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Penname: RichelleCullen [ Contact]
Real name: Richelle
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Member Since: February 17, 2009
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Not a writer, just an appreciative reader.
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Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed 
Date: July 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
woohoo! 7000 reviews! congrats! Author's Response: You're always there for me, Richelle! And, what nice motivation to see this number flip over when I'm only about three pages from finishing this chapter. I will submit it in the morning people if I can't get it done yet tonight!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: July 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Laura,
Congrats on 7500 reviews!
Quick review here and I'll send a longer review later. GREAT chapter, I loved the way she wanted to be changed AND that he followed her wishes. But I was so very, very sad by his internal monologue: "Not yet. Not yet! No!" That just about made me cry.
love, Richelle
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: August 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Hi Laura,
GREAT chapter and well worth the wait. I wasn't sure I'd like Edward as a leather vampire but boy was I wrong! gah! Makes me want to go out and read about the Brotherhood books you talked about. Do you happen to have a picture of this get up, like you did for Bella's cowgirl outfit?
Edward's spanking her WITH the list and what he said while he spanked her was brilliant! heehee I also love how comfortable he is with her now and can just tell her (during role playing) to 'get on her knees'. You are the master, Laura.
I really loved her gift to him and what she wrote in the forward, 'until I come back to you'. Just brought tears to my eyes. Also sniffled a bit at his internal dialogue when it was time to change her and he wasn't ready. Very bittersweet. I'm so glad she was changed this way, during their most loving, intimate act and SO much better than fountains of blood, like in the book! haha
You keep adding to the list. Does that mean your story will go on a bit longer than you thought? (please, please, please!!)
love, Richelle
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: August 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Hey Laura, REALLY looking forward to the next chapter. Just how will he enjoy that blood of hers? hmmmm....
love, Richelle Author's Response: Yay Richelle! Next chapter should be up any time now...been in the queue for over two days! Hope y'all like it!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: August 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Bella's sweet, tender, funny words in the binder to Edward while she changed were perfect. I loved how she had him make his own "List" and then told him to keep writing during the next hour.
Wow, I just loved how Jasper stepped in to help. Brilliant.
Great job, Laura. This chapter reminds us what the heart of this story really is, the unending love between Edward and his Bella.
love, Richelle
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: August 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Miss Laura,
Just read through some of your reviews and had to add my 2 cents. I don't find ExB's climaxes lacking at all. I'm sure I can speak for the majority of your readers that we are fully satisfied with how you end your scenes.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
love, Miss Richelle
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: August 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
HAPPY BIRTHDAY, LAURA!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: September 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Laura, I've been too sad about reaching the end of your epic love story to write a real review, until now. <wipes a tear away>
I really loved how Bella's wedding ring helped bring her back to Edward.
That was fun how they crossed a couple things off their lists without even thinking about it. How sweet that you brought them full circle by having their first time up against a tree, like in the meadow. Lovely- his appreciating her tatoo even more now that it's in 3-d.
The best part for me was the RELIEF Edward finally has, now that she's changed. He so wanted her to stay human but we all know how happy he's going to be now that she's durable and he can keep her forever.
Excellent chapter, as always.
love, Richelle
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: September 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Congrats on breaking 10,000 reviews! That's wonderful!
Like so many others, I'm sad to see this story at an end, but what a delicious ending. You know we're all thrilled to finally read about Edward drinking Bella's blood. How very, very satisfying!
So happy to know you're writing a sequel!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: March 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Well hello Ms. Laura,
First, congrats on your published book! That's wonderful! Second, this chapter was just so loving and sweet. I really enjoyed it. I loved being able to walk through the Masen house with Edward. What fun to see his memories as well as the realization that he's not only *always* been loved, he's always been *worthy* of that love. Great job.
love, Ms. Richelle
Summary: Edward couldn't bear to watch his beloved Bella being torn apart from the inside by his baby… so how might things have turned out for our favourite couple if he had taken the steps to ensure Bella’s survival, rather than let his spawn kill her. Very dark, Angsty little 'what if' story.
A HUGE thankyou to Emerald-Rosalie for the amazing banner. I love it!
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Word count: 85602
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2008 Updated: September 15, 2009
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: March 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Unwanted
I'm no Team Jacob but it was hard to read that Jacob had been killed. Great writing, but all around difficult to read. But I'll keep reading... Author's Response: Thanks Richelle... i hope you continue to like it. *hugs* Bec
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: March 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Surprise
Whew, this was SO hard to read at first, Renesmee's and Jacob's deaths, especially Jacob's for me but I decided to stick with it and keep reading. As much anguish as I felt, and the tears that fell, I decided to keep going. You are an EXCELLENT writer and I look forward to seeing where your story will take us next.
I agree with your responses to earlier reviews. As much as Edward believes he's a monster, I do not believe is abusive and he acted with the belief that his wife's life was more important than the baby's life. I was shocked that he returned to his life of murdering murderers, and how will Bella respond? Nice cliffhanger! I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work! Author's Response: I'm very glad you decided to stick with me. Thanks for giving me a chance. I'm glad you like my writing :D
Stick with me hon, next chapter coming very soon. *hugs*
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: March 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Intervention
Oh thank goodness you added, "...this story is FAR from over." at the end. I LOVE this story, as awful and painful and complicated as it is. Thank you so much for continuing on. For the haters out there, every sin is forgivable, if you choose to forgive it. What he did and is doing now is HEINOUS but I hope these two crazy kids end up together.
Thanks for the excellent writing!!!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: March 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Progress
Yay! I'm so glad Edward followed her. I love that he's still a part of Jasper and Alice's life and I really love how close Jasper and Bella have become. Great chapter.
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: March 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Benevolence
Yay! I return from a weekend away and there's a 2-fer! hmmm....I think I see where you're going but how is this ever going to work out with the baby?
I'm just glad it looks every closer to a reunion between ExB!
Summary: 
What if Bella’s thoughts on the plane flying back to Seattle from Italy take her in a different direction from the plot in New Moon? Just where could a little twist of fate take the characters? An indepth look at Bella's thoughts and feeling at the end of New Moon and into an AU Eclipse.
Canon couples, and rated NC17 just to be safe. I am Bella and Edward all the way, so if you like Bella and Jacob, then I am afraid this is not the story for you.
Dying By Degrees on discussion forum. http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=19&t=9136
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 106997
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2009 Updated: June 19, 2010
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: February 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I LOVE this story. Please write more asap!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: February 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Oh no! They must get back together at some point! But in the meantime, please feel free to keep dragging this out. I LOVE IT! Bella needs to continue growing and Edward deserves his comeuppance! (but why does Bella have his shirt? Was he in her room and Alice threw him out?)
GREAT JOB!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: March 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
This is a great story! I loved the cliffhanger. Please update soon!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: March 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
What a great chapter. I love how you're developing Bella's strength, even if its a flawed strength. I also LOVE the exchange between Jasper & Bella. His taking her to see Edward felt like a redemption for him.
I was SO excited when I saw this update! I look forward to more chapters.
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: June 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Wow, I've never read a fic where ExB fight like this. I didn't think I'd like it, but turns out I LOVE it! Great chapter.
Summary: Edward is a lonely vampire who has been waiting for over eighty years to find his soul mate. His sister Alice has never been able to see his true love, but for good reason--she hadn't been born yet. When Alice finally sees her, plans are made to finally make Edward's dream come true.
This is a different version of Twilight, and it's told from Edward's point of view.
A little lemony, but not too graphic. Rated NC-17 for mature themes and language, and possibly for violence in later chapters.
Thanks to Evilangel6714 for the awesome banner!
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 157222
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2009 Updated: May 21, 2009
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: May 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Glimpses
I didn't take this at all as stalkerish or anything else disgusting. What I really like about your version of Edward is that he trusted Alice from the start about Bella being his mate. I got kind of sick of him fighting that in the book, so this was nice that he just accepted and watched her grow up. I laughed that Alice saved him from choosing Tanya! yay!
Great start, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this.
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: May 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High
Very funny! I loved the image of Edward at the locker as the Fonz!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: May 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
I love it that Edward is not *too* moral in your story. Looking forward to lemons later on, you tease!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: May 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
Very hot!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen Signed
Date: May 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Seventeen
I love Teenward!
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