.
I want to get Edward's pov next. I want to know what's going through his mind and why he emmitted that low guttural groan.
Summary: 
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Edward struggles to come to grips with his new life in Forks and a father he’s just met for the first time. He's unfamiliar with the easy going lifestyle he's been thrust into with the sudden death of his mom and step-father. Gone are the strict rules filled with harsh discipline and constant demands for perfection on the piano.
He finds a reason to fight his past demons when he meets a dark haired beauty that captures his heart. But then, his whole world is in jeopardy when a stalker threatens Bella and tries to destroy everything Edward now holds dear. LEMONS
"Our being is subject to all the chances of life." Katherine Anne Porter
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Word count: 54930
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2010 Updated: December 29, 2010
Reviewer: nobi-fawkes Signed
Date: June 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Nice comeback :D I love this story. Are you going to update soon? I might explode if you don't. I want Bella to give Edward a hug from me. We need it :)
Reviewer: nobi-fawkes Signed
Date: July 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I understand why Carisle is treating Bella the way he is, but I still find it mean and horrible. He should remember what it was like to be young. And he shouldn't blame her for what happened. It's so unfair to her.
Now Charlie walking in on them... that's gonna be interesting to read
Summary: The Cullen family seem to relax now that Renesmee is no longer in danger of death and the Volturi. But what happens when years pass and the Volturi once again become interested?
Alice sees various visions of what she believes to be the same person, could this be the nail in the coffin for the Cullen family or is this something to look forward to?
Enjoy a post-Breaking Dawn fanfic from various points of view and romantic smut in further chapters.
Rated NC-17 for sex, violence, and some language.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Billy, Brady, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Claire, Collin, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Leah, Marcus, Nessie, Paul, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No
Word count: 67761
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2010 Updated: May 04, 2012
Reviewer: nobi-fawkes Signed
Date: May 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-Revelations
Wow, That was a surprise. Bella's reaction, I mean. I wonder how she'll react when Charlie actually tells her.
Reviewer: nobi-fawkes Signed
Date: May 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Merging Families
Nice start :). I was hoping for more chapters, but no such luck. I wondery what'll happen next.
One thing I don't really like is the Charlie/Sue relationship. It's a bit too tidy. I don't know... too proper, and love hardly ever is.
Can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: nobi-fawkes Signed
Date: May 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Love at Arms Length
Nice filler chapter. Nessie is sweet. I don't know what else to say
Reviewer: nobi-fawkes Signed
Date: May 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-Life's Little Crashes
I wonder what she has planned. *Evil laugh*
Reviewer: nobi-fawkes Signed
Date: June 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-Wedding Planning
Interesting :). I was wonderying whose wedding was being planned. I love Kate/Garrett. It's such a cute ship
Reviewer: nobi-fawkes Signed
Date: June 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-Love, Marriage, Surprise!
Sweet! I wonder what they're gonna name him. Something normal, I hope :)
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