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Penname: nsturms72 [Contact]
Real name: Natasha Sturms
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Member Since: April 11, 2010
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London Rain by duders79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 991]
Summary:

 

London RainEvie Russo works hard and plays hard.  She also has a penchant for late night internet browsing, focussing her attentions on Robert Pattinson.  This story is about what happens when the object of her fantasies becomes a reality. 

How will the fantasy compare to the reality?  Whether she likes it or not, Evie Russo is about to find out...

(Big thanks to candykizzes24 for the awesome banner!)


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 275820
[Report This] Published: June 02, 2010 Updated: December 06, 2011


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Fireworks in Every Sense

Really good!



Author's Response:

Oh thanking you so!

Duders

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Saying Hell to Logic and Sensibility

Love the bath time!!!!! Really good!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much nsturms72!  Glad bath time Rob went down well! ;)

Duders

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - No Good at Casual

Really good!



Author's Response:

nsturms72,

Why thank you!!

Duders

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Home Turf

Loved it as always!



Author's Response:

nsturms72,

Wonderful!  Thanks!  So pleased!

Duders

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Love it!



Author's Response:

nsturms72,

Oooooh thank you so much!

Duders

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - To See Her Smile

Loved this!!!!!

 
Summary:

The FBI's #1 special agent, Edward Cullen, hears the thoughts of those around him. The one exception is new recruit, Isabella Swan.

Can they control their feelings, and work as a team, in order to bring down the dark and dirty world hiding in Forks? Or will virtue give way to vice?

A taste of "Bond"ward from the Prologue:

He pulled his long, wool trench coat tighter around his body. It was so damned windy today and it cut through his clothes. It was hard to believe that only last week he was sunning himself on the beach in Miami.

He smiled, remembering how much he enjoyed the afternoon and midnight delights while there.

Damn, why couldn't all my assignments be in warm, tropical places where the women wore next to nothing?

He needed to find some sweet thing to warm him up. So he headed to the Farm, the FBI Training Center, hoping to find what he was craving.

Lethal to Virtue


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 96181
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2010 Updated: September 29, 2011


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Really good!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Really good!

 
Summary:

 

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

Thank you Monamour for the lovely banner:Banner by Monamour

 

Twilighted Validation Beta:  myimm0rtal


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 115917
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2010 Updated: January 15, 2011


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: October 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Welcome to Orlando, Now Strip!

Really good! Love it!

 
Days Like This by SwimmingBee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1742]
Summary: Feature

 

24 year old school teacher, Gemma Taylor, is excited. It's officially summer vacation and she and her friends have big plans for a fun girls' night out. She has no idea who she is about to meet and how much her life is going to change...

Will Robert Pattinson be everything she needs? Or will he break her heart?

A huge thank you to the fabulous Christine30974 for the above banner, and to the very talented RainerNight for the beautiful new banner below!

 

 

Days Like This was the winner of the Spring 2011 Faithful Shipper Awards in the categories of...

'Best RPF Story - Actor / Other Character' and 'Best RPF Author'!

Thanks so much to those who voted!


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes Word count: 332445
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2010 Updated: April 18, 2011


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: February 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe

Geese! I can't wait for the answers I think anyway. Hopefully something like this girl slipped me some extesy(sp?) and I just couldn't help it. Hopefully it's not the I was so drunk and It didn't mean anything speech. Maybe he could go Tiger woods and say he's a sex addict. LOL. See this is what having to wait for answers does to me!!! Oh the possibilities. Anyway this is good, I love this story, but I do hope they use protection or that he gets tested before they have sex again. Just saying. Who knows what the other girl had! Can't wait for more. Soon please!



Author's Response:

Hi nsturms72,

Ooh, I liked your predictions for Rob's explanation. There were certainly no drugs involved though, eek! He was very aware of what he was doing... but we'll hear much more about it in the next chapter. Hopefully it won't be too far away, it's in the validation queue now! In regards to your protection / STD test thoughts, don't worry - that gets answered in the next chapter too. Rob was a douche, but he's not that much of a douche. That's all I'll say for now! :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

-SwimmingBee x

 

 

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Please...

Really good. Love it as usual. Not sure what to make of Rob asking her to still keep her date with Daniel. I think he thinks the crazy part of his life will be too much for her and She'll dump him. Or he just won't have enough time for a relationship. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, nsturms72!

I loved hearing your thoughts about Rob. You're right - he is worried about the craziness of his life, and if he's really ready to commit to Gemma. Poor girl - she's a bit confused by him, isn't she!?

Thanks for continuing to read and review! I really appreciate it!

More coming up soon. :)

-SwimmingBee

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: October 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Love

Loved it! Loved the quick update too!!!!! Thank you very much! Can't wait for more. Time to read it again!



Author's Response:

Yay, thanks nsturms! So glad you enjoyed it! And aw, I love that you read it again! :)

Next chapter coming up soon!

-SwimmingBee

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Great to hear! Thanks so much!

-SwimmingBee

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Momentarily Distracted

Really love this story! Glad they made up!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, nsturms72! I'm glad they made up too! :)

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: October 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Best Night Ever

I really love this story. So good!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, nsturms! Great to hear you're still enjoying the story! :)

-SwimmingBee

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Paparazzi

Loved it! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, nsturms! More coming up soon! :)

-SwimmingBee

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: October 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Strap Yourself In

Love it as always!!!



Author's Response:

Yay, thanks nsturms! So glad you're still enjoying it!

-SwimmingBee

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Never Get Enough

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Yay, thanks so much nsturms72!

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Girls' Night Out!

This is good! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thanks nsturms72! I'm so glad you like it!

More coming up soon. :)

-SwimmingBee

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Only You

I loved it! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, nsturms! Great to hear you're still enjoying the story!

-SwimmingBee

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: March 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - I Will Be Good

Loved it as always!



Author's Response:

Great to hear! Thanks so much, nsturms72!

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Just Rob

Really good. Didn't want the chapter to end! Hoping for a new chapter soon!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, nsturms!

So great to see you sticking around. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and sorry it had to end for you!

The next chapter lifts off where that one finished, so there's plenty more Rob and Gemma action to come. Hopefully the validation won't take too long. :)

-SwimmingBee

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: April 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 - Outside The Bubble

Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Loved it. Very,very good!!!! Can't wait for more!!!!



Author's Response:

Yay! So great to hear you loved the chapter, nsturms72! Thanks so much! :)

-SwimmingBee x

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: October 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Need

Really loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, nsturms72!

More coming up soon, I promise! :)

-SwimmingBee

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Just Wait and See

Really getting good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love this. More soon please!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, nsturms! Great to hear you're still enjoying the story. :)

More coming up soon!

-SwimmingBee

 




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