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Penname: nsturms72 [ Contact]
Real name: Natasha Sturms
Status: Member
Member Since: April 11, 2010
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Summary: Bella Swan moves to Forks, Washington. About to start a new job as a teacher at the local high school, she rents an old house that’s surprisingly cheap but she’s about to find out it’s cheap for a reason.
Thanks to ZEE_21 for the banner!!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 15972
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2010 Updated: June 09, 2010
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: April 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
Wow I like it! cool idea! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: May 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
I really like it. I was very excited to see a new chapter! Write more soon! Author's Response: thanks for reading!!!
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
Arg! Hanging! Please write more soon! I really like this story! :) Author's Response: thank you!......I'll try to update soon!
Summary: 
Edward Cullen had just moved into his own apartment and was working to finish medical school. One night, his world is changed when he finds a woman beaten and broken outside of his apartment. What happened to her? Will she be able to trust him? Will she find shelter 'In His Arms'?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 3587
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2010 Updated: April 30, 2010
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: May 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Really good but what a sad story for Bella. I can't wait to see what Edward does next!
Summary: 
When World War I forever alters the lives of Bella Swan, and Jasper and Edward Cullen, the bonds between friends, lovers, brothers, and father and sons will be tested. Will the tatters of their lives be mended, or are there some actions that can't be forgiven?
AH, OOC
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No
Word count: 140434
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2010 Updated: October 16, 2010
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Really good! Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Wow! Poor Edward! I feel bad for all of them, but happy at the same time because He's still alive.
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Wow this is great! Read it all today! I love it! Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Thank you so much for reading.
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Love It!!!!
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Really good! Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! I'll admit that I've always found Charlie to be such an interesting character, so I was really happy to get a chance to explore what he was thinking more.
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
REALLY GOOD! Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Love this!!!! Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked the chapter!
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Really good! I love this story.
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Love it!
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
oh geeze cliffie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow. knew it was coming though. Look forward to more! Author's Response: My version of a cliffhanger is pretty mild in this story, I think. I tend to let you know what's coming before the big events happen--but to me, the story isn't about shocking someone, it's about the characters and how they deal with what's coming to them. The next chapter is written, and should be up as soon as it can be validated.
Glad you liked the chapter!
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: October 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Oh wow. This is a cool story, but as always, I am team Edward!
Summary: 
A quiet, young editor meets a brooding man hiding under the façade of a charming entrepreneur and follows him into a mutual agreement. Watch the couple as they come to terms with an incomprehensible living arrangement and begin the journey to accepting a life together. Do relationships really last when hardships make it impossible to......
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No
Word count: 127026
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2010 Updated: March 06, 2013
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Declaration of Fate
love it! Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
It wasn't cheesy! I liked it. He seems to be a little more open with her. I hope it is a Happily Ever After story in the end of course.
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Letter
This is good! Can't wait for the next chapter! Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter has gone in for betaing... Have a good day. Thanks for the review. Will be PMing the preview soon.
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: May 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Smoke
Geeze! Hanging again!!!! Really good. Love it so far! Can't wait for the next chapter. Author's Response: Thank you so much for leaving a review. Sorry, I know it's annoying to leave you guys at this point but I think it keeps the interest alive. Next chapter might take a while, just got my lap top back today.Will PM the preview soon. Have a great day! -ED
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Farewell
Really good. Kind of a slow burn. That's good. It means lots of chapters and that is always my favorite kind of story. The longer the better! Author's Response: Hi again,
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the slow burn, I find it easier to relate with character when I write like this. Glad you're enjoying the story. Preview to be PMed soon. Have a great day! -ED
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Malady
Wow. Unexpected yes. Wish there wasn't a cliffie there! So sorry for Bella. How awful. Can't wait for the next chapter. This one seemed so short. Author's Response: I smiled on this review. This chapter was 5K, longest chapter yet. You must have been really interested, so the chapter just flew by, that's a very good sign, right? I know cliffie...but I think it makes all of you coming back for more, so I like them. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. Will PM the preview soon! Have an awesome day!
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
Wow! Really good again. So sorry for Bella. Feel bad for Edward and Alice too. Hopefully things get straightened out with them. Can't wait for more! Author's Response: Everything will work out...we just need some time for things to straighen out. Glad you liked the chapter. Thank you so much for your review! Teaser will be PMed soon.
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
This is great! Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you're liking it so far... The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Surrender to Destiny
Glad to see a new chapter! Can't wait for more!!!!!
Summary: Bella is walking home during a blizzard and stumbles upon a homeless man on the ground. Despite her better judgment she decides to save him from the cold, and the night turns into something she never expected. Rated NC-17 for language and lemony stuff.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 127182
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2010 Updated: June 22, 2011
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: December 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Love it!
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