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Penname: nsturms72 [Contact]
Real name: Natasha Sturms
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Member Since: April 11, 2010
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Taking Flight by marissa64 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 259]
Summary:

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I just wanted to get home from my latest business trip.  But with layovers and flight delays, it was taking much longer than I had planned.

What could I do to occupy my time? A quick trip to the airport shop and a conversation with a stranger and my whole outlook on things took a turn for the better.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 169402
[Report This] Published: December 16, 2010 Updated: March 12, 2013


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Sunday Part II

Loved it! Really good!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like the story.  Thank you for your feedback.

-Mary B.

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The car ride

Really love it!



Author's Response:

nsturms72,

Thank you - I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Call Back

Really like it! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the feedback.  I'll have another chapter up soon.  Thanks, Mary B

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: February 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Dinner for Two

I really like this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks nsturms!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Let's Spend the Day Together

I like this. Very cute story! Can' t wait for more! Didn't want it to end.



Author's Response:

Cool! That's what I like to hear.  I'll post another chapter soon.  Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Sunday Part I

Poor girl! Yeah who wouldn't want to wake up to Rob! I am usually not a morning person, but if I were in her place I would be!!!!



Author's Response:

I know, right? I hope you keep reading on. I think you'll enjoy it.

Thanks,

Mary B

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - I'll Be Seeing You

Really good! I know what I would do for a week, but I'm a little naughty!LOL! Can't wait for more! ;) Soon please!



Author's Response:

Hi nsturms,

Thank you! I've got some ideas coming up for Chapter 9.  I admit it's difficult to keep Marissa and Rob from getting naughty, too. I hope to have another chapter posted very soon.

Thanks,

Mary B

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: February 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Wait, Where Am I?

Really good!



Author's Response:

Thanks nsturms,

I'm glad you like it.

-Mary B/Marissa64

 
Summary:

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Bella loves Edward, much more than she should. Edward is an addict. Bella deals with it. Years of this cycle begin to take its toll, and Bella is fed up. A near fatal accident forces Edward into a coma, and Bella re-examines her previous decision. Will Bella stay, or is it all too much?

Warning:

This story is not intended for anyone under the age of 18. Some themes include underage drug abuse, adult drug abuse, violence while under the influence, poor judgment while intoxicated, graphic medical scenarios, graphic sexual situations that are consensual, explicit language, and extreme angst. Be advised, this work of fiction is not suitable for everyone. If you are under 18 or find these situations upsetting or uncomfortable, please move on. Otherwise, I urge you to read with caution.   

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 148289
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2010 Updated: December 21, 2011


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Underneath It All

This story is so good!!!! I loved it!!! Hope all is well with you!

 
Summary:

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Thanks to candykizzes24 for the banner!!!!

The first seven chapters are the memories of Delia Gallo from October 2003 to present. The story starts out with her memory of being seventeen and revealing some big news to her single mother, Eleni. The chapters will be her memories as the months and eventually years pass until she is reunited with her Grecian summer love, a now infamous Robert Pattinson, though when she knew him he was just plain Rob Pattinson. He was a seventeen year old boy spending the summer with his best mates family in Greece while attempting to hide from the local girls that knew him from the fashion magazines. They had bonded when she hid him in a fishing boat and soon fell into a deep summer love never to speak again, or so they thought. Seven years later when Delia returns to Greece to tend to her grandmother's estate she runs into Rob's best mate who recognizes her. Serendipity leads her back to Rob and into a heap of trouble in the process.

Twilighted Validation Beta: Tima83

Beta: ruthhazelon

moral support during the craziness goes to jlhorky without whom I'd LOSE my mind!!!!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 21998
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2010 Updated: January 27, 2011


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 11-August 2010 Present Day

Really like this! I like your direction so far. It's nice that his parents accepted Josh so easily!  Rob also has a good attitude about it all. I would of course like to see them stay together and figure out a living situation. Oprah should be good. Can't wait for that! Great job!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 10-August 2010 Present Day

Really love this!

 
By the Numbers by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 738]
Summary:

 

Five people take a trip to Alaska.

One hike to a hot spring and everything changes.

Two people find something they never expected.

Sometimes spontaneous is a good thing.

 

Many thanks to the incredible xrxdanixrx for the wonderful banner! Thanks so much hun! XO

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 130205
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2011 Updated: July 25, 2012


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: February 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well if he doesn't pass out at the thought of Bella Naked it could be fun! LOL! I like this!



Author's Response:

Hi there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Glad you are enjoying... oh-let's hope he doesn't pass out! :)

More on the way.

XO

Les

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: February 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I like him. He's a little geeky, but I like it!!!!



Author's Response:

:) Just a little geeky. *Sigh*

Glad you are enjoying.

XO

 
Lost Soul by WhitePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 228]
Summary:

What if your soul mate is born seventy years after your death?  Could you wait?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 91981
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2011 Updated: December 29, 2012


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: February 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Flowers and a Friend

Really good. I like it!

 
Summary:

Edward was the one great "what-if" of Bella's life. Eight years after he left her  without a word, a crisis brings them face to face in an unexpected time and place.

A short-story written for the Fandom for Preemies Effort, 2010.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 41702
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2011 Updated: February 26, 2011


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: February 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Aww. Really good!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Summary:

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When Bella opens her dance studio right next to Edward's bar, will Edward hate her...or will he fall for the girl next door? BxE, AH, OOC, rated M for naughty language and behavior.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 161165
[Report This] Published: January 16, 2011 Updated: May 08, 2012


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: February 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love this! Really good. I do wish that they would have their moment to discuss that they like each other and then the dating can begin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading & reviewing!  Drum roll.......go read the next chap. ;)

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: February 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love this. Can't wait for more!

 
Billionaire by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

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It was just a bit of fun, a chance for an all-expenses paid vacation, and a favor for her bestie. Never in a billion years could Bella have imagined just how much meeting Edward Cullen would invert her world.

 

Thanks to Belindella for the beautiful banner.

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 12572
[Report This] Published: January 25, 2011 Updated: January 26, 2011


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Billionaire

Really good!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen lives in a world with no complications, and he likes it that way.

 

An undeniable attraction, a motorcycle, a blog, and a complication. What is really going on down at the Lone Star?

 

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Blinkie by the wonderful melmelee


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 43921
[Report This] Published: April 26, 2011 Updated: July 19, 2012


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: October 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This is so good! Love it!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmm. This is good! Can't wait for more!

 
Summary:

What do you do when the love of your life has no memory of you? Two years after they left her, Bella is back in the Cullens' lives. The only problem is that she doesn't remember them. A Bella and Edward love story.    


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 116697
[Report This] Published: December 11, 2011 Updated: June 25, 2012


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: April 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue

Loved this story!!!! It was so good!

 
Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1956]
Summary:

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan. They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats. There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 175 Completed: Yes Word count: 252603
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2012 Updated: October 06, 2012


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 46: Edward

Love,Love,Love this story!!!!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 36: Edward

Sooo Good!!!! I love this story!!! The bowling comments were really good! LOL.

 




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