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Penname: nsturms72 [Contact]
Real name: Natasha Sturms
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Member Since: April 11, 2010
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Summary:

 

Edward Cullen & Bella Swan are co editor-in-chiefs of Entertainment Magazine 'BE'. They're Best friends & Co-Workers but is that enough? Edward's in the midst of a divorce and Bella's longtime boyfriend Jake's career is taking off. Come join in the fun.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 41359
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2010 Updated: August 26, 2011


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Decaf Coffee & Red Bull & Vodkas

This is good. I am totally team Edward though!!!!!

 
Summary:

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Bella Swan witnesses a crime and is unwillingly and unexpectedly thrown in to the world of The Mob.

What happens when things quickly spiral out of control and before long she meets the boss, Mr. Masen?

Will Bella stick with her instincts? Will she fight or flight?

AH/ Mobward :)

Rated NC-17 for the obvious reasons.

Thanks to MissTwilightSweden for the amazing banner :)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 25035
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2010 Updated: June 15, 2010


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow this is cool! I love mob stories. Can't wait to see how this turns out!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I really like this story! Can't wait for more! :)

 
Summary:

 


20 y/o Isabella searches for a way to be with the man she loves - her bother-in-law, Edward - but her powerful husband didn't buy her just to let her slip through his manicured fingers. OOC/AH. Not a BDSM or slavery fic 


WARNING:  Contains scenes of non-consensual sexuality.  Reader discretion advised.



Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 47941
[Report This] Published: March 26, 2010 Updated: October 04, 2010


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: 6 - My Misapprehension

Really good!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: 7 - My Dance

Wow! Love it!

 
Welcome Home by rash12 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 135]
Summary:

Bella Swan moves to Forks, Washington. About to start a new job as a teacher at the local high school, she rents an old house that’s surprisingly cheap but she’s about to find out it’s cheap for a reason.

Thanks to ZEE_21 for the banner!!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 15972
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2010 Updated: June 09, 2010


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: April 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Wow I like it! cool idea! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: May 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I really like it. I was very excited to see a new chapter! Write more soon!



Author's Response:

thanks for reading!!!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Arg! Hanging! Please write more soon! I really like this story! :)



Author's Response:

thank you!......I'll try to update soon!

 
Summary:

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Edward Cullen had just moved into his own apartment and was working to finish medical school. One night, his world is changed when he finds a woman beaten and broken outside of his apartment. What happened to her? Will she be able to trust him? Will she find shelter 'In His Arms'?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 3587
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2010 Updated: April 30, 2010


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: May 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Really good but what a sad story for Bella. I can't wait to see what Edward does next!

 
Summary:

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When World War I forever alters the lives of Bella Swan, and Jasper and Edward Cullen, the bonds between friends, lovers, brothers, and father and sons will be tested. Will the tatters of their lives be mended, or are there some actions that can't be forgiven?

AH, OOC


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 140434
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2010 Updated: October 16, 2010


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Really good!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: October 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Wow! Poor Edward! I feel bad for all of them, but happy at the same time because He's still alive.

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow this is great! Read it all today! I love it!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it! Thank you so much for reading.

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Love It!!!!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Really good!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! I'll admit that I've always found Charlie to be such an interesting character, so I was really happy to get a chance to explore what he was thinking more.

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

REALLY GOOD!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love this!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked the chapter! 

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Really good! I love this story.

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Love it!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

oh geeze cliffie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow. knew it was coming though. Look forward to more!



Author's Response:

My version of a cliffhanger is pretty mild in this story, I think. I tend to let you know what's coming before the big events happen--but to me, the story isn't about shocking someone, it's about the characters and how they deal with what's coming to them. The next chapter is written, and should be up as soon as it can be validated.

Glad you liked the chapter!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh wow. This is a cool story, but as always, I am team Edward!

 
Summary:

 

A quiet, young editor meets a brooding man hiding under the façade of a charming entrepreneur and follows him into a mutual agreement. Watch the couple as they come to terms with an incomprehensible living arrangement and begin the journey to accepting a life together. Do relationships really last when hardships make it impossible to......

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 136128
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2010 Updated: December 10, 2014


Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: September 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Declaration of Fate

love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: January 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2

It wasn't cheesy! I liked it. He seems to be a little more open with her.  I hope it is a Happily Ever After story in the end of course.

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: July 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Letter

This is good! Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter has gone in for betaing... Have a good day. Thanks for the review. Will be PMing the preview soon.

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: May 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Smoke

Geeze! Hanging again!!!! Really good. Love it so far! Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for leaving a review. Sorry, I know it's annoying to leave you guys at this point but I think it keeps the interest alive. Next chapter might take a while, just got my lap top back today.Will PM the preview soon. Have a great day! -ED

 
Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed
Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Farewell

Really good. Kind of a slow burn. That's good. It means lots of chapters and that is always my favorite kind of story. The longer the better!



Author's Response:

Hi again,

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the slow burn, I find it easier to relate with character when I write like this. Glad you're enjoying the story. Preview to be PMed soon. Have a great day! -ED

 




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