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Penname: GutterFace [Contact]
Real name: Jaime
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Member Since: February 19, 2009
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Writing was always my first love. I hope I am at least a little good at it.


I love to read almost as much as I write. I really enjoy a very original plot that makes me think (preferably with some lemons thrown in there) that is well written and stays away from all the over used subjects. If you know of any stories like that, send them my way!


You can also find my stories (and more) posted on FanFiction.net my name there is StarlightNights


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The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13653]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: GutterFace Signed
Date: March 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Teasing

I think the chapter was perfect!  Not grossed out at all.  I think it went along very well with the entire theme of the story.  Love it!

 
Summary:

PhotobucketThe idea for this fanfiction story came from my one main critique of Meyer's novels: that Bella and Edward's relationship lacks conflict.  Sounds crazy, right?  But think about it.  They experience small quibbles and spats, all of which are resolved on the very next page!  Yes, their love is enduring.  But even the most magical relationships need a little real conflict and angst to make them magical yet believable!  So I picked this up from New Moon.  In the book, Bella forgives Edward way too easily when they reunite, in my opinion.  So I wanted to give her character a new and interesting chance to stand her ground on her own turf.  Edward NEVER returned to Forks in this story; instead, it picks up three years later.  Bella is in college, participating in an environmental work-study program in Maine.  And...well, you'll see!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 30848
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: April 13, 2009


Reviewer: GutterFace Signed
Date: March 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Lamb Becomes the Lion

I love it so far.  This is what I wanted from Bella in the books.  She needed a little attitude.  She needed to express her emotion to Edward on how she felt when she left him.  It was all just too easy at the end of New Moon.  In Twilight she was not shown as weak.  She was willing to sacrifice herself to save Renee so I didn't understand why in New Moon she was turned into a weak character.  I love your take on it.  And I love it that Bella curses, she now has the attitude and spunk I wanted to see in her.  She really needs to rip Edward a new one for what he put her through and the lies that he's told his family.

And if you're still looking for a banner I could try.  I am new to the banner making process but I would give it a try if you'd like.  Just let me know if you have any ideas or anything for it.  Or if you even still want one. 

Can't wait to see what comes next.  I really like where it's gone so far.  Sorry the review was so long.



Author's Response: If you have any banner ideas, please send them my way!!!

 
Reviewer: GutterFace Signed
Date: March 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Little Berry Lightbulbs

Awww, she finally gets to see everyone again! 

And I have to say, I love your Bella.  In the book she was weak and took Edward back to easily.  I like how your grown up Bella is really thinking of what she would have missed if she had been changed.  It's a nice change.  I really enjoy this.  Keep it coming!

 
Reviewer: GutterFace Signed
Date: April 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: I Own the Night, and the Nightmares

Have I ever told you how much I love your story? Because I do! 

 
Summary:

The Cullens have relocated after the death of Charlie, along with newly weds Jake and Ness, to a remote village in Russia.  However, they are forced to relocate back to Forks after some poor planning and newly wed passion throws some unseen additions into the Cullen mix.  What happens when Alice has a vision of the Volturi coming back to pay the new addtions a visit?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 15964
[Report This] Published: February 06, 2009 Updated: March 30, 2009


Reviewer: GutterFace Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Happiest Days of Our Lives

Very well written.  And everyone's reactions were so cute.  You write the Jake and Nessie pairing very well.  They make an adorable couple (and I'm sure they will make an adorable baby).  Can't wait to read more when it comes.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your input!  Stayed tuned for more!

 
Summary:

Bella is a mid-90s club kid caught up in a life she'd never intended to have. Edward isn't sure whether he wants to save her or join her. Rated for drug use, sexual themes, profanity, and other adult themes. All angst all the time. AH/AU


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 31328
[Report This] Published: February 28, 2009 Updated: March 25, 2009


Reviewer: GutterFace Signed
Date: March 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: It's All in the Letting Go

This story is so well writen.  I love the honest emotion of all the characters.  You can almost feel their angst and pain.  And the words just flow perfectly.  You are doing a wonderful job.  I can't wait to read what comes next. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! This is one story I can't wait to write what comes next! I'm actually writing another story at the same time that's winding up at another site and it's taking longer to finish than I'd like, simply because this one keeps making me write it. The next chapter for this story is first-person Edward, with some journal entries. I hadn't even planned on doing that. :)

 
Summary:

Edward and Bella decide to take their relationship to the next level.  Things don't necessarily go as planned.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 6574
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2009 Updated: March 06, 2009


Reviewer: GutterFace Signed
Date: March 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The (inter)Course of True Love Never Did Run Smooth

That was great!  It was great from the very beginning.  The title was perfect.  And I can imagine the clumsy disaster that is Bella going through all of that.  Can't wait to read more.  I'm sure it will make me smile.

 
With Teeth by TalulaBlue Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5907]
Summary: Feature

Edward is a 27-year-old alcoholic/addict struggling with his recovery. Bella is a 23-year-old who's moved back home after college. This fic chronicles how they meet, fall in love, and struggle with the complexities of their relationship. Not nearly as maudlin as it sounds (I hope).

Rated NC-17 for graphic (and sometimes non-romantic) sex, drug and alcohol use and abuse, profane language, and brief (very brief) suicidal ideation (although NO suicide attempts). No sexual assault, no cutting.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 183053
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2010


Reviewer: GutterFace Signed
Date: March 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm only two chapers in but I'm already hooked.  You are a wonderful writer!  You just made me fall in love with Bella and Seth there and I know it's going to be a Bella and Edward story but I couldn't help it.  Their interaction in this chapter was very real and cute and I loved it.  I think I'm going to be up all night getting caught up.





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