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Penname: nsturms72 [Contact]
Real name: Natasha Sturms
Status: Member
Member Since: April 11, 2010
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Summary:

This is the Companion story for Need To Escape, told in Robert's point of view.

This story will make better sense if you read at least the first ten chapters of Need To Escape before starting this one.

The chapters of On the Threshold will parallel NTE. 

What was Rob thinking? Now we'll know.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 55 Completed: No Word count: 430250
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2010 Updated: December 15, 2015


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: February 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38- All I Want for Christmas

Love this as always!

 
The Exclusive by mrsaubergine Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

Robert Pattinson

Edward Masen is a gorgeous politician about to become prime minister of New Zealand. Everybody loves him, but behind the public persona he has a secret desire. Political journalist Bella Swan is determined to find out what it is.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 56095
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2010 Updated: September 29, 2010


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh this is really good! Love it!

 
Major Misconduct by m7707 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2060]
Summary:

Edward - hot high school hockey player. Bella - shy high school student. They've admired each other from afar, so what happens when they finally meet? Are they strong enough to handle a threat from his past? No good deed goes unpunished...

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 153840
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2010 Updated: July 17, 2010


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

Really, Really good! Hope Edward wakes up soon! Loved it! ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you - give me one more chappie and then we'll be hearing from Edward...

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

Oh god! what a cliffie. Been reading this all day! what an ending. Please let Edward be ok.



Author's Response:

Thanks for joining us - you picked a doozy of a time, right? Bear with me until Tuesday, we'll get some answers in the next couple of chapters.

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30: Body Check

Oh boy still hanging. Well at least he's still alive. Really good! Write more soon please! :)



Author's Response:

Bella will learn more about his condition next chappie - up on saturday!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Plus-Minus

This is so good! Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks - next one up on Saturday!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Off-Sides

Aww. so glad Edward is okay! Loved it!



Author's Response:

He's getting there, slowly but surely - thanks!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34: Penalty Killing

Really Good!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Game On

Really Good!!!! Thanks for a great story!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed!

 
Final Destination by LaRosada Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

Even in an alternative universe where Edward and Bella are average, human teenagers, their passion for each other is still anything but average. Too bad average human teenagers aren’t typically afforded romantic getaways to Isle Esme.

A non-vampiric, non-private island re-telling of Bella and Edward’s first time.
Rated for language, mature themes, and…ahem…adult content. ;-)

Finally we solved our age old teenage dilemma with what was probably an age old teenage solution – we were going to take my car out to an obscure location and, for lack of a better term, park.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 12067
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2010 Updated: July 09, 2010


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Part Two

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Yay! I'm glad!

 
Beyond Me by PattzCougar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 100]
Summary:

An accident leaves Bella confined to a wheelchair, she has to undergo physical therapy. Add in one gay best friend, an odd set of parents, and an extremely attractive physical therapist, and things go beyond what she has ever expected. AH (Except Carlisle and Esme)/AU MA=lemony goodness.

 

 


Categories: Crossover, AU, AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 100771
[Report This] Published: March 05, 2010 Updated: July 30, 2012


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Recovery

Cool Story! :)

 
Summary:

WTDWH Banner

 All Human.

Private Eye Edward Masen has always played the womanizer when going undercover but now he has decided to go a different route. Introducing Ted Cullen, extreme computer nerd and Edward in disguise. Let’s hope his newest assignment isn’t hot for geeks.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 44379
[Report This] Published: March 06, 2010 Updated: September 03, 2010


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Need

I like it! Just read it all today! Cool story!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Tribulation

Oh. Not good! Hope Bella understands! Really good story!

 
The Transfer by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3915]
Summary:

 

Bella transfers to the University of Washington and lives in a dorm with the Twilight usuals. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they cannot ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However, Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward doesn't plan to get involved. A terrible experience has made him reluctant to form any attachments. But sometimes you find what you didn't even know you were looking for.

A little angst and lots of romance. Humor with a nosy Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hot sexy-times. BPOV and EPOV

Drooltastic banner by the lovely ZEE_21.  


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 73 Completed: Yes Word count: 511466
[Report This] Published: March 08, 2010 Updated: July 11, 2011


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You

I love this. Read it in two days! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Hi ns!

Thanks for the Storylove! Glad you are enjoying it. More soon.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

Wonderful story!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you are enjoying! Keep me posted.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52: The Gamut of Emotions

Really good!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

-bannerday

 

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: November 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

Cliffie Arg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I just love the sound you make when you're hanging by your fingernails from a cliffie. ;) I hope you enjoy chapter 60 if you haven't read it yet. And if you have, I'm just slow on replies to reviews. I'm officially a chapter behind.

Thanks for the giggle. Sorry for the cliffie. ;)

-bannerday

 
Summary:

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Thanks to Mkystich for the amazing banner!

Bella meets Edward while she is a pre-kindergartener, and Edward becomes her best friend.  When Bella’s life is in danger, Edward is forced to leave to prevent her death.  As Bella grows older, Edward is forgotten.

A new family moves to Forks at the start of Bella’s senior year and changes Bella’s life forever.  What the mind forgets, the heart will always remember.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 69283
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2010 Updated: December 20, 2011


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Death and Destruction

Great story! :)

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Mystery Zone

Loving it!

 
Guardian by ChampagneAnyone Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 345]
Summary:

What if you met the love of your life as a child? Would he ever admit his love of you as a woman? Would you ever let him go?

Plot: Orphaned at 8, Bella Swan is placed in the care of her godmother, Esme Cullen. Heiress to Cullen Swan Enterprises, Bella grows up hero worshipping 17 year old joint heir, pseudo step brother and self appointed guardian Edward.  


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 43324
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2010 Updated: July 24, 2010


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Fracture

Wow. Really good. Can't believe he left her hanging twice!!!! LOL! Hopefully more to come soon! :)

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Favour

Love this story! Can't wait for more. Your new chapter made my morning!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11:Plight

Glad to see a new chapter!

 
Summary:

 

Edward Cullen & Bella Swan are co editor-in-chiefs of Entertainment Magazine 'BE'. They're Best friends & Co-Workers but is that enough? Edward's in the midst of a divorce and Bella's longtime boyfriend Jake's career is taking off. Come join in the fun.

 

Banner made by: RainerNight


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 41359
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2010 Updated: August 26, 2011


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Decaf Coffee & Red Bull & Vodkas

This is good. I am totally team Edward though!!!!!

 
Summary:

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Bella Swan witnesses a crime and is unwillingly and unexpectedly thrown in to the world of The Mob.

What happens when things quickly spiral out of control and before long she meets the boss, Mr. Masen?

Will Bella stick with her instincts? Will she fight or flight?

AH/ Mobward :)

Rated NC-17 for the obvious reasons.

Thanks to MissTwilightSweden for the amazing banner :)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 25035
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2010 Updated: June 15, 2010


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow this is cool! I love mob stories. Can't wait to see how this turns out!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I really like this story! Can't wait for more! :)

 




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