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Penname: leeseeq [ Contact]
Real name: Lisa
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Member Since: April 17, 2010
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Summary: 
Bella and Edward have faced nearly every obstacle imaginable in their quest to be together, and yet have overcome them all. Now they face what may be their greatest challenge: Marriage. As promises are fulfilled and relationships change, Bella and Edward try and reach the fairy tale ending that true love should bring. One threat still remains and now it hangs over the entire Cullen family. Bella is the key to protecting the family; but can she find enough control in time to save them?
Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Gianna, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Marcus, Mike, Phil, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Word count: 66837
[Report This] Published: May 08, 2008 Updated: August 31, 2008
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: August 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Control
I'm loving this story, Just a few minor criticisms- The was the dinner he made for her. There was just something kind of cheesy about it, and Edward ISN'T cheesy. Also that he said Pride and Prejudice was one of his favorite books too. Edward is so genuine and that somehow seems like something a guys would say to impress a girl. If Edward did like that book it seems like he would have said something he liked about it, not that it was just one of his favorites That would seem more like him and also seem more real. Lastly, one of the things we all love about Edward is his control. He embodies restraint with a capital "R". To me it's so much more romantic when he uses his restraint. I really can't see him letting Bella take her shirt off and getting that out of control. Instead of being excited that he was showing his human side, I felt kind of sad for that scene
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: August 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Rebirth
I loved this twist in the story! Very clever! I'm struggling a little bit to stay present in the story though- in spite of the plot developments that I'm really interested in! I think I'm mostly having a hard time with the dialogue. We're used to getting descriptions along with the dialogue that clue us in to the feelings and tone of the person speaking. In the last couple of chapters there has been much less of that. I'm afraid that leaves the characters sounding a little hollow to me and therefore the reader's immersion in the story wanes. You've got such a great piece of plot development going here. Enrich our perspective and let us know the characters again.
Summary: Bella and Edward have a conversation that leaves Edward speechless....
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 978
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: June 17, 2008
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Names
Why does this very idea make my heart sing?! Loved this short little story!
Summary: Esme Cullen is desperate to meet the girl who has stolen Edward's heart and given his existance meaning. What will she think of Bella when they are introduced? 1000 words from Esme's point of view, focusing on Edward/Bella.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jasper
Challenges: Series: A delve into the mind of...
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 976
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: June 20, 2008
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: September 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful
I loved this one, it really seems to capture the way I imagine Esme's feelings Author's Response: Thank you! I just adore Esme. :)
Summary: He stood in the doorway, watching over her like some forgotten sentinel, some gloriously timeless watchguard. And perhaps she subconsciously sensed his protective presence, because before long the shuddering stopped and the sobs quieted. Mild Jasper/Bella.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1032
[Report This] Published: June 24, 2008 Updated: June 26, 2008
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: September 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot
I liked this fic a lot, but I'm so curious, what was going on in this one that had her so upset, and Jasper protecting her. I'd love to hear a little more context for this scene. Very well written.
Summary: The sheer force of these unblocked memories sent me reeling with wonder.
Edward finally gets what he's always wished for: A peek into Bella's mind. The last three pages of Breaking Dawn told from Edward’s point of view. Edward/Bella fluff. Winner of the "Most Romantic" category at the Twilight Awards
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1719
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2008 Updated: August 11, 2008
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: August 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: In Loving Memories
That was one of the most amazing scenes of the whole series if you ask me! I've always loved it so much! Stephanie Meyer sure knows how to pierce straight to the heart of pure intimacy. My heart grew two sizes when I read it! Author's Response: Thank you again. :)
This moment was my favourite part of the entire series too. It was just the most perfect ending I could possibly imagine.
Summary: Seven original members of the Olympic Coven, and seven deadly sins. Coincidence? Edward has lived too long to believe in coincidences.
He reluctantly relays the deaths and subsequent turnings of each member of his family to his new bride. Each death represents a deadly sin.
An astounding amount of praise and thanks to MrsC for the beautiful banner!
Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 42807
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2008 Updated: June 03, 2009
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: October 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Sins of the Father
Wow, that was perfect! I love that you can extract the complexity and emotional depth from the Twilight story and characters in a way that I could never put into words. There is so much substance and so many layers to the story and people in it. I told my husband just today about these characters and story being very "Idea dense", that there is just so much there to uncover, thanks for helping us uncover more of it! Author's Response: Imagine my surprise and admiration when I realized that my favorite reviewer of the week had gone from one EXTREMELY long story to another one in one day. That is actually one of the best compliments ever! Thanks for that! This story is a bit more intense than NSR, but the good news? It's actually finished!!!
Summary: 
For True Edward Fans. An in-depth, accurate portrayal of the heart, mind, and soul of the beloved Edward Cullen as he deals with the complex themes and events taking place during Eclipse. RATED T FOR TEEN, ALTHOUGH CHAPTER 8 CONTAINS SENSUALITY. CANON. EPOV.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 64609
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2008 Updated: November 07, 2008
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: July 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Theme from Chapter 22 - Fire and Ice - Part One
The peronality of Edward is right on the mark, I'm enjoying reading his version of the story very much. Only criticism is in this chapter I think the repeats of time in hours and minutes gets a little old. One or two times is enough in my opinion.
Summary: How was it like for Edward to witness Bella's anguish over breaking Jacob's heart? This story is Edward's POV of the first part of Eclipse Chapter 27 (Needs).
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2176
[Report This] Published: August 25, 2008 Updated: August 26, 2008
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: September 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Witness
I loved it! Very well done, it really flowed with the tone and the feel of Eclipse. Very in character:)
Summary: 
Bella has set her sights on immortality, and finally, Edward has bent to her will. What could possibly go wrong as they plan for their own private eternity?
The best laid plans…
The ripples of the destruction caused by James’s coven have not yet settled, and the Cullen’s are about to understand exactly how much one moment in time can alter their fragile piece of perfection.
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No
Word count: 91120
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2008 Updated: August 29, 2011
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: October 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: 15: Untraceable
wow, so many great little twists and turns! I'm really loving this story, I'm glad I waited to read it until it was almost finished- I would have DIED waiting for each update! Author's Response: See...now I'm starting to feel very guilty. Mostly because the story is only about half over and there's still going to be quite a few waits! So sorry! But wow...thanks for reading so much in one day! And leaving reviews. I hope you know how motivating reviews are!
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: October 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: 7: In-laws
I don't know what you're so nervous about, this story is GREAT, and it's well written too. You've got the characters right and there's just the right amount of additions to the plot line to make it new and interesting again. I like the little addition of Kate being a mother when she was turned. It made me very curious about that whole sub-plot, what happened to her children etc. Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you noticed that subplot! It comes back to importance somewhere near the end, but that's all I can say. Thanks for reading...and for being detail oriented!
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: October 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: 24. Battlefield
NOOoooooo! I NEED the next chapter! :) Loving it! Author's Response: It's coming! It's coming! I've got to hold it back for a while to finish another one and have some consistency, but I promise it's on the way! So sorry for the wait! SO SO grateful that you took the time to read this today. I've really loved all of your reviews!
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: October 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: 23. Wolf Watch
Fantastic! So, so suspensful and believeable! Your wit is incredibly welcome in this story, I've laughed out loud several times. Some of the lines have been deeply, achingly funny. Love it! Author's Response: Thank you! That is a brand new compliment and I think it made my Sunday! I'm hoping I can keep making you laugh until the end, but something tells me there's going to be a few dark chapters first! :)
Summary: Edward finally gives in to his desire to "check up" on Bella after he left. He vowed only to watch her from a distance, but how can he resist the force of the love that brought him back in the first place? When Bella's life is in danger again, will Edward be able to save her one last time?
This is a story that's been bouncing around in my head so much it finally demanded to be written. Edward's POV.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 51875
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2012
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: September 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: 9. - Enemies
That was awesome, and just how it would have gone down too!
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: September 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: 10. - Making A Concession
heartbreaking but delicious!
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: September 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: 12. - How To Save A Life
It was perfect, absolutely perfect!
Summary: Could I do it? Accept this heaven, when deep down I knew I belonged in the pits of hell? Edward has made a choice, and now after three days of painful preparation, he must see it through. He must say goodbye to the only woman he will ever love and give up his happiness for her safety. Set during New Moon, Chapter 3. Edward/Bella angst from Edward’s perspective. Avaliable in Spanish at fanfiction.net under the title "Por Ella".
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2897
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2008 Updated: October 07, 2008
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: August 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: For Her
Truly heartbreaking! I always love reading the story from Edwards perspective as long as he is in character, and here, here he is definitely in character. I especially loved the intro!!! What a great way to sum up the whole mess! Greaty job. Author's Response: Thank you! It's always lovely to here that I've got Edward in character. I just love writing from his perspective.
Summary: Bella Swan is twenty-seven years old, newly single, and mom to an adorable Kindergarten student with a knack for accidents. On a typical, fall afternoon, she experiences the shock of her life during a casual conversation with her son. When an unexpected revelation leads to the most emotional reunion imaginable, how will Bella reconcile the path her life has taken with the past she never chose? Takes place nearly ten years post New Moon. Canon - AU. ExB
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 61197
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2011
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: August 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I am loving this story so much! ...Just when you think you can't love Edward any more than you already do!. I have to keep telling myself: "Edward is not real, Edward is not coming to get you and take you away, etc" Thanks for making him real. Again.
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: November 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I just about peed my pants when I saw that this story had been updated! I'm so excited you're writing again! I love your characterization of Edward in this story and the intimacy of him being involved in the little everyday goings-on with Bella and Chris. I very much like how Edward is so aware of what Chris needs (i.e. a nap in the car etc.) so, so dear that man! Thanks so much for writing!
No reply necessary:)
Summary: My entry for the Classic Edward and Bella Moment Challenge, run by My_Topaz_Eyes. Set in between Chapter 24 (An Impasse) and Epilogue (An Occassion) of Twilight, while Bella is in the hospital. Edward is being himself-- totally sweet and all, but just a /bit/ on the assumptive side.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 865
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2008 Updated: October 29, 2008
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: August 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: An Assumption
Loved this one shot, that's a clever idea about him worrying about his eyes. It seems like somehting he'd worry about.
Summary: Music can be quite the aphrodisiac, even for vampires. When Edward shares his passion for classical music with Bella, they discover a whole new world together just weeks before their nuptials. Set at the beginning of Breaking Dawn.
Winner of "Best use of Music as Inspiration - Complete" at the Twilight Indie Awards!
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 78097
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2008 Updated: April 14, 2009
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chopin & Debussy
Really beautiful story so far, and I listened to the songs, they're perfect for this! Author's Response: Thank you very much! Glad you're enjoying the music. :)
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Excursion
I find this Edward very true to life (as I see him) in this piece. I love his gentlemanly ways with Bella:) Good job capturing him. Author's Response: Thank you! I was striving to write Edward as he was portrayed in Midnight Sun, and stay as true to the original character as possible. And who doesn't love a romantic Edward that would do such things? :)
Thank you too for the reviews! Happy New Year!
Summary: Bella and Edward imagine how things would have been different on their first day in Biology if Bella were the vampire and Edward the human. BxE fluff. And Emmett humour – I mean, really, what’s a story without Emmett?! LOL
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges: Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2228
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2008 Updated: November 04, 2008
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: August 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
LOVED it! I love your writing, it's so fun and original to read and the mood and personalities of the characters are so REAL!
Summary:
After weeks of Emmett teasing Bella, she plans to give him back a little of what he's been dishing out. This time, Emmett may have bitten off more than he can chew.
Family humour. Various POVs.
Thank you, Blondie, for the awesome banner . . . and the instructions on how to use it!
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges: Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 31879
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2008 Updated: November 21, 2009
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: August 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Busted
This one was absolutely hysterical!! I laughed so hard I had tears streaming down my face and my cheeks were sore by the time I finished. I loved how you were able to keep everybody in character, even Edward, when this situaltion is not one you would generally find him in. The whole take was woven rich with subtlety, and complexity that made it so much better. Well done!
Reviewer: leeseeq Signed
Date: August 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Threats
So fantastic. I love the light feel and upbeat, happy Edward in your stories!
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