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Penname: jslpisces11 [Contact]
Real name: Jenn
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Secret by Twilighter620 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 223]
Summary:

As crime tarnishes the image of Seattle, Edward Masen lives as the disillusioned, hot-shot, Lieutenant of the Seattle Police Department's S.W.A.T. team. He soon realizes his fascination with the Seattle Weekly Journal's investigative reporter Isabella Woods - but all is not as it seems with Ms. Woods and her identity. Will Edward be able to change his ways and finally fall in love in a city that's tumbling to pieces?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 111243
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: May 26, 2009


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: March 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

please give this poor boy some happiness!

 
A Person of Worth by tnuccio Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 457]
Summary:

Just a small town girl, livin' in a lonely world
She took the midnight train goin' anywhere
Just a city boy, born and raised in south Detroit
He took the midnight train goin' anywhere

After multiple chance encounters can two strangers find their missing pieces within each other?

Or will their past mistakes hold them back? 

 

Two strangers passing in the night, searching for nothing, but maybe finding everything. 

 

A story of learning to trust and forgive, finding a way to risk opening yourself up. 

 

Inspired by Journey's song Don't Stop Believing.

 

 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4669815/1/A_Person_of_Worth

 

Banner by AngstGoddess003

 

 

banner by: Heaven's Immortal


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 107099
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2008 Updated: July 10, 2011


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: March 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Pie's and Promises

Oh our bella is thawing... and DAMN do i want a piece of pie really bad now or what???



Author's Response:

Yes, Ms. Bella is thawing out.  Pie is addicting!  I wanted pie the whole time I wrote this chapter!!

Thanks for leaving me the review!  I apprecaite it!

 
Rescue me by venomousgal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2836]
Summary:

 

 Bella Swan is accident prone and always in need of rescuing. Sexy neighbour Edward Masen is an EMT and more than willing to handle the job.

 

THANKS TO FALCONCRANELOVE FOR THE WONDERFUL BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 100511
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2008 Updated: November 10, 2009


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: April 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Its a great cliffy- here's hoping they find their way back to each other. Its nice to see renee make an appearance as support- hope she will give some damn good advice.

UPDATE!!!

 
Summary:

Ever wondered what would have happened if James really did have Renee at the ballet studio? What if things got a little more dramatic? Want to hear Edward's tortured POV? Check out this alternative ending to Twilight (Rated for violence & sexual assault)

ADSoT

Banner Credit: AngstGoddess003


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 110851
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: April 09, 2009


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: February 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh poor Bella! This story just gets better with every chapter ..and I'm really looking forward to perhaps a Rosalie and Bella heart to heart.. Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying my story.  Careful what you wish for - you just might get it. . . . maybe!  :-)  Thank you for reviewing.

Mel

 
Summary:

After surviving a horrifying attack that killed her husband and child, Isabella Swan finds herself being protected by ex-criminal Edward Masen.  Hidden by a new face and a new idenity, Edward assumes that Bella is safe.  But Bella does not want to be protected.  She will stop at nothing to seek revenge on the people who destroyed her life, even if it means getting herself killed.

 

 

 

 

Special thanks to Anne Cullen for making the awesome banner!


Categories: AU-Human, Crossover Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Lauren, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 29069
[Report This] Published: January 19, 2009 Updated: March 16, 2009


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: March 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh I can't believe after losing her daughter she is willing to possibly lose him- lets keep our fingers crossed for a happy ending!!!

 
Summary:

After her father dies, Bella Swan is thrown back into the arms of the family she believed she never really left. Sometimes the worst events become the best opportunties for change. AU-Human, BxE. Rated for language.

Nominated, Winter 2010 Eddies: Mid-Length Fiction. A million and a half thank yous!

Banner by nastey. Thank you!

All the Places that Matter


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 40066
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2009 Updated: May 27, 2009


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: March 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

First of all- i'm so damn glad she decided to be brave.... Oh thank god for "brave bella"..

Second i would recommend a bag of dove promises. I lost my Mom a few yrs ago and they got me through some tough times. The chocolate does its job and the wrappers have cute, warm, fuzzy expressions of love...



Author's Response:

Yes, thank GOD for brave Bella. I couldn't handle emo-Bella any longer. :) Dove is ALWAYS a win-win choice. Never, ever disappointing!

 
Aro's Heir by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1912]
Summary:

Aro's Heir

 

Edward, Bella and Alice are drawn into a no-win scenario in Volterra after Edward's attempted suicide-by-Volturi in the Palazzo dei Priori .  Aro confronts Edward to make an impossible choice, with Alice as Aro's unwitting accomplice.  How will Edward's choice affect his reunion with Bella, and what future can they hope to salvage in the aftermath?

Story begins in New Moon, during Chapter 21, "The Verdict," but enters the AU when Aro reads Alice's mind...

AU, but canon through New Moon, with canon pairings.

~*~ warning ~*~  story contains very dark themes, including a sexual assault in the first chapter.  if this subject is a trigger for you, please do not continue. 

If you are a survivor of sexual abuse and need assistance, please contact RAINN http://apps.rainn.org/ohl-bridge/

Disclaimer:  I do not own the Twilight series, nor any of the characters created by Stephenie Meyer. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

Twilighted Supervisory Beta: psymom        Twilighted Validation Beta: Lion_in_the_Land

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 95553
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2009 Updated: November 25, 2012


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Aro's Heir

The plot thickens- this story is so compelling!



Author's Response:

thakn you so much!!

 
Change of Heart by LuvCullens Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 855]
Summary:

Bella, has spent her life hating and loving the arrogant Edward Cullen. When she returns to Forks after ten years, will she fall for Dr Black, or will Edward see that he wants her to have a change of heart?

Thanks to heatherdawnc for her amazing banner work.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 201161
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28(s)

Another awesome chapter- I've been on high alert to see the resolution of James's creepy obsession- so glad edward got a few punches in- and I'm glad to see Bella is going to have to finally deal- gotta love the cullens!!



Author's Response:

I know right? I love the Cullen's. I wish I could be one. Finally, that ass is gone. I'm glad Emmett and Edward were so on top of covering Edward's  butt cause I might have cried if he went to jail. Thnaks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

No disappointment here doll- although Esme shouldn't have spilled the breakfast beans- bad Esme. 

Can't wait for christmas!!!!



Author's Response:

I know Edward totally would have gotten away with it if it weren't for Alice. Geez, sometimes the little pixie can be frustrating. Thanks for reviewing.

 
Summary:

Bella has given up her whole life for those around her. What will she do, who will she be, where will she go with no one and nothing holding her back anymore? AH/AU, canon pairings eventually - NON-canon pairings initially.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 134201
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2009 Updated: July 02, 2010


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I just adore this story! Their banter is cute and I am really interested in seeing where the relationship goes from here!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review; I am glad you enjoyed the chapter :)

Here is your promised teaser:

“Well, you two seem perfect together, the very little bit I've seen,” I said, emphasizing the last part.

“I know, we've just be shut in at his place. He has a great apartment. His parents have money, so they rent this beautiful place for him. He has a nice area setup to work on homework, and he's just the best kisser ever,” she sighed.

“I would beg to differ, but it's kinda gross to talk about the way your cousin kisses, I imagine.”

I flopped on the bed next to her, my body facing the opposite direction.

“You love him, Rose?”

“Oh yeah. Totally. Do you love Edward?”

 
Never Again by superstarrh Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 509]
Summary:

Bella and Edward are reunited after breaking up five years ago.  Can Bella move beyond the pain he caused her to accept him into her life again or is the past too painful to overcome.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 64200
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: April 29, 2010


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: March 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: You Can Pretend

He'd better get up off his ass and follow her out that fool..

 
Summary:

Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...

Beautiful banner by the awesome achelle131


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: April 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play

More chapters than anticipated to wrap this up?? Best thing all day- besides an ass massage from Edward :)

 
Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Coming and Going

aaaagh- another incred chapter.. That james is def not finished- but more importantly- we need to know about alice's bun in the oven! Always worth the wait doll- love it! and as alwas after i read a chapter of this- i'm headed to the kitchen to make a glass of sweet tea. 

 
Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: March 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

You don't suck- you are the author of fan fiction- a FREE complimentary voluntary inspired gift that you give to your readers; who should appreciate what you do. Real life is always inconvenient and comes first doll!!

That being said- another awesome puzzle falls into place- I love that Alice was finally surprised!! :)

 
Summary:

Edward & Bella's Second Chance at Love

 

What if Fate gave you a second chance at love?  What if you had the opportunity to start over? Would you take it?  When an attacker leaves Bella close to death and with no memory, can Edward save her from himself and the assassin before it's too late?  All  Human.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 242564
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2009 Updated: June 07, 2011


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: March 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Priorities - I Have But ONE!

Its a twist I didn't expect- the whole ex thing and he def doesn't seem to be over her. I can't wait to read more- wondering now about the motive of the would be killer... 

 
Summary: Feature

Seeking to escape a dangerous memory from her past, Bella moves to Forks her junior year with every intention of getting a fresh start.  With a little self-assurance and a whole lot of attitude, she shakes things up at Forks High without even intending to.  When a mysterious new student turns her world upside down, will Bella have the strength to resist him, or is she destined to repeat her old mistakes?  Will he be able to save her when the past catches up with her?

Rated NC-17 for criminally hot cars, graphic sex, and language...

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 82359
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2009 Updated: July 23, 2009


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

Oh i love me some drama..... I can't wait to read alice's kicking of his ass! Idiotward better do something good to redeem himself.

 
Summary:

Diseased Affair

When Charlie is diagnosed with cancer, Bella decides to move to Forks to help him through his treatment and recovery. What happens when the resentful son of the new cancer doctor meets up with the reason he was dragged to this small town? AH. E/B.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 99780
[Report This] Published: March 20, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

Oh my- I need more kleenex!! I have loved this story from the beginning, so perfect and as I was reading the very last lines, I couldn't help but remember the chapter of the football game when they were all together feasting and Charlie was so happy.  What a lovely sad way to end it- from Charlie's perspective!

 
Summary:

 

Bella meets Edward when he picks up his nephew from her Pre-K class and the sparks fly.  As their feelings for each other grow, Edward has a prior commitment that he is convinced must be seen through. A commitment that is effectively keeping them apart. Are there some complications that even the strongest hearts can't overcome? Can they resist the one thing they can't have--Each other?

To get to the prize, they'll have to survive the temptation of one another, in this emotional waiting game.

Show and Don't Tell.

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 Big thanks to DigsyGalley for the beautiful banner!

 

Come join us on the forums!!!!    http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=4148#p472374

 

 

Stephenie Meyer owns any Twilight characters and Twilight plot lines that may appear in this story.  The remainder is my original work.    No copying or reproduction of this work is permitted without my express written authorization.  Copyright 2009 by Brits23.
 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 124914
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2009 Updated: December 16, 2009


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Its not over until crazy sings- I have a feeling that we haven't seen the last of nut bag. Uncle E is adorable as always- I'm actually looking forward to seeing how crazy Tanya can get- is that wrong??

 
The Trip Home by MsKathy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary:

When Bella takes a long overdue trip back to Forks, an unexpected detour helps her find her way home. AU/AH ExBxJ M for adult themes and lemons. This is a story about a poly(amorous) trio. This means that there are sometimes moments where they all three have sex, sometimes BxJ, sometimes ExB, and sometimes ExJ.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 217268
[Report This] Published: March 31, 2009 Updated: January 20, 2010


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: July 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hell yes Angela! I would be asking for the same damn thing!



Author's Response:

hahha.. thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed the chapter :)

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist.  Why did Edward leave Bella?  And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?

Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?

THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - Like This

Ahhh this brought me a little case of the sniffles.. poor bella. I hate that feeling when you wake up and realize it was a dream.  Get these kids together soon- please please please.



Author's Response:

They will find each other.  That I can promise.  Soon?  Not so much!

Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet

Oh what a lovely perfectly sugary sweet hea- its been a great ride following this story! Can't wait to read those other epi's- this really has been something i looked forward to.

thank you for the daddyward!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it! 

 

Happy New Year!

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: February 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso

ooooh baby- that was perfection hotness!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  Daddyward is pretty hawt:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

A few weeks before the wedding Bella remembers something startling about her past which has the potential to disrupt everything.

I dreamed of hall lights and unfamiliar faces, darkness and feeling small and helpless.  I woke with a start.

Contains possible triggers

 

Thanks to heatherdawnc for the banner!

 

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 57416
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2009 Updated: October 26, 2009


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: What Bella Decided

Oh another layer revealed- Renee really does suck doesn't she?? Me thinks that the Cullen's are looking for Steven and said pervert should be quite concerned...  A little revenge for Bella?

btw- I adore ADORE how you have written Emmett's and Jasper's adoration for their new little sister- its too damn cute.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Renee has some issues with responsibility.  Not going to comment on your guess, other than to say that you should definitely keep reading!

I love Emmett and Jasper, and when I need to lighten things up a bit, they are the first two I turn to.  It helps that being with his "brothers" helps to lighten up Edward too!

 
Summary:

Bella is a 25 year old Editor's assistant in New York City. She has been a casual observer in life, never really actively participating in it.

Edward is a 25 year old tattoo artist who enters Bella's life and knocks it off its hinges.

Will Edward be able to open Bella up to life and all it has to offer, or will she shut him out and return to watching the world happen around her?

(Thanks to Shug for the AWESOME banner!!)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 52545
[Report This] Published: May 12, 2009 Updated: May 01, 2010


Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward

Love this story- its a nice new perspective and the visual painted when he gave her the second tattoo- YUM!  I think tatward is doing a little self preservation with his piss mood- can't wait to see when he finally tells her he will miss her terribly or go with her! A lovely chapter- can't wait for another!

 
Reviewer: jslpisces11 Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Tattoos, Oranges and Breakfast

SO GOOOD!!

 




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