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Penname: leeseeq [Contact]
Real name: Lisa
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In Perfect Time by ravenbeauty Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

In music, in poetry, in life -- timing is everything


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 13016
[Report This] Published: October 23, 2011 Updated: January 02, 2012


Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: November 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow, it seems like these Mormons are something more like a mixture of convent and religious mafia, I find that puzzling and a little bit funny.  I'm truly not mocking you, it's just funny to see how others see my religion from the outside:)  The religous difference between them, it's as good an obstacle to overcome as any.  Every good story has to have one, I'm curious to see how this one plays out.

 
My Brother's Keeper by content1 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:


Banner by the Amazing Dr. Twilight PharmD

 

What was a teenager vampire to do when faced with his first outing with his mate and singer but ask his clairvoyant sister to help?  Alice's version of Edward and Bella's time in the meadow.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5244
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2011 Updated: October 29, 2011


Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: October 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: My Brother's Keeper

It was fun to hear this take on the events of that day, quite a fun and original way for it to play out, with the family there helping him.  I love the bond Edward has with his family.  I think the rating is miscategorized, it seems like it belongs in the PG-13 rating rather than G.  I think of the G rating as one where I could feel comfortable allowing my 12 yr old to read.  Just an opinion though.  Great one-shot, thanks for writing! 

 
Summary:

 

 

There are few places hard to get to in this world. But there aren't any where it's harder to live.

Day of adventure between Edward and Bella. 

Entry for The Canon Tour's Twilight Round.

 


Categories: Twilight Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2834
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2011 Updated: November 18, 2011


Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: November 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Where It's Harder To Live (one-shot)

What an interesting parallel.  I liked this little fic:)

 
Invisible by Viridian1 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Invisible Banner

(AU/New Moon/Canon/BPOV)

Edward leaves and Bella does not recover. "So the night Victoria leapt through my open window, crouching like a cat at the foot of my bed, I regarded her with the same enthusiasm as I did the leaves that fell from her tattered clothes and littered my floor. I blinked."

Rating: R for Dark themes. No language, No lemons.

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6916
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2011 Updated: December 31, 2011


Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: July 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Invisible

Lots of great material here.  Very well executed.  Loved it.  Thank you for writing.

 
Summary:

One day while everyone is waiting for the Volturi to come with their guard, Edward gets an invitation to visit from the last person he ever thought he would.  What could Billy Black possibly want to say to him? 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Billy, Edward, Esme, Sam
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3750
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2012 Updated: January 09, 2012


Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: One Father to Another

I really love your portrayal of Edward this way.  I'm always surprised at how many writers, even canon ones, miss or don't appreciate his emotional maturity.  That is my favorite aspect of his personality, and is what makes him
"Edward".  You really captured that well, and this was a great piece.  Thanks for writing!

 
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: March 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: One Father to Another

What a great little fic, I really love pieces that showcase Edward's maturity and depth.  Thanks for writing!

 
Summary:

A Night Without Rest banner

Edward is a veteran of World War I, who is all but confined to a hospital in England after a head injury erases any memory he had of his life before the battle at Passchendaele. When his doctor suggests that Edward accompany him and his wife on a trip to shore, he agrees just to get out and do something.

In Scarborough, he sees a woman on the beach who reminds him of someone he knew. Can Bella help Edward remember what he lost?

~~Banner by the amazing FrozenSoldier~~


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6993
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2012 Updated: March 06, 2012


Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: March 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a fun little fic!  I hope to many more from you, thanks for writing:)

 
Summary:

A missing heartfelt moment between Bella and Edward set during Bella’s pregnancy in Breaking Dawn. Inspired by Charlene Soraia’s version of the song “Wherever you will go.” 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2175
[Report This] Published: April 21, 2012 Updated: April 23, 2012


Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: April 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Wherever you go

I agree that in the Movie Edward was OOC, and it bugged.  I guess if you look at it another way it's probably more true to life how it would happen between real couples.  I know if my husband was dying for what I thought was an irrational, preventable and completely unnecessary reason we'd probably have some heated words. You put that kind of stress on people and there's gonna be an argument.  But that's the whole point, even if that's what REAL couples would do, it isn't what Edward would do and isn't that part of the reason we love him so much?  That he's somehow above those pesky human traits our real life mates have?  :)



Author's Response:

It's true. That's why we love him so much. But also I kind of feel that if there was going to be an argument like as in real couples they should've had it happen much earlier. To be honest I don't even think that many people would have yelled at someone they loved when they were in Bella's condition at that point. If the timepoints in the movie match with the book, the time that he yelled at her was when she was much too frail to be able to survive even if she had agreed to have them remove the baby. It was just before they realized she could drink blood to make her stronger and she was at her worst. It was right about the time that Jacob observed that she looked like she had only hours left to live. If someone you loved looked like they only had hours left, would you spend it shouting at them? He yells and then just walks out and leaves her?! Of course, I guess the thing is from the movie you don't really get the detail about how weak she really is, and it seems maybe they made her stronger, so I guess maybe that's it. But even still, as we said, it's completely out of Edward's character, and I feel he blamed himself much too much to yell at Bella. Anyhow, I shall shut up now, lol. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts!! 

 
Summary:

"Come to me..." the voice calls in the misty evening.  It has been ten years, after all...

 An entry into the TwiFicPics Memories of the Past Challenge, inspired by a banner by the brilliant and talented maxipoo1024.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1016
[Report This] Published: May 12, 2012 Updated: May 13, 2012


Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: May 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Personally I like both:)



Author's Response:

Good morning, leeseeq~

*grin* Both is good! Fanfiction allows for pretty much anything. lol

 

Thanks for reading!

LJ

 
Summary:

To Bella and Charlie's surprise, Edward shows up looking to spend some bonding time with Chief Swan.  Will a fishing trip alleviate Charlie's dislike of Edward?  A companion piece to Utterly Absurd’s “Gone Fishing”, from Edward’s perspective.

 


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Charlie, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4865
[Report This] Published: June 09, 2012 Updated: June 12, 2012


Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: June 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Hook, Line, and Sinker

I always love to find good PG fics.  This was a fun read that captured the awkwardness between the two men very well.  Thanks for writing, I hope to see more from you in the future.

 
Walking Among Us by Viridian1 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 48]
Summary:

Walking Among Us

Who has the ability to incapacitate an invincible vampire? And why would they attack an innocent, human girl? Edward is desperate to save the love of his life, but he’s fighting an unknown enemy… one he doesn’t realize is walking among us all.

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 29788
[Report This] Published: July 05, 2012 Updated: July 27, 2012


Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: July 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Homecoming

My goodness, I'm hooked already!

 
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: July 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Letting Go

Pain. Oh pain.

 
Summary:

Immortals and perpetual bachelors Emmett, Carlisle and Edward find themselves the guardians of a mischievous human girl after she's abandoned on their doorstep. With the unexpected help of one of Edward's classmates, they navigate the tricky landscape of raising a child, learning lessons in love and parenthood along the way. Strong AU.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 51602
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2012 Updated: December 23, 2012


Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: September 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Wow. That was fast. I wasn't expecting their first real conversation to be kissing on his bed:)  We'll chalk it up to them being meant for each other eh?



Author's Response:

As mentioned, this story is gonna be fairly short, I needed to get things moving :) But maybe we should go with your whole solumate theory, that sounds a bunch more romantic :)

 
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: September 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

I adore the way you introduced Bella into the situation, very compelling but without the excess drama.  It's strange that it was so casual, and yet that very casual-ness gave it an intimate feel.  I like the idea of Edward being somewhat friends with Bella first.  It's refreshing:)



Author's Response:

This story is going to be fairly short as far as fanfics go - under 20 chapters, if all goes according to plan, well, the new plan, I've already destroyed the plan I had prior to starting - so I needed to set some stuff up prior to beginning. Besides every relationship should start with a friendship if you ask me :)

 
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: September 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I'm completely hooked already!  I could definitely do without the F-bombs, they're a little distracting to the mood and flow for me, but I'm kind of a prude like that I guess:)  I love how you've introduced Alice's "ability" here, so creative!  You've taken some elements of an existing set of characters and story and made them completely your own!  Love it!



Author's Response:

The good news is the boys learn to be a little better behaved when they're around the baby, so there's hope on the cursing front... mostly. Don't expect too much from Emmett, though he'll try, but boys are boys.

Thanks for reading :)

 




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