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Penname: serchn4heavensg8 [ Contact]
Real name: Amanda
Status: Member
Member Since: February 17, 2009
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Summary:
Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more. As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow. Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted. Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse. J/B at first, but eventually E/B.

Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No
Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed
Date: July 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 35: Kissed
OMG. when's the next chapter coming out? I'm dying over here. :-(
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2008 Updated: September 14, 2009
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: April 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Coveted
You have made the entire Twilight story new and interesting. I am saddened it has ended here. *frown*
I cannot wait to read your next chapter.
Write on!! Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Summary: 
This is my first attempt at fan fiction. Being so inspired by what I have read I wanted to try.Because I did not finish this, before the release of Breaking Dawn, and am in fact still working on the last chapters, I debated whether to submit this at all. I did not want others to think I was playing off Breaking Dawn. I really loved the last book of the series and now wanted to finish my own poor offering.
In any case, this is what I envision would happen to conclude the story of Bella and Edward.
DISCLAIMER: The characters are those created by, and belonging to Stephenie Meyer, and I offer a huge thank you to her for her vision of Twilight, and for sharing that vision with all of us.
This is my own vision of where the story might go, and any similarity to Stephenie Meyer’s work, as well as any copy write violation, is completely coincidental, and unintentional.
CHANGE OF CATEGORY: Well as it turns out, some of the content of my story, requires it to be listed in the AU category. Sorry for the confusion. But thanks for reading.
I would like to say a big thank you to the beta helping me with my submission...qjmom. Youhave made this not only a fun experience, but a learning experience. I appreciate all your help and advice. You're the best!
Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Athenodora, Bella, Ben, Billy, Brady, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Claire, Collin, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Felix, Gianna, Irina, Jacob, James, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Kim, Leah, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Phil, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Sulpicia, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 151108
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: October 05, 2008
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: February 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue
Better than the original (Meyer's)!!!
So Serious!! I loved the crap out of it!! It's such a better ending, so well written, and your style is unique and easy to fall in love with!!
Hope to read something of yours again!! Author's Response: Wow, I am just blown away that so many people have been pleased with this story. I finished it almost a year ago, and I am still getting reviews from happy readers like yourself. That is the most gratifying thing for me. I don't need accolades, but it is so wonderful that readers are enjoying the reading of it. Thank you so much for your kind words, and I am so happy you liked it and enjoyed reading it. I am thinking about a sequel, and I've been asked to write one by more than one of the other readers. I've actually thought about a series too. But I am concentrating on my own original stories as well. So it is hard to know if I should start another Twilight project. Of course if I do, I will post it right here on Twilighted. Well, thanks so much again, and happy Twilighting!
Tagsmom
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue
It's nice to know you read my review.
About whether or not you should write a sequel to this, I don't think it matters! Let me know what your next story is, regardless if it's a twilight story or not. I'm positive I'll love it already. I'm new to this site, and only joined to post a review to you, so not sure how to find out if there are new stories.
serchn4heavensg8@yahoo.com.... if you have the time to let me know about any of your new stories, Mrs. Busy Novelist.
I told about 5 of my co-workers and will be sure to tell more of them about this better version of Breaking Dawn written by tagsmom :-) I hope that's okay with you.
Good luck on your next novel!!
-Amanda Author's Response: Well...if you're interested, I have written a story on another website. The address is; http://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?id=240979
My penname there as here is Tagsmom. The story is called "After Midnight," It was actually an attempt at a contest here, but it appearantly I got the perameters incorrect. So I ran with it anyway. I don't think it is as good as Darkness Before The Dawn, but many people are enjoying it. I have not finished it yet, but the first twenty chapters have been posted on the website. It is also posted on another website: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2615029/1/AFTER_MIDNIGHT
Again my penname there is Tagsmom.
I also have another novel I'm working on, but it is one I hope to see published someday, so it will not find it's way onto these websites.
Thank you so much for you kind encouragement, it means so much to me. Oh, and to answer your question, no I don't mind if you share Darkness Before the Dawn with your friends.
Thanks again, and I hope you enjoy After Midnight as well as Darkness.
Happy reading,
Georgie
Summary: 
It's Bella's 18th birthday, and what does she want more than immortality? Her darling Edward's loving company—minus the clothing. To her surprise, Edward caves and when Bella gets some, she gets WAY more than she bargained for. Cue Edward's standard self-sacrificing departure, a snarky, homicidal Victoria with some powerful connections, and a new Bella who grows a belly and a backbone and goes on her own little hunting trip in Denali to find answers.
Farewell is a twisted tale where everything is not always as it seems. There is an underlying current of betrayal that may knock your socks off on one or two occasions. A FRIENDLY WARNING: This story is not full of fluffy bunnies and rainbows and unicorns. It has the tendency to be very dark, in both drama and humor, on some occasions. If you choose to read, well, welcome to the dark side lovelies...
Special thanks to randigiles for helping me straighten out my synopsis. You rock, babe!
Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Marcus, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No
Word count: 214439
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: January 13, 2011
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: November 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: How It Ends
I vote for Plan Infractus!! WOO HOO
You better keep writing! I'm dying over here waiting for the next chapter. Author's Response: apologies for the long delay in everything farewell related: review response, updating, etc. school began and with my changing schedule came a severe lack of time and brain cells to devote to writing. I am doing my best to change that now.
thanks for the vote, and i am now writing again. i'm sorry to have kept you waiting so long, but i hope you will continue to read and enjoy what is to come. thank you for the review! :)
Summary: Set during New Moon. Bella didn't jump. But a vision from Alice sends the Cullens running back to Forks. What if Bella wasn't the only one who fell apart when she lost the love of her life? What if Edward couldn't handle being apart? What if he fell? How far could he fall? Who committed the murders at the Swan residence and what happened to Charlie? Just how bad can it get?
Read and find out!

Thanks to the amazingly talented Anne Cullen for the Banner.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Brady, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Kim, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 77631
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2008 Updated: March 03, 2010
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: March 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Crest
MORE MORE MORE!!
I'm crying wondering if it can be fixed?!?!? Author's Response: I guess only time will tell <evil grin>
I LOVE your username BTW :)
Thanks for reviewing, it's appreciated.
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: April 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Honesty
I like the mushy sometimes :-)
Keep posting!! Please.... *puppy dog eyes* pwety pwety pweese? Author's Response: :) I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing, I appreciate it.
Summary: The trauma suffered by Bella for three years has left lasting mental scars. Esme and Carlisle are finally offered the chance to be true parents to a teenager that needs them. Surrounded by the support and love of the Cullen family, Bella begins to grow and finds out there is more to life than simply surviving.

Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 91654
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: August 19, 2009
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: March 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
MORE MORE MORE!!
Well written, interesting twist on the story...
I'm dying for more!!! PLEASE! :-P
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: November 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Hey!! Where have you been! I'm waiting!! Please? You still alive? Write some more... :-(
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: December 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Doing okay? Still alive? Your story is awesome and I am so sad it hasn't been updated recently. I miss it. I'm going to read it over again because I am so addicted to your story.
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed
Date: December 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
OMG I JUST FINISHED IT AGAIN!! AHHHHH *pulls hair out*
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASSSSSSSSSSE FINISH IT
Don't make me beg more than I have to!!
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: March 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Hi, hope you're doing well... write soon.
Summary:
For so long, Edward has maintained control of the monster within him. When Bella finally entices Edward to bed, the control is lost. Can Edward forgive himself for his weakness and mistake? And more importantly, will the newborn Bella, enraged and utterly lost, forgive him, or turn instead to Jacob who lurks in the shadows?
~A BREAKING DAWN ALTERNATE~

Eternity without your soul mate feels even longer...
Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Marcus, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 51 Completed: Yes
Word count: 133063
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2008 Updated: March 28, 2009
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed
Date: July 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 51: 51. Promise
Loved your version of the fourth book.
You have a wonderful style of writing and worked the characters well. :-)
Summary: Bella Swan has been a vampire for almost 100 years, and she has an extraordinary gift-one which opens the world to her yet makes her feel all the more lonely, even among her own kind. When she starts over again in the small town of Forks and discovers another coven living there-a coven who also survives on the bloods of animals, can another lonely vampire-a vampire named Edward whose ability doesn't work on her and vice versa-change her life?
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 4765
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: August 02, 2009
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: August 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 (vjgm)
This is a really unique story. I was hooked first chapter!!
Keep writing!! :-) *Pwety pweese*
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: September 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 (vjgm)
Hey! I'm interested! I like it! When's the next update??!?
Please, please, please, please write some more :-) Thank you.
Summary:  You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense? Yeah, this isn't one of them.
This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow. So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life? Would she have found happiness with Jacob? And would Edward be too late?
* First in a series of stories
~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~
Winner of:
Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards
Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges: Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No
Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: March 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 74: Distractions: Jacob's POV
Well I just spent the last several days reading this, and honestly, I was so annoyed with E/B and wanted to try something new, and after the first chapter, I was hooked... to Jacob. HAHAHAHAHA
And just so you know, it's rare that I ever try something new.
You rock! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
PS - Love the cliffys and I didn't think Jacob was going to imprint, I figured it was someone else, cause what would that do to Bella? I don't even want to imagine.
PPS - I'll actually miss the J/B when Edward comes back... and I'm wondering, who is Jacob going to imprint with? I honestly can't figure who (unless Renesmee, GAG, is still going to happen).
Summary: Bella Swan's been a vampire for around a century, and has been with the Cullens since the 1920s. When the Cullen family moves to the sleepy town of Forks, WA, she finds quite a few things she never expected, including a human boy that turns her world on its side.
rating for later chapters (non-explicit sex and violence)
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 96333
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2008 Updated: May 12, 2009
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: March 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Good story. To be honest, I didn't think it would all that awesome with Bella as the vampire, but you really pulled it off.
Hope to read more from you soon :-)
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: March 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Good story. To be honest, I didn't think it would all that awesome with Bella as the vampire, but you really pulled it off.
Hope to read more from you soon :-)
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed
Date: March 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
What r u waiting for!?!?!
You've got me unable to read anything else!! Where's the next chapter??!?!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: Ha! I can type 90-100 words a minute but when my chapters are typically 6-8K long, it takes a little while! Not to mention I want to get this one just right since all y'all seem to have scarily high expectations for this next chapter! XD Thanks!
Summary:  
Alice and Jasper awake in the same hospital, scarred, broken, and searching for meaning. She gives him peace; he gives her joy. They are each other's hope.
AH/AU/OOC. Rated for graphic descriptions of wounds, language, and eventual sexual content.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges: Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 151997
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2009 Updated: January 20, 2010
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: October 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: For You Today Yes
Please don't tell me this is the end!! I want more!! MORE!! OMG!!
Summary:  
While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse. When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help. But of course, fate has plans for this man. Canon Couples. AU. DARK Themes.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: The Jump
keep it coming!! :-) please!
And please don't let the Volturi do anything too horrible... :-(
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed
Date: June 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: The Visit
keep it coming :-)
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: December 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: The Bracelet
I miss you! Okay, I really just miss your story! Please write some more. I'm so bored at work :-(
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: March 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: The Vision
I'm just excited you posted at all. It's been quite a while and I hope you're doing okay.
Write again soon because standing on the tips of my toes to see what's up next is going to hurt after a while.
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 Signed    
Date: April 12, 2012
Title: Chapter 32: The Beginning
This was one of my favorites when I started reading it quite some time ago. Then I got halfway through and the story stopped. You took quite a hiatus and I sure as hell missed this story!! Good to know their was finally a happy ending. I was so worried it would never get better.
Thanks for coming back and finishing up! Loved it :)
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