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Real name: Natasha Sturms
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Days Like This by SwimmingBee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1743]
Summary: Feature

 

24 year old school teacher, Gemma Taylor, is excited. It's officially summer vacation and she and her friends have big plans for a fun girls' night out. She has no idea who she is about to meet and how much her life is going to change...

Will Robert Pattinson be everything she needs? Or will he break her heart?

A huge thank you to the fabulous Christine30974 for the above banner, and to the very talented RainerNight for the beautiful new banner below!

 

 

Days Like This was the winner of the Spring 2011 Faithful Shipper Awards in the categories of...

'Best RPF Story - Actor / Other Character' and 'Best RPF Author'!

Thanks so much to those who voted!


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes Word count: 332445
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2010 Updated: April 19, 2011


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: November 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - The Party, Part One

Arg! Cliffie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Really Good!



Author's Response:

Hi nsturms72,

Eeek, sorry about the cliffie! Don't worry, the next chapter has already been submitted. Fingers crossed it won't take too long to be validated!

Thanks for reading!

-SwimmingBee

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Questions

Really good!



Author's Response:

Thank you, nsturms! :)

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: December 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Intense

Really good!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, nsturms!! :)

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: December 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Welcome To The R Bar

Well. I didn't like that Rob much. I really hate guys that can't act themselves around certain friends. Been there before. Hated every minute of it. I did't like the Bonnie business though. I hope nothing goes on between them. That would just suck!!!!!!!!!!! Just saying!



Author's Response:

Hey nsturms,

Rob was definitely a bit different in this chapter, wasn't he? Grr! Poor Gemma was so confused. The Bonnie question will be answered in the next chapter. For now, my lips are zipped!

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review. :)

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: December 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Welcome To The R Bar

Well. I didn't like that Rob much. I really hate guys that can't act themselves around certain friends. Been there before. Hated every minute of it. I did't like the Bonnie business though. I hope nothing goes on between them. That would just suck!!!!!!!!!!! Just saying!



Author's Response:

Whoops, got your review twice!

Thanks again!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Alone Time

Loved it! Happy New Year!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, nsturms72! Happy New Year to you too! :)

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Alone Time

Loved it! Happy New Year!



Author's Response:

Whoops, got your review twice! Thanks again!

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Perfect Bubble

I Love this chapter. I hope no trouble is brewing, but with his hectic schedule I guess at lease some stress will be involved. I can't wait for her to go to England with him to meet his family!



Author's Response:

Hey nsturms, 

So glad you enjoyed the chapter! Hmm, we'll have to wait and see if there's trouble brewing or not. My lips are sealed for now! ;)

Thanks so much for reading!

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: February 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - What?

wow. Can't tell you how bad this sucks. Not sure I want to read anymore at this point. Don't really get that there is any good reason to cheat. Don't really get why he planned on hurting her if he is suppose to love her. This sucks big. sorry. I don't think She should trust him again. For all the times he'll be away how can she? I just don't know what else to say. I can't see this turning around at all.

 



Author's Response:

Hi nsturms72,

I know this chapter came as a huge, awful shock. It was a lot to process, I know. It was just as hard to write, believe me! At the moment, Gemma is utterly confused and hurt too, so of course your feelings are completely warranted.

That being said, the path to love is never an easy one. As much as we'd like them to, they can't live in their happy little bubble forever - it's just not realistic. We will find out the reasons behind why he cheated, but things will take time. We know Rob has always had issues to deal with, and Gemma's about to start realizing that maybe she underestimated those issues. I hope you decide to stick with them and see this through. Even though it doesn't seem like it right now, a happily ever after is definitely within their grasp.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me.

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: February 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Numb

Wow. Still not feeling sorry for this Rob much. I don't want anything bad to happen to him, but geeze lets hope he made it home ok at least. I still hate feeling her pain. I still don't know how this will all turn out to be a happy ending. I guess that's your point. Just like in New Moon when Edward left, I literally read it once and when I re read it I skip that part totally. I really am glad that he is a mess also. Not only does he deserve it, but the cold unfeeling Rob was worse. It helps knowing that he's a mess. I still don't get how someone who claims to love someone very much can be so close to another person and actually have sex with them. I would be so guilty that I couldn't even do the deed. Really I would. I know that he feels guilt now, but during the act? I know he's messed up but I stil really don't get how anyone can say "I was drunk and it just happened. It didn't mean anything". I know he did it on purpose, but that just makes it worse. Ok going now. That being said I love this story, maybe not this part, but I will keep reading because I am keeping the faith. Maybe you can enlighten me. Looking forward to better times!



Author's Response:

Hi nsturms72,

Don't worry, there will be better times again eventually! It will take some time, but things will get better, I promise! I know it seems like there's no way there could be a happy ending at the moment, but I'm glad you have faith to keep reading. :)

Yep, Rob's definitely a mess as well. Possibly even worse than Gemma at the moment, because he clearly misses her desperately, but he's punishing himself too. But as you said, he deserves it. Oh, and we will find out how he managed to "do the deed" eventually, too. I've left no stone unturned, see?! Hehee.

Thanks so much for your lovely review and for your continued support!

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: February 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Babysteps

I'm glad that She texted. Maybe things will get better soon. Still don't know how She is gonna be able to trust him if they get back together though. With all the traveling? I guess We'll see.



Author's Response:

Hi nsturms72,

Yep, she finally texted him back! There's still a lot of issues to sort through, but at least they've made a start. As you said, trust needs to be rebuilt and they've got plenty to discuss. Time will tell how they go! :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: February 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Healing

Ok. Well hum.  His reasons were crap.  I get it but he went about it in a very twisted way. Still mad at your Rob. I think they did need to "reconnect". I get that. He knows He doesn't want to be with out her and if She can make love with him again and still feel the same feelings of rightness then maybe with time Gemma can forgive Rob. I guess my guestion is how will he keep from doing the same thing again? When the going gets tough he just can't do that and not talk. Time will tell and I do look forward to more. Loved the quick update!!!!! More soon please!



Author's Response:

Hi nsturms72,

I think it's perfectly fine that you're still mad with Rob. He's definitely mad with himself too, and Gemma hasn't forgiven him either. Yes, he really did go about things in a twisted way, and he readily admitted that. He knows that too, and he's regretting it now, big-time! They still have a lot to sort out between them, and as you asked, how does Gemma know he won't do the same thing again one day? I guess that's up to her to decide if she trusts him enough.

Time will definitely tell! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, as always. :)

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: March 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - As Natural As Breathing

Really good. So glad things are getting better. Great story!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, nsturms72!

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Things are definitely getting better, slowly but surely. :)

-SwimmingBee x

 
Summary:

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Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would send her life in a direction that would surprise her beyond belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell...What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them?

AU/AH...Canon Couples...with a twist.  NC-17 for smut, dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemons. 

Stephanie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I like to put them into awkward positions and see what happens.  Take the ride?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 264490
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2010 Updated: March 10, 2011


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Revelation No.Two (It's a Biggie) (Pt. 1)

Like it

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: October 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

Really good!!!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: November 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?

Loved it!!!!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating

Really good! Love it!!!!!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two -- It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)

Stupid Jacob!

 
Tangled Up In Blue by TxBirdie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 250]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is looking for inspiration to write THE American novel. Bella Swan is looking for inspiration, any inspiration, to pull her from her doldrums existence. But what they find in each other, neither of them could have expected.

Story rating is for profanity, lemons and adult situations

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 96336
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2010 Updated: January 16, 2011


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: October 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Sweet Disposition

Really good! Love it!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Satisfied Mind

Really, Really good! Can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: You Make Me Smile

Wow. Really good!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: October 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Times Like These

Love it as always!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Crush

Liked it! Write more soon please! :)

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Goin' to California

This is good so far. Looking forward to more. :)

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Scarlet Begonias

Love it! Write more soon please! ;)

 




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