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Penname: leeseeq [ Contact]
Real name: Lisa
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Summary: Chief Swan has always been content to swallow the lies that Bella and Edward tell him. But after a conversation with one of his officers, Charlie questions his own judgment and decides it’s time for an unexpected visit during one of Bella’s sleepovers at the Cullens.
ExB fluff . . . and a little angst (Edward can’t seem to help himself LOL).
And Emmett humour – he’s so irrepressible that it’s impossible to keep him out of this story!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Word count: 10537
[Report This] Published: October 17, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: September 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Sunday Morning
So I LOVED this fic! Especially the second part. I'm not sure why, but I'm really picky about make out scenes between Edward and Bella. Sometimes I feel like I'm intruding on their privacy somehow. Silly huh? Anyway, I loved how you really captured the feeling of a home and family. Even though they're vampires and have their own family dynamic, it feels really real. The other thing that really impressed me was the use and pacing of time in the story. Even though most of it only covered a few minutes, the reader got a really comprehensive look into everything that was going on in the house in that moment, including people's thoughts. That's really difficult to do without messing up the flow and continuity of the story. Perfectly executed. Good job.
Summary: This is a companion to Lost Cause, just some scenes from Edward's POV. There will be key elements but main story will stand on its own.
It isn't necessary to understand thefirst chapter, but please read Lost Cause first.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Raison D'être
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 6349
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2009 Updated: January 11, 2010
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: April 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Decision
That reaction from Edward was so satisfying. It really hit the spot. Still loving the story, keep up the great work! Also if I understand your Author's note correctly, you are keeping the lemons seperate, if that is correct I just wanted you to know that I really appreciate the chance to skip the lemons. A good lemon is tempting, but I'm better off if I don't read them. Thanks for giving us the option to read them or not. :)
Summary: Set in the month of June after Twilight. For Edward’s birthday Carlisle arranges for Edward to take Bella to the Symphony in Seattle, with him and Esme as chaperones, of course. As Edward and Bella explore their present relationship and Edward’s past, Carlisle and Esme struggle to understand what impact Bella will have on Edward’s future.
This is an Edward/Bella story, but it concentrates on the changing dynamic of the relationship between Carlisle and Edward.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes
Word count: 36533
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2009 Updated: December 12, 2009
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: August 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I LOVE this story so far, my only criticism is that Edward seems to begrudge Esme and Carlisle interacting and being friendly he with Bella. This seems very out of character for him and I don't understand it. He loves sharing her with his family with her in the books and seems so at ease and close with them. It's part of what I love about him. That he's mostly above the sullen snotty teenage stuff. Maybe I'm missing something... perhaps it's some kind of forshadowing that I'm too dense to pick up on?
Summary: 
Giggle/Snort Awards - Summer 2011: Best Supernatural/Vampire Small Fry - Runner Up
What happens when Bella, Jacob, and Nessie experience the Cullen Valentine Day tradition for the first time. Laughs guaranteed!
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes
Word count: 60376
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2009 Updated: March 24, 2010
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: October 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Nessie
Wow, that was AWESOME! Nessie's gifts were hysterical, as well as her devious little manipulation!
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: October 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Jake
What a great fic!! Now I have to read the whole story! So creative, and totally hilarious! I gotta say that I'm surprised Jake took offense to the great ribbing the Cullens gave him. I see him as getting a huge kick out of it all and even throwing in a few wisecracks himself, but I guess indignant is probably more entertaining:)
Summary:  Edward Cullen was a loner, an outcast. He clearly hated everybody, including himself. He was not a nice person. So, why was I so drawn to him? And why did I get the crazy feeling he felt the same way?
WARNING: This story will deal with the aftermath of child abuse and rape. If that bothers you too much, I strongly recommend that you don’t read.
Thanks to steffyxxface for the lovely banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 115 Completed: Yes
Word count: 365612
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2011
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: June 24, 2011
Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113
That was the perfect thing for Carlisle to say- don't you just love that man?
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: April 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101
I love it! I hope this translates to Edward starting to call them his parents, and maybe even calling them that sometimes. I'm glad you wrote a section specifically about the idea of him leaving when he was 18 because I was wondering if that would come up. He's come so far since the early days of the story! Great job
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: March 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71
Don't make apologies for the pacing of the story. I find every detail compelling and realistically portrayed as far as pacing. If it went any faster it wouldn't feel realistic to me. No worries, I'm hanging on your every word.
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: May 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107
Wow, what a great and realistic scene-setting for their meeting. I especially love the interactions between Emmet and Edward. And of course your Carlisle is excellent as well!
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: May 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109
Powerful chapter, great job!
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: May 31, 2011
Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110
That's a really sweet idea for a gift for Edward, and great chapter!
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: June 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111
That is some serious progress- love it!!
Summary:
This story is also on fanfiction.net
Sequel to Event Horizon: Edward's side of New Moon. This is Eclipse as told from Edward's point of view. Canon, but there are several extra scenes that were not in the original novel. This story reference certain events in my previous story, Event Horizon, but you don't have to read it first. Dialogue from Eclipse is used in places out of necessity. All of this is the property of Stephenie Meyer. I do not own the characters or the situations, and I will not profit from this work. :)
Thanks so much to FrozenSoldier and TheTwilightAwards.com for the amazing banner. You should check out all of their work.
This story has been nominated for a Bring Me to Life award in the Red Ribbon category.
Also on fanfiction.net.
Thank you qjmom for working so hard!
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Word count: 185996
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2009 Updated: January 21, 2011
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: November 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Partnership
It was perfect! I'm impressed with how much was going on "behind the scenes". It was fun to get all that new information that Bella didn't know about. Great chapter! Author's Response: Thank you! I felt like there were a lot of things we didn't see in Eclipse. That's one of the reasons I've had fun imagining the extra stuff.
Summary: 
One of the key events that creates the epic nature of the Edward/Bella love story is the moment that Bella’s scent first hits Edward, and Edward somehow resists.
But what if Edward’s self control had kicked in just a moment too late? What if his proximity to Bella once his conscience reawakened was just too much, and he couldn’t restrain himself. What if he bit her, and Bella had a new life forced on her, before she had any desire to live for an eternity?
Before she had experienced Forks High School, made friends, and re-connected with Jacob. Before she knew what Edward was. And most importantly, before they fell in love.
What would Twilight look like then?
This is the story of the seemingly insignificant moment that changed everything…
Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Word count: 74511
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2009 Updated: October 16, 2011
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: February 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Phenomenon
Oh, our poor Edward! I really like the way the story is shaping up, this is such a fun direction for a fic!
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: February 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Complications
I must have missed a citrical sentence somewhere, I totally don't get why Bella would all of the sudden be cool with James... what the heck! You said you'd introduce some tension, and you definetely did!
Summary: Charlie Swan had seen so much loss in his lifetime. Now, as he mourns Billy Black’s death, a visit from his friend’s daughter makes Charlie realize things in Forks might not be what they appear. Maybe they never were.
Canon through Eclipse and diverges from that point.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4521
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2010 Updated: January 13, 2010
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: February 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 One Shot
I reread this one after your update of "Not all who wander are lost" and I forgot how much I loved it! The progression of events and Charlie's thoughts seem very genuine and well thought-out. It pulled me in absolutely and completely from the first moment. No wonder I'm completely captivated by the story! Author's Response: Aw, thank you! You're going to make me blush!!
I've written for a couple other fandoms before, but I think of all the fic I've posted, this is still my personal favorite. The Fic That Launched a Thousand Extra Chapters...er, at least fifteen or so more! ;) One of my betas was a little annoyed with me that I didn't use this as my prologue for "Not All Those," and I'd be lying if I said that I hadn't considered it. In the end, I felt like this story had to stand on its own. I'm glad that this continues to be captivating for you even after beginning the sequel. I know it has a special place in my heart!
As always, thank you for taking the time to review. Your reviews always bring a smile to my face! :) :)
Summary: 
"My life was an unending, unchanging midnight. It must, by necessity, always be midnight for me. So how was it possible that the sun was rising now, in the middle of my midnight?"
Many have tried to finish Stephenie Meyer's "Midnight Sun" (Twilight from Edward's point of view) and from what I've seen, none of them truly finished what she started. This ending to "Midnight Sun" starting at Chapter 13 is not only picking up where she left off, but uncovering the Edward that she created, and blending the perspectives of many to hear the rest of his story. This first book is a unique turning point in the arc of his character.
Categories: Twilight Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 81011
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2010 Updated: September 11, 2010
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: September 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Confessions - Chapter 15
I had never really thought about what a brief period of time Edward gets to feel that carefree youthful kind of love. I think in the rest of the seiries he feels a deeper kind of love, but that giddy exuberant kind of love is lost to worry and restraint. That makes my heart break a little bit for him. It's funny that in a way I love that he's a worrier but the light hearted playful Edward is like sunshine in my soul! Loved the chapter and loved the commentary at the end. Keep it up!
Summary: This is my version of New Moon as told from Edward's point of view. The dialogue is borrowed from New Moon when Edward and Bella are together , but the rest is my interpretation of what the story would have been like if Edward had told it.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Gianna, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 121397
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2010 Updated: February 18, 2011
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: December 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Vote
I love hearing this scene from Edward's point of view. It seems like you've really been able to capture him well. I especially liked Carlisle's words to him that Bella wasn't privy to. Carlisle's character is a little hard to pin down (at least I think so) but you really wrote him well. Great job! Author's Response: Thank you very much! Other than Edward, I think Carlisle is my favorite character to write for.
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: February 19, 2011
Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue
That is aweome news that you're continuing on with the next installment! I've really enjoyed reading the story from Edward's perspective.
Summary: 
FINALIST for BEST CANON in the FAITHFUL SHIPPER AWARDS.
vote here. Thank you for all of your support!!
What was Edward like before he was a vampire? What was his family like? What type of things did they worry about? Answers to these questions and more plagued me when reading the Twilight saga. I wanted to know so much more about Edward. I began this story, hoping to get a glimpse into his human life and it has blossomed. I plan to take the story through Edward's change and deal with many topics of interest, such as: What was Edward's life like in the newborn phase? How did Carlisle handle "raising" a newborn for the first time? What was it like for Edward learning that he could read minds? And, of course, what was his life like when he left Carlisle to become a vigilante? These questions are so important to discovering how Edward became the vampire that Bella fell in love with. Story to be told almost entirely from Edward's point of view, with perhaps some added insight from Carlisle.
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 158757
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2010 Updated: October 08, 2010
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: July 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Momentous Gifts
I am loving the story, most everything so far rings true for me. One small little critisism is the way the sisters call each other "sister" it seems kind of cheesy and too much in the "telling" the reader what you want them to understand about the relationship instead of the -admittedly tricker- showing them.
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: July 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Illuminating the Night
Loved the story and I'm excited to read the rest! Do you know what it is going to be called so I can watch for it?
Summary: 
Part of me still revels in the knowledge that Bella genuinely desires to be with me forever – so much so that she called for a family vote a few weeks ago and then, after receiving their approval, guaranteed that she would join me in immortality by seeking Carlisle's word that he would condemn her to three days of torture after her high school graduation.
The other part of me – the part that still fears the destruction of Bella's soul despite her rebuttal about my beliefs, "There's hope in you, after all." – plots daily to circumvent this rapidly approaching deadline.
I thought that I had come up with the perfect stalling tactic that same morning, but I realized as the days went on that it was far more than just a strategic maneuver. It was the deepest wish of my heart.
"Marry me first."
Penumbra – A space of partial illumination (as in an eclipse) between the perfect shadow on all sides and the full light.
Eclipse from Edward's point of view.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 85801
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2010 Updated: January 28, 2011
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: January 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Arrangements
I love that you are doing the missing florida trip!! There is so much material to draw from there, with so little having been said about it in the books. I really like how you write the Edward/Bella dynamic. Great job!
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: January 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Sunlight and Shadows
I absolutely loved the way you wrote the Florida trip! Such great details, and the time progression went really smoothly as I read. I felt like the two days was well accounted for, and didn't jump around in a confusing way. Great job
Summary:
Banner by Mehek18 at theTwilightAwards.com
After his junior year, Edward fled Forks High. Alice refuses to allow him to run from his destiny. She makes sure Edward won't be the only British Lit student in London by way of Forks. He will be the only one who knows Carlisle's role in the modern text.
Carlisle befriended a precocious human girl in the seventeenth century. His relationship with her may put Bella in grave danger.
Teasers are posted on the thread, under A/U....
Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 128849
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2010 Updated: February 23, 2011
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: January 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen
I like that the "meadow scene" is Carlisle's in this story, it's new and different:) There was a lot of substance in this chapter, very well thought out. Great job! Author's Response: That meadow scene is one of my favorites in the entire story. The visual had been in my head for so long, and I knew the emotion I wanted to convey, I was just so wrapped up in it by the time I wrote it out.
I cried like a little girl there (and for one other scene) every time I worked on it. I'm not a big crier in real life and my hubby thought something RL was wrong. Hehe.
~AM
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: January 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five
This chapter was completely amazing! I loved his little hint about her never remembering their conversations when she wakes up. And the the visuals of him picking her up and handing the backpack to her without a word, were very vivid. Great job.
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