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Penname: antipyro [ Contact]
Real name: Gina
Status: Member
Member Since: February 19, 2009
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Beta-reader: Yes
Female, older than I look and should know better.
Been reading fan fiction for a few years now, I'm just getting into Twilight stories and am amazed at the calibre and range of authors.
Live in Canada, just north of Toronto, yeah, I know, have many interests - reading, of course, karate, camping, gardening, sports-skiing, swimming, biking, walking, being with my boyfriend, partying,,,,etc.
I really like to give the authors the best review I can to assist them in A) feeling better about their work, B) get my name in print---not really, C) get the next chapter or story up from the author, D) It's too easy just to sit back and let others do it for you, E) I've been a beta reader.
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Summary: In Twilight, Edward told Bella that if her blood sang to James like it had to Edward, it would've meant a fight right there in the field. What if this was the case? Follow Bella as she is kidnapped and turned by James, and the Cullens' fevered attempts to get her back. Features James/Bella, but this is ultimately an Edward/Bella story. "NC-17" for language, situations, and eventual sexual content. 
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Word count: 34456
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008
Reviewer: antipyro Signed 
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Oh, come on! Laurent has to have at least a little clue?!
I'm surprised that with the vast knowledge the Cullen's have amassed, that they don't have a cell phone triangulation set to hone in on the phone signal. Hmmmmm.....suspicious. *snickers*
Ooooo, James is gonna pay for that last sentence.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I hope this sad story ends triumphantly for Bella.
James, what a dick! Oh, now he has feelings???? JERK!!!
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
James, more feelings???? Wanting a home????
I'm still waiting for Bella to make a run for it.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Ya, but to go back to James??? At least if she was torn, even a bit, it would have seemed more in character.
Did James plan this out anyway? How could he??
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
O.k., Isn't Aro the one who can read all your thoughts with one touch? So, when they shook hands, he would know everything about them.
Ya, where did Rose come from??? Are the rest of the Cullen's there? I would have suspected Esme and Carlisle to be there, as Carlisle spent some time with the Volturi.
O.k., next chapter.....
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
With the way Rose is feeling now towards Bella, She must have been seething to let James take Bella away. I do hope she gets to have some revenge. *he he he*
Ya, Tanya's gotta go, but before she does, will she admit there's nothing between her and Edward???
Edward's gotta make it there, just like in New Moon, but reversed.
Great work, even if it's finished already.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: May 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Relationship History, what history? There's no mention of how he enamored her to be with him. She was living a lie, for what? Just because she thought Edward had moved on to someone else? So why was she expecting to meet one of them someday and come to a confrontation? It shouldn't matter to her, if she's at all interested in James.
It was good of James to show Bella exactly how he feels about being a vampire, as drastic as it was, I think he wanted Bella to be free to leave him if she wanted. Later, in their suite, this changes. Did I miss something?
A thought provoking chapter indeed.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: May 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Pretty harsh on Bella, eh? I'm hoping that James had some kind of control on her, maybe he had a talent too, and when he died, the spell was broken. Well, I liked it!, too bad it's your story. LOL
I'm sure Bella will come around to Edward, maybe with a last minor pang for James, maybe in a dream or something????
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: May 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Oh ya, Bella will come around, but first she'll slap Edward and make him promise never to do anything that would have her doubt his love for her.
Yea, that's the ticket! I'm so good at these, Oh, sorry SarahJayne, yes, apologies, it's all yours and Stephanie Meyer's too. Sorrrr-eeeee.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: May 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Great ending, but I thought that it might have been better if Bella said those last words, as Edward thought them? Bella needing so much convincing that she was worth it, it would seem more likely for her realization to take hold.
Great sex scene! HOT!!! But then anything with Edward and Bella is usually hot! I don't remember any sex scenes with James though.....was that on purpose???? I think!
Thank you so much for this, I really enjoyed it.
Summary: Mrs. Cope is having a very dull day, when three unexpected visitors to her office suddenly make it much more exciting. Edward/Bella humour. Set post-Twilight, Pre-New Moon. Avaliable in Spanish over at fanfiction.net, under the title "Horarios".
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1868
[Report This] Published: July 30, 2008 Updated: July 30, 2008
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: December 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Timetables
I can remember a 'Mrs. Cope' at my high school. None of the other, younger secretaries came to help as much as Mrs. Cope did. Always polite, but sometimes, when you spoke too fast or mumbled, she just didn't respond at all. LOL
Why did Alice only want two classes changed? Is it because it would be too obvious? I can imagine why Bella wouldn't want Edward in her gym class. I'm surprised he didn't insist as she was still in a cast, and afterwards, she'd need some 'support'. Author's Response: Alice wanted two classes changed because Edward reigned her in, with the worry that if both of them swapped all their classes for her, Bella would be overwhelmed by the attention. He went along with all classes because after the James incident he didn't want to be away from her for a second. Alice thought this was unfair, but went along with it anyway, because she sensed that Edward and Bella might want to have a few lessons alone together.
^And now you can tell that I think way too much about these characters!
Summary: Edward pays Bella's workplace a visit. Fluff ensues. Edward/Bella, post-New Moon fluff.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward, Mike
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1611
[Report This] Published: July 30, 2008 Updated: July 30, 2008
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: December 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Newton's Outfitters
I can just see Edward being this fun and playful. Even after Bella's turned, I bet he'll get the better of her, regardless.
Great lines and so much fun to read. Author's Response: Thanks! I loved writing this one. It was great to write something fun and not too serious for a change. :)
Summary:  The Cullens throw a Halloween costume party and take Nessie trick-or-treating. Hilarity ensues. For the Missing Moments challenge. 
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Word count: 2646
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: March 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Who's Been Sleeping in my Bed
Hallowe'en is my fave holiday, if you can call it that. Love the dressing up as some one or some thing else. It brings out my inner thespian.
For something quick, I really hope this continues as it's got a great start.
Summary: Bella's late for class and Professor Masen doesn't like it.
PURE SMUT. You have been warned.
Part of my series, "Smut, Please".
Disclaimer: I don't own anything, except for the plot. SM owns the characters.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Smut, Please.
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1611
[Report This] Published: August 31, 2008 Updated: September 01, 2008
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Late
Oh YES! I love this smut. If I smoked, I'd need a cigarette too. I wonder, for part 2, if she's 5 minutes late, does he do it from behind??
Summary: Vampire brothers Edward, Emmett, and Jasper are stuck at age 17 forever. Unfortunately, though all of them have lived for over 100 years, they have very little experience with dating girls, especially modern ones. What happens when their vampire powers and inexperience collide? Will the results prevent them from winning the hearts of the girls they love?
If you like humor, angst, and edge of your seat, nail-biting cliff hangers, you'll like this story.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes
Word count: 108776
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2008 Updated: January 09, 2009
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Shotgun
You said to read this first, so I am.
Interesting that Rosalie and Alice aren't in it from the beginning.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Ride
Clever retrospective of their lives and backgrounds. Reading now to catch up.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Officially Freaked out
Great play on Royce's insecurities, I'm sure he'll get more from Emmett.
Jasper, I hope is figuring out his stares and facial emotions.
Yeah! more Edward!
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Not her
Great parallel store line; I'm just thinking of what could bring them together...
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Mud Wrestling
Got to put that on my bucket list - mud fight! Oh, wait, had one of those already at the beach! Done.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Adonis the Perverted
Great chapter, lots of information there.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Notes
Awwww, I bet you had a lot of fun writing the letters. They were so sweet and relayed the most important information.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Rookie Mistakes
Wouldn't being gentlemen, that they would leave a note for the girls saying they'd been called away for a few days? They could have left in the girls' lockers, after school hours.
Anyways, nice writing for Rosalie.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: A Long Day
Bastard is too gentle a word - maybe slime-ball, degenerate, louse, scum-of-the-earth, monster, etc. So glad Rosalie's dad saw it her way. Yeah!
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Addicted to Love
Glad the girls can help each other out.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Aftermath
Can't imagine what the human story will be. "Three teen girls, severely injured in traumatic crash off cliffie?" LOL
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