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Penname: antipyro [ Contact]
Real name: Gina
Status: Member
Member Since: February 19, 2009
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Beta-reader: Yes
Female, older than I look and should know better.
Been reading fan fiction for a few years now, I'm just getting into Twilight stories and am amazed at the calibre and range of authors.
Live in Canada, just north of Toronto, yeah, I know, have many interests - reading, of course, karate, camping, gardening, sports-skiing, swimming, biking, walking, being with my boyfriend, partying,,,,etc.
I really like to give the authors the best review I can to assist them in A) feeling better about their work, B) get my name in print---not really, C) get the next chapter or story up from the author, D) It's too easy just to sit back and let others do it for you, E) I've been a beta reader.
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Summary: Vampire brothers Edward, Emmett, and Jasper are stuck at age 17 forever. Unfortunately, though all of them have lived for over 100 years, they have very little experience with dating girls, especially modern ones. What happens when their vampire powers and inexperience collide? Will the results prevent them from winning the hearts of the girls they love?
If you like humor, angst, and edge of your seat, nail-biting cliff hangers, you'll like this story.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes
Word count: 108776
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2008 Updated: January 09, 2009
Reviewer: antipyro Signed 
Date: April 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Delaying the Inevitable
Alice should re-visit her vision. It still stands that the Volturi have them in Italy.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Cullen Island
Can Bella use her gift to enter the house and get more clothes?
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: Prankenstein
Um, I'll need a more descriptive explanation for the names...er...ya, I think so. Maybe a demonstration or two...?
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Uninvited Guests
No tainting here. I'm amazed of Alice's sacrifice for her family, but did she have to tell them everything???
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: Christmas Time
Naughty, naughty! *oh my*
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Common Ground
I hope that the guard will make things in the Cullens' favour, if it should come to that.
I wonder who got Tanya?? LMFAO
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: Volterra
Peep show! Peep show! Get your tickets to the Edward and Bella Peep show!
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: The Ball
Great party; Carlisle's family will be on par with the Volturi, as right now, they are stronger. I'm thinking there'll be some kind of reciprocal arrangement.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45: Answers
Helping Tanya?? How?? Taking her to the zoo and pairing her with the chimps??
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46: Good Ole Boys Club
Hmmm, Felix still wants Bella...
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
You left us hanging....How could you?
Now, to catch up on the sequel...
Summary: 
Bella went cliff diving, but it didn't turn out so well. She broke her back. A decade later, Edward reappears in her life on the same night she loses her best friend and husband to a freak accident. Now a graduate student in Women's Studies, Bella isn't thrilled to see him. But when the Cullens re-enter Bella's life, they bring change, hope, and a new joint project that will require all their expertises.
Also, you can find a SPANISH version here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4829851/1/En_un_parpadeo
AND you can find images for various things like Esme's house, Edward's piano, Bella's wheelchair and Rose's car on my ff.net profile page:
http://www.fanfiction.net/~thatwritr
OR in my LJ gallery:
http://pics.livejournal.com/that_writr/gallery/000010z2
Special Update:
For personal reasons (a ridiculously full teaching schedule and being recently put in charge of a bi-annual local conference and ongoing project), I am no longer able to reply to reviews and questions. But that said, I wanted to give a BIG THANK YOU to EVERYBODY for the wonderful feedback and kind words that have been sent my way since the completion of this story in August 2009. I do still check my messages about once every 1-2 weeks and read *every* review. I just have too many to reply to anymore, but I didn’t want anyone to think I was ignoring her/him in particular, or didn’t appreciate readers taking time to leave a review. Writing this story was tons of fun and I’m thrilled readers seem to enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed the chance to write it. I can’t tell you how flattering that is!!! As I used to reply to all reviews, I feel a little badly about this decision, but work has been requiring virtually all of my time since the new (academic) year began.
Best to all of you in 2010 and beyond!
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 68 Completed: Yes
Word count: 221619
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2008 Updated: August 26, 2009
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: June 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Nice car!
Great way for Rosalie to introduce their home to Bella, and for her to get to know it...
Rosalie's still got it....sinister LOL
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: July 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
Yes, I must admit, humans aren't perfect and the slight? changes that happen in the change may not be so slight! Author's Response: :-D
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: June 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
I wasn't sure Edward was going to let her take control like that, knowing his history, but I'm so glad he did (or at least you did) LOL That was amazing!
I enjoyed the talking through it part too, a real sharing of love and joy. I'm so glad Edward and Bella have come to agree on an arrangement, that parallels marriage. It's kinda' new age for him, and I don't really think he's got the jist of it quite yet. Maybe with some more practice. ^_^
Absolutely joyful reading this incredibly long chapter with all that lemony goodness in it. I especially love your word choices, no spelling or grammatical errors and the simple way to make your point. Brava!
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Whoa! WOW! Awesome!!!
I've been on your update list and noticed regular and fairly quick updates, so, since I had your story on my list, I'll 'get around to it'. I should have done so immediately. Kick me in the head for not doing so. I'm stunned in the research and care you're taking in this story. I'm enthralled. There isn't enough compliments to say what I'm feeling for your story, from just the first chapter!!! GAH!
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Now you've gone and made me cry....Whaaaaaa
Too, too good!
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Ouch! You tease! We get Edward back and now Bella dismisses him. Oh, I get it....Edward gets to make up with her..... Clever!
Only 44 chapters to go....
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Bella will be soooo mad at him...Will she cave in though? Will she cry on his shoulder as he holds her? PLEASE?
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
It all had to be done. It goes by, and you don't really know what happens, until much later when you really think about it.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Building slowly is best done in great stories. It makes any climax all that much more exciting. Was that a pun??
This is fantastic.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Are we going to see Bella tirade? Hope so.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
WOW, what a story!!! ...and I can't wait for Edward's part.....
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: June 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Oh damn, I'm crying again! This is too....much!
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: June 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Every chance I get, I'll yell it from the roof tops!
This is so great.
Reviewer: antipyro Signed
Date: June 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Laughing....nice way to get Bella on a payroll, so she doesn't have to worry about rent, food, etc. What a grand play!
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