I just wanted to say your intro, teaser, or whatever it's called about Bella not knowing some of the behind the scenes stuff is probably the best I've ever read, I absolutely love it I was instantly drawn into reading the story!

I'm dying to know what happens after Vampires die!  I'm so glad you're doing this story!  Great job so far:)

Seeing Carlisle lose his hope is so, so sad to me!  Excellent chapter, it's really good to see the conversation between Carlisle and Edward, it feels like it gives more meat to what's going on.  And I'm hoping against hope that Edward gets to see his human parents at some point.  Good luck with your move- it's such torture to move, I hope you have family and friends to help! 

So the Cullens lost both Edward and Bella, can you imagine?!  Obviously you can:)  Very compelling story, keep it up, I'm so anxious to see where it goes from here.  I LOVE vampire Edward, but in this context, I'm completely captivated by a human Edward that can cry and eat and- gosh there are so many human things!  Very interesting.  Keep it coming:)

Heartbreaking ending, but very thought provoking!  I wondered where Alice and Jasper went, I was glad to have them back inthe story!  Why so long between contact with Esme if Alice would have known where she was?  I guess being near Renesmee would have blinded her unless she seperated from them for a while...?  I'm so anxious for the next one, I want to see the reunion of them all and Edward's parents, and what happens in the next phase etc.  This Vampire afterlife, what a fantastic idea for a story!

I'm liking where this story is going!  The only thing I would say is that the profanity is distracting and a little out of character.  It's an easy way to convey strong emotions, but you're a great writer, I don't see that you need to do it that way.  Just a thought. Even so I like the story and I'm excited for the next chapter:)

Excellent actually, can't wait for the next part!

What a beautiful, beautiful piece!  I think this is the fourth or fifth time I've read it and I just love it more each time!

I am loving these character shots, as well as the family crest details.  I can't believe how well they have been written and only have a few reviews!  What is going on!?  I love that you kept them G rated too!  You've captured elements of that early family dynamic in a way that feels very authentic.  Excellent job!

Ok Jana, so enough of this talk of quittin this story!  I'm going to have some kind of psychiatric episode if you do!  Dont you dare!  I have about fifteen fics that I'm following at the moment as well as reading completed ones occasionally, and this is hands down my favorite!  I've literally read HUNDREDS of twilight fics and this one is still in my top ten.  There is just something about it that resonates with me.  I'm still hanging on your every freaking word so just don't worry about the reviews dropping off a little.  I believe it's the natural result of long periods of time between updates (that's not a snarky dig by the way.  I understand the real life thing completely, it's just a statement of fact) For me, I'm more likely to review when I feel the sense of continuity between chapters that you get when you read a fic straight through, or in large chunks.  I feel like when it's in spread out pieces it's harder to comment intelligently on the content.  I don't know if others think the same way, but I suspect they do.  I can't wait until it's finished and I can read it all the way through again.  You're doing great, just keep up the good work!

I REALLY wanted to read the next chapter of this story, so I looked for you at fanfiction.net, when I didn't find you there I just googled you and to my great delight I found that you had a website with additional chapters of this story posted there!   I thought I'd just come back here to submit a review since it's easier:)  I LOVE the story- stop apologizing for it!  The narrative drew me in from the very first paragraph and hasn't let go of me yet.  I'm on chapter six and I'm still hanging on your every word!  Keep them coming! :) 

I really like the idea for this story, I think you should definitely continue it!

Wow. The execution of that difficult chapter was flawless!  I don't think there is any way under heaven that could have been done better!  I'm so glad you kept Edward in character about wanting to marry Bella.  I'm pretty traditional about that kind of thing, but them marrying themselves that way was just awesome- perfect!