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Penname: nsturms72 [Contact]
Real name: Natasha Sturms
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Member Since: April 11, 2010
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Summary:

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When World War I forever alters the lives of Bella Swan, and Jasper and Edward Cullen, the bonds between friends, lovers, brothers, and father and sons will be tested. Will the tatters of their lives be mended, or are there some actions that can't be forgiven?

AH, OOC


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 140434
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2010 Updated: October 16, 2010


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love this!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked the chapter! 

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Really good! I love this story.

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Love it!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

oh geeze cliffie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow. knew it was coming though. Look forward to more!



Author's Response:

My version of a cliffhanger is pretty mild in this story, I think. I tend to let you know what's coming before the big events happen--but to me, the story isn't about shocking someone, it's about the characters and how they deal with what's coming to them. The next chapter is written, and should be up as soon as it can be validated.

Glad you liked the chapter!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh wow. This is a cool story, but as always, I am team Edward!

 
Summary:

 

A quiet, young editor meets a brooding man hiding under the façade of a charming entrepreneur and follows him into a mutual agreement. Watch the couple as they come to terms with an incomprehensible living arrangement and begin the journey to accepting a life together. Do relationships really last when hardships make it impossible to......

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 132624
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2010 Updated: October 26, 2014


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Declaration of Fate

love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2

It wasn't cheesy! I liked it. He seems to be a little more open with her.  I hope it is a Happily Ever After story in the end of course.

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Letter

This is good! Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter has gone in for betaing... Have a good day. Thanks for the review. Will be PMing the preview soon.

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: May 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Smoke

Geeze! Hanging again!!!! Really good. Love it so far! Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for leaving a review. Sorry, I know it's annoying to leave you guys at this point but I think it keeps the interest alive. Next chapter might take a while, just got my lap top back today.Will PM the preview soon. Have a great day! -ED

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Farewell

Really good. Kind of a slow burn. That's good. It means lots of chapters and that is always my favorite kind of story. The longer the better!



Author's Response:

Hi again,

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the slow burn, I find it easier to relate with character when I write like this. Glad you're enjoying the story. Preview to be PMed soon. Have a great day! -ED

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Malady

Wow. Unexpected yes. Wish there wasn't a cliffie there! So sorry for Bella. How awful. Can't wait for the next chapter. This one seemed so short.



Author's Response:

I smiled on this review. This chapter was 5K, longest chapter yet. You must have been really interested, so the chapter just flew by, that's a very good sign, right? I know cliffie...but I think it makes all of you coming back for more, so I like them. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. Will PM the preview soon! Have an awesome day! 

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Stand by you

Wow! Really good again. So sorry for Bella. Feel bad for Edward and Alice too. Hopefully things get straightened out with them. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Everything will work out...we just need some time for things to straighen out. Glad you liked the chapter. Thank you so much for your review! Teaser will be PMed soon.

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again

This is great!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am glad you're liking it so far... The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Surrender to Destiny

Glad to see a new chapter! Can't wait for more!!!!!

 
The Blizzard by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1401]
Summary:

Bella is walking home during a blizzard and stumbles upon a homeless man on the ground. Despite her better judgment she decides to save him from the cold, and the night turns into something she never expected. Rated NC-17 for language and lemony stuff.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 127182
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2010 Updated: June 22, 2011


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: December 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Love it!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow! Love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love this! Please write more soon! :)

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This is a great story! I'm loving it. Oh yeah, I'm all for Mike's member falling off! LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Really like this story and I can't wait to read more!!!!! More soon please!;)

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Very happy to see a new chapter. The story just keeps getting better! Can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Arg! Really good. Can't wait to read more. Edward needs to wake up! LOL!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh I'm so glad it isn't the end! You scared me there. wonderful story! Please write more soon! Great job! :)

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This story is so good! Can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Cliffie!!!!!!!! OMG!!!! At least he's back!!!!!!  Please write more soon!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Loved it!!!!! Yeah!!!!!

 




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