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Penname: opalaline [ Contact]
Real name: Heather Mosley
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Member Since: April 07, 2010
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Summary:  Edward Cullen was a loner, an outcast. He clearly hated everybody, including himself. He was not a nice person. So, why was I so drawn to him? And why did I get the crazy feeling he felt the same way?
WARNING: This story will deal with the aftermath of child abuse and rape. If that bothers you too much, I strongly recommend that you don’t read.
Thanks to steffyxxface for the lovely banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 115 Completed: Yes
Word count: 365612
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2011
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: September 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
Such a touching relationship between Alice and Edward!! So happy to see he is letting someone else touch him!! Look forward to more!!!
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: December 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84
My heart aches for Edward! poor guy is trying so hard!
Jasper was just awesome! How great for Edward to see that everyone isn't out to get him!
So glad to see him finally use the journal...I bet this will really help him sort through his feelings.
Look forward to chapter 85!
Love this story!
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: July 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hey, I have actually read all your chaps through and am now coming back to review, cause I'm weird like that.
What a powerful way to start a story!! Definitley have me hooked!!!
Can feel Edward's inner turmoil so much!
Excellent writing!!
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: July 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Love how you introduced the Cullen sibs and showed their relationship.
Poor Edward is clearly an outcast, my heart really goes to him!
Loving this!
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: July 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I love Edward's hearing Edward's inner thoughts, but manit just guts me to hear his self loathing.
You write inner turmoil very well, i feel his pain so much!!
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: July 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Really liking Bella's inner voice as well, love how she is drawn to Edward, despite his prickly exterior!
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: July 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Oh Edward! My heart cries so much for him, so much pain, but still a good person under it all!
Love the image of Bella in her robe baking cookies...so cute!
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: September 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65
Ok, I totally just melted with Bella! Love when chaps end on an AWWW!
Excellent chap! LOVE IT!! You are totally fabulous!
Summary: Successful fashion writer, Bella Swan leads a life of promiscuity, taking from men only what she can't get elsewhere. Will the new editor, Edward Cullen, be able to save her from her lonely life? Or will her past become too much to bear, leaving him in the dust?
Thanks so much to Readergoof for the fabulous banners!! Love them!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 62634
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2010 Updated: June 14, 2011
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: September 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine
So glad Bella opens up and tells Edward her story...good girl!!! And always touching, such moving words!!
LOVE YOU!!
~stalker~
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: October 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen
*squeals of delight and much hopping about, causing me to fall out of my tree*
Fuck! Well I guess this review will come from the ground. For starters...fabulous fucking music choice!!! *pst* can i lick that song?
And holy lemon batman!! LOVED IT!!!! MORE PLEASE!!! *holds out hands and gives you puppy dog eyes*
Your skills are amazing babe, keep up the great work!!
*climbs back up tree* Ciao you fabulous woman you*
~stalker Twin H~ Author's Response: First of all, I just have to say, I fucking love you! Fabulous reviews... so awesome... Makes me smile HUGE! I'm so glad the lemon came off (*giggle*) so well. I was worried. Thank you soo much for being so amazingly awesome! I am priviliaged to be the other half of our person. ~Twin J
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: October 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen
*pouting from stalking tree* I wanna be sick so Edward will nurse me!!!
Oh!! and sweetest fucking ending ever!! *sniffle*tear* Now my tree is all wet!
*pst* Nurse Edward should be wearing fuck hot scrubs ith no undies...just saying :D!!!
Alright...stalker out, love you big time babe!!
~Twin H~
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: September 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight
Dude...I am the worst stalker ever!!! I fell out of my tree and dropped my binocculors...yes that sounds better then epic fail!
Fabulous writing and always so emotional! LOVE IT!!! AND YOU!! *smooch*
~stalker~
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: September 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve
Awww, the carnival!! How cute!!!
AHHHH!!! Another cliffie ending!!! Why are you trying to kill me!!!!????
I still love you though!!
~stalker~ Author's Response: I am kind of brat with cliffies lately, aren't I? Heehee..... I couldn't kill you - who would stalk me?!?! Hahahaha!! Love you so much, it should be outlawed. ;)
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: September 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven
Ok, I forgive for the end of the last chapter! AWWW and nurse Edward!!! LOVE IT!! Can I be sick too!!!
You are to fab for words!!
LOVE YA!!!
~stalker~ Author's Response: Oh, my beautiful stalker. Your reviews make me smile ever so much. You have also given me a thought for a fun fic... Nurse Edward....Hmm... Oh, the possibilities! You are the most incredible stalker/Twin the world has ever known. I thank you from the bottom of my ass (*giggle*) for your beautiful words. Love ya loads!!!!! ~Twin J
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: May 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I, of course adore your work and am happy that I can review it in more then one place, you are pure awesomeness!! Author's Response: You know me so well...I'm such a review whore...lol!! Thank you so much for taking the time to do this! It means so much that you enjoy what I write!!
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: May 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
heehee...me again...reviewing cause I can, cause I love your work and you, keep it up Twiny! Author's Response: You're so amazing...I love my Twiny!!! Thanks for the review! Makes me smile huge!!!
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: May 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
*smooch* Twiny, you are an awesome writer....never doubt that!!!! Author's Response: *tear* Thank you so much! You're so wonderful! Although, I may have to go sideways to fit out the door now...all that inflation..lol Love you tons Twiny!!
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: June 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four
Haha...once again it is I....never get tired of telling you how awesome you are!!
Love EPOV....salivating for more!
All hail MC!!!!!
*smooch, smooch* Author's Response: Love it!! You totally rock my world! I must say I am astounded by our level of awesomeness. I appreciate all of your support, truly, I do. MC..MC...MC!!! *smooch*hug*
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: June 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five
It is I....you ever faithful stallker!!!
Ahhhhh.....we should all have such dream of Edward making us cum.....good thing I do!!!! *giggle* naught, naughty me!
Love this chappy.....Bella and Edward both have great internal monologue!
millions of loves to you twiny!!! Author's Response: My stalker kicks ass!! Thank you so much for reviewing, it makes me smile, nice and big....*giggle* Perhaps this dream was inspired by an Edward one of my own....*wink* I'll never tell! Thanks again for all the support! Love you loads!! Justine
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: June 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six
Here I am....stalker binoculars in hand.
*tsk, tsk* naughty Bella, alomst getting in on with Felix....thank heavens for ghost Edward.....*whine* I want a ghost Edward.....*pouts*
As always.....excellent chapter!!!!
Now I'm off to hide in a tree with my binoculars and watch for your next update....don't worry....I won't be bored...I brought MC with me *giggle*
*smooch, smooch* Author's Response: You're the best stalker in the whole world! *giggle*
Maybe if you're very, very good we can get you a ghost Edward of your very own! Then again, he may like it if you're very, very bad, too....heehee...
Thank you so much for being so awesome, love you loads!!!
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: July 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six - Outtake
Yeah Baby!!! Love It!!!! Jasper and Alice need some lovin too!!!! That was FUCK HOT!!! I love, love, love how Alice begs for it! Perfection!!!!You, my dear are completely AFS!!!
A million smooches from your vigilant stalker and pervy twin!
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: July 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven
Poor Bella! You can really feel her pain! So well written!!! Edward, as always is so sweet! OH, and Jake fucking sucks!
You are a superstar and I love ya to pieces!
BTW, your banner ROCKS!!!! LOVE IT!!!
~you have just been stalked bt your #1 sealker.....heehee~
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: September 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Ten
Oh Bella, Bella, Bella...give a boy a chance!!!
Love the strawberry charm!! Jasper you sly, naughty boy you!
Awesome dream!! Edward the knight...fabulous *swoon*
WTF kind of ending is that!!!!! I'm so shocked I have fallen from my tree!!!
*smooch*
~stalker~
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: July 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven
*climbs tree, adjusts huge ass stalker binnoculars*
Ahhhhh, now I can see you perfectly!! *giggle*
Yeah so, Jake sucks ass!!
Edward fucking rocks!
Let him in , Bella! Just do it girl!
Love your amazing writing! And you!
*smooch, smooch*
*falls out of tree blowing you kisses* FUCK!
Reviewer: opalaline Signed
Date: July 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight
AHHHHH!!!!!
What the hell are you thinking, Bella!!!!??????!!!!!
Don't worry, Edward baby, you can come over to my place...I will console you!!
You are outstanding Twiny!!!
Superb writing!!! Author's Response: Ah, my faithful stalker....you fucking rock. I love you loads, baby!
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