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Penname: antipyro [ Contact]
Real name: Gina
Status: Member
Member Since: February 19, 2009
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Beta-reader: Yes
Female, older than I look and should know better.
Been reading fan fiction for a few years now, I'm just getting into Twilight stories and am amazed at the calibre and range of authors.
Live in Canada, just north of Toronto, yeah, I know, have many interests - reading, of course, karate, camping, gardening, sports-skiing, swimming, biking, walking, being with my boyfriend, partying,,,,etc.
I really like to give the authors the best review I can to assist them in A) feeling better about their work, B) get my name in print---not really, C) get the next chapter or story up from the author, D) It's too easy just to sit back and let others do it for you, E) I've been a beta reader.
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Summary: 150 years after Edward leaves and 149 years after Bella's death, Jasper stumbles into a newly published fiction that isn't fiction at all. Who is Eve? Who are the Guardians? What are the concequences?
"May 17, 2153
Dearest Reader,
Come, pull up a chair and sit by me. Locked in these pages you will find my story, my memory, my secrets, my heart, my life, my death, some things that came after and everything in between.
Can I trust you with it?
It is truly fantastic and not for the faint-hearted. Not for the realist, not for the cynic, no never for the cynic, only the pure hearted will find purchase here. Lend me your ear, your open mind and heart and I will pull you to a myth you dare not dream of, a myth you unknowingly live every day.
Tell me dearest, do you believe in Angels? Not as Dogma, not as testament to whichever religion bears your faith, not fairies with wings and halos. Can you believe in the beings of light, of strength and power that govern here on earth, the beings that hold all things in order, beings that guard your humanity?
Perhaps Angels is the wrong word, a word they would see with distaste. So we shall call them what they are in essence, the guardians. Do you believe? Can you believe in the mythical? If you cannot, this is no place for you. I’ll give you a moment to ponder this. Please do not tread lightly upon my request.
As I have learned all too harshly, prepared or not, one can never go back. "
Told in varying POV, with excerpts from the book Storm.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 92469
[Report This] Published: December 26, 2008 Updated: November 14, 2011
Reviewer: antipyro Signed 
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Storm: Warning - A letter from Eve
Wonderful beginning, I hope to catch up soon.
Your prose seems to indicate a lost memory or a residual life experience. I can only guess where it will take me.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed 
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Understanding
Hmmm.
Who's Adam? Guess I have to read to find out.
Nice work.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Storm: Worth
A longer chapter would be really nice, but I know I'm just catching up, still.
Yes, it's worth it now.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Broken
Like, am I going to sob through this fic or what?
Where's my box of kleenex.....?
You've captured the pain and angst very well.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Storm: Guardians and Storm: Lost
Excellent choices, and I've read the outtakes.
Your mind is brilliant!
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Letters
I thought this was a newly released book, not something 149 years old. Am I wrong?
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Redemption
Is Bella ready to forgive, them and herself?
Very intriguing.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Storm: Fate
At first I thought this story was taking place after Breaking Dawn, but, it's not.
A very clever summary of events.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Loyalty
Still reading....still waiting....still thinking....."WHAT?!?"
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Storm: Stolen
The depth you portray in Bella's death, is reflected only by her undying passion, unresolved yet.
cute poem, even if it's all cheese.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Storm: Proposition
I like roses and violets....
I cried, but only a little this time.
You evoke emotions in me that, had I been immortal, would have still caused me effect.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: February 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Storm: Burn
Ah, yes, the burning. That hole in her chest, the aching pain of want....that is what I too feel.
I don't really care that it's short and you're doing an amazing job, posting every day or other day????? I'm used to waiting a week or more!!! Yes, I'm patient, but.....things can change.....
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: February 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Honesty
Brilliant! I love the way Emmett, of all characters, takes the soap box and speaks to his family. I wonder what he'll say to Bella??
I'm sad to hear this story will end soon, but all things change. I'm excited, happy, but also anxious for your next story.
Rest up, the storm is going to hit!
Thank you soooo much for all of this.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: March 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Precipice
You thrill me!!! All those many paragraphs of thoughts, wishes, hatred, doubt, conviction, love and many, many more feelings and emotions - How do you do it???? I'm enraptured!!
Poor Edward.....I can only imagine Bella with the same thoughts and feelings, struggling after all these years...hoping for her Edward to find her.
Whaaaaaaaa! ...where's the kleenex????
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: March 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Torch
Happy Birthday!!!....forever 16......
Marhhhvelous Dahling! Fantastic work, yes, the kleenex was required, but just a bit.
Waiting for more --- Please, soon?
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: March 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Storm: Control
What high honour may I give to you both for such a heart wrenching story and fulfilling poem? I offer two of the best frosted cupcakes, with sprinkles (your choice of flavour) for your consideration and enjoyment. I am humbled.
I like poetry. I was never really good at it. It always ended up as a story. LOL!!
Torment me no longer; I ask for your healing salve in the form of another chapter. Please????
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: March 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Anticipation
I really don't know how you do it!?! This is simply amazing, so intricate, so personal, so meticulous, so, so, so.....everything good and wonderful!!!!
If you want to have some motivation, I'll give you a foot rub, massage, be at your beck and call, anything you want and need until that next chapter is done. I'll stroke your ego and put you on the highest pedestal, (with a desk and laptop) to show you off to the masses. I'll bake you cookies, cakes, any sweet, delicious, delectible morsel, just for you.
So, PLEASE, PLEASE, do not ever think that I take you for granted and I'm not immeasurably grateful to your thoughts and prose.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Anticipation
I have been errant and have these two chapters to catch up on. I would never omit your review of your fine work, and hope that further chapters are still being thrashed about with your wonderful crew.
...and I thought Edward 'dazzled' me.....
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Unexpected
There you go....you've overdone yourself with this one...this is a monument to authors everywhere. I could not stop reading, but was thankful for the breaks, because it was so freakin' long. I'm gushing!
The synopsis at the end helped confirm where we were in the story line - thanks, it's a great help.
Loved the 'Fish are friends, not food" line. Just for Bruce, the shark! Fantastic movie! The Disney Anastasia movie was just as good, and funny too. Great history context for kids, put in simplistic terms.
You, and your Beatas are marvellous and should be nominated for some kind of 'longest chapter award'. I send you a mountain of sugar cookies, all dressed up pretty with coloured icing sugar frosting.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: September 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Traces
I am just so thrilled!! that I get to read more of this truly historic story. This is a masterpiece and as in all good things, I will wait.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: September 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Intentions
I was indeed shocked to see that, YES!, you've continued the story....the one that left off at the most acute precipice in story-telling history. How I've waited, and waited.....and yes, it's still marked 'current' and 'not complete' on my master list of 'Must read' fanfiction.....and now....now I can anticipate the next chapter again.....knowing that you really didn't abandon me, (and everyone else), who love to read your words. I can count this as a blessing.
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you....ad infinitum....
No pressure....I know about life's interruptions, some longer than two years...try 5! I am patient.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: December 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Traces
Arrrgggghhhhh! You said it! "The reunion is coming!" The only question I wanted to know last.....and you did warn me......but...but...
I've waited for you so patiently to continue this marvelous story. There are very few that come up to this calibre. I'm in awe of your talents. Just keep writing....please?
Summary: Edward is a lonely vampire who has been waiting for over eighty years to find his soul mate. His sister Alice has never been able to see his true love, but for good reason--she hadn't been born yet. When Alice finally sees her, plans are made to finally make Edward's dream come true.
This is a different version of Twilight, and it's told from Edward's point of view.
A little lemony, but not too graphic. Rated NC-17 for mature themes and language, and possibly for violence in later chapters.
Thanks to Evilangel6714 for the awesome banner!
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 157222
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2009 Updated: May 21, 2009
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: March 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
Review.
Just kidding! Mmmmm, hot chocolate, a warm throw, a fireplace and Edward..Perfect!
Still reading to catch up...
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: March 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Nope, never took Edward as stalkerish and got your point. The recording of Bella's earlier life, will that be a factor later in the story? I hope so.
Great story. One comment, could you not leave so much space in between paragraphs? That and possibly breaking up your existing paragraphs, the long ones, into shorter sections. Just a suggestion.
I'll keep reading, I've got a lot to catch up on. Author's Response: The spacing is something that happens sometimes when I post. I think it's some sort of communication problem between computers. My original doesn't have all the spaces. Drives me nuts too. Sorry, but it takes forever to fix the spacing manually. Thanks for reading anyway.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: March 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High
Much better reading format, and a nice long chapter too!
Mike's thoughts of Bella have always been edgier than his outward appearance suggests.
I was wondering, if the Cullen's have already made their presence known in Forks, and Edward is just starting High School, what preceded this? I can't see Edward going to junior school. Was he just waiting for this year to start?
Lovely writing. Author's Response: It says that it was the first day of his junior year at Forks High. He'd already been in school a year. Sophomore year preceeded Junior year. Next year, he will be a Senior. Hope that answers your question.
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